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unsolved secrets of nature
explore nature
写作步骤
Step 1: 审好题 审人称，审时态
Step 2: 列题纲 三段式：总-分-总
Step 3: 写好句 连词成句
Step 4: 成篇章 连句成篇
假设你是林辉，你班下周三的英语兴趣小组活动将要求同学们围 “My favourite nature explorer” 这个主题进行分享。请你根据以下提示内容，用英语写一篇文章。
提示：
Who is your favourite nature explorer
What did he/she explore
How did he/she explore nature
What do you learn from him/her
Step 1: 审好题
1.审人称：人称以第 人称为主
2.审时态：时态以_________________为主
三
一般过去
写作任务
Beginning
Body
Ending
开头：开篇点题
正文：介绍人物基本情况、经历和成就
结尾：赞美人物的精神品质，表达感悟
介绍自己最喜欢的自然探索家
身份→爱好/生平→经历/事迹→成就
Step 2: 列提纲（三段式）
赞美其探索精神；简述从中得到的人生启示
段落布局
Step 3: 写好句→词句积累
1. 继续做:
2. 终身探索:
3. 调查:
4. 对...感兴趣:
5. 实施;开展:
6. 生病:
7.唤醒某人的好奇心:
carry on with
lifelong exploration
look into
探索行动:
take an interest in
carry out
fall ill
8. 促使某人做:
9. 实现某人的目标:
10. 一直;完全地:
11.属于:
12. 投入精力:
13. 有机会做:
14.履行职责:
drive sb. to do
achieve one's goal
all the way
put effort into
get to do sth.
awaken one's curiosity
belong to
do one's job
Step 3: 写好句→词句积累
感受:
15. 热情:
16. 鼓舞人的:
17. 勇敢地:
passion
inspiring
bravely
人物写作指导
用具体事件展现人物品质
He is a great and brave scientist.
To carry out his research, he spent years in wild mountains and forests. Though he nearly died, Wang never stopped his work.
通过简单对比，突出人物特质
Though he nearly died, Wang never stopped his work.
Despite his huge success, Wang seldom thought about personal honour...
Although he received ... twice, he hardly mentioned it.
按时间/事件逻辑，分层展开，避免混乱
话题按“出生/兴趣→探索过程→遇到的困难→成就”的时间线叙述，用恰当的连接词串联。
We can use this key to unlock more secrets of nature.
These secrets awaken our curiosity and drive scientists to better understand the wonders.
It softly told people about his lifelong exploration and love of nature.
1.我们能用这把钥匙开启更多大自然的奥秘。
2.这些奥秘唤醒了我们的好奇心，也促使科学家们去更好地探索大自然的奇妙。
3.它轻柔地诉说着他毕生对大自然的探索与热爱。
He was born in the flowering season of early summer, and made plants his life.
4.他生于初夏花季，以植物为毕生事业。
Step 3: 写好句→词句积累
LET’S WRITE
1.徐霞客是我国最著名的自然探索家之一。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
well-known
2.他被认为是中国历史上最伟大的旅行家和地理学家。
_____________________________________________________
Xu Xiake is one of the most well-known nature explorers in our country.
关键词：
He is considered the greatest traveller and geographer in Chinese history.
is considered
Beginning
geographer
3.徐霞客出生于明朝。_____________________________________________________
关键词：
Xu Xiake was born in the Ming Dynasty.
4.他从小就对游历祖国的山河有着浓厚的兴趣。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
He took a strong interest in exploring China’s rivers and mountains from an early age.
take a strong interest in
be born in
the Ming Dynasty
Body
from an early age
5.为了完成自己的探索之行，他花费多年时间游历中国各地。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
to do 不定式表目的
To carry out his exploration, he spent many years travelling across China.
6. 他一路走过许多地方，也遇到了许多困难，比如野兽和严寒的天气。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
He walked through many places and came across many difficulties along the way, such as wild animals and freezing weather.
walk through
freezing weather.
carry out
spend time (in) doing sth.
come across
7.尽管旅行艰辛，徐霞客从未停止。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
Though the journey was tough/hard, he never stopped.
8.他把旅途经历记录在日记里。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
He recorded his travel experiences in his diary.
record
though/although/+句子
despite/in spite of +名词 / 代词 / 动名词 (doing)
可用副词加深程度extremely/fairly
9.后来就成了《徐霞客游记》。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
Xu Xiake’s Travel Notes
This later became Xu Xiake’s Travel Notes.
10.他还取得了许多的地理发现,比如找到了长江的真正源头。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
He also made geographical discoveries, like finding the true source of the Yangtze River.
geographical discovery
the source of
11.最后他因身患重病，不得不结束了人生最后一次旅行。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
Finally, he had to end his last trip because he fell seriously ill.
12.他把旅行当作一生的事业,并且他一点也不后悔。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
He made travel his life and had no regrets at all.
fall seriously ill
last trip
课文原句: He made plants his life
regret n./v.
