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Unit 6 Living with nature书面表达12篇
（单元话题：人与自然和谐共处）
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、书面表达
1．二十四节气作为中国古代历法，显示了人与自然的关系。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Tim写信询问有关中国二十四节气中立夏的情况。请你给他回信，内容需包含以下要点:
1.介绍立夏的基本信息及其气候特点;
2.简述立夏时期的习俗活动及活动意义。
注意:
1.短文应包含提示中的所有写作要点，可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名;
3.词数100左右。
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2．人与自然和谐共处是人类的共同追求。请以“Living in Harmony with Nature”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈我们应该如何与自然和谐相处。要求：
1. 内容包括：自然对人类的重要性、人类与自然和谐共处的例子 (如二十四节气、坎儿井等) 以及我们可以做的事；
2. 词数80~100左右；
3. 语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰。
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3．三峡大坝(Three Gorges Dam)作为世界最大的水力发电工程(hydro-electric power project)，自规划建设至今备受瞩目。其在多个领域发挥了重要作用，但也伴随一些争议与挑战，请谈谈你的看法。注意：
(1) 词数80~100；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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4． 近年来，世界多地自然灾害频发，引起了全球对地球保护的思考。请以“The Earth Is Our Home”为题，写一篇以“保护地球”为话题的短文。
　　要点提示：(1)现状(cut down too many trees; kill a lot of wild animals; more natural disasters)； (2)我们应该如何做？
　注意：(1)必须包含上述信息，可适当发挥； (2)词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Earth Is Our Home
The Earth is our home and we only have one Earth.
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5．当虬枝在电锯声中轰然倒地，年轮里凝固的千年月光便永远失去了倾泻的窗口。树木是大地写给天空的诗行，每一圈年轮都是自然用慢镜头拍摄的纪录片，记录着候鸟的轨迹、土壤的絮语与星斗的位移。然而，现代城市却在上演着荒诞的绿色悖论——百年古树被移植。保护树木需要重建“年轮思维”。假设你是李辉，学校环保社团正在举行“保护树木，爱护地球”为主题的活动，发表一篇有关“如何保护树木”的倡议信，内容包括：
(1)保护树木的原因
(2)保护树木的具体措施(至少3个措施)
(3)倡议保护树木
注意：(1)词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Dear students,
Trees are our friends. They are very important. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．近年来，亚马孙雨林面积不断减少，生态环境遭到破坏。请结合数据，分析雨林破坏的主要原因（如砍伐树木、农业扩张等）及其对地球的影响（如气候变化、物种灭绝）。最后提出2-3条可行的保护措施。
要求：1. 使用至少2个环境问题词组
2. 引用1-2个数据增强说服力
3. 结尾用呼吁句强调保护雨林的重要性。
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7．绿水青山就是金山银山 (Green mountains and clear waters are mountains of gold and silver)，这说明保护自然的重要性。假如你是李华，请根据下面的内容要点提示，以“Let’s Protect Nature”为题写一篇80～100词的英语短文，参加学校的英语演讲比赛。
内容要点：
1. 保护自然的重要性：大自然提供给我们清新的空气、充足的食物和丰富的资源 (resource)；
2. 大自然所面临的问题：水资源被污染 (pollute)，森林面积大量减少，人们猎杀许多野生动物；
3. 呼吁：保护自然，与自然和谐 (in harmony) 相处。
Let’s Protect Nature
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8．地球是人类唯一的家园，面对气候变化挑战，中国承诺力争2060 年前实现碳中和(carbon neutrality) 。我校现举办“绿色生活、青春同行”主题演讲比赛，请你写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。
内容包括：
1. 你对环境保护重要性的理解；
2. 结合日常生活，提出可行的环保建议；
3. 畅想碳中和目标实现后的生活愿景。
注意：
1. 词数80-100；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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9．黄河是中华民族的母亲河，保护黄河是事关中华民族伟大复兴的千秋大计。请你根据以下思维导图用英文介绍一下黄河并倡导大家共护母亲河。
要求：1. 须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80-100。
Protect the Yellow River Facts mother river 5,464 kilometers the second longest
Situations water and soil loss 水土流失 …
Ways stop fishing make laws …
Protect the Yellow River
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10．为了鼓励青少年亲近大自然、走进大自然，某青少年英文网站举办了主题为“Nature”的征文比赛。假如你是李明，请根据以下要点写一篇英文短文投稿。
