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热点主题书面表达 高频考点冲刺练 2026年初中英语中考复习备考
1.生命在于运动,运动不仅塑造强健体魄,亦能锤炼精神意志。假如你是李斌,作为本周英语班会的发言人,将发表题为“Enjoy Sports,Enjoy Life”的演讲。请你根据以下思维导图的提示内容,用英语写一篇发言稿。
参考词汇:begin to do, strong, healthy, lose weight, good for, take action, ...
要求:1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2.语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
Good afternoon, everyone. Different people love different sports, and today I would like to share my favorite sport with you. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.现在很多学校已经把学生的课间时间由原来的10分钟延长到15分钟。针对这种做法,不同的学生有不同的看法。假如你是李平,请你根据以下内容提示及写作要求写一篇英语短文,向大家介绍学生们的观点和你的看法。
内容提示:1.一些学生赞同并说明理由;
2.一些学生反对并说明理由;
3.你对此的看法。
写作要求:1.文中必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Now many schools have changed students’ break time from 10 minutes to 15 minutes.
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3.在2026年“世界读书日”到来之际,河南省对外交流平台正在发起好书推介活动,现面向全省中学生征稿。假设你是李华,请以“A Good Chinese Book I’ve Read”为题,根据写作提示,用英语写一篇短文,分享你读过的一本好书并陈述理由,代表学校参加征稿活动。
写作提示:1. What’s the name of the book And what’s it about
2. Why do you want to share the book
写作要求:1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称:
3.词数100左右 (文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
A Good Chinese Book I’ve Read
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to share a good Chinese book I’ve read.
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I hope you’ll like this book.
4.近期,网络热词”爱你自己”(Love You, My Dear Self)在青少年中流行起来。它倡导大家在忙碌的学习生活中,也要学会善待自己、关注内心需求。为此,你校英文校报《Teen Voice》特举办以”Love You, My Dear Self”为主题的征文活动,邀请同学们以书信的形式分享自己的故事与感悟。
写作要求:
1. 词数不得少于90词,开头已给出,不计入词数;
2. Writing Mind Map为思路引导,可适当发挥,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3. 不得泄露个人信息。
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua. I am writing to share my ideas on “Love You, My Dear Self”. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5.人工智能正在改变我们的生活,既带来了便利,也带来新的挑战。作为青少年,我们要积极提升自己的能力来应对AI带来的挑战。假设你是李华,你校英语公众号正在开展以“Let’s face the AI age actively”为主题的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.AI对你生活和学习的帮助
2.AI给你带来的挑战或问题
3.如何提升自己来积极地面对AI带来的挑战
注意:
1.词数80-100词,题目已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Let’s face the AI age actively
AI has become more and more important in our daily life.
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6.学校英语报这个月的征文主题是“Meaningful Free Time Activities”。读书、劳动都是我们日常中最有意义的课余活动。请从以下两个方向中任选其一:介绍你读过的最受益的一本书,或是分享你最有感悟的一次劳动体验,写一篇英语短文投稿。
选择1: Reading enriches my life.
Why do you love reading
What is the best book you have read recently What is it about
What do you learn from the book
选择2: Labor makes life meaningful.
Why do you think labor is meaningful
What was the most unforgettable labor experience you had recently What did you do during it
What does labor teach you
要求:
1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息;
2.文章必须包含所选方向的所有提示要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3. 词数:不少于70词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:after-school activities, knowledge, grow up, life skills, responsible, unforgettable
Meaningful free time activities make our after-school life more colorful and wonderful, and they always bring us new growth and warm feelings.
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7.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Alan听说中国学校非常重视体育运动,发邮件询问你校日常体育运动的开展情况。请你给他回一封邮件,回答他提出的问题。
From Alan To Li Hua Subject School sports
Dear Li Hua, Hope this email finds you well. I heard that sports are very important in Chinese schools, and I’m really curious about the sports activities in your school. Could you tell me how many PE classes you have each week Also, what sports clubs are there in your school Besides, I’m interested to know which sport you like best and what benefits you’ve got from it. I believe it will be great to learn from your experiences. Looking forward to your reply. Alan
注意:1.词数为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alan,
I’m so happy to tell you about the sports activities in our school!
