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Section Ⅴ　Writing——观察日记
[语料积累]
首段:说明观察的对象、环境等
1.On the first day,I put some seeds into a basin.
第一天,我把一些种子放进一个花盆。
2.Then I poured some water into the basin,for this plant...
然后我把一些水倒入花盆,因为这种植物……
3.Then the container should be put in a place where there is enough sunshine. 然后应将容器放在阳光充足的地方。
主体:描写植物生长过程的阶段
1.Several days later,the young plants began to grow out of the soft soil,and I put the basin in the room to avoid the hot sun.
几天后,幼苗开始从松软的土壤中长出来,我把花盆放到房间里来避开烈日。
2.With these young plants beginning to grow rapidly,now they have grown into tall plants.
这些幼苗开始快速地生长,现在它们已经长成了高高的植物。
3.One leaflet of the sensitive plant touched,its leaflets progressively collapse,sometimes throughout the whole plant.
当含羞草的一个小叶被触碰时,它的叶子逐渐皱缩,有时遍及整个植株。
4.As spring approaches,the trees begin to send forth tender buds.
随着春天的到来,树上开始长出嫩叶。
5.It takes about eight weeks to root,but the seed hasn’t come up yet.
生根大约需要八周,但种子还没长出来。
6.Having been watered every day with a proper amount of water,they gradually grow to...which looks like...
每天用适量的水浇灌后,它们逐渐长到……,看起来像……
尾段:总结观察的结果
1.I’m surprised at...　
我对……感到惊讶。
2.Watching the growth process is as interesting as enjoying the flowers.
观察生长的过程就像欣赏花朵一样有趣。
[典题示例]
假定你是正在英国留学的李华,在生物课上,老师要求同学们课后观察一种植物的生长过程,并用日记的形式将该过程记录下来。请你写一篇观察日记,介绍草莓的生长过程,内容包括:
1.幼苗(seedling)植入土壤;
2.两周后:幼苗叶子变大,呈伞状;
3.一个月后:长出花苞(bud);
4.两个月后:雌蕊(pistil)变成草莓,约五天后,草莓成熟(mature)。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
1.审题谋篇
(1)开头:________________________________________;
(2)主体:________________________________________;
(3)结尾:________________________________________。
引出话题,整体介绍草莓这种植物
具体介绍草莓的生长过程
进行总结
2.要点翻译
①Strawberries are many people’s favourite fruit and some people even want to ______________________________________________ strawberries by themselves.
草莓是许多人最喜欢的水果,有些人甚至想尝试自己种植草莓。
②________________________________________ about them.
这是我对它们的观察。
try planting
Here is my observation
③The leaves of the seedlings gradually ____________________larger umbrella-shaped leaves.
幼苗的叶片逐渐长成较大的伞状叶片。
④They ________________________________ in the soil for two weeks.
把他们种在土壤里两周了。
⑤Two months later,the pistils _________________________________.
两个月后,雌蕊长成了真正的草莓。
⑥Isn’t it interesting to watch the growth process of strawberries ________________________________________
亲自观看草莓的生长过程不是很有趣吗
grow into
have been planted
grow into real strawberries
in person
3.词句升级
(1)用时间状语从句升级句③和句④
The leaves of the seedlings gradually grow into larger umbrella-shaped leaves ____________________________________________.
(2)用It takes some time to do sth升级句⑤
__________________________________________real strawberries.
after they have been planted in the soil for two weeks
It takes two months for the pistils to grow into
4.连句成篇
【参考范文】
Strawberries are many people’s favourite fruit and some people even want to try planting strawberries by themselves.Actually,the growth process of them is pretty long.Here is my observation about them.
The leaves of the seedlings gradually grow into larger umbrella-shaped leaves after they have been planted in the soil for two weeks.One month later,small buds begin to appear.The following process is a little longer.It takes two months for the pistils to grow into real strawberries.And about five days later,strawberries mature and we can enjoy fresh strawberries.
Isn’t it interesting to watch the growth process of strawberries in person
[随堂演练]
假如你是李华,你想研究一下向日葵从种子到植株的生长过程,请根据下面的提示写一篇观察日记:
1.将向日葵种子埋进一个花盆里,浇了些水;
2.几天后,盆中长出了幼苗(shoot);
3.幼苗茁壮成长,几天后就长得很高了。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
One day I buried some seeds of sunflowers into a basin,where there was some rich soil.After pouring some water into the basin,I began to observe it with great patience.Several days later,some green shoots grew out of the soil,which were so lovely.Seeing that the soil was a little dry,I added some water to it again.After several days,these young plants grew into some tall plants,which were very strong.I was surprised at what I saw that day!How amazing it is to watch a seed become a tall plant!

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