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研读高考真题及其范文，学续写高级句型
Learning goals(学习目标):
01了解常见的高级句式
02清楚它们的写法和精妙处
03能够仿写句式，为我所用
Learning steps:
Step 1: (Lead-in) 听读范文，写出序号对应的语言现象（见例1和例2）
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. My heart heavy with regret①, I felt very sorry for② the situation. Sitting③ silently in the car, he heard me out. Determined④ to make things right, I asked for his phone number and promised that I would pay the fare next time I was back to Vienna⑤. He nodded in approval,fished out his phone and quickly shared me with his number⑥. Taking⑦ his phone number, I offered a sincere thank you⑧ and then rushed to board my bus. When I eventually settled on the bus⑨, my promise and gratitude for Gunter's kindness were staying with me.⑩
Four days later, back in Vienna, I kept my promise and called Gunter. Upon connection, I couldn`t wait to express my heartfelt gratitude,offering to pay him the round-trip fare from airport to station, together with a generous tip. However, so kind was Gunter that he refused the extra money, saying smilingly , "I believe in you. It's not about the money; it's about trust." Gratitude is too mild(温和的) a word to describe my feeling . This simple act of trust is like a mirror reflecting the goodness in humanity.
①.__独立主格结构___ ⑨._____________________
②.__高分短语表情绪__ ⑩._______________________
③．________________ .________________________________
④ _________________ _________________________________
⑤.__________________ _________________________________
⑥.__________________ ________________________________
⑦.__________________ .________________________________
⑧.___________________ _________________________________
Step 3:句式分析并讲解
01独立主格: 主语+谓语，逻辑主语+非谓语
我接过他的车费，眼里满是感激的泪水。（2024 I卷范文）
_I took his fare, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes.
仿写练习1- 主语1+谓语，主语2+非谓语
很快Eva开始呼吸困难，心脏怦怦地跳（race）。（2024 浙江卷原文）
Soon Eva began to breathe hard, _____________________________.
2. 我转过身来，看见他正朝我走来，他的小身体左右摇摆（rock）着.(2022 I卷原文)
I turned to find him coming towards me, ________________ from side to side.
02主语+谓语..., doing/done...
握着我的手，他兴奋地说：“恭喜你！你是个好作家。”（2023年 I卷范文）
Holding my hands, he exclaimed， “Congratulations! You are a good writer.”
仿写练习2-主语+谓语..., done by/doing...
1.我再次向他露出(flash)一个歉意的微笑，恳求他延迟付款。(2024 I卷范文)
I_______________him a delayed payment,_____________another apologetic smile.
2.受到他的话的鼓舞，我同意尝试一下。(2023 I卷范文)
___________by his words, I agreed to__________at it.
03主+谓1..., 谓2..., and 谓3....
描述一系列的动作。如果是同一个主语做了两个动作以上，可以用这样的结构：主+谓...and(then) 谓...， 这可以进行大量的动作细节描写，完整的交代过程。
他点头表示同意，掏出手机,迅速告诉我他的号码。(2024 I卷范文)
He nodded in approval,fished out his phone and quickly shared his number
with me.
仿写练习3- 主+谓1..., 谓2..., and 谓3....
1.Gunter把出租车停在公交车后面，转过身来，脸上带着灿烂的笑容看着我。
（2024 I卷原文）（动作链）
Gunter ______ the taxi behind the bus, ____________, and __________ me with a beaming smile on his face.
2. 当我把文章交给老师时，他读了读，大声笑了出来，然后说：“很好。现在，再写一遍。”（2023年 I卷原文）（动作链）。
When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he_____it, _______ out loud, and____, “Great. Now, write it again.
04 动词+副词(ly)
为了使动作精准，给读者在不在场时都有强烈的生动的画面感，经常放入句中用副词去修饰动词。
① 我一下飞机，就疯狂地穿过机场大楼。
The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building.（2024年原文）
②.“我就知道你会赢！你成功了！”他兴奋地说。（2023年 I卷范文）
“I knew you’d win! You made it!” he said excitedly.