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
8.假定你是李华,你的英国笔友 Mark 了解到,为保障学生身心健康,国家实施“双减”政策 (the “Double Reduction” Policy)。因此,学校将10分钟课间延长至15分钟,并增设30分钟大课间。Mark对此很感兴趣,请给他写封信介绍一下这种变化。
要点提示:
注意:1. 词数100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可以适当增添细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得提及考生所在学校及自己的姓名。
Dear Mark,
I’m glad to hear from you and I’d love to tell you about my life during breaks.
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.近年来,国家高度重视学生体质健康,规定中小学生每天校内综合体育锻炼时间不少于2小时,课间由原来的十分钟调整到十五分钟。某英语报开展以“Let’s take exercise to keep healthy”为主题的征文活动,请根据以下要点提示,写一篇英语征文,谈谈你的看法。
提示:
1.简述当前部分中学生不爱运动、体质下降的现状及原因;
2.分享你提升自身体质的具体做法(不少于3条)
3.呼吁同学们重视体质健康,积极行动。
要求:
1.包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名;
3.词数80-100,作文标题及开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Let’s take exercise to keep healthy
Nowadays, many middle school students don’t get enough exercise
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10.宁夏一直响应习近平主席提出“青山绿水就是金山银山”这一号召,致力于生态环境保护建设。保护环境,从我做起。请根据下面的思维导图,结合自己的生活实际,写出保护环境的具体做法及这样做的目的。词数:80~100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词: tap 水龙头; throwaway 一次性的
to save water and electricity 节约水电
Build a Beautiful Ningxia
Nowadays, our environment is getting worse and worse. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11.为了践行“健康第一”教育理念,你校将于5月22日举办“校园健身文化节”,该活动包括趣味运动、太极体验和健身知识讲座等。假如你是李华,请给你校英国交换生Peter写一封邀请信,内容包括:
(1)活动时间和主题;
(2)介绍1-2个活动;
(3)提出邀请并表达希望。
要求:
(1)词数90左右,信件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)信件中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
(3)参考词汇:School Fitness Festival校园健身文化节;Tai Chi太极
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
12.如今,低碳生活已成为一种时尚。作为中学生,我们应该从身边小事做起,践行低碳生活,保护环境。请你以My Low-carbon Life为题,写一篇英语短文。
要点提示:出行方式:步行、骑自行车代替私家车;节约资源:节约用水、用电,双面用纸;保护环境:不乱扔垃圾,植树造林;你的感悟和号召。
要求:词数80—100词;条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
不得出现真实姓名、班级和学校。
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参考答案
1.参考范文:
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
Good afternoon, everyone. Different people love different sports, and today I would like to share my favorite sport with you.
My favorite sport is swimming because it makes me strong and healthy. It is also a good way to lose weight. I began to learn to swim when I was six years old. Then I became healthier and healthier. Now I can swim well. I usually spend an hour swimming in the swimming pool every Sunday. If you swim in the water, you will look like a lovely fish.
Doing sports is good for us. So let’s take action from now on!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:演讲稿。用于英语班会发言,语言需口语化、有感染力,一般现在时为主,讲述故事时可用一般过去时
明确要点:内容需涵盖三个部分:介绍最喜欢的运动、讲述与该运动的故事、号召大家多运动
确定人称: 第一人称(I)
注意事项: 词数不少于70词,开头已给出但不计入总词数;文中不得出现真实个人信息;需使用参考词汇
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:直接点题,引出自己最喜欢的运动
主体段: 详细讲述自己与该运动的故事
结尾段: 总结运动的好处,并发出号召
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:介绍最喜欢的运动
内容:swimming/play basketball/play tennis等
理由:strong and healthy/a good way to lose weight等
要点二:讲述与运动的故事
时间线:began to learn to swim when I was six years old/play basketball every Friday等
变化与现状:became healthier and healthier/spend an hour swimming every Sunday等
要点三:号召大家运动
总结: Doing sports is good for us/take action from now on等
2.例文
Now many schools have changed students’ break time from 10 minutes to 15 minutes. For this rule, different students have different views.
Some students are for the rule. They think that they can have a good rest or do some exercise after a busy class. What’s more, it can make them prepare for the next class well. However, there are some students who are against it. They think that it will waste their studying time. During a longer break time, students might make trouble.
In my opinion, I agree with it. I think that it is necessary for students to have a longer break time. It will be good for our physical and mental health.
