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2025-2026学年牛津上海版五年级英语下册核心考点精练
（深圳用）考点22：书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．Fufu的笔友Youyou一家打算周末从广州来深圳玩。Fufu想为他们设计一份深圳旅游攻略。请你根据思维导图帮Fufu写一写。要求：至少包含思维导图中三个方面的内容，语句通顺，书写规范，不少于五句话。
Shenzhen is a wonderful place for a holiday.
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2．小练笔。
同学们，暑假马上就要到了。请你根据思维导图，以My summer holiday为题，写一下你的暑假出游计划，要求语句通顺，标点正确。至少6句话。
My summer holiday
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3．书面表达。
同学们，暑假就要到了。假如你是Betty，你打算和父母一起去北京旅行，请根据思维导图的信息提示，以“My plan for summer holiday”为题，写一篇50个单词左右的短文。注意书写规范。
My plan for summer holiday
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4．书面表达。
亲爱的同学，我们身边有很多发明物，它们便利了我们的生活，也让我们的生活更有趣。作为小学生，你们想要发明什么？它能为我们的学习或生活带来哪些改变呢？请根据下面的提示，写一写。字数不少于45词 (已给出单词不计入总数)。
I’m going to invent something myself. I’m going to invent
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5．书面表达。
家是一个充满爱和温暖的地方。30 年之后，你将会居住在哪里？你对自己未来的家是否有特别的憧憬？请以“My future home”为题，根据思维导图，写写你对未来的家的畅想。50 词左右，注意书写规范。
My future home
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6．书面表达。
深圳是一个很美丽的城市，有深圳动物园、大梅沙海滨公园等。五一假期 (May Day holiday)，你计划与你的家人在深圳游玩。请以“My holiday plan”为题，根据思维导图的提示，写一篇出行计划。要求不少于50词，注意书写规范、标点符号及字母大小写。
My holiday plan ①Where will you go
②When will you go there
③How will you go there
④What will you visit/eat/do… …
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7．书面表达。请你为巨人的故事续写一个结尾，畅想一下他的花园里后续发生了什么故事吧！不少于5句话。
提示：1. Who comes to the garden
2. What do they do
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8．书面表达。如果你是小发明家，你想发明什么呢？请把你的创意写出来。不少于5句话。
提示：1. What do you want to invent
2. What can it do
3. Why do you want to invent it
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9．书面表达。根据提示完成写作。不少于5句话。
First Next Then After that Finally
The panda’s holiday plan
The panda is going to have a holiday by the sea next week. First, he will go there by
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10．书面表达。看图，以“Let me tidy up the room”为题，写一篇作文。不少于5句话。
Let me tidy up the room
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11．书面表达。请以“My bedroom”为题，参考提示描述你的房间。不少于5句话。
Tips: 1. How is your bedroom 2. What’s in your bedroom 3. What do you do in it 4. Do you like it Why (not) 5. Do you clean it every week
My bedroom
Look at my bedroom. It’s
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12．书面表达。
同学们，学校“童声英语·中国故事”活动开始了。本次活动以中国传统节日为主题。你认识下面的传统节日吗？看一看，写一写，并选择一个你喜欢的节日，根据提示介绍。不少于五句话。
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13．同学们，你们一般如何度过愉快的周末的呢？请根据思维导图，介绍一下即将到来的周末计划吧。
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14．书面表达。
暑假是同学们最喜欢的假期之一。请你根据以下提示问题，以My holiday plan为题，写一写你与家人的暑假旅行计划。要求：时态使用正确，语句表达通顺, 书写规范, 卷面整洁，50个单词左右。
Where are you going to visit How will you get there How long will you stay there Who will go with you What will you do there …
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15．暑假即将来临，根据图片，请以“My holiday”为题，谈谈你的假期计划。
要求:1. 语句通顺，表达正确，注意标点符号及书写格式
2. 字数50字左右。
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16．小作文。
请根据思维导图的提示，以“My favourite festival”为题写一写，至少5句话。
My favourite festival
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17．书面表达。老师正在为下个月的运动会征集班服创意，请你设计一个并简单介绍。不少于5句话。
提示：1. What is it
2. What colour is it
3. What is its advantage(优点)
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18．书面表达。每个人都是自己健康的第一责任人。请根据思维导图中的提示，写一写如何保持健康。不少于5句话。
How to keep healthy
Health is very important to everyone. How to keep healthy First,
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19．书面表达。参考思维导图, 用一般将来时写一写你的家庭旅行计划吧。不少于5句话。
My holiday is coming.
