(备战2026年江苏省中考英语)二轮专题06书面表达(含答案解析)

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(备战2026年中考) 专题06书面表达
1.成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光,我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动,请分享你初中三年中的成长故事,具体讲述其中一个变化。
写作要点:
1. What is the change
2. How did it happen
3. What have you learned from it
注意事项:
1.词数100词左右;
2.文中必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯,通顺;
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years of junior high school, I have experienced many changes in
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.随着现代科技的发展,机器人已经来到我们身边,给人们的生活带来便利。请根据下表所述内容,介绍家用机器人的基本情况,并就如何更好地利用机器人为我们服务提出建议。
简介 家用机器人外观时尚,使用范围广泛,受到人们的欢迎。
主要功能 1. 煮饭、打扫房间;2. 照顾、陪伴老人;3. 拨打电话处理紧急事件,拯救生命。
存在问题 1. 技术不够成熟,存在安全隐患;2. 价格偏高,普通家庭消费不起。
你的建议 ……(至少两点)
要求:
1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3. 词数100左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇:家用机器人 household robots, 紧急事件 emergency
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.No.1 Middle School举办了“我的学校我做主”的校园建设金点子征集活动,让所有学生为学校未来发展提出自己的见解。假如你是章平,请你给校长写一封信。请你从提供的6个方面里选择2—3点,谈谈你的真实感受,并针对你认为有待提高的地方,提出合理建议和简要说明理由。
Contents Course design School environment
Quality of lunch Burden (负担) of homework
School activities School rules
Suggestions (适当发挥1—2点)
要求: 1.表达内容必须包含表格中所有相关信息,并适当发挥;
2. 词数100字左右 (作文开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Dear Principal,
I’d like to say something about my school and school life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Grateful for all, I hope our school will have a brighter future and become a better self.
Yours,
Zhang Ping
4.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Ben来信向你抱怨他在学习中文时遇到的困难,他已经学了很长时间,但进步不大,所以很沮丧。请你用英语给他回复一份电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;
2. 提出你的建议(至少三点)。
注意事项:
1. 邮件包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
2. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
3. 词数在100个左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Ben,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problem. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5. 和谐是一种美德(virtue),和谐社会由一个个和谐的家庭构成。构建和谐家庭是我们每个人的贵任。和谐的家庭给予我们精神支持,并使我们倍感幸福。假如你是李华,你的家被社区评为 ”和谐家庭”。请你用英语写一篇短文,给某英文网站投稿,谈谈你的和谐家庭是什么样子,以及为使家庭和谐你做了些什么。
提示:1. What’s your harmonious family like
2. What did you do for your family
3. … (适当发挥)
要求:1. 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不要出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数:80个左右 (开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Everyone wants to live in a harmonious family.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.成长对于青少年有着重大的意义。日前,学校公众号英语专栏以“Growing Up”为题,面向全体学生开展征文活动。请你参考下面提示图(图片为非限定性内容),从你对成长的认识出发,结合自己初中阶段的某个故事或某次经历,写一篇短文,谈谈你对成长的感受。
注意事项:
1.征文须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.词数在100个左右,征文标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.征文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
4.征文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.中国饮食文化博大精深。假如你是李明,上周你校开展了以“品中华美食,传承中华文化”为主题的校园美食节活动。请你根据以下图示提示,用英语给你的英国笔友 Mike写一封电子邮件,分享本次活动的过程和感受。
要求:
1. 电子邮件的内容必须包括图示中的所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
3. 词数 100左右(电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇: campus 校园;process 过程
Dear Mike,
How is everything going In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Ming
8.阅读,是与高尚的灵魂对话。阅读不仅能滋养人生,还能使人成为一个有温度、懂情趣、会思考的人,引领我们走向生命的诗和远方。校读书俱乐部正在举办征文活动。假设你是Wendy,请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍自己的阅读习惯。
要点:
1. What are your reading habits
2. Share some reading experiences;
3. What do you think of reading
注意:
1. 词数100 左右;
2. 文中应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.2024年,苏州工业园区(Suzhou Industrial Park)迎来开发建设30周年。三十而立,繁花似锦。值此建区30周年之际,学校微信公众号拟举行征文比赛。请以“SIP in my eyes”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1.Choose a word to describe SIP and explain why.
2.Introduce a place you like best in SIP and tell what people can do there.
3.Offer 1 or 2 suggestions for a better SIP.
注意:
1.词数100词左右;
2.内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
SIP in my eyes
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10.
“灿烂星空,谁是真的英雄“做出惊天动地的人是英雄,为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄,在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄,生活中勤勤恳恳的人也是英雄……学校英文报将围绕A Hero in My heart 主题进行征文,请根据下列提示谈谈你心目中的英雄并分享你的体会。
注意:1. 表达中必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
2. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
A Hero in My Heart
Everyone has a hero in his heart, so do I. ______________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
1.例文
Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years of junior high school, I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on. The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time.
