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(共11张PPT)
写作进阶训练——勇敢面对挫折
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华,上周五你们学校举办了感恩父母活动,要求学生周末在家帮父母做一件家务事。请你给国外朋友Mark写一封邮件分享这次经历,内容包括:
1.你所做的家务事;
2.你的体验和感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mark,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Mark,
Last Friday,our school organized a heartwarming “Thanksgiving to Parents” event.Inspired,I dedicated my weekend to helping my parents by cleaning our entire house.From dusting the furniture to mopping the floors,I worked diligently.The task,though exhausting, was enriching.Seeing the sparkle in every corner and the satisfaction in my parents’ eyes,I felt an overwhelming sense of gratitude.It deepened my understanding of their daily struggles and strengthened our bond.Truly,small acts of kindness go a long way.
Yours,
Li Hua
Ⅱ.情景续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It all started after a routine doctor visit.I’d been planning on getting healthy,but the numbers showed that my vague efforts weren’t working at all.Weighing 325 pounds,I found my blood sugar,cholesterol,and blood pressure were all way over target.Things had to change.Radically.
But I was definitely not doing another diet of cramming (塞满) denial and shame down my throat until I hit some number on a scale.I was tired of watching the weight return again and again,bringing with it more guilt and shame.Clearly,I needed to make lifestyle changes.
It occurred to me that I knew a lot about what didn’t work,since all my previous attempts had led me to this sorry state.I needed to get healthy,but in a slow,steady,rest-of-my-life kind of way.
I’ve been a software developer for twenty-five years,so naturally I went to that skill set.I thought,“What if the system I need to redesign is me ” I decided to reboot (重启) my own system.Could I make it easy Make it fun
That idea seems radical (过激的).It goes against diet culture and the advertising messages we’ve been bombarded with our entire lives.We’re told over and over that getting healthy is difficult.No pain,no gain,right
But I found out it doesn’t have to be that way.I started upgrading my system by reviewing all the times I tried to get healthy in the past.I made a list of what didn’t work.Then I wrote down what did work,or at least worked for a while,and why it stopped working.There were some surprises.My membership at 15-Minute Fitness,for example,was a huge success.I worked out with a trainer for an intense fifteen minutes twice a week and saw huge gains.
One by one,I went through every failed attempt.I realized that the consistent elements across all of them were guilt,shame and internal bullying.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Then I came up with new rules.____________________________
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After my first 100 days,I saw big improvements._______________
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【参考范文】
Then I came up with new rules. Each rule was specifically tailored to address my previous failed attempts at getting healthy. Instead of forcing myself to have restrictive diets,I decided to focus on enjoyment and sustainability.I realized that treating myself with kindness and understanding was crucial for long-term success. Gradually, I started to notice a shift in my mindset.I no longer viewed healthy living as a chore but as a journey filled with opportunities for growth and self-discovery.Surprisingly,they turned out extraordinarily effective.
After my first 100 days,I saw big improvements. I was eating better and had more energy as I followed these new,healthy behaviors.My blood sugar had dropped fifteen points,my blood pressure had dropped forty points,and I’d lost sixty pounds.My doctor called me her greatest success story.All of this was done with love and self-care.I finally made it without medication,without surgery and without beating myself up.Through this experience I got a deeper insight into the importance of healthy lifestyle and learnt the lesson that every drop of sweat counts. (共11张PPT)
写作进阶训练——体育精神
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
你校英文报正面向高三学生征稿,以呈现三年校园生活中促进个人成长的难忘时刻。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.难忘经历;2.难忘原因。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
A Memorable Moment
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【参考范文】
A Memorable Moment
There are so many memorable moments in my three years of campus life,which promote my personal growth.I’d like to share one with you.
I still remember the moment when I stepped into the new school as a freshman.Faced with everything unfamiliar,I felt anxious and lonely.I couldn’t adapt to the new school.Seeing my anxiety,my
English teacher encouraged me to face everything courageously.And my classmates volunteered to talk with me.Their kindness made me relaxed and warm so that I quickly fit in with the new environment.Also,it promoted my growth.Never will I forget the moment.