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20．书面表达。在你的想象中，你的未来是怎样的？请你完成思维导图，并以“My future”为题写一写你的未来。不少于5句话。
My future
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参考答案及试题解析
1．范文：
Shenzhen is a wonderful place for a holiday. First, we will go to Window of the World, a famous fun park in Shenzhen. After you get to Shenzhen, you can take the subway to get there easily. In the park, we can see small but beautiful famous buildings from different countries. We can also take lots of nice photos there. For lunch, we will try tasty Cantonese dim sum and fresh coconut juice. You will feel very happy and excited during the trip. I’m sure you will have a great weekend here.
【解析】题干解读：该题目时态为一般将来时。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：Window of the World世界之窗，take the subway乘地铁，take lots of nice photos拍很多好看的照片，tasty Cantonese dim sum美味的粤式点心，fresh coconut juice新鲜的椰汁，excited兴奋的
参考句型：First, we will go to...；For lunch, we will try...；You will feel...
2．范文：
My summer holiday
The summer holiday is coming. My family and I will have a trip this summer. We are going to Sanya. We will go there by plane. And we will stay there for five days. We are going to stay in a hotel by the sea. We’ll see many beautiful butterflies in the butterfly park. We will go swimming and have delicious seafood. We’ll have a great time during this summer holiday.
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求以My summer holiday为题，根据思维导图，写一下自己的暑假出游计划，时态是一般将来时，人称是第一人称，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：Sanya三亚，five days五天，see butterflies看蝴蝶，go swimming去游泳，seafood海鲜，have a great time玩得开心
参考句型：We are going to...；We will go there by...；We will stay there for...；We will...
3．范文：
Hello, I’m Betty. This summer holiday, I will go to Beijing with my parents by plane. We will visit the Great Wall, Palace Museum and Beihai Park. We will stay for seven days. We will live in a hotel. I will take many photos. I think it will be a wonderful trip!
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求写Betty打算和父母一起去北京旅行的事情，人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时和一般将来时，同时注意单词数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：summer夏天；parents父母；by plane坐飞机；visit参观；stay停留；live居住；trip旅行
参考句型：I will...；I think...
4．范文：
I’m going to invent something myself. I’m going to invent a robot. It has long arms and a big head. It can help us clean the room. It can help us cook. People can play games with it. I want to invent this robot, because it is helpful at home. It can help my mother do housework. So my mother can relax and do what she likes.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以My invention为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述要发明什么，它有什么，它会做什么，人们能用它做什么，原因。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般将来时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：myself我自己，robot机器人，cook做饭，play games玩游戏，helpful有帮助的，do housework做家务活，relax放松
参考句型：I’m going to …； It can …；I want to …
5．范文：
My future home
I will have a wife and two children in the future. We will live in Beijing. We will have a big living room. We will watch TV in the living room. We will have a quiet study. We will read and write there. We will have a beautiful garden. We will play in the garden.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My future home”为题，写一篇短文。然后再阐述家庭成员，住在哪里，房间及家庭活动。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：wife妻子，children孩子，in the future在未来，live in住在某地，living room客厅，quiet安静的，garden花园
参考句型：I/We will …
6．范文：
My holiday plan
May Day holiday is coming. I will go to Shenzhen with my family. We will go there on May 2nd. We will stay there for three days. We will get there by plane. We will visit Shenzhen Zoo and Dameisha Beach Park. We will eat lots of delicious food. We will buy some gifts. We will have a good time.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My holiday plan”为题，根据思维导图的提示，写一篇出行计划。然后再阐述要去哪里，什么时候去，待多久，怎么去，参观什么，吃什么和做什么等。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：Shenzhen深圳，get there到那里，by plane乘飞机，delicious美味的，gift礼物
参考句型：I/We will …
7．示例:
The giant likes the children and plays with them every day. Many other people visit his garden, too. They bring a lot of food and drinks to the giant. The giant is so happy. They plant many beautiful flowers in the garden together. Now they live together happily.
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求续写巨人的故事，人称用第三人称，时态用一般现在时，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：plays with和……玩，every day每天，visit参观，food and drinks食物和饮料，plant种，live生活。
参考句型：The giant likes…；Many other people…；They…；The giant is…
8．示例：
There are a lot of great inventions in the world. They are useful for people. In the future, I want to invent a flying car. It is red and white. It can run very fast. When I go to work, I can drive it on the road. When I want to travel, I can drive it in the sky. It is so good!