副词也可单独拎出来放在句首，修饰整个句子，在句中作状语。例如：
幸运的是，还有一条长长的队伍在等着上公交车。
Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus.（2024 I卷原文）
仿写练习4- 副词(ly)修饰动词
1.他难以置信地看着我，问我该怎么办。（2024 I卷范文）
He looked at me__________, asking me what to do.
2.我轻轻地招手，作别西天的云彩(the rosy clouds)。(徐志摩 再别康桥)
________, I wave good-bye to the rosy clouds in the western sky.
05．时间状语，主+谓...
时间状语一般放在句末或句首，以使行文连贯，逻辑合理
Shortly after(不久后), after that, after seemingly a long time(似乎过了很久), after what seemed like a century(似乎过了一个世纪)，before long(不久后)；as it happens(碰巧), at the same time(与此同时), before I knew it（不知不觉）...等。
似乎过了很长一段时间，当我几乎忘记了比赛时，消息传来了。（2023年 I卷范文）
After seemingly a long time, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news.
仿写练习5-时间状语，主+谓...
1.经过一场似乎持续了一个世纪的激烈讨论后，冈特放下手机，启动了汽车。
（2024 I卷范文）
After a heated discussion that lasted for _______________________, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
2.不久之后，变魔术似的，他们面前出现了一个大大的惊喜。(2021 I卷范文)
_____________, as if by magic, a big surprise appeared before them.
06主谓倒装
在英语写作中，倒装是个超级高级的句型，若能在你的作文写对一句，将会提升你的整个档次。
1.在入口处，有一台自动取款机。
There, at the entrance, was a cash machine.（2024 I卷原文）
他手里拿着一朵花，花瓣 全都磨损(凋谢)了。
2.然后，重要的日子到了。
Then came the big day. （2023年 I卷范文）
仿写练习6- 主谓倒装
(1) 似乎过了很长一段时间，当我几乎忘记比赛时，消息传来（here comes...）。（2023年 I卷范文）
After seemingly a long time, when I almost forgot the contest, ________________.
(2) 她非常激动，紧紧地搂住双胞胎，开心的泪水模糊了她的双眼(so...that...)。（2021年 I卷范文）
_______________________ that she threw her arms around the twins tightly, tears
of joy blurring her eyes.
07无灵主语的运用
无灵主语主要在3种读后续写场合使用；无灵主语使句子显得活泼而又充满人情味
.A burst/surge/wave/feeling of +情感名词+swept over/washed over/seized/spread through sb. 一股......之情涌遍某人全身。
A wave of panic spread through the crowd. 一阵恐慌传遍人群。
仿写练习7-无灵主语的运用
(1).当我看到排队等车的人越来越少时,一种无助感(helplessness)向我袭来。(2024 I卷原文)
→__________________________washed over me when I saw the bus queue thinning out.
(2).当我听到他的话，感激之情涌遍我全身。（2024 I卷范文）
→A feeling/wave of gratitude__________________________ as I heard his words.
2).Laughter/Applause/One`s words,etc. echoed/lingered+介词短语.
笑声/掌声/某人的话在某处回荡/久久不散。
We burst out laughing,and the laughter lingered in our home.
我们突然大笑起来，笑声久久在家中回荡。
仿写练习7-无灵主语的运用
(1). 掌声在演出结束后仍然在空中回荡许久。
_________________________in the air long after the performance ended.
(2).母亲感激的话语在我的耳中回荡了几天。
My mother's grateful words____________________ for days.
08 虚拟语气
在英语写作中，虚拟语气是个很有难度的句型，一般学生驾驭不了。但若你能正确的运用，将令改卷老师高看你几眼！
.If I were..., I would.... 如果我是......，我将......。
如果我能重来一次，我会选择珍惜每一个瞬间。
If I were given a second chance, I would cherish every moment.