Ⅱ.情景续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The years have left many childhood memories almost dreamlike.However,one memory is seared into my brain.It will never be forgotten,as it changed the track of my entire life.After weeks of lying in a hospital bed,I woke up from a faint,with both of my legs amputated (截肢).I was four years old.
That double amputation helped shape and mold me.It gave me the drive to persevere when everyone quits,and the determination to prove to the world and myself that any obstacles can be overcome.
Running was a relatively new pursuit for me.I started training seriously as a runner in August 2016.From the start,it seemed to be a sport tailored to me.It required long hours of training.It did not matter if it was hot or cold,raining or snowing.There was always training to be done and new golds to achieve.
The 2018 Chicago Marathon was my fifth attempt at the distance.The starting gun cracked,and a grin spread across my face as a chill raced up my arms and down my back.Accompanied by my pacer (陪跑人),I dashed forward,powerful and confident in my ability to run the exact race plan I had made with my coach.
The race dragged on,and with less than 10 miles to go,my body started to feel the effects of running at a fast pace for a long time.“Dad,I know you will win the race,”I thought of what my three-year-old son said before the race.It gave me the motivation.
Shortly after mile 22,I was making a right turn when disaster struck.I stepped in a hole,caught the edge,and felt an artificial leg coming off.I panicked and grabbed it with my right hand while frantically (手忙脚乱地) reaching out to grab the shoulder of the pacer.Unfortunately,I missed and came down hard on my side.As my head hit the pavement,my whole world went dark.
注意:续写词数应为150 左右。
I didn’t know if it was seconds or minutes before I came to myself.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The final 2.2 miles was short but long for me. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
I didn’t know if it was seconds or minutes before I came to myself. My head was spinning and dizzy.I couldn’t focus my eyes,and my vision was blurry.My hearing was bad,too.My pacer helped to drag me off the ground and I managed to pull my torn-off leg back on.Then I moved ahead with him.At first,I staggered,and then I walked.Suddenly,my whole body felt uncomfortable.But I knew I was strong enough to finish the race.Finally,those tottering walking steps turned into running again.
The final 2.2 miles was short but long for me. The dizziness was worse,and my legs felt like lead weights.I walked again.But my son’s words echoed in my mind,“Dad,I know you will win the race.” Though my body screamed at me,I struggled to run.Finally,I crossed the finish line and collapsed to the ground,my body totally tired.I had battled with everything I had on the streets of Chicago,and I arose victorious. (共11张PPT)
写作进阶训练——探索自然奥秘
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
根据下面的图片,用英语写一
篇观察日记,描写甜椒(bell pepper)
的生长过程。要点包括:
1.播种及发芽阶段(seed,sprout,8月份种植,发芽期10-15天);
2.生长及发育阶段(stem,blossom,幼苗期30-50天);
3.成熟及结果阶段(produce,fruit,开花、结果期60-100天)。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Bell peppers are usually planted in August.First,the seeds are sowed into the flowerbed side by side.After ten to fifteen days,if watered regularly,the seeds can sprout.Two green leaves are on the green seedling.As time goes by,more leaves grow out of the stem.
During the next thirty to fifty days,the stem grows longer and stronger.With more water and sunlight,those plants keep growing and then blossom.The white flowers smell sweet and fresh,indicating they will bear juicy fruits.
In the following sixty to one hundred days,the plants finally produce fruits.
Ⅱ.情景续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The new year was coming and my family began to make this year’s plan for it.“The weather report says this unseasonably warm weather will continue through the week.We could shake things up and celebrate the new year with a picnic party in the backyard!” said my mum.
“Our San Francisco weather can be pretty unpredictable,” said my dad.“Maybe we should come up with a sensible indoor plan.” Then he continued,“Hey!Why not start this year with something different ”
“Yeah!” my little brother,Tex,agreed.
“It’ll be great!” said Mom.Then she turned to my cousin,Mareya,who was staying with me,“Mareya,we’d love to have you and your family join us.And how about inviting Ollie and Grandma ”
We all cheered.And after the fastest kitchen clean-up in history,Mareya and I raced over to Ollie’s.Grandma was also excited and suggested we get out the instruments and make a little music.