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求写一写你想发明的东西，这个东西能做什么及其想发明它的原因，注意文章时态为一般现在时，并满足句数的要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：inventions发明，useful有用的，in the future在未来，flying car会飞的汽车，drive开车
参考句型：There are…；They are…；In the future, I want…；It is…；It can…；When I…, I can…；
9．示例：
The panda’s holiday plan
The panda is going to have a holiday by the sea next week. First, he will go there by bus. Next, he is going to swim in the sea. Then, he will play volleyball on the beach. After that, he is going to paint a picture by the sea. Finally, he is going to row a boat and look at the big moon. What a wonderful plan!
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据提示完成写作。然后再阐述计划与安排。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：by bus坐公共汽车，swim游泳，in the sea在海里，play volleyball打排球，paint a picture画画，row a boat划船，wonderful极好的
参考句型：Next, he is going to …； Then, he will …；After that, he is going to …；Finally, he is going to …
10．示例：
The living room is messy. My mum is angry. Let me tidy it up now. The umbrella and the cap are on the floor. I put them in the box. Then I put the toy cars in the box too. My shoes are on the floor. I put them behind the door. My socks are on the sofa. I wash them in the bathroom. My books and crayons are on the sofa too. I put them on my desk. The room is tidy and clean now.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“Let me tidy up the room”为题，看图写一篇作文。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇和句型：
参考单词：messy乱的，tidy...up整理，umbrella雨伞，put放，on the sofa在沙发上，wash洗
参考句型：The living room is…；Let me…； I put them…；My ... and ... are...
11．示例:
My bedroom
Look at my bedroom. It’s not very big but clean. There is a pink bed, a yellow desk and a white chair in my bedroom. There are some toys on my bed and some books on the desk. I sleep, read books and do my homework in my bedroom. Sometimes I talk with my sister here. I like it because it’s beautiful and quiet. I always tidy it up on Saturday afternoon to keep it clean.
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求根据提示描述我的卧室，时态用一般现在时，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：Look at看，pink粉色的，on the desk在桌子上，do my homework做作业，tidy up整理，keep it clean保持干净
参考句型：Look at…；It’s not…； There is…；There are…；I…；Sometimes I…；I always…
12．例文
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is in January or February. The weather is very cold. People usually set off firecrackers to celebrate the Spring Festival. I like the Spring Festival very much because I can eat traditional food. Especially delicious dumplings. I can get lucky money from my parents and relatives. I can play with my best friends.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写一下自己喜欢的传统节日。阐述节日的时间，天气如何，人们在这个节日做的事情以及为什么喜欢这个节日。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：the Spring Festival春节，cold寒冷的，firecrackers鞭炮，dumplings饺子，lucky money压岁钱
参考句型：My favourite festival is…；It is in…；The weather is …；I can…
13．范文
My weekend plan
The weekend is coming. I am going to the library with my friends this Saturday morning. We will go there by bike. We will read books about space. I am going to the park with my family this Sunday afternoon. We will go there on foot. We will play music and row a boat. It is a busy weekend, but I feel tired and happy.
【解析】1.题干解读：本文要求以“My weekend plan”为题，介绍自己的周末计划。注意时态为一般将来时，人称为第一人称，符合句子数量要求。
2.参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：library图书馆，friends朋友们，read books读书， park公园，row a boat划船，tired劳累的， happy高兴的
参考句型：The weekend is…； I am going to…；We will …；It is …
14．范文：
My holiday plan The summer holiday is coming. My family and I will go to Beijing for this holiday. We will go there by train and stay there for a week. We will visit many famous places like the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. We will also visit Peking University. We will take many photos. We will eat roast duck and other nice snacks. We will go shopping and buy some gifts for our friends, too. We are looking forward to the holiday.