要点：1. 记录一次走进大自然的经历及感受；2. 走进大自然的好处 (放松身心，……) ；3. 呼吁人们走进大自然。
注意：
1. 短文须包含以上要点，可增加细节以使行文连贯；
2. 词数80-100 (开头已为你写好，不计入总词数) 。
Nature
Nature is our home. It’s a part of our life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．探索自然，探寻未知。为发扬求知精神，感受自然之美，你所在班级上周日组织了一次以“Nature Exploration and Environmental Protection Action”为主题的社会实践活动。假设你是李华，请你根据下面表格中的信息，谈谈当天的活动经历和感受。
注意：1. 须包含表格中的提示信息，可增加细节；2. 词数80-100。
When Last Sunday
Where Mangrove Nature Reserve
Who I, my classmates
What visited the nature reserve, took part in a tree-planting activity, watched some birds
A Meaningful Social Practice Activity
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12．假如你是李华，请写一封邮件给你的网友Jack，介绍一处你认为最美丽的自然奇观。
要求：
(1) 围绕主题展开写作，可适当发挥。
(2) 词数：70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
Dear Jack,
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I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．例文
Dear Tim,
I’m happy to share the Start of Summer with you. It’s the 7th of the 24 Solar Terms, on May 5th, marking the beginning of summer.
After the Start of Summer, weather gets hotter, plants grow and there are more rain showers.
People have special customs. They weigh children for good health. Eating the Start of Summer eggs is another tradition. The eggs are said to bring energy and good health during the summer. These traditions show how we live in harmony with nature.
If you have a chance, you are welcome to join in the Start of Summer activities.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文（书信），以介绍说明为主，时态以一般现在时为主，个别表达可用一般将来时。
明确要点：立夏的基本信息与气候特点；立夏的习俗活动及意义
信件格式：开头问候、结尾祝福与署名
确定人称：第一人称（I/we，以李华的视角写信），第二人称（you，写给 Tim）
注意事项：词数控制在100词左右；不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名；需包含所有写作要点，可适当拓展
[第二步：构思布局]
采用书信+三段式结构：
开头段：问候 + 点明主题，引出立夏的介绍（对应总起句）
主体段：分两层介绍 ——①立夏的时间、地位与气候特点；②立夏的习俗活动与意义（对应主体段的要点展开）
结尾段：发出邀请 + 表达祝福，升华主题（对应结尾段）
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：立夏的基本信息与气候特点
基础信息：falls around May 5th/the 7th of the 24 Solar Terms/marking the beginning of summer
气候特点：weather gets hotter/more rain showers/plants grow quickly/fields look greener and livelier
要点二：立夏的习俗活动及意义
习俗活动：weigh children/eat Start of Summer eggs/play egg-fighting games
活动意义：wish for good health/bring energy and good health/show the harmony between people and nature/our ancestors’ way of saying hello to summer and wishing for a happy, healthy season/make us feel close to our culture and nature
2．范文：
Living in Harmony with Nature
Nature is important to humans—it provides us with air, water and food. Living in harmony with nature is our common goal.
There are many examples of this. The 24 Solar Terms guide farmers’ work and show ancient Chinese wisdom. The karez system in Turpan, built with hand tools, helps people survive in the hot desert. These examples show how humans and nature can live together well.
To achieve harmony, we should protect natural resources. We can save water, plant trees, and protect animals. By doing so, we can enjoy a better life and keep nature beautiful for future generations.