Grandma’s music suggestion got us thinking.Ollie,Mareya,and I made up a simple song,and somehow,it turned into an idea for a play!Later that afternoon,we went back to my house to find out the costume box.Naturally,my little brother and sister joined right in.
We made up a play,in which the forest animals threw a party to celebrate the arrival of the New Year Queen.Fast-forward to New Year’s Day when we worked all morning to set up our backyard stage.We prepared some flowers and a basket of pine nuts (松子) to greet the Queen when she stepped on the stage.
Unfortunately,the weather that morning was so windy and cold that we all felt freezing.Mum suggested us giving the performance indoors.But we insisted on showing the play outside,as we had all set up for it in the yard.Mum then said that we could start with the play outside,and then had the food inside.Everyone agreed.
Once our audience were seated,Ollie opened the show.When we were half way through the performance,right in the middle of our song-and-dance scene,a strong wind blew!Suddenly,there was a mess as everybody hurried to pick things up.But afterward,the air was calm again.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
“The show must go on!” Grandma called from the audience. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Attracted by the smell of pine nuts dropped on the ground,two real squirrels (松鼠) ran onto the stage.___________________________
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【参考范文】
“The show must go on!” Grandma called from the audience.So we started from where we’d left off.And we actually did make it all the way through to the part where the queen arrived.All the animals greeted her with flowers and the basket of pine nuts.And at that exact moment,an even stronger wind came blowing out of nowhere and the basket of pine nuts tipped onto the ground.The fine flavor of pine nuts spread in the air.
Attracted by the smell of pine nuts dropped on the ground,two real squirrels ran onto the stage.Seeing the two squirrels running in,Tex laughed,saying,“The real forest animals want to be in the play!” “Yeah!” I added.“And they don’t even need costumes.” And so,Ollie made up a new line on the spot,calling them queen’s royal helpers.The performance finished smoothly.What a surprise to have two squirrels join in our celebration!It was really a special and unforgettable New Year’s party. (共12张PPT)
写作进阶训练——灵感的来源
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
为了迎接即将到来的“世界旅游日”,你校计划举办一场英语写作比赛。请你自拟题目,用英语介绍一处你喜欢的历史名胜参赛并邀请对方参观。内容包括:
1.介绍该历史名胜;
2.简要总结并发出邀请。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
Cangxiang Street
Can you visit Nanluoguxiang in Anyang,Henan Province Well,you can!You can find sights in the Cangxiang Street to rival anything you can see in Beijing.
The buildings that lie on the Cangxiang Street have a history dating back to the Ming and Qing dynasties.Stepping on to the street,you feel like being transported back in time.Deep in the street,
you will be surrounded by the scent of traditional snacks.When night falls,the old street lamps cast a warm glow on your shoulders,quieting the whole street.
The Cangxiang Street is a place where your senses come alive.What are you waiting for
Ⅱ.情景续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The year I turned ten,my father moved us from my island of Puerto Rico to Buenos Aires,Argentina.For him,it was a long-awaited leave—one he dreamt of spending in his motherland.For me,it was a bittersweet experience.That year became the year I parted from my best friend,the year I was homeschooled—and the year I first saw myself as an artist.
In the big city,tutors came in and out of our rented apartment every weekday.For all the hours I must have spent with them,I barely remember what I studied.In contrast,memories of that first time Mum took my sister and me to her childhood friend,a portrait artist,are stuck in my brain.
Her name was Morena.Morena held private drawing lessons in her family apartment.She must have encouraged Mum to bring the two of us to try her class.I was both thrilled and nervous.I didn’t know what it would be like to be making art among strangers.(My thirteen-year-old sister didn’t count.She ignored me most of the time.)
We got out of the elevator on the tenth floor of the nineteenth-century building and rang the bell.Morena answered and gestured for us to come in.The airy living room was decorated with English-style furniture that must have been handed down through many generations.Tall,wide windows anchored (固定) the north wall.And gazing through them,I could see beyond the park’s century-old trees all the way to the port where Río de la Plata (拉普拉塔河) runs into the Atlantic Ocean.Natural light poured in,casting soft shadows.