2).Without.../But for..., sb would not have done sth.
如果没有/要不是因为......,某人原本不会做某事。
But for mom`s encouragement,I would not have become a successful narrator.(2021广州七校联考)
仿写练习8-虚拟语气
1).如果我能控制自己的命运，我会选择勇敢地面对挑战。
If I ______ in control of my own fate, I ______________ to face challenges bravely.
2).如果没有您的认可和指导，我原本无法写成这篇文章的。(2023 I卷范文)
___________your recognition and guidance, I ___________________ this article.
Step4:课后巩固练习：根据文本录音及中文词汇，写出相应的英语。
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. My heart heavy with regret, I ____________________(1.为...难过) the situation. ______________(2.默默坐在) in the car, he heard me out. ____________(3.决心) to make things right, I asked for his phone number and promised that I would pay the fare ____________ (4.下次)I was back to Vienna. He ___________________(5.点头赞同), fished out his phone and quickly __________________(6.告诉我) his number. Taking his phone number, I _______________________(7.真诚地表示感谢)and then _______(8.飞奔) to board my bus. When I eventually________(9.安顿) on the bus, my promise and gratitude for Gunter's kindness were staying with me.
Four days later, back in Vienna, I kept my promise and called Gunter. Upon connection, I ___________________(10.情不自禁地表达) my heartfelt gratitude,
offering to pay him _______________(11.往返车费) from airport to station, together with a generous tip. However, _________________(12.Gunter如此善良；倒装句) that he refused the extra money, saying_________(13.微笑地), "I believe in you. It's not about the money; it's about trust." Gratitude is _________(14.太温和的) a word ______________(15.难以表达)my feeling. This simple act of trust ____________________(16.就像一面镜子) reflecting the goodness in humanity.
1(共35张PPT)
目标:objectives
读后续写-高级句型
Welcome to my class !
了解读后续写中常用的句式
熟悉有关句式的用法和精妙处
学会仿用有关句式
01
02
03
I realized it was me who was at fault. Regret gnawing at my conscience like a persistent ache, I was eaten up with guilt, replaying that rainy evening in my mind, recalling Toby’s wet paws, and sighing softly. Blinded by my own worries about the kids, the minute I thought of his loneliness after his wife’s passing, I grabbed my phone from the coffee table, scrolled to find his number, and left a sincere message. I plucked up the courage to apologize sincerely, made up my mind to mend things no matter what, and a faint but warm hope began to stir in my chest together soon.
1.独立主格结构
2.高分动词短语表情绪
3.doing非谓语
做伴随状语
4.done非谓语动词做状语
5.名词短语引导
时间做状语
6.动作链
7.高分动词短语
8.高分短语表动作
9.拟人修辞（无灵主语）
With the biscuits my wife had made, I arrived at my brother’s door. My heart fluttered with anticipation and a touch of nervousness, clutching the paper bag tightly in one hand and smoothing my shirt with the other. Out stepped my brother, followed by Toby, whose tail started wagging wildly at the sight of me. Instantly, a wave of warmth spread through me from head to toe. Never had I felt such a rush of relief as in that moment, and our hug was as comforting as a cozy blanket on a cold winter night, melting away all the awkwardness and distance between us.
10.动词短语表情绪
11.非谓语动词做伴随状语
12.倒装句
14.高分句型表情感
13.情绪副词
15.比喻修辞
1.独立主格结构
2.动词短语表情绪
4.done非谓语做状语
3.doing非谓语做状语
5.名词短语引导时间状语从句
6.动作链
7.doing非谓语动词做状语
8.动词短语表动作
14.情绪副词
10.拟人修辞（无灵主语）
13.倒装句
15.高分句型表情感
16.比喻修辞
（be like...）
9.动词短语
表动作
11.动词短语表情绪
12.doing非谓语动词做状语
这篇范文主要用了八种语言现象
How can we make a good continuation essay
8 Common Sentence Structures
In The Continuation Writing
01
独立主格
主语+谓语，逻辑主语+非谓语
动作1
动作2
主语=逻辑主语
我接过他的车费，眼里满是感激的泪水。（2024 I卷范文）
I took his fare, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes.