Now I have realized the importance of reading books. I have got used to reading every day. Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的变化;
第二步,讲述如何改变的;
第三步,介绍从中得到的启发。
[亮点词汇]
fall in love with爱上
not at all一点也不
feel like感觉像
[高分句型]
①The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading. (that引导的表语从句)
②When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy books at all. (When引导的时间状语从句)
2.例文
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us.
Household robots, which are widely used and popular with people, look cool and have many types. They have many functions. Firstly, they can be used to cook and clean rooms. Secondly, they can help to take care of the elder people, and spend time chatting or playing chess with them. Moreover, they can even make calls for help in case of emergency and save lives.
On the other hand, the technology used in household robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems. What’s more, the price is too high for common people to afford one.
Personally, robots should be used to improve people’s lives. Meanwhile, more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be reasonable as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍家用机器人的基本情况,并就如何更好地利用机器人为我们服务提出建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍家用机器人的简介和主要功能;
第三步,介绍家用机器人存在的问题;
第四步,介绍你的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be used to do被用来做某事
②in case of emergency在紧急情况下
③on the other hand另一方面
[高分句型]
①Household robots, which are widely used and popular with people, look cool and have many types. (which引导的定语从句)
②On the other hand, the technology used in household robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems. (过去分词作定语)
3.例文:
Dear Principal,
I’d like to say something about my school and school life. Our campus is very beautiful, and I am very happy to study here every day. I think the course design is reasonable, and the teachers are responsible. However, I think there are some areas that need improvement.
First of all, the quality of lunch is not very good. The food is often cold and tasteless. I suggest that the school hire a new chef or work with a better food supplier. Secondly, the burden of homework is too heavy. Students often have to spend several hours on homework every night. I suggest that the school reduce the amount of homework or give students more time to complete it.
Grateful for all, I hope our school will have a brighter future and become a better self.
Yours,
Zhang Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。谈谈对学校真实感受及引出话题,要针对待提高的地方提建议;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍你的建议和理由;
[亮点词汇]
①reasonable有道理的
②responsible负责的
③spend time on sth.花费时间在某物上
[高分句型]
①However, I think there are some areas that need improvement. (定语从句)
②I suggest that the school hire a new chef or work with a better food supplier. (宾语从句)
4.参考范文:
Dear Ben,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problem. I’m sorry that you’re having trouble learning Chinese. I have heard a lot about the difficulties in Chinese learning, so you are not alone. Here are some tips you may find helpful.
Talk with local people as much as possible. It is a great way to push you to speak Chinese as well as practise your listening skills. Reading is important too. Go to the bookstore and find some Chinese storybooks suitable for you. In addition, you can also watch some Chinese talk shows and learn from them.
It takes time to learn a language. Be patient and you’ll make progress.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章需包括所有要点,可适当补充细节,注意行文流畅,无语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,对Ben表示理解并安慰;
第二步,从多说中文、多读中文书、多看中国访谈节目等三个方面提出建议;
第三步,给出期待并祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①have problem doing sth做某事有困难
②as much as possible尽可能多
③make progress取得进步
[高分句型]
①Here are some tips you may find helpful. (定语从句)
②Go to the bookstore and find some Chinese storybooks suitable for you. (并列句)
5.例文:
Everyone wants to live in harmonious family. I live in a harmonious family full of laughter. Each of the family members gets on well with each other. We often sit together to share our problems and happiness and everyone feels supported and relaxed at home.
As for me, I respect and love my parents. When I’m at school, I always study hard and try not to make my parents worried about my schoolwork. When I’m at home, I often help them with some housework, so they can have more time to do what they love. When my sister is in trouble, I usually try my best to help her.
I love my harmonious family and feel comfortable at home. I think everyone should take responsibility to create a harmonious family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容谈谈你的和谐家庭是什么样子,为使家庭和谐你做了些什么。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你的和谐家庭是什么样子;
第二步,介绍为使家庭和谐你做了些什么;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②get on well with和谐相处
③as for至于
④in trouble陷入麻烦
[高分句型]
①When I’m at school, I always study hard and try not to make my parents worried about my schoolwork. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think everyone should take responsibility to create a harmonious family. (宾语从句)
6.One possible version:
Growing Up
Growing up is meaningful to teenagers. In my opinion, I grow up in changes. The biggest change I’ve ever made is that I am not afraid of speaking to others any more.
I used to be shy when I entered the middle school. It lasted for one year until I read the saying “It’s never too late to change” in my English book. I realized it’s time to change, so I began to communicate more with others and tried to speak louder when answering questions in class.