→have no regret / never regret
13.徐霞客终身探索和对大自然深沉的爱令人备受鼓舞。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
Xu Xiake’s lifelong exploration and his deep love of nature are inspiring.
14.他的故事告诉我们，要勇敢面对挑战，坚持自己的梦想。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
His story tells us that we should face challenges bravely and stick to our dreams.
inspiring
keep trying
stick to
Ending
lifelong exploration
Xu Xiake is one of the most well-known nature explorers in our country. He is considered the greatest traveler and geographer in Chinese history.
Xuwas born in the Ming Dynasty. He took a strong interest in exploring China’s rivers and mountains from an early age. To carry out his exploration, he spent many years travelling across China. He walked through many places and came across many difficulties along the way, such as wild animals and freezing weather.Though the journey was hard, he never stopped . He recorded his travel experiences in his diary. This later became Xu Xiake’s Travel Notes. He also made geographical discoveries, like finding the true source of the Yangtze River. Finally, he had to end his last trip because he fell seriously ill. He made travel his life and had no regrets at all.
Xu Xiake’s lifelong exploration and his deep love of nature are inspiring. His story tells us that we should face challenges bravely and stick to our dreams.
评价标准 Yes No
1. 格式、时态是否正确
2. 主谓是否一致
3. 要点是否齐全
4. 人称是否正确
5. 语序是否有问题
6. 语言是否符合习惯　
7. 句子结构是否完整
8. 固定短语是否恰当
9. 拼写、标点、大小写、名词的单复数是否准确等
查
将检查后的作文整洁地抄写在横线上。
1. 斜度
2. 字母形态
3. 字母比例
4. 间距
5. 标点
6. 贴线
誊
THANKSUnit5: Writing paper
写作内容： 假设你是林辉，你班下周三的英语兴趣小组活动将要求同学们围 “My favourite nature explorer” 这个主题进行分享。请你根据以下提示内容,用英语写一篇文章。
提示：Who is your favourite nature explorer What did he/she explore
How did he/she explore nature What do you learn from him/her
思路导引：
审题指导： 审人称,审时态：人称以第 人称为主,时态以 为主
词句积累： 探索行动 1.继续做: 2. 终身探索:
3.调查: 4.对...感兴趣:
5.实施;开展: 6.唤醒某人的好奇心:
7.生病: 8.促使某人做...:
9.实现某人的目标: 10.一直;完全地:
11.属于: 12. 投入精力:
13.有机会做: 14.履行职责:
情感态度 15.热情: 16.鼓舞人的: 17. 勇敢地:
课文美句 1.We can use this key to unlock more secrets of nature.
我们能用这把钥匙开启更多大自然的奥秘。
2.These secrets awaken our curiosity and drive scientists to better understand the wonders.
这些奥秘唤醒了我们的好奇心，也促使科学家们去更好地探索大自然的奇妙。
3.It softly told people about his lifelong exploration and love of nature.
它轻柔地诉说着他毕生对大自然的探索与热爱。
4.He was born in the flowering season of early summer, and made plants his life.
他生于初夏花季，以植物为毕生事业。
Part1:开头:开篇点题
1.徐霞客是我国最著名的自然探索家之一。（well-known；one of）
2.他被认为是中国历史上最伟大的旅行家和地理学家。 (geographer)
Part2:介绍人物基本情况、经历和成就。
3.徐霞客出生于明朝。 (the Ming Dynasty)
4. 他从小就对游历祖国的山河有着浓厚的兴趣。 (take an interest in...)
5.为了完成自己的探索之行，他花费多年时间游历中国各地。 (carry out; spend)
6. 他一路走过许多地方，也遇到了许多困难，比如野兽和严寒的天气。(come across)
7.尽管旅行艰辛，他从未停止。（though/although）
8.他旅途经历记录在日记里。(record)
9.后来就成了《徐霞客游记》。（Xu Xiake’s Travel Notes ）
10.他还取得了许多地理发现,比如找到了长江的真正源头。
(geographical discovery;source)
11.后来他因身患重病，结束了人生最后一次远行。(last trip)
12.他把旅行当作一生的事业,并且他一点也不后悔。(课文原句; regret)
13.他毕生探索的精神和对自然的深切热爱，确实令人深受鼓舞 (inspiring)。
14.他的故事告诉我们，要勇敢面对困难挑战，坚持自己的梦想。(that宾语从句)
篇章写作 自评/互评
1.内容是否完整，表达准确
2.结构是否清晰
3.语法正确
4.卷面工整，书写美观
5.词汇丰富，句子衔接流畅。
Part3:赞美人物的精神品质，表达感悟。
My favourite nature explorer
开头:开篇点题
正文：介绍人物基本情况、经历和成就。
结尾：赞美人物的精神品质，表达感悟。Unit5: Writing paper
写作内容： 假设你是林辉，你班下周三的英语兴趣小组活动将要求同学们围 “My favourite nature explorer” 这个主题进行分享。请你根据以下提示内容,用英语写一篇文章。
提示：Who is your favourite nature explorer What did he/she explore
How did he/she explore nature What do you learn from him/her
思路导引：
审题指导： 审人称,审时态：人称以第 三 人称为主,时态以 一般过去 为主
词句积累： 探索行动 1.继续做: carry on with 2. 终身探索: lifelong exploration
3.调查: look into 4.对...感兴趣: take interests in
5.实施;开展: carry out 6.唤醒某人的好奇心: awaken one's curiosity
7.生病: fall ill 8.促使某人做...: drive sb. to do
9.实现某人的目标: achieve one's goal 10.一直;完全地: all the way
11.属于: belong to 12. 投入精力: put effort into
13.有机会做: get to do sth. 14.履行职责: do one's job
情感态度 15.热情: passion 16.鼓舞人的: inspiring 17. 勇敢地: bravely
课文美句 1.We can use this key to unlock more secrets of nature.