写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文，以一般现在时为主，阐述与自然和谐共处的方式
明确要点：说明自然的重要性、列举和谐共处的例子、提出可行行动
确定人称：第一人称复数（we）
注意事项：词数80~100左右，语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：点明自然对人类的重要性，提出与自然和谐共处的目标
主体段：列举二十四节气、坎儿井等和谐共处的例子
结尾段：说明我们可以采取的行动，总结意义
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：自然重要性
重要性：provides us with air, water and food/supports our life and development
例子：24 Solar Terms guide farmers’ work/karez system helps people survive in desert
行动：save water/plant trees/protect animals/protect natural resources
要点二：意义启发
启发：living in harmony with nature is our common goal/we should respect nature
意义：enjoy a better life/keep nature beautiful for future generations/learn to protect the environment
3．One possible version:
Three Gorges Dam is the world’s largest hydro-electric power project. It stands proudly on the Yangtze River, bringing both remarkable benefits and tough challenges.
It generates abundant clean energy for millions of homes, controls destructive floods effectively, and improves river transportation greatly, which helps reduce air pollution from coal power. However, building it made many people leave their long-standing ancestral homes and affected local wildlife habitats in significant ways. Overall, it’s a great engineering wonder, and we should protect the surrounding natural environment to keep a lasting ecological balance.
[总体分析]
①题材：话题作文（议论文）
②时态：一般现在时
③提示：要求围绕三峡大坝的益处和争议发表看法，词数80-100。
[写作步骤]
第一步：介绍三峡大坝的基本情况。
第二步：说明其两大益处。
第三步：用However转折，指出问题，最后表达个人观点。
[亮点词汇]
①benefits 益处
②reduces 减少
③affect影响
④engineering工程
[高分句型]
①... generates abundant clean energy, which helps reduce air pollution ...（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②... we should protect the surrounding natural environment to keep a lasting ecological balance（运用了不定式结构表目的）
4．例文：
The Earth Is Our Home
The Earth is our home and we only have one Earth. However, our Earth is in danger now.
There are some reasons why the Earth is in danger. People cut down too many trees to make space for buildings and farmland. People kill a lot of wild animals for their fur, bones and some other parts of their bodies. Also, more and more natural disasters happen around the world every year.
It’s time for us to save the Earth now. First, the government should make laws to stop these people. Second, we shouldn’t buy fur coats anymore. Lastly, we should live a green life to save energy. In these ways, I believe our Earth will be better.
写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文，时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点：文章需要涵盖三个要点：1.介绍地球现状(砍树、猎杀动物、自然灾害)；2.保护措施展开及呼吁行动；3.总结并展望未来。
确定人称：第一人称(we/I)
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
开头段：承接开头，引出地球的现状问题
主体段：用First/Second/Lastly提出具体保护措施
结尾段：总结并展望未来，升华主题
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：地球现状
具体描述：人们砍伐树木(People cut down too many trees…)，人们杀害野生动物(People kill a lot of wild animals…)，自然灾害频发(Also, more and more natural disasters happen around the world every year.)
要点二：保护措施及呼吁行动
具体描述：制定法律(First, the government should make laws to stop these people.)，不再购买皮草(Second, we shouldn’t buy fur coats anymore.)，提倡绿色生活，节约能源(Lastly, we should live a green life to save energy.)
要点三：总结并升华主题
具体描述：畅想未来(In these ways, I believe our Earth will be better.)
5．One possible version:
Dear students,
Trees are our friends. They are very important. Trees can help clean air and they are important environmental guardians. Trees provide fruit, wood and other things for people and make people’s life more convenient.
We must know the importance of trees. We should take action to protect trees. We must stop cutting down trees. We should not use one-off chopsticks and we should save paper. We can also plant more trees around our city. When we go out, we should ride bicycles or take a bus.