主语
谓
语
逻辑主语
非谓语动词
仿写练习1- 主语+谓语，逻辑主语+非谓语
Soon Eva began to breathe hard, ______________.
2.我转过身来，看见他正朝我走来，他的小身体左右摇摆(rock)着.(2022 I卷原文)
I turned to find him coming towards me, ________________ from side to side.
1.很快Eva开始呼吸困难，心脏怦怦地跳（race）。（2024 浙江卷原文）
her heart racing
his small body rocking
02
主语+谓语..., doing/done...
伴随或结果等，其逻辑主语和句子主语相同
主要动作
Holding my hands, he exclaimed， “Congratulations! You are a good writer.”
主语
动作1
动作2
握着我的手，他兴奋地说：“恭喜你！你是个好作家。”
（2023年 I卷范文）
仿写练习2-主语+谓语..., done by/doing...
1.我再次向他露出(flash)一个歉意的微笑，恳求他延迟付款。(2024 I卷范文)
I____________for a delayed payment,_________him another apologetic smile.
2.受到他的话的鼓舞，我同意尝试一下。(2023 I卷范文)
____________by his words, I agreed to__________at it.
begged him flashing
Encouraged have a try
03
主+谓1..., 谓2..., and 谓3....
进行大量的动作细节描写，完整的交代过程
他点头表示同意，掏出手机,迅速告诉我他的号码。(2024 I卷范文)
He nodded in approval,fished out his phone and quickly shared his number
with me.
主语
动作1
动作2
动作3
仿写练习3- 主+谓1..., 谓2..., and 谓3....
1.Gunter把出租车停在公交车后面，转过身来，脸上带着灿烂的笑容看着我。
（2024 I卷原文）（动作链）
Gunter ______ the taxi behind the bus, ____________, and __________ me with a beaming smile on his face.
2. 当我把文章交给老师时，他读了读，大声笑了出来，然后说：“很好。现在，再写一遍。”（2023年 I卷原文）（动作链）。
When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he_____it, _______ out loud, and____, “Great. Now, write it again.
parked
turned around
looked at
read
laughed
said
04
动词+介词(短语)/副词
给读者强烈而生动的画面感
① 我一下飞机，就疯狂地穿过机场大楼。
The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport
building.（2024年原文）
②.“我就知道你会赢！你成功了！”他兴奋地说。
（2023年 I卷范文）
“I knew you’d win! You made it!” he said excitedly.
副词也可单独拎出来放在句首，修饰整个句子，在句中作状语。例如：
③ 幸运的是，还有一条长长的队伍在等着上公交车。
Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the
bus.（2024 I卷原文）
仿写练习4- 介词(短语)/副词修饰动词
1.他难以置信地看着我，问我该怎么办。（2024 I卷范文）
He looked at me__________, asking me what to do.
2.我轻轻地招手，作别西天的云彩(the rosy clouds)。(徐志摩 再别康桥)
________, I wave good-bye to the rosy clouds in the western sky.
in disbelief
Quietly
05
时间状语，主+谓...
时间状语一般放在句末或句首，能使行文连贯，逻辑合理
after seemingly a long time(似乎过了很久), after what seemed like a century(似乎过了一个世纪)，shortly after(不久后), before long(不久后)...等。
似乎过了很长一段时间，当我几乎忘记了比赛时，消息传来了。（2023年 I卷范文）
After seemingly a long time, when I almost forgot the contest, there
came the news.
仿写练习5-时间状语，主+谓...