【详解】写作步骤
第一步:[审题立意]
确定文体:议论文,一般现在时
明确要点:部分学生赞同及理由;部分学生反对及理由;个人观点
确定人称:第一人称(I)
注意事项:词数100词左右;开头已给出不计入词数;不出现真实姓名、校名;覆盖全部提示要点
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接给定开头,引出学生对此事看法不同
主体段:分两方面,依次阐述赞同、反对的学生及对应理由
结尾段:表达自己的观点并简单说明理由
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:赞同
赞同理由:have a good rest/do some exercise/make them prepare for the next class well/there is enough time to use the restroom等
要点二:反对
反对理由:it will waste their studying time/students might make trouble/students might fight with others等
要点三:个人观点
个人想法:it is necessary for students to have a longer break time/It will be good for our physical and mental health/students can rest well等
3.
例文
A Good Chinese Book I’ve Read
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to share a good Chinese book I’ve read.
The book is called Journey to the West. It is one of the four great classical novels of China. It tells a story about a monk and his three disciples traveling to the west for Buddhist scriptures. The monkey king, Sun Wukong, is brave and clever. He fights against many monsters to protect his master.
I want to share this book because it teaches me the importance of teamwork and never giving up. No matter how difficult the journey is, they keep going and finally succeed. This book brings me joy and courage.
I hope you’ll like this book.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文/书籍推荐,以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
明确要点:
书名是什么?它讲了什么内容 (What’s the name of the book And what’s it about )
为什么想分享这本书 (Why do you want to share the book )
确定人称:第一人称 (I)
注意事项:不得出现真实信息;标题和开头结尾已给出;词数100左右,不包含已给出部分
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,引出要分享的书
主体段:
第一层:介绍书名及内容概要
第二层:说明分享这本书的理由
结尾段:已给出,表达希望对方喜欢
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:书名及内容
常用词汇:book name/written by/tells a story/about/main character/plot/ending等
常用句型:The book is called.../It is written by.../It tells a story about.../The main character is...等
要点二:分享理由
常用词汇:meaningful/inspiring/touching/learn a lot/give strength/open my mind/recommend等
常用句型:I want to share this book because.../It teaches me that.../It helps me understand.../The story gives me courage.等
4.
范文:
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua. I am writing to share my ideas on “Love You, My Dear Self”.
In the past, I used to care too much about what others thought of me. I often said “yes” when I really wanted to say “no”. I felt tired and stressed. Then I decided to change. I started to meet my own needs first and learned to love myself.
Loving yourself is very important because it helps us keep healthy and stay happy. It also helps reduce stress and builds confidence.
In the future, I will make a better plan to love myself. I will eat well, sleep early, and learn to say “No”. I believe a happier me can also bring more joy to others.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:书信,以一般过去时和一般现在时为主
明确要点:过去的经历(曾经过度在意他人、不懂拒绝、感到疲惫)、爱自己的重要性(保持健康、快乐、减压)、未来计划(制定计划、学会拒绝、健康作息)
确定人称:第一人称(I)为主
注意事项:不得泄露个人信息,需以李华身份写信
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,引出话题
主体段一:分享过去的经历及改变的决定
主体段二:阐述爱自己的重要性
主体段三:介绍未来的计划
结尾段:总结升华
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:过去的经历
经历描述:used to care too much about what others thought/said “yes” when I wanted to say “no”/felt tired and stressed/ignored my own needs等
改变决定:decided to change/started to meet my own needs first/learned to love myself等
要点二:爱自己的重要性
重要性:keeps us healthy/stay happy/reduce stress/build confidence/make us stronger等
要点三:未来计划
计划内容:make a better plan/eat well/sleep early/learn to say “No”/take time to relax/do things I enjoy等
要点四:总结升华
总结表达:a happier me can bring more joy to others/loving myself helps me love others better等
5.
范文:
Let’s face the AI age actively
AI has become more and more important in our daily life. In study, AI helps me solve difficult math problems and practice my English pronunciation. It also makes learning more interesting.
However, AI also brings challenges. Sometimes I depend on it too much and stop thinking by myself. This may weaken my problem-solving ability.