Let’s protect trees and the environment. To protect trees is to protect ourselves.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇倡议书，围绕“保护树木，爱护地球”主题展开；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，阐述树木的重要性、保护措施并发出倡议；
③提示：写作要点明确，需包含“保护树木的原因、具体保护措施、倡议保护树木”三部分。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，阐述保护树木的原因，说明树木在净化空气、提供资源、守护环境等方面的重要作用；
第二步，列举具体保护措施，如停止乱砍滥伐、拒绝一次性筷子、节约用纸、植树造林、绿色出行等；
第三步，发出倡议，升华主题，强调保护树木就是保护人类自身，呼吁大家共同行动。
[亮点词汇]
①environmental guardians环境守护者
②take action采取行动
③cut down砍伐
④one-off chopsticks一次性筷子
[高分句型]
①Trees can help clean air and they are important environmental guardians.（并列句，点明树木的核心作用）
②We should not use one-off chopsticks and we should save paper.（并列谓语，提出具体生活中的保护行动）
③To protect trees is to protect ourselves.（不定式作主语，升华倡议主题）
6．范文：
The Shrinking Amazon Rainforest: A Global Crisis
The Amazon Rainforest, often called the “Earth’s lungs”, is disappearing at an alarming rate. Every year, over 10,000 square kilometers of forest are lost due to deforestation. People cut down trees to make space for farming, destroying the ecosystem and endangering countless species.
The loss of the rainforest has serious consequences. Trees absorb carbon dioxide, so fewer trees mean more climate change. Additionally, animals like jaguars and macaws lose their homes, pushing them closer to extinction.
To save the Amazon, we must take action. Governments should create stricter laws against illegal logging, and individuals can help by reducing paper use and supporting sustainable products. Remember: If the Amazon dies, our planet’s health will suffer too.
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：材料所给内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【写作步骤】第一步：开篇点题，介绍亚马逊雨林的重要性及消失的严峻现状。
第二步：用简单句并列说明雨林消失的原因（砍伐、农业），并包含“climate change”，“species extinction”两个核心内容。
第三步：提出“植树”；“减少用纸”；“加强法律”三条措施，以呼吁结尾，升华主题。
【亮点词汇】①climate change气候变化
②at an alarming rate以惊人的速度
③take action采取行动
【高分句型】①Every year, over 10,000 square kilometers of forest are lost due to deforestation.（运用数字增强说服力）
②Remember: If the Amazon dies, our planet’s health will suffer too.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
7．One possible version:
Let’s Protect Nature
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. As we all know, green mountains and clear waters are mountains of gold and silver. Nature is very important to us because it provides us with fresh air, enough food and rich resources.
However, nature is in danger now. Water is polluted, forests are becoming smaller, and some people hunt many wild animals.
Nature is the only home we have. It’s time for us to take action. We should protect nature and live in harmony with it. Let’s work together to make our world more beautiful!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：围绕保护自然的重要性、面临问题及行动呼吁展开，需包含题干所有要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自然的重要性，说明自然为人类提供必要的生存资源；
第二步，指出当前自然面临的污染、破坏等严峻问题；
第三步，发出保护自然的呼吁，倡导与自然和谐共处。
[亮点词汇]
①in danger处于危险之中
②take action采取行动
③in harmony with与……和谐一致
[高分句型]
①Nature is very important to us because it provides us with fresh air, enough food and rich resources. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Nature is the only home we have. (省略关系代词的定语从句)
8．例文
Dear teachers and classmates,
It’s my great honor to give a speech on “Green Life, Youth in Action”. The earth is our only home. Environmental protection is crucial for our survival and well-being. Without it, we’ll face disasters like extreme weather.
In daily life, we can take action. Walk or ride bikes to cut carbon emissions. Reuse water from washing vegetables to water flowers. Use reusable bags and bottles to reduce plastic waste.
I imagine a future with carbon neutrality—clearer sky, cleaner rivers, and fresher air. Let’s act now for this green future!
