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高三英语读后续写专项复习 园丁的蜕变
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was early May, my first day as a volunteer groundskeeper for a senior housing complex. I had agreed on one condition: I wouldn’t have to deal with people.
I was trimming (修剪) weeds when a group of ladies gestured me to stop. “Stay away from our flower bed,” one woman said, wagging her finger at me. I nodded and went back to work. Did they think I was stupid “Watch out for my raspberry plants by the fence,” another said, “I put signs by them.” Seriously I gave them a thumbs-up and started the trimmer before anyone else could cut in. Next time, I’d work at lunch, when these busybodies would be inside eating.
At dinner, I complained to my wife: “I wish the residents would leave me alone.” “Paul, you sound more like a grouchkeeper (抱怨者) than a groundskeeper,” Debby said, laughing. “It’s their home. Of course, they have strong feelings about it.” “They can keep their feelings to themselves,” I said.
The next day, I found the flower ladies waiting. “We told you to be careful around our flower bed,” the finger wagger said, pointing at a patch of green I’d cut. “And the fence,” another added. “Oops, I thought those were weeds,” I said. They spun on their heels and walked off, muttering.
I checked the fence and saw the remains of raspberry seedlings. Not bushes. How was I supposed to see them Where were the signs they’d posted A few feet away, I spied two twisted straws with paper taped to them. “Raspberry Plant” was written neatly on the paper. My heart sank. I’d made a mess of things already. But I didn’t apologize. That would have meant more interaction. Instead, I just avoided them.
I tried to shrug off the guilt, yet each time I passed the flower bed or the fence, a small weight settled in my chest. Summer came. I was glad when it got hot. People stayed inside, and I could work uninterrupted — until a storm brought down trees and power lines.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I had a lot of cleanup to do.
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Something seemed to be changing in me, too.
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一、文本分析
1．角色
________________________________________________________
2．视角
第________人称
3．时空线
Paul worked as a volunteer groundskeeper and hated interacting with people--- _________________ --- Paul accidentally cut the residents’ flower bed and raspberry seedlings--- _________________ --- Paul felt guilty but refused to apologize and avoided the ladies--- _________________ --- A severe storm destroyed trees and power lines, causing a mess
4. 细节问答
What was Paul’s only condition for being a volunteer ：
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Why did the senior ladies stop Paul on his first working day ：
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What mistake did Paul make the next day ：
________________________________________________
How did Paul feel after seeing the broken seedlings and signs ：
__________________________________________
What did Paul choose to do instead of apologizing ：
_____________________________________________
Why was Paul glad when summer became hot ：
_________________________________________________
What disaster ended Paul’s quiet working time ：
________________________________________________________
What does the story tell us ：________________________________________________
5．情节线
主人公Paul担任养老院志愿园丁，唯一诉求就是不与人打交道→_________________ →工作时被老年女士们提醒注意花草、覆盆子幼苗，内心心生不满→_________________ →Paul误剪花草幼苗，发现自己错怪他人却因抗拒社交拒绝道歉，刻意回避对方→夏日炎热得以安静工作→暴风雨来袭，树木倒塌、线路损毁，庭院一片狼藉→（续写）Paul独自艰难清理残局→（续写）邻里暖心相助，Paul破除心结、完成自我蜕变
6．情感线
Paul：cold and resistant to communication→___________→guilty and awkward
→___________→warm and open-minded（续写）
Resident ladies：reminding and serious→___________→kind and helpful（续写）
7. 综合概括（中英各一句）
中文：
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英文：
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 句式积累
（摘抄文中宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语、并列句）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9. 本文主题
成长蜕变类：_______________________________________
二、情节构造
Paragraph 1: I had a lot of cleanup to do.
衔接句1——What difficulties did Paul meet Who came to help him
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Something seemed to be changing in me, too.
衔接句2——What inner changes did Paul have What did he do to make up for his mistake What’s the theme ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、段落续写框架
第一段：我有大量的清理工作要做。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________；
第二段：我自身也在悄然发生改变。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
四、段落续写（150词左右）
I had a lot of cleanup to do.
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Something seemed to be changing in me, too.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1．角色
Paul（性格孤僻、抗拒社交、后期知错能改、完成自我蜕变的志愿园丁）；Senior resident ladies（细心呵护花草、善良包容、热心助人的养老院老人）；Debby（温柔通透、善于开导丈夫的妻子）
2．视角
第一人称
3．时空线
Paul worked as a volunteer groundskeeper and hated interacting with people--- He disliked others’ reminders and preferred working alone quietly --- Paul accidentally cut the residents’ flower bed and raspberry seedlings--- He realized his own fault but felt embarrassed to apologize --- Paul felt guilty but refused to apologize and avoided the ladies--- He escaped in hot weather to avoid communication --- A severe storm destroyed trees and power lines, causing a mess
4. 细节问答
What was Paul’s only condition for being a volunteer ：He agreed to work as a volunteer on condition that he wouldn’t have to deal with people.