Now my life is much more meaningful and colourful. I should be brave to improve myself when growing up.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,可适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的观点——成长对青少年来说很有意义;
第二步,介绍自己在初中阶段关于成长的故事;
第三步,书写结语,表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion依我之见
②be afraid of害怕……
③not…any more不再
④begin to do sth.开始做某事
[高分句型]
①Growing up is meaningful to teenagers.(动名词作主语)
②I used to be shy when I entered the middle school.(when引导的时间状语从句)
7.例文
Dear Mike,
How is everything going In order to promote Chinese food culture and enrich students’ campus life. Our school held a food festival in the dining hall last Friday.
During the activity, the cooks from our school introduced traditional styles of cooking and cooked many famous dishes like salad, bread, cakes, Yangzhou fried rice, Gong Bao Chicken and etc. Many students enjoyed traditional food and watched the process of cooking. They also cooked by themselves with the help of the cooks. All of them spoke highly of this activity. Meanwhile, they had a better understanding of China’s rich and special food culture.
In a word, I am interested in learning to cook delicious food. I can depend on myself when I am at home alone. What’s more, cooking helps develop a life skill. It is necessary for us to learn to cook in schools.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏图片中对于本次美食节的时间、地点、活动及你的感受的描述,可以适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,通过描述美食节的举办意义来引出此次活动;
第二步,具体描述写作内容。详细描述美食节的活动过程;
第三步,谈论一下自己对于此次活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①speak highly of赞扬;
②in a word总之;
③be interested in对……感兴趣;
④depend on依靠
[高分句型]
It is necessary for us to learn to cook in schools. (it作形式主语)
8.例文
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading is very important to us. Firstly, reading can help us get knowledge from books. Besides, it can open our minds and it is good for us to study. What’s more, reading can make us be confident and happy. I keep reading every day, because I think it is a good habit. I spend at least twenty minutes in reading every evening. I also watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers with my friends. I take notes when I am reading. I keep writing down some beautiful sentences in the notebook after reading.
I strongly suggest that every one should read at least one or two good books every term. What’s more, we should read proper books, which can help us to improve ourselves. Let’s enjoy reading and enjoy our life.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,围绕“阅读”展开;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍读书的益处;
第二步,介绍你是如何养成良好的阅读习惯的;
第三步,最后表达你的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①besides此外
②take notes记笔记
③at least至少
[高分句型]
①I keep reading every day, because I think it is a good habit.(because引导原因状语从句)
②I take notes when I am reading.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③I strongly suggest that every one should read at least one or two good books every term.(that引导的宾语从句)
9.例文
SIP in my eyes
Great changes have taken place in Suzhou Industrial Park since it was built 30 years ago. I think it is modern because it is equipped with different kinds of high technology and it also has many tall buildings.
I like the Jinji Lake best in SIP. I think it is very beautiful. There are some places of interest so people can enjoy beautiful views there. People can buy different kinds of art works in the Chengpin Bookstore. People can also take a walk or run in the morning because there is a 14-kilometer-long trail along the lake.
I think the government should build more libraries so that people there can read more books. I hope everyone can make efforts to build a better SIP.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己眼中的苏州工业园区,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,用一个词描述苏州工业园区;
第二步,接受苏州工业园区的一个地方以及在那里人们可以做什么;
第三步,为更好的苏州工业园区提供1到2条建议。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②be equipped with装备有
③places of interest名胜古迹
④make efforts to do sth.努力做某事
[高分句型]
①I think it is modern because it is equipped with different kinds of high technology and it also has many tall buildings. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think the government should build more libraries so that people there can read more books. (so that引导的结果状语从句)
10.例文:
A Hero in My Heart
Everyone has their own heroes. Some heroes can be great people, while other heroes may be common people. As for me, my father is my hero.
My father is an English teacher. He is tall with short hair. Although he is just an ordinary person, he has taught me a lot during my growth. I still remember one time when I failed my final exam badly. I was so afraid that I wanted to find excuses for my failure. My father was very angry, but not for my failure. Instead, he told me that I should face my problems bravely. To help me, he helped me find out my weaknesses, and think about ways to overcome them. From then on, I knew the true meaning of courage. It doesn’t mean that I am not afraid of anything but I can face my problems bravely instead of running away.
Thanks to my father, my hero, I can face all the problems bravely and become a person like him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍自己心目中的英雄;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②so...that如此……以至于……
③find out查出
[高分句型]
①Although he is just an ordinary person, he has taught me a lot during my growth. (although引导让步状语从句)
②I was so afraid that I wanted to find excuses for my failure. (so...that引导结果状语从句)
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