Morena pointed me toward the kitchen.On its table were colored pencils and paper.She asked me to draw from memory anything I wanted.Homesick,I drew what I most missed:palm trees,blue waves,sand,and seashells.Morena nodded at my landscape and sent me over to join the group.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
I sat in one empty chair in front of a boy,our model. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I forgot I missed my island,my best friend and my school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
I sat in one empty chair in front of a boy,our model. Morena instructed me to draw his face with the pencil.She said to measure distances from one point to the other and to look at how one shape related to others nearby.I listened.So attentive was I that all surroundings vanished and I got lost in the act of transferring what my eyes perceived onto the drawing paper.I enjoyed each stroke of the pencil.The rhythm was comforting.
I forgot I missed my island,my best friend and my school. I forgot that I didn’t get along with my sister.Instead,I found a love I did not want to part from,ever.That morning in Morena’s apartment,three hours dissolved into three minutes.Mum joined Morena in peering over my shoulder.And when I turned to look at them,I saw pride.They were amazed how gifted I was.That morning I learned that,for me,creating is like breathing. (共13张PPT)
写作进阶训练——环境保护
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华。你校英语俱乐部下周六要举办去市儿童福利院献爱心的社会实践活动,准备在校内征集志愿者。请你用英语写一篇招聘函。内容包括:
1.活动内容;2.时间和地点。
注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不记入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
In order to show our love and concern to the children who are living in the welfare center,_____________________________________
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English Club
【参考范文】
In order to show our love and concern to the children who are living in the welfare center,we will organize a social activity next Saturday afternoon.Fifty students from our school will be chosen as volunteers to take part in this activity held in the welfare center for children in our city.If you are willing to help these children,you can call us and provide us with your personal information,or you can contact us by email at Aixinfengxian@.The volunteers will go
to help these children with their studies,especially their English as well as communicate with them.Therefore,if you are good at English or communication,you will be well equipped to help these children.In addition,each volunteer should take at least one gift for the friend you’ll make there.
English Club
Ⅱ.情景续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a high school student,I lived in an urban neighborhood,where opportunities to take part in agricultural activities were rare.My understanding of farming mostly came from what I had learned in books.I was a hard-working person,always eager for a chance to explore agriculture.
Finally,the opportunity I had been longing for arrived.Earth Day in the second year of my high school,my class organized a visit to a local farm to learn about farming.I was thrilled about the idea and couldn’t wait to share the exciting news with my parents.The next day,I went shopping for tools with my father,such as trowels,watering cans,gloves,and other necessary items.
On the day of the event,my classmates and I gathered at the meeting spot early in the morning.The weather was perfect,and everyone seemed particularly happy.Armed with our tools,we got into the car and headed off to our destination.
Upon reaching the farm,we were split into several groups by our teacher.One group was in charge of planting the seeds,one for watering the plots,and one for weeding and maintaining the farm.At the teacher’s signal,we all sprang into action.
However,it was the first time that many of us had participated in farming,so we were unsure where to begin.I was among them.Fortunately,our teacher was a knowledgeable woman with experience in farming.To guide us,the teacher began planting vegetables herself.After observing her method,we all joined in and got our hands dirty.In no time,we had planted a variety of vegetables.I paid close attention,keen on absorbing every detail.Eventually,I learned the skills of planting vegetables.
The experience was not just about learning how to plant;it was also about understanding the importance of sustainable living and the role each one of us can play in protecting our environment.It was a hands-on lesson that made a significant impact on me.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Inspired by the experience on the farm,I decided to put my knowledge to good use.________________________________________
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As the harvest season approached,there were many vegetables in the backyard.________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Inspired by the experience on the farm,I decided to put my knowledge to good use.I started a small garden in my backyard,where I planted the same variety of vegetables I had planted on the farm.With each passing day,I carefully watered the plants and weeded out the unwanted growth.My parents were surprised and proud to see how dedicated I was to this newfound hobby.My little garden not only provided us with fresh vegetables but also taught me valuable lessons about patience and perseverance.