1.经过一场似乎持续了一个世纪的激烈讨论后，冈特放下手机，启动了汽车。
（2024 I卷范文）
After a heated discussion that lasted for _______________________, Gunter put his phone down and started the car.
2.不久之后，变魔术似的，他们面前出现了一个大大的惊喜。(2021 I卷范文)
_____________, as if by magic, a big surprise appeared before them.
what seemed like a century
Before long
06
主谓倒装
在英语写作中，倒装是个超级高级的句型，若能在你的作文写对一句，将会提升你的整个档次。
There, at the entrance, was a cash machine.（2024 I卷原文）
1.在入口处，有一台自动取款机。
2.然后，重要的日子到了。
Then came the big day. （2023年 I卷范文）
仿写练习6- 主谓倒装
(1) 似乎过了很长一段时间，当我几乎忘记比赛时，消息传来（here comes...）。（2023年 I卷范文）
After seemingly a long time, when I almost forgot the contest, ________________.
(2) 她非常激动，紧紧地搂住双胞胎，开心的泪水模糊了她的双眼(so...that...)。（2021年 I卷范文）
_______________________ that she threw her arms around the twins tightly,
tears of joy blurring her eyes.
here came the news
So touched was she
07
无灵主语的运用
无灵主语主要在2种读后续写场合使用；无灵主语使句子显得活泼而又充满人情味
A wave of panic spread through the crowd.
无灵主语
谓语
1).A burst/surge/wave/feeling of +情感名词+swept over/washed over/
seized/spread through sb. 一股......之情涌遍某人全身。
一阵恐慌传遍人群。
仿写练习7-无灵主语的运用
(1).当我看到排队等车的人越来越少时,一种无助感(helplessness)向我袭来。(2024 I卷原文)
→_______________________ washed over me when I saw the bus queue thinning out.
(2).当我听到他的话，感激之情涌遍我全身。（2024 I卷范文）
→A feeling/wave of gratitude _______________________as I heard his words.
A feeling of helplessness
swept/washed over me
We burst out laughing,and the laughter lingered in our home.
无灵主语
谓语
我们突然大笑起来，笑声久久在家中回荡。
2).Laughter/Applause/One`s words echoed/lingered+地点介词.
=地点+ resounded with one`s laughter/applause/words.
=One`s laughter/applause/words resounded through+地点介词
笑声/掌声/某人的话在某处回荡/久久不散。
The whole building resounded with their happy laughter.
=Their happy laughter resounded through the whole building.
(1). 掌声在演出结束后仍然在空中回荡许久。
________________in the air long after the performance ended.
(2).母亲感激的话语在我的耳中回荡了几天。
My mother's grateful words________________ for days.
Applause lingered
echoed in my ears
仿写练习7-无灵主语的运用
08
虚拟语气
在英语写作中，虚拟语气是个很有难度的句型，一般学生驾驭不了。但若你能正确的运用，将令改卷老师高看你几眼！
如果我能重来一次，我会选择珍惜每一个瞬间。
1).If I were...,I would.... 如果我是......，我将......。
If I were given a second chance, I would cherish every moment.
2).Without.../But for..., sb would not have done sth.
如果没有/要不是因为......,某人原本不会做某事。
But for mom`s encouragement,I would not have become a successful narrator.(2021广州七校联考)
仿写练习8-虚拟语气
1).如果我能控制自己的命运，我会选择勇敢地面对挑战。
If I ______ in control of my own fate, I ______________ to face challenges bravely.
2).如果没有您的认可和指导，我原本无法写成这篇文章的。(2023 I卷范文)
___________your recognition and guidance, I ___________________ this article.
would choose
Without
couldn’t have written
were
The school bell ______ sharply, another vibrant day at Beipei begins!