To face these challenges, I plan to improve myself. First, I will use AI as a helper, not a crutch. I will think first before checking answers online. Second, I will develop my creativity and critical thinking by reading more and discussing with others. Only in this way can we grow better in the AI age.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:议论文/观点类文章,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:AI对生活和学习的帮助、AI带来的挑战或问题、如何提升自己积极应对挑战
确定人称:第一人称(I)为主
注意事项:不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息,需涵盖所有要点
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,引出AI话题
主体段一:阐述AI对生活和学习的帮助
主体段二:指出AI带来的挑战或问题
主体段三:说明如何提升自己来应对挑战
结尾段:总结
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:AI的帮助
学习帮助:solve difficult math problems/practice English pronunciation/make learning more interesting/provide quick answers等
生活帮助:plan daily schedule/suggest good books等
要点二:AI的挑战
问题表现:depend on it too much/stop thinking by myself/lose problem-solving ability/weaken critical thinking等
要点三:应对方法一
方法内容:use AI as a helper, not a crutch/think before checking answers/use AI as a tool等
要点四:应对方法二
方法内容:develop creativity and critical thinking/read more/discuss with others/try to solve problems first等
要点五:总结
总结表达:grow better in the AI age/have a balanced relationship with AI等
6.例文
选择1:
Reading enriches my life.
Meaningful free time activities make our after-school life more colorful and wonderful, and they always bring us new growth and warm feelings.
I love reading very much because reading can open up a whole new world for me, help me gain lots of knowledge and broaden my horizons. The best book I have read recently is The Old Man and the Sea. It tells a story about an old fisherman who catches a huge marlin but fights against sharks on his way home, and finally only brings back the fish skeleton.
From this book, I learn that no matter how difficult the situation is, we should never give up. As long as we have a strong will and keep fighting, we will achieve our goals in the end.
选择2:
Labor makes life meaningful.
Meaningful free time activities make our after-school life more colorful and wonderful, and they always bring us new growth and warm feelings.
I think labor is meaningful because it can help us learn practical life skills, make us more independent and understand the value of hard work. The most unforgettable labor experience I had recently was helping my grandparents grow vegetables on the farm last weekend. I learned to turn over the soil, plant vegetable seedlings and water them. I felt very tired after a whole day’s work, but I was really happy when I saw the small green seedlings standing in the field.
This experience teaches me that every fruit of labor is hard-won. Also, I become more responsible and know that I should cherish the food and everything others create for us.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
明确文体:记叙文,以一般现在时、一般过去时为主
明确要点:点明有益课余活动的意义,阐述热爱阅读的缘由,介绍《老人与海》书籍内容,分享从中领悟到的人生道理
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:要点完整不遗漏;语法拼写正确,行文流畅,感悟深刻贴合主旨。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:点明有益的课余活动能够丰富课余生活,带来成长与美好感受,引出阅读这一主题
主体段:说明热爱阅读的原因,讲述阅读可以开阔眼界增长学识,介绍近期所读《老人与海》的主要故事内容
结尾段:抒发读书感悟,领悟身处困境永不言弃,凭借坚定意志努力拼搏终会实现目标
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:引出主题
点明意义:meaningful free time activities/make life colorful/bring new growth/valuable spare time hobbies/enrich daily life/bring progress and warmth
要点二:阐述阅读益处与书籍内容
阅读益处与书籍内容:open up new world/gain knowledge/broaden horizons/fisherman/fight against sharks/fish skeleton/explore different worlds/learn more facts/widen sight/old fisherman/struggle with sharks/fish bones
要点三:提炼书籍带来的感悟
感悟:never give up/strong will/keep fighting/achieve goals/stick to your dream/firm mind/keep trying/realize dreams
7.
Dear Alan,
I’m so happy to tell you about the sports activities in our school!
We have five PE classes every week, where we learn different sports skills. Our school offers various clubs, like basketball, football, and badminton clubs. Among them, I love basketball the most. Ever since I joined the basketball club last year, it has brought many positive changes to my life. Through playing basketball, I’ve made many friends and become much stronger. What’s more, it’s a perfect way to help me relax and stay in high spirits.
I hope my sharing helps. Feel free to ask me more!

Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】第一步:审题立意
确定文体:应用文(电子邮件),介绍学校体育运动情况,以一般现在时为主。
明确要点: 1. 每周体育课数量 2. 学校开设的体育社团 3. 个人最喜欢的运动及从中获得的好处
确定人称:第一人称(I/We/My)
第二步:构思布局
三段式结构:
开头段:回应来信,引出话题(题目已给出固定开头)。
主体段:依次回答 Alan 的三个问题:体育课数量、体育社团、个人最爱运动及收获。
结尾段:礼貌收尾,表达交流的期待。
第三步:要点展开
要点一:每周体育课数量
表达示例:We have five PE classes every week.
补充细节:where we learn different sports skills(课上我们学习不同的运动技能)
要点二:学校的体育社团
社团选择:basketball, football, badminton , volleyball clubs,(篮球、足球、羽毛球社团)
要点三:个人最喜欢的运动及好处
运动选择:basketball(篮球) ,football, badminton , volleyball等
喜欢的原因:positive changes to my life/bring me happiness...
具体收获: I’ve made many friends and become much stronger/grow taller
好处:It’s a perfect way to help me relax and stay in high spirits/live a happier life
8.
范文:
Dear Mark,
I’m glad to hear from you and I’d love to tell you about my life during breaks.
Thanks to the “Double Reduction” Policy, our school has made some great changes. The 10-minute breaks are now 15 minutes, and we also have a new 30-minute long break every day. During the short breaks, I often walk around, chat with classmates, or drink some water. For the long break, we can play football, jump rope, or do group games on the playground. Some students also read in the sunshine or draw outside the classroom.
I really enjoy these changes. I feel less tired and more focused in class. It’s wonderful to have more time to relax and play. What are your school breaks like
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确认文体:这是一封介绍变化类书信 (应用文),时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点:需包含课间变化、课间活动以及个人感受
确定人称:第一人称 (I/we) 和第二人称 (you)
注意事项:词数100左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;不得提及真实学校及姓名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接已给出开头,引出话题
主体段:介绍课间变化及活动内容
结尾段:表达感受,询问对方情况
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:课间活动
短课间活动:walk around/chat with classmates/drink some water/rest eyes/look outside等
大课间活动:play football/jump rope/do group games/read in the sunshine/draw outside等
具体说明:During the short breaks, I often walk around, chat with classmates, or drink some water. For the long break, we can play football, jump rope, or do group games on the playground. Some students also read in the sunshine or draw outside the classroom.
要点二:感受与结尾
感受描述:feel less tired/more focused in class/feel happier/feel relaxed等
结束语:What are your school breaks like /I'm looking forward to your reply.等
具体说明:I really enjoy these changes. I feel less tired and more focused in class. It's wonderful to have more time to relax and play. What are your school breaks like
9.
例文
Let’s take exercise to keep healthy
Nowadays, many middle school students don’t get enough exercise. They prefer staying indoors with electronic products instead of doing sports. Heavy study pressure also leaves them little time for exercise, leading to poor health.
To keep fit, I have my own ways. I run for 20 minutes every morning. During the 15-minute break, I walk or do simple stretching. After school, I play basketball with my friends for half an hour.
Let’s take action to do more exercise. Good health is the foundation of our study and life. Let’s enjoy the fun of exercise and stay energetic every day.
【详解】写作步骤解析
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:议论文,主要时态为一般现在时
明确要点:简述中学生不爱运动、体质下降的现状及原因;分享提升自身体质的具体做法(不少于3条);呼吁同学们重视体质健康、积极行动
确定人称:第一人称(I/we)
注意事项:包含所有要点,可适当发挥;不得出现真实姓名、校名;词数80-100
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:承接已给开头,描述现状并分析原因(如沉迷电子设备、学业压力大)
主体段:分享自己的锻炼做法(如晨跑、课间活动、课后球类运动)
结尾段:发出呼吁,强调运动的重要性
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:简述中学生不爱运动、体质下降的现状及原因
核心短句:They prefer staying indoors with electronic products instead of doing sports. Heavy study pressure also leaves them little time for exercise, leading to poor health./Many students are too busy with homework to exercise, and some think exercise is a waste of time.
要点二:分享提升自身体质的具体做法
核心短句:I run for 20 minutes every morning. During the 15-minute break, I walk or do simple stretching. After school, I play basketball with my friends for half an hour./I take PE classes seriously, and I also go cycling on weekends to keep fit.
要点三:呼吁同学们重视体质健康、积极行动
核心短句:Let’s take action to do more exercise. Good health is the foundation of our study and life./Let’s make exercise a part of our daily life and keep ourselves strong and healthy.