【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求以第一人称，写一写与家人的暑假旅行计划。然后再阐述要去哪里，怎么去，和谁去，做什么等。注意文章时态为一般将来时并符合单词数量要求。
2.参考词汇和参考句型：
参考单词：by train乘坐火车，famous著名的，the Palace Museum故宫博物馆，the Summer Palace颐和园，the Great Wall长城，Peking University北京大学，roast duck烤鸭
参考句型：We will go…；We will visit…；We will take…；We are looking forward to…
15．范文：
My holiday
This summer holiday, I will go to Sanya with my parents. The weather there is nice all year round. It’s a wonderful place for holiday. We will get there by plane. Sanya has beautiful beaches with clear water. We’ll go swimming there. We’ll also have seafood.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据图片，以“My holiday”为题，谈谈假期计划。然后再阐述地点，交通方式，要做的事情等。注意文章为一般现在时态和一般将来时态并要符合单词字数要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考单词：summer holiday暑假，Sanya三亚，weather天气，by plane坐飞机，wonderful极好的，beach沙滩，seafood海鲜
参考句型：This summer holiday, I will …； The weather there is nice all year round；We will …；
16．范文：
My favourite festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It’s the most important festival in China. It usually comes in January or February. It’s usually cold. During the Spring Festival, we usually have a big dinner with dumplings. Children can get lucky money from parents. We watch fireworks at night. We also visit friends and relatives.
【解析】题干解读：根据思维导图的提示，以“My favourite festival”为题写一写自己最喜欢的节日，包括日期，天气，食物和活动。人称是第一人称和第三人称，时态是一般现在时态，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：the Spring Festival春节，cold冷的，dumplings饺子，lucky money压岁钱，watch fireworks观看烟花，visit friends and relatives看望亲戚和朋友
参考句型：My favourite festival...；It usually comes...；It’s...；During the Spring Festival, we usually...
17．例文：
This is the new T-shirt for our class at the sports meeting. Look! There are some stars on the back of it. The T-shirt can be different colours and comes in three sizes. We can choose a favourite one. The weather is sunny and hot on that day. We’ll feel cool in the T-shirt. It’s both beautiful and useful.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以第一人称介绍自己设计的班服，包含班服是什么、它的颜色和优点等信息。注意文章为一般现在时，并且保证一定词数的要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：T-shirt恤，the sports meeting运动会，star星星，on the back of在……的背面，different不同的，size尺寸，sunny晴朗的，hot炎热的，cool凉爽的，both beautiful and useful既美观又实用
参考句型：This is…；There are…；The T-shirt can…；We can…；The weather is…；We’ll…；It’s…
18．范文:
How to keep healthy
Health is very important to everyone. How to keep healthy First, we should eat more fruits and vegetables. We shouldn’t eat too much meat or sweet food. Next, we should play sports. We shouldn’t always stay at home. Then we should go to bed early and have a good rest every day. We shouldn’t sleep too late. Finally, we should keep happy. We shouldn’t get angry easily.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“How to keep healthy ”为题，写如何保持健康，可从饮食，运动，休息和保持心情愉悦四个方面阐述，写哪些行为可以保持健康，哪些行为是不可取的，注意语言简洁，表达准确并符合题干要求的句子数量。
2.参考词汇和句型：
参考单词和短语：keep healthy保持健康，fruits and vegetables水果和蔬菜，sweet甜的，play sports做运动，have a good rest好好休息，angry生气的
参考句型：We should…；We shouldn’t…
19．示例：
My holiday is coming. I will go to Sanya with my parents by plane next week. I am so happy! Sanya is in the south of China. It’s a beautiful city on Hainan Island. We will stay in Sanya for five days. We will visit the Sea World and go to the beach. The seafood there tastes great. I can’t wait!
【解析】题干解读：该题目要求参考思维导图，写一写我的家庭旅行计划，写一写计划去哪些地方，什么时候去，怎样去，打算在那呆多久，以及做什么事情，同时注意句子数量的要求。
参考词汇和句型：
参考词汇：happy开心的，visit参观，by plane坐飞机，next week下周，go to the beach去海滩
参考句型：I will…；We will…；It’s a……
20．例文：
job: an English teacher
place: Shanghai
appearance; thin and tall, long hair
In the future, I want to be thin and tall. So I will do exercise every day. I will have long hair. I want to be an English teacher because I like English very much. I will read English books and listen to English songs. I like Shanghai, so I will work and live in Shanghai with my friends. And we will travel to many different places together. I will have a good life in the future.
【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以“My future”为题写一写自己的未来。阐述未来的工作是什么，外貌是什么样的，工作和居住的地方在哪里等。注意文章是一般将来时并要符合句子数量要求。
2. 参考词汇与句型：
参考词汇：thin and tall又瘦又高，long hair长头发，English teacher英语老师
参考句型：I want to be…；I will have…；I will…
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