Throughout the day, I move quickly between classes, diligently ___________ and _______ participating in discussions just ________ my understanding. ______ ________________, a sense of urgency fills the air, yet I remain driven by
_____________of purpose. I know that without consistent effort, success would be impossible. Evenings are dedicated to reviewing my notes, completing my homework, and preparing for the next day`s lessons. Fortunately, I have patient and supportive teachers and classmates,which makes my busy time at school is much easier. After what seems like a century, the final bell rings, signaling the end of another day. I gather my books,leave the classroom and trudge back to the dormitory, exhausted but satisfied.
It's a challenging yet rewarding day.
巩固练习：根据文本录音及中文词汇，写出相应的英语。
ringing
taking notes
actively
to deepen
With
exams approaching
a strong sense
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. My heart heavy with regret, I _________________(1.为...难过) the situation. ___________(2.默默坐在) in the car, he heard me out. __________(3.决心) to make things right, I asked for his phone number and promised that I would pay the fare ________ (4.下次)I was back to Vienna. He ________________(5.点头赞同),fished out his phone and quickly _____________(6.告诉我) his number. Taking his phone number, I _______________________(7.真诚地表示感谢)and then _______(8.飞奔) to board my bus. When I eventually_______(9.安顿) on the bus, my promise and gratitude for Gunter's kindness were staying with me.
巩固练习：根据文本录音及中文词汇，写出相应的英语。
felt very sorry for
Sitting silently
Determined
next time
nodded in approval
shared me with
offered a sincere thank you
rushed
settled
Four days later, back in Vienna, I kept my promise and called Gunter. Upon connection, I ___________________(10.情不自禁地表达) my heartfelt gratitude,
offering to pay him _______________(11.往返车费) from airport to station, together with a generous tip. However, _________________(12.Gunter如此善良；倒装句) that he refused the extra money, saying_________(13.微笑地), "I believe in you. It's not about the money; it's about trust." Gratitude is _________(14.太温和的) a word ______________(15.难以表达)my feeling. This simple act of trust ______________
(16.就像一面镜子) reflecting the goodness in humanity.
couldn`t wait to express
the round-trip fare
so kind was Gunter
smilingly
too mild
to describe
is like a mirror
Thanks for your attendance
and
your patience for listening!广州市北培高级中学 求真 向善 尚美
北培高中 高三 英语 学科导学案
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课题名称： 研读高考真题及其范文，学续写高级句型 总第 1 课时
授课日期： 2024 年 9 月 29 日
编 写 人： 李南城 审 核 人： 高三英语组
教师寄语：Believe in yourself, and all things are possible.
学习目标：了解8种常见的续写句式结构； 重 点：清楚它们的写法和精妙处； 难 点：能够仿写句式，为我所用。
教学设计： 课前导入：听读范文，写出序号对应的语言现象（见例1和例2） I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. My heart heavy with regret①, I felt very sorry for② the situation. Sitting③ silently in the car, he heard me out. Determined④ to make things right, I asked for his phone number and promised that I would pay the fare next time I was back to Vienna⑤. He nodded in approval,fished out his phone and quickly shared me with his number⑥. Taking⑦ his phone number, I offered a sincere thank you⑧ and then rushed to board my bus. When I eventually settled on the bus⑨, my promise and gratitude for Gunter's kindness were staying with me.