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Unit 4 Eat Well
My Eating Habits
Section B 2a-2b Writing
1. 积累饮食类核心词汇与重点句型，区分健康与不健康食物。
2. 熟练运用 and、but、however、first、second 等连接词，优化写作逻辑。
3. 能围绕“饮食习惯”，从好习惯、坏习惯、改进计划三方面完成英语写作。
4. 树立健康饮食意识，培养良好生活习惯。
Watch a video
Write down the healthy food and unhealthy food .
Healthy or unhealthy food in the video
healthy
unhealthy
apple
broccoli / br k li/
spinach / sp n t /
hamburger
pizza
cake
Why
Because fruit and vegetables are good for our health.
ANNOUNCEMENTS
PEOPLE
WHAT’S NEW
WELCOME TO SHARE
We want to know more about teenagers’ eating e and share with us here!
We can learn from your good eating habits and improve the bad eating habits together!
1
Joy Clinic
The Joy Clinic wants teenagers to share their eating habits.
Let’s read
Lisa’s post
together.
What eating habits does Lisa have
eat three meals a day on time
eat a lot of(all kinds of) vegetables
drink too many soft drinks
don’t drink enough water
(drink it only when she is thirsty)
Good habits
Bad habits
/ n f/ adj.&adv.足够
/ θ sti /
adj.渴的
Do you think the article is logical (有逻辑性)
I have some good eating habits. I eat three meals a day, and I have them on time. I eat a lot of vegetables too. Some of my friends don’t like carrots or other vegetables, and they don’t eat them, but I eat all kinds of vegetables.
However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I drink too many soft drinks. I love soft drinks because they taste so good! But soft drinks usually have a lot of sugar. They’re bad for me. Second, I don’t drink enough water. I drink water when I am thirsty, but it’s better to drink before I get thirsty. In future, I should drink more water.
点明段落主题
Linking words
make the article
more logical.
adv.然而(使用时后有逗号)
顺承
转折
因果
and
also(放在句首时后有逗号)
besides 而且 (后有逗号)
what’s more 而且(后有逗号)
but
however(后有逗号)
because
so
They can help us
make the article
logic.
linking
words
first,second,third...
① Add a topic sentence to show the main idea clearly.
② Use proper linking words to add another idea.
How does Lisa write about her eating habits.
Pre writing
By comparing facts
By giving facts
By giving examples
③ Use different ways to develop the idea to make the passage better.
How does Lisa develop the ideas
Pre writing
Talk about your own eating habits. Use the questions to help you.
What good habit(s) do you have
2. What bad habit(s) do you have
3. What can you do to improve your eating habits
Good eating habit(s)
Eat three meals a day on time.
Eat enough vegetables and fruit for vitamins.(维生素)
Drink enough water instead of
soft drinks.
4.Eat your food slowly.
5.Eat some eggs, milk or meat for protein(蛋白质).
6.Not eat too much at one meal.
7.Cook your own meals instead of
ordering fast food.
Bad eating habit(s)
Not eat breakfast
Eat a lot of fried food, like
fried chicken or chips.
3.Drink too many soft drinks.
4.Eat snacks before meals.
5.Eat quickly and don’t chew
food well.
6.Eat too much sweet food or chocolate every day.
7.Watch TV or play phones
while eating.
While writing
How to improve
.
Stop eating/drinking ;Eat/Drink less+不可数名词/fewer+可数名词复数
Eat/Drink more...(instead of...)
Try to do..尽力...(cook at home)
While writing
说明文
第一人称
一般现在时为主
体裁
人称
时态
01
02
03
Talk about your own eating habits.
一般将来时
While writing
My Eating
Habits
I have some good eating habits.
First,I eat ______ meals a day.
Second,I always/usually eat/drink _____
Third, I like eating/drinking ______ because ______.
However, I have some bad eating habits too.
I eat too much/many ______ (eg.fast food, sweets).
Also/Besides/What’s more,I don’t eat /drink enough ______ (eg. vegetables, water).
In future/To be more healthy, I should/will...
stop eating/drinking ; eat/drink less+不可数名词/fewer+可数名词复数
eat/drink more...(instead of...)
try to do..尽力(eg.cook at home)
While writing
项目 标准 自我 评价 同伴 评价 教师
评价
结构（3分） 结构合理 （1 分）
恰当使用连词 ( 2分)
内容（8分） 要 点 齐全 好的饮食习惯（3分）
不好的饮食习惯(3分） 如何提升 ( 2分)
语言（3分） 语法正确，语言优美 ( 3分)
卷面（1分） 书写工整（ 1分）
I have some good eating habits. Firstly, I eat three meals a day on time and always have good breakfast. Breakfast gives me energy to start the day. Secondly, I drink a lot of water. I know water is important for my body. And I hardly ever drink soft drinks.
However, I have some bad eating habits too. First, I eat too much fast food. I think it’s delicious and convenient. Besides, I eat lots of sweet things like candies and cakes. They have lots of sugar and are bad for my teeth and health.
To be healthier, I have to make some changes. In the future, I will eat less fast food and sweet things. And I will cook my own meals more. I believe these changes will help me to be healthier.
Topic sentence.
Linking words.
Develop ideas.
After writing
One possible version.
Having good habits keeps our bodies strong.
Eating right helps us focus all day long.
A balanced diet lifts our body and mind.
Living healthily, we feel great all the time.
Take care of your health, make good choices too.
Health and energy will follow you.
You are what you eat!
Let’s read
Basic (必做)
Rewrite your writing and make it perfect.
Improving(选做)
Introduce one of your family member's eating habits.
Extend (选做)
Improve your eating habits in a week and share it with your class.
Homework

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