Thank you!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开篇点题，引出演讲主题；
第二步：结合生活，列举日常生活中可以践行的绿色行动；
第三步：畅想未来，发出呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①crucial至关重要的
②carbon emissions碳排放
③reusable可重复使用的
[高分句型]
①It’s my great honor to give a speech on “Green Life, Youth in Action”.（it 作形式主语，不定式作真正主语）
9．例文
Protect the Yellow River
The Yellow River is the mother river of the Chinese nation, stretching 5,464 kilometers and ranking as the second longest river in China. It has nourished countless generations. However, it faces serious situations like water and soil loss. To protect this precious river, we should take action. We can stop fishing in its waters to preserve fish populations. Also, making strict laws to prevent pollution is crucial. Let’s work together to safeguard our mother river for a brighter future of our nation!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“思维导图”中关于黄河的介绍以及保护黄河的倡议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“The Yellow River is the mother river of the Chinese nation”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“Facts、Situations、Ways”几个方面重点介绍黄河的具体情况以及保护黄河的方法；
第三步，书写结语。表达“Let’s work together to safeguard our mother river for a brighter future of our nation!”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①stretch 延伸，绵延
②countless 数不清的
③take action 采取行动
④preserve 保护，保存
⑤crucial 至关重要的
⑥safeguard 保护，捍卫
[高分句型]
①The Yellow River is the mother river of the Chinese nation, stretching 5,464 kilometers and ranking as the second longest river in China.（现在分词作伴随状语）
②Let’s work together to safeguard our mother river for a brighter future of our nation!（祈使句）
10．例文
Nature
Nature is our home. It’s a part of our life. Last summer, I went hiking in the mountains. The fresh air, green trees, and singing birds made me feel really relaxed and happy. I forgot all my worries and just enjoyed the beautiful scenery around me, taking in its charm.
Walking in nature has many benefits. It helps us relax both our body and mind completely. We can also learn about different plants and interesting animals there.
Let’s walk into nature more often. It will surely make our life more colorful and meaningful, don’t miss it!
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇征文比赛短文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括记录一次走进大自然的经历及感受、走进大自然的好处以及呼吁人们走进大自然。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主题。借用“Nature is our home. It’s a part of our life.”来引出主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先记录一次走进大自然的经历及感受，接着阐述走进大自然的好处；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁人们走进大自然，享受大自然的美丽和宁静。
[亮点词汇]
①take in吸收，领略
②both...and... ……和……都
③don’t miss it不要错过
[高分句型]
①The fresh air, green trees, and singing birds made me feel really relaxed and happy.（“make sb do sth”句型）
11．例文
A Meaningful Social Practice Activity
Last Sunday, our class organized a social practice activity with the theme of “Nature Exploration and Environmental Protection Action” at the Mangrove Nature Reserve from 10 a. m. to 4 p. m.
First, we visited the nature reserve, where we learned a lot about nature. Then, we took part in a tree-planting activity. After that, we watched some rare birds. Besides, we also picked up the litter in the reserve to keep the environment clean.
Through this activity, I not only got close to nature but also realized the importance of environmental protection. It was a really meaningful day.
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述了一次社会实践活动；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“Last Sunday, our class organized a social practice activity”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“参观自然保护区、植树、观鸟、捡垃圾”几个方面重点介绍活动当天的具体情况;
第三步，书写结语。表达“这次活动很有意义”的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①took part in参加
②picked up捡起
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①First, we visited the nature reserve, where we learned a lot about nature.（where引导的非限制性定语从句）
12．例文
Dear Jack,
I think Mount Emei is the most beautiful natural wonder. It is in Sichuan Province, China. It has tall, green mountains and peaceful temples. The air is fresh, and people can see amazing views from the top. It is beautiful because of its green forests, clear streams, and lovely flowers. I like it because it is very quiet and relaxing. People can also see many cute monkeys and enjoy the lovely nature. What do you think is the most beautiful natural wonder
I’m looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍峨眉山；
第二步，从“地理位置、风景、动物”等方面进行介绍峨眉山；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①peaceful宁静的
②because of因为
③lovely美丽的
[高分句型]
I like it because it is very quiet and relaxing. (because引导的原因状语从句)

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