⑩ Four days later, back in Vienna, I kept my promise and called Gunter. Upon connection, I couldn`t wait to express my heartfelt gratitude,offering to pay him the round-trip fare from airport to station, together with a generous tip. However, so kind was Gunter that he refused the extra money, saying smilingly , "I believe in you. It's not about the money; it's about trust." Gratitude is too mild(温和的) a word to describe my feeling . This simple act of trust is like a mirror reflecting the goodness in humanity. ①.__独立主格结构___ ⑨._____________________ ②.__高分短语表情绪__ ⑩._______________________ ③．________________ .________________________________ ④ _________________ _________________________________ ⑤.__________________ _________________________________ ⑥.__________________ ________________________________ ⑦.__________________ .________________________________ ⑧.___________________ _________________________________
课中精讲：续写常见8种句式分析 01独立主格: 主语+谓语，逻辑主语+非谓语 例句：我接过他的车费，眼里满是感激的泪水。（2024 I卷范文） _I took his fare, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes. 02主语+谓语..., doing/done... 例句：握着我的手，他兴奋地说：“恭喜你！你是个好作家。”（2023年 I卷范文） Holding my hands, he exclaimed， “Congratulations! You are a good writer.” 03主+谓1..., 谓2..., and 谓3.... 例句：他点头表示同意，掏出手机,迅速告诉我他的号码。(2024 I卷范文) He nodded in approval,fished out his phone and quickly shared his number with me. 04 动词+副词(ly) 例句：① 我一下飞机，就疯狂地穿过机场大楼。 The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building.（2024年原文） 例句：②.“我就知道你会赢！你成功了！”他兴奋地说。（2023年 I卷范文） “I knew you’d win! You made it!” he said excitedly. 副词也可单独拎出来放在句首，修饰整个句子，在句中作状语。例如： 例句：幸运的是，还有一条长长的队伍在等着上公交车。 Thankfully, there was a long queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus.（2024 I卷原文） 05．时间状语，主+谓... after seemingly a long time(似乎过了很久), after what seemed like a century(似乎过了一个世纪)，shortly after(不久后), before long(不久后)...等。 例句：似乎过了很长一段时间，当我几乎忘记了比赛时，消息传来了。（2023年 I卷范文） After seemingly a long time, when I almost forgot the contest, there came the news. 06主谓倒装 例句：1.在入口处，有一台自动取款机。 There, at the entrance, was a cash machine.（2024 I卷原文） 他手里拿着一朵花，花瓣 全都磨损(凋谢)了。 例句：2.然后，重要的日子到了。 Then came the big day. （2023年 I卷范文） 07无灵主语的运用 .A burst/surge/wave/feeling of +情感名词+swept over/washed over/seized/spread through sb. 一股......之情涌遍某人全身。 例句：A wave of panic spread through the crowd. 一阵恐慌传遍人群。 2).Laughter/Applause/One`s words,etc. echoed/lingered+介词短语. 笑声/掌声/某人的话在某处回荡/久久不散。 例句：We burst out laughing,and the laughter lingered in our home. 我们突然大笑起来，笑声久久在家中回荡。 08 虚拟语气 .If I were..., I would.... 如果我是......，我将......。 例句：如果我能重来一次，我会选择珍惜每一个瞬间。 If I were given a second chance, I would cherish every moment. 2).Without.../But for..., sb would not have done sth. 如果没有/要不是因为......,某人原本不会做某事。 例句：But for mom`s encouragement,I would not have become a successful narrator.(2021广州七校联考) 课堂练习:根据上述所讲的八种常见读写句式进行仿写 仿写练习1- 主语1+谓语，主语2+非谓语 很快Eva开始呼吸困难，心脏怦怦地跳（race）。（2024 浙江卷原文） Soon Eva began to breathe hard, _____________________________. 2. 我转过身来，看见他正朝我走来，他的小身体左右摇摆（rock）着.(2022 I卷原文) I turned to find him coming towards me, ________________ from side to side. 仿写练习2-主语+谓语..., done by/doing... 1.我再次向他露出(flash)一个歉意的微笑，恳求他延迟付款。(2024 I卷范文) I_______________him a delayed payment,_____________another apologetic smile. 2.受到他的话的鼓舞，我同意尝试一下。(2023 I卷范文) ___________by his words, I agreed to__________at it. 仿写练习3- 主+谓1..., 谓2..., and 谓3.... 1.Gunter把出租车停在公交车后面，转过身来，脸上带着灿烂的笑容看着我。 （2024 I卷原文）（动作链） Gunter ______ the taxi behind the bus, ____________, and __________ me with a beaming smile on his face. 2. 