我们能用这把钥匙开启更多大自然的奥秘。
2.These secrets awaken our curiosity and drive scientists to better understand the wonders.
这些奥秘唤醒了我们的好奇心，也促使科学家们去更好地探索大自然的奇妙。
3.It softly told people about his lifelong exploration and love of nature.
它轻柔地诉说着他毕生对大自然的探索与热爱。
4.He was born in the flowering season of early summer, and made plants his life.
他生于初夏花季，以植物为毕生事业。
Part1:开头:开篇点题
1.徐霞客是我国最著名的自然探索家之一。（well-known；one of）
Xu Xiake is one of the most well-known nature explorers in our country.
2.他被认为是中国历史上最伟大的旅行家和地理学家。 (geographer)
He is considered the greatest traveller and geographer in Chinese history.
Part2:介绍人物基本情况、经历和成就。
3.徐霞客出生于明朝。 (the Ming Dynasty)
Xu Xiake was born in the Ming Dynasty.
4. 他从小就对游历祖国的山河有着浓厚的兴趣。 (take an interest in...)
He took a strong interest in exploring China’s rivers and mountains from an early age.
5.为了完成自己的探索之行，他花费多年时间游历中国各地。 (carry out; spend)
To carry out his exploration, he spent many years travelling across China
6. 他一路走过许多地方，也遇到了许多困难，比如野兽和严寒的天气。(come across)
He walked through many places and came across many difficulties along the way, such as wild animals and freezing weather.
7.尽管旅行艰辛，他从未停止。（though/although）
Though/Although the journey was tough/hard, he never stopped .
8.他旅途经历记录在日记里。(record)
He recorded his travel experiences in his diary.
9.后来就成了《徐霞客游记》。（Xu Xiake’s Travel Notes ）
This later became Xu Xiake’s Travel Notes.
10.他还取得了许多地理发现,比如找到了长江的真正源头。
(geographical discovery;source)
He also made geographical discoveries, like finding the true source of the Yangtze River.
11.后来他因身患重病，结束了人生最后一次远行。(last trip)
Finally, he had to end his last trip because he fell seriously ill.
12.他把旅行当作一生的事业,并且他一点也不后悔。(课文原句; regret)
He made travel his life and had no regrets at all.
13.他毕生探索的精神和对自然的深切热爱，确实令人深受鼓舞 (inspiring)。
His spirit of exploration and deep love of nature are truly inspiring.
14.他的故事告诉我们，要勇敢面对困难挑战，坚持自己的梦想。(that宾语从句)
His story tells us that we should face challenges bravely and stick to our dreams.
篇章写作
Part3:赞美人物的精神品质，表达感悟。
Xu Xiake is one of the most well-known nature explorers in our country. He is considered the greatest traveler and geographer in Chinese history.
Xu was born in the Ming Dynasty. He took a strong interest in exploring China’s rivers and mountains from an early age. To carry out his exploration, he spent many years travelling across China. He walked through many places and came across many troubles along the way, such as wild animals and freezing weather. Though the journey was very hard, he never stopped. He recorded his travel experiences in his diary. This later became Xu Xiake’s Travel Notes. He also made geographical discoveries, like finding the true source of the Yangtze River. Finally, he had to end his last trip because he fell seriously ill. He made travel his life and had no regrets at all.
His spirit of exploration and deep love of nature are truly inspiring. His story tells us that we should face challenges bravely and stick to our dreams.
My favourite nature explorer
开头:开篇点题
正文：介绍人物基本情况、经历和成就。
结尾：赞美人物的精神品质，表达感悟。
1.内容是否完整，表达准确
2.结构是否清晰
3.语法正确
4.卷面工整，书写美观
5.词汇丰富，句子衔接流畅。

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