10.
Build a Beautiful Ningxia
Nowadays, our environment is getting worse and worse. It is our duty to protect the environment and build a beautiful Ningxia. Here is what we can do.
First, we should turn off taps and showers after using them. Also, remember to turn off the lights when we leave a room. This helps save water and electricity. Second, we’d better walk or ride a bike instead of taking a car to reduce air pollution. Third, we should use both sides of paper and stop using throwaway chopsticks and cups to save trees. Finally, we can plant more trees.
If everyone makes a contribution, our hometown will become more beautiful.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:倡议类说明文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:明确主题、具体环保做法及目的、感受
确定人称:第一人称(we/our)。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:总起句,点明环境问题,引出本文主题
主体段:分点论述低碳生活的具体可行做法及目的
结尾段:总结感受,发出行动号召
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:主题
具体描述:It is our duty to protect the environment and build a beautiful Ningxia./As students, we can do something to protect it./It’s time for us to do something./To build a beautiful Ningxia, everyone should take action to protect the environment.等
要点二:具体环保做法及目的
具体措施:turn off taps and showers/take the bus/reuse paper and refuse throwaway chopsticks/bring own chopsticks and water bottle/go to school on foot or by bike等
目的:This helps save water and electricity./reduce air pollution/save trees/saves natural resources等
要点三:感受和号召
具体内容:makes a contribution/make a difference/work together/try our best to/small actions can make a big difference等
11.例文
Dear Peter,
How is everything going
I’m writing to invite you to take part in our School Fitness Festival. It will be held on May 22nd, with the theme “Health First”.
The festival has many meaningful activities. The most interesting one is the fun sports. It’s more about joy than speed. Also, there will be a Tai Chi experience, which can help us keep calm and fit.
I really hope you can join us. It’s a great chance to make more friends, experience Chinese school culture and keep healthy in a relaxing way. You’ll enjoy yourself.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:邀请类书信应用文,全文以一般将来时、一般现在时为主
明确要点:写明活动时间与主题;介绍两项校园活动;发出邀请并表达期许
确定人称:第一人称I/第二人称you
注意事项:词数90词左右,不出现真实姓名校名
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开门见山,发出活动邀请
主体段:交代活动时间主题,详细介绍特色活动内容
结尾段:诚恳邀请对方参加,说明参与益处并表达期待
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:活动时间与主题
活动名称:School Fitness Festival等
举办时间:be held on May 22nd等
活动主题:Health First等
要点二:特色活动介绍
趣味运动:fun sports/bring us much fun/focus on happiness等
太极体验:Tai Chi experience/help us keep calm and fit/learn traditional sports等
其他活动:fitness knowledge lectures/learn more healthy ways等
要点三:发出邀请与内心希望
邀请用语:hope you can join us/take part in the great activity等
参与益处:make more friends/experience Chinese school culture/keep healthy等
内心期许:have a good time/enjoy yourself等
12.例文
My Low-carbon Life
Now low-carbon life is becoming popular. As students, we can try our best do something for it.
First of all, we can walk or ride bikes instead of taking cars. Second, we should save water and electricity in our daily life. We’d better use both sides of paper to avoid wasting. Third, don’t litter and plant more trees.
I believe small actions can make a big difference to our environment. Let’s live a low-carbon life together to protect our only earth.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体: 这是一篇话题作文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点: 介绍如何践行低碳生活(出行方式、节约资源、保护环境、感悟和号召)
确定人称:第一人称(I/we)为主
注意事项: 不提及真实姓名和校名,80-100词,语气自然
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段: 总领全文,介绍低碳生活的普遍性
主体段: 分别介绍三个践行低碳生活的方式——出行方式、节约资源、保护环境、,适当增加细节
结尾段: 表达个人感受,号召大家一起践行低碳生活
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:
介绍低碳生活的普遍性:Now low-carbon life is becoming popular. As students, we can try our best do something for it.等
要点二:如何践行低碳生活
出行方式:We can walk or ride bikes instead of taking cars等
节约资源:We should save water and electricity in our daily life. We’d better use both sides of paper to avoid wasting.等
保护环境:Don’t litter and plant more trees等
要点三:
感悟和号召:I believe small actions can make a big difference to our environment. Let’s live a low-carbon life together to protect our only earth.等
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