当我把文章交给老师时，他读了读，大声笑了出来，然后说：“很好。现在，再写一遍。”（2023年 I卷原文）（动作链）。 When I handed in the essay to my teacher, he_____it, _______ out loud, and____, “Great. Now, write it again. 仿写练习4- 副词(ly)修饰动词 1.他难以置信地看着我，问我该怎么办。（2024 I卷范文） He looked at me__________, asking me what to do. 2.我轻轻地招手，作别西天的云彩(the rosy clouds)。(徐志摩 再别康桥) ________, I wave good-bye to the rosy clouds in the western sky. 仿写练习5-时间状语，主+谓... 1.经过一场似乎持续了一个世纪的激烈讨论后，冈特放下手机，启动了汽车。 （2024 I卷范文） After a heated discussion that lasted for _______________________, Gunter put his phone down and started the car. 2.不久之后，变魔术似的，他们面前出现了一个大大的惊喜。(2021 I卷范文) _____________, as if by magic, a big surprise appeared before them. 仿写练习6- 主谓倒装 (1) 似乎过了很长一段时间，当我几乎忘记比赛时，消息传来（here comes...）。（2023年 I卷范文） After seemingly a long time, when I almost forgot the contest, ________________. (2) 她非常激动，紧紧地搂住双胞胎，开心的泪水模糊了她的双眼(so...that...)。（2021年 I卷范文） _______________________ that she threw her arms around the twins tightly, tears of joy blurring her eyes. 仿写练习7a-无灵主语的运用 (1).当我看到排队等车的人越来越少时,一种无助感(helplessness)向我袭来。(2024 I卷原文) →__________________________washed over me when I saw the bus queue thinning out. (2).当我听到他的话，感激之情涌遍我全身。（2024 I卷范文） →A feeling/wave of gratitude__________________________ as I heard his words. 仿写练习7b-无灵主语的运用 (1). 掌声在演出结束后仍然在空中回荡许久。 _________________________in the air long after the performance ended. (2).母亲感激的话语在我的耳中回荡了几天。 My mother's grateful words____________________ for days. 仿写练习8-虚拟语气 1).如果我能控制自己的命运，我会选择勇敢地面对挑战。 If I ______ in control of my own fate, I ______________ to face challenges bravely. 2).如果没有您的认可和指导，我原本无法写成这篇文章的。(2023 I卷范文) ___________your recognition and guidance, I ___________________ this article.
课堂小结：请自行脑补出本堂课讲过的8种常见续写句式。 _________________________________________; _________________________________________; _________________________________________; _________________________________________; _________________________________________; _______________________________________; _______________________________________; _______________________________________.
课后巩固练习：根据文本录音及中文词汇，写出相应的英语。 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. My heart heavy with regret, I ____________________(1.为...难过) the situation. ______________(2.默默坐在) in the car, he heard me out. ____________(3.决心) to make things right, I asked for his phone number and promised that I would pay the fare ____________ (4.下次)I was back to Vienna. He ___________________(5.点头赞同), fished out his phone and quickly __________________(6.告诉我) his number. Taking his phone number, I _______________________(7.真诚地表示感谢)and then _______(8.飞奔) to board my bus. When I eventually________(9.安顿) on the bus, my promise and gratitude for Gunter's kindness were staying with me. Four days later, back in Vienna, I kept my promise and called Gunter. Upon connection, I ___________________(10.情不自禁地表达) my heartfelt gratitude, offering to pay him _______________(11.往返车费) from airport to station, together with a generous tip. However, _________________(12.Gunter如此善良；倒装句) that he refused the extra money, saying_________(13.微笑地), "I believe in you. It's not about the money; it's about trust." Gratitude is _________(14.太温和的) a word ______________(15.难以表达)my feeling. This simple act of trust ____________________(16.就像一面镜子) reflecting the goodness in humanity.

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