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Section Ⅴ　Writing Workshop——观点文章
[语料积累]
首段:开门见山,说明现象
1.Recently,we’ve had a discussion about how to create a nice environment of campus.Different people look at it in different ways.
最近我们就如何创造良好的校园环境进行了讨论,不同的人有不同的看法。
2.Nowadays,shopping online is becoming more and more popular.However,different people have different opinions about it.
现在网上购物越来越流行,然而不同的人有不同的看法。
3.Last Monday,students in our class had a heated discussion on whether we should make friends on the Internet.As a student,I am not in favour of it.
上周一,我们班就是否应该在网上交友进行了一次热烈的讨论。作为学生,我不赞同。
主体:正反观点及理由
1.The reasons why I am appealing to us students to create a harmonious environment of campus are as follows.
我呼吁同学们创建和谐校园的理由如下。
2.I oppose/am opposed to/object to students’ making friends online and my reasons are as follows.
我反对学生网上交友,理由如下。
3.Spending too much time on social network could bring about mental and physical health issues,so I think we students must say NO to social media.
花太多时间在社交网络会带来身心健康问题,所以我认为学生必须对社交媒体说“不”。
尾段:阐述个人的观点
1.All in all,without hard work and perseverance,one can hardly achieve his goals.
总之,没有努力和坚持不懈,一个人是不大可能实现目标的。
2.In a word,as students,we must put study in the first place.
总之,作为学生,我们应该把学习放在首位。
[典题示例]
假设你是李华,现在越来越多的人进行网上购物,网购有优势也有弊端。请你用英文写一篇短文谈谈你对网购的看法并发表在校园英文报上。要点如下:
1.网购的优势;
2.网购的弊端;
3.你对网购的态度。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
1.审题谋篇
首段:____________________________________;
主体:____________________________________;
尾段:____________________________________。
阐述现象
正反观点及理由
发表个人看法
2.要点翻译
①Nowadays many people ___________________________________. (prefer)
如今,许多人更喜欢网上购物。
②Shopping online is _______________________________.(popular)
网上购物越来越受欢迎。
prefer to shop online
becoming more and more popular
③Generally speaking,its advantages as well as its disadvantages can _________________________________________________.(follow)
一般来说,它的优点和缺点如下。
④The advantages of shopping online ___________________.(obvious)
网上购物的好处是显而易见的。
⑤___________________________________to shop but it also helps save much time.(倒装)
它不仅方便我们购物,而且有助于节省很多时间。
be seen as follows
are obvious
Not only is it convenient for us
⑥But one of the disadvantages is that we are not sure ___________________________________________.(whether,be of+n.)
但缺点之一是我们不确定我们购买的商品是否质量好。
⑦____________________________________, some buyers are cheated while shopping online.(as)
正如经常发生的那样,一些买家在网上购物时被骗了。
whether the goods we buy are of good quality
As is often the case
⑧I ___________________________________the positive aspects far outweigh the negative ones.(convinced)
我相信,积极的方面远远大于消极的方面。
⑨The positive aspects will ____________________________________. (strengthen)
积极的方面将加强其受欢迎程度。
am convinced that
strengthen its popularity
3.词句升级
(1)用定语从句合并句①句②
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(2)用定语从句合并句⑧句⑨
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Nowadays many people prefer to shop online,which is becoming more and more popular.
I am convinced that the positive aspects far outweigh the negative ones,which will strengthen its popularity.
4.连句成篇
【参考范文】
Nowadays many people prefer to shop online,which is becoming more and more popular.Generally speaking,its advantages as well as its disadvantages can be seen as follows.
The advantages of shopping online are obvious.Not only is it convenient for us to shop but it also helps save much time,with which we can do more other important things.But one of the disadvantages is
that we are not sure whether the goods we buy are of good quality.As is often the case,some buyers are cheated while shopping online.
Through the above analysis,I am convinced that the positive aspects far outweigh the negative ones,which will strengthen its popularity.
[随堂演练]
最新调查指出,人际关系正越来越被“人机关系”所取代,甚至有网友调侃:世界上最远的距离,是我在你面前,而你在低头看手机。根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文给《21世纪英文报》投稿。
1.描述这一现象;2.分析其原因及弊端;3.你认为该如何改变现状。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
As is often the case,when people are attending meetings,having meals or waiting for buses,you can always find them addicted to their phones,completely ignoring others.
This is really a common phenomenon in our life.The reason is that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and keep in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat.However,too
much exposure to phones is bad for people in terms of health.Moreover,people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them.
As far as I am concerned,people should wisely make use of their phones to help with their work and study.And meanwhile care more about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.

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