Why did the senior ladies stop Paul on his first working day ：They stopped Paul to remind him not to destroy their flower bed and raspberry plants.
What mistake did Paul make the next day ：He carelessly cut down the residents’ green plants and raspberry seedlings despite clear reminders.
How did Paul feel after seeing the broken seedlings and signs ：He felt extremely guilty and regretful for his careless and rude behavior.
What did Paul choose to do instead of apologizing ：He chose to ignore his mistake and avoided meeting those elderly ladies.
Why was Paul glad when summer became hot ：High temperature made residents stay indoors, allowing him to work without interruption and communication.
What disaster ended Paul’s quiet working time ：A heavy storm blew down trees and power lines, leaving the whole community in a terrible mess.
What does the story tell us ：Active communication and sincere tolerance build warm interpersonal relationships, and we should bravely correct our mistakes and embrace others.
5．情节线
主人公Paul担任养老院志愿园丁，唯一诉求就是不与人打交道→工作孤僻冷漠，反感居民的善意提醒，心生抵触→工作时被老年女士们提醒注意花草、覆盆子幼苗，内心心生不满→带着情绪工作，粗心误剪居民精心养护的幼苗→Paul误剪花草幼苗，发现自己错怪他人却因抗拒社交拒绝道歉，刻意回避对方→夏日炎热得以安静工作→暴风雨来袭，树木倒塌、线路损毁，庭院一片狼藉→（续写）Paul独自艰难清理残局、力不从心→（续写）邻里暖心相助，Paul破除社交心结、主动致歉、完成自我蜕变
6．情感线
Paul：cold and resistant to communication→annoyed and defensive→guilty and awkward→touched and soft-hearted→warm and open-minded（续写）
Resident ladies：reminding and serious→disappointed and upset→kind and helpful（续写）
7. 综合概括（中英各一句）
中文：孤僻抗拒社交的志愿园丁Paul，因一时赌气误剪了养老院老人的花草幼苗，知错却刻意回避，一场突如其来的暴风雨打乱庭院秩序，在老人的善意帮助下，他放下隔阂、直面错误，完成了自我成长与蜕变。
英文：Working as a volunteer groundskeeper, Paul was cold and unwilling to communicate with others. He accidentally destroyed the elderly residents’ plants and avoided apologizing. After a terrible storm messed up the community, the kind ladies offered help selflessly, which changed Paul’s attitude and helped him grow.
8. 句式积累
状语从句：Before anyone else could cut in, I started the trimmer angrily.
非谓语动词：I tried to shrug off the guilt, yet a small weight settled in my chest.
宾语从句：I wished the residents would leave me alone to work quietly.
定语从句：It was their home that they had deep feelings for.
并列句：The storm brought down trees and power lines, turning the whole yard into a mess.
9. 本文主题
成长蜕变类：打破自我封闭、勇敢直面过错，真诚沟通与善意包容能化解隔阂、温暖人心，助力自我成长。
二、情节构造
Paragraph 1: I had a lot of cleanup to do.
衔接句1：Faced with broken branches and fallen power lines, I struggled with the tough cleanup work, and the elderly ladies came to offer selfless help actively.
Paragraph 2: Something seemed to be changing in me, too.
衔接句2：Moved by their kindness, I let go of my resistance to communication, apologized sincerely for my past rudeness, and finally understood the warmth of interpersonal interaction.
三、段落续写框架
第一段：我有大量的清理工作要做。
→①暴风雨过后庭院狼藉一片，断枝、电线散落各处，清理工作艰巨→②我独自费力劳作，疲惫不堪、分身乏术→③曾经被我冒犯的老人们主动前来帮忙，齐心协力清理残局；
第二段：我自身也在悄然发生改变。
→①老人的善意包容彻底打动了孤僻的我，消解了我的抵触心理→②我主动坦诚道歉，为之前的粗心、冷漠和固执致歉→③我彻底蜕变，不再抗拒社交，学会真诚沟通、温柔待人。
四、段落续写范文（150词左右）
I had a lot of cleanup to do. The storm left countless broken branches and fallen power lines all over the senior housing yard, making the cleanup extremely tough. I worked alone sweating profusely, feeling exhausted and helpless. Just as I was at a loss, the group of elderly ladies walked over with tools in hand. Without blaming my previous mistakes, they volunteered to help me clear the mess. Some picked up branches, while others tidied up the messy ground. Their quiet kindness warmed my heart instantly.
Something seemed to be changing in me, too. I no longer felt resistant to communicating with others. On the contrary, I was deeply ashamed of my past rudeness and stubbornness. I summoned up my courage and apologized sincerely for destroying their flower bed and raspberry seedlings. The ladies smiled and forgave me generously. From then on, I changed my attitude totally. I learned to listen and communicate actively, enjoying the warmth and harmony of getting along with others.
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