As the harvest season approached,there were many vegetables in the backyard.The sight of my hard work coming to fruition filled me with joy.I invited my classmates and teachers over to my house to share the bounty of my garden.We harvested the vegetables together,laughing and chatting as we did so.It was a moment of celebration,not just for the bounty we had gathered,but also for the knowledge and friendship we had gained from our experience on the farm. (共12张PPT)
写作进阶训练——幽默
Ⅰ.应用文写作(满分15分)
假设你是李华,校英文报举行题为“我最喜欢的幽默大师——卓别林”的征文比赛,请你投稿参赛。
要点:1.简要介绍卓别林;
2.谈谈你喜欢他的原因。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Charlie Chaplin,master of nonverbal humor,was born into a poor family.When he was young,his father died,leaving the family even worse off.Therefore,Charlie had to take the responsibility to care for his mother and brother.Even if he led a hard life,he managed to brighten the life of other people and created many famous characters,such as the little tramp,who encouraged many people in need.
The reasons why I like Chaplin best are listed as follows.Firstly,he worked hard to achieve his dream.Secondly,he had a sense of humor and was good at making a bad situation entertaining.What’s more,his attitude towards life and determination to overcome difficulties always inspire me whenever I am in trouble.
In general,I have learnt a lot from Charlie Chaplin.
Ⅱ.情景续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Emily is a sixth-grade student in a small American town.She is a curious and adventurous girl who always dreams of exploring new places.Last summer,her dream came true when she got selected for a student exchange program to visit China.
Emily was super excited,but she knew that going to a different country with a brand new culture might not be easy.When she arrived in China,she had an open heart and lots of hope,but the cultural differences,the language barrier,and the unfamiliar surroundings made her feel a bit overwhelmed.
On her first day at a Chinese school,she felt like she was in a completely different world.The students spoke a language she couldn’t understand,and the way things worked in the classroom was very different from back home.During lunchtime,poor Emily sat all by herself in a corner of the cafeteria,feeling lost and lonely.Just then,a friendly Chinese girl came up to her with a warm smile and said,“Hello,my name is Li Shanshan.I noticed you’re new here.Would you like to be our friend ”
Emily was so relieved and thankful for the friendly offer.“Thank you,” she replied with a big smile.“I’m Emily,and I’m really happy to meet you.”
Shanshan introduced Emily to her group of friends,and they all welcomed her with open arms.They helped Emily with her Chinese language,taught her about Chinese customs,and shared their favorite Chinese foods.Slowly but surely,Emily started to feel more comfortable and understand the Chinese culture better.
One day,as the English teacher was planning her class schedule,she came up with an idea.She decided to assign each student in the class to do a presentation about their hometowns the next week.She believed this could be a great way for the students to learn about different cultures and improve their public speaking skills.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Emily was glad to do this but she didn’t know how to prepare. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The day finally came and it was Emily’s turn to make the presentation. _______________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Emily was glad to do this but she didn’t know how to prepare. Knowing that,Shanshan stepped in to help Emily with her presentation.With Shanshan’s guidance,Emily decided to start by making a list of key points about her hometown,such as its location,population,and famous landmarks.She also included interesting facts and traditions that she thought would attract the audience’s attention.They practiced together,and Shanshan even taught her some key phrases in Chinese to make her presentation more appealing.As the days passed,Emily’s confidence grew,and she became more comfortable speaking in front of audience.
The day finally came and it was Emily’s turn to make the presentation. She was feeling a mix of excitement and nervousness as she walked to the front of the classroom.She took a deep breath,looked at her classmates,and began her presentation.She spoke passionately about the beautiful landscapes,the friendly people,and the unique cultural events.The students listened attentively and asked questions,showing their interest in her culture. Not only were they impressed by her presentation but also they were touched by the strong bond of friendship she had formed with Shanshan.Emily felt a sense of accomplishment,experiencing the warmth of friendship in a foreign land.

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