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(共21张PPT)
UNIT2
Growing pains and gains
writing: A time of failure
deal with peer pressure
deal with failure
I tried out the basketball team. But I failed because I wasn’t tall enough. I was so disappointed at this. Then my best friends suggested that I should try something else. I tried swimmimg and soon fell completely in love with the sport.
Now I understand growing up will never be easy. We should look at challenges the right. Failure is a part of life. But it lasts just a moment.
What happened
I tried out the basketball team. But I failed because I wasn’t tall enough.
I was so disappointed at this.
How did it make you feel
What did you do
What do you learn from it
I tried swimmimg and soon fell completely in love with the sport.
Now I understand growing up will never be easy. We should look at challenges the right. Failure is a part of life. But it lasts just a moment.
写作步骤
Step 1: 审好题 审人称，审时态
Step 2: 列题纲 三段式：总-分-总
Step 3: 写好句 连词成句
Step 4: 成篇章 连句成篇
写作任务
人生不是一帆风顺的，任何人都会遇到挫折和失败。在磨砺和失败中成长，会成就更美好的自己。假设你是李华，请根据以下提示并围绕“一次挫折后，你尝试新事物并收获成长”的经历，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的故事。
1.What happened
2.How did it make you feel
3. What did you do
4.What do you learn from it
Step 1: 审好题
1.审人称：人称以第 人称为主
2.审时态：时态以_________________为主
一
一般过去/现在时
Beginning
Body
Ending
开头：开篇点题
正文：描述遇到的挫折及发生的改变
结尾：简述从中获得的感悟
核心观点：成长总伴随着失败
At first, I felt/was..., but...
From this experience, I learned that...
Step 2: 列提纲（三段式）
The change made me..., and I know that
段落布局
I failed to..., after that...encouraged me to...
1. 失望的:
2. 为...骄傲:
3. 自信的:
4. 难过的:
5. 令人心碎的:
6. 忍不住做某事:
disappointed
be proud of
confident
感受:
Step 3: 写好句→词句积累
sad/upset
heartbreaking
can't help doing
take one's mind off sth.
6. 未能做成:
7.把...变成:
8.为什么不:
9.爱上:
10.转移注意力:
11. 从痛苦到收获:
12.鼓励某人:
fail to do
turn...into..
why not do sth.
from pain to gain
encourage sb. to do sth.
态度/行为:
fall in love with
收获:
13.学到:
14.成长:
15. 取得成功:
16.树立信心:
17.克服:
18.离...更近:
grow up
achieve success
learn from
build up confidence
overcome
get closer to
It's great to look back and see my pains and gains with fresh eyes.
Failure is a part of life.
When one door closes, another opens.
1.回首往事，以新的眼光审视曾经的痛苦和收获。
2.失败是生活的一部分。
3.当一扇门关上时，必有另一扇门打开。
We need to look at challenges the right way.
4.我们需要以正确的方式看待挑战。
Step 3: 写好句→词句积累
Beginning
1.成长常常伴随着烦恼与困难。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
grow up
Growing up often comes with troubles and difficulties.
2.我想分享一段我自己的经历。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
I’d like to share my own experience.
my own experience
→V-ing作主语
come with...
I’d like to share one of my own experiences.
Tips:巧用 one of，让表达更具体、更高级。
Body
3.上学期，我参加了学校的英语演讲比赛。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
join/take part in
Last term, I joined a school English speech competition.
4.我练习了很多次，但我太紧张以至于出了大错。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
I practised my speech many times, but I was so nervous that a big mistake was made.
so...that+句子
speech competition
make a mistake
用被动语态强调
5.那时候，我因为紧张、没能获奖而感到非常失望。
_____________________________________________________
课文原句仿写：
Back then, I was so disappointed at being too short and failing to get on the basketball team.
Back then, I was so disappointed at being too nervous and failing to win the prize.
6.每当想起这件事，我都忍不住哭。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
I couldn’t help crying whenever I thought of it.
whenever
get the prize
can’t help doing
7.后来，我的老师建议我先试着写故事。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
advise sb. to do
8..因为写作能帮清晰地表达我的想法。。
_____________________________________________________
Then my teacher advised me to try writing stories first.
try doing
关键词：
Because writing could help me express my ideas clearly.
express ideas
9.我受到了她的鼓励。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
I was encouraged by her.
be encouraged by
10.一开始，我写作只是为了转移注意力。
_____________________________________________________
课文原句仿写：
At first, I swam just to take my mind off things.
At first, I wrote just to take my mind off things.
11.但后来，我开始享受把想法变成文字的时光。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
But later, I began to enjoy the time of turning my thoughts into words.
turn...into...
the time of
12.我彻底爱上了写作。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
fall in love with
I fell completely in love with writing.
13.现在，我已经写完了三个故事，还加入了学校的写作社团。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
Now, I’ve finished three stories and joined the school writing club.
have done
writing club
Ending
14.从这段经历中，我明白了：每一次失败，都让我们离成功更近一步。
_________________________________________________________
关键词：
From this experience, I learned that every failure brings us closer to success.
15.只要我们不断努力，就能克服任何困难。
_____________________________________________________
关键词：
As long as we keep trying, we can overcome any difficulty.
as long as
closer to
bring + sb./sth. + adj. 让…… 变得……
keep trying
检查句子，不要遗漏主语
Growing up often comes with troubles and difficulties. I’d like to share one of my own experiences.
Last term, I joined a school English speech competition. I practised my speech many times, but I was so nervous that a big mistake was made. Back then, I was so disappointed at being too nervous and failing to win the prize. I couldn’t help crying whenever I thought of it.
Then my teacher advised me to try writing stories first.Because writing could help me express my ideas clearly. I was encouraged by her. At first, I wrote just to take my mind off things. But later, I began to enjoy the time of turning my thoughts into words. I fell completely in love with writing. Now, I’ve finished three stories and joined the school writing club.
From this experience, I learned that every failure brings us closer to success. As long as we keep trying, we can overcome any difficulty.
评价标准 Yes No
1. 格式、时态是否正确
2. 主谓是否一致
3. 要点是否齐全
4. 人称是否正确
5. 语序是否有问题
6. 语言是否符合习惯　
7. 句子结构是否完整
8. 固定短语是否恰当
9. 拼写、标点、大小写、名词的单复数是否准确等
查
将检查后的作文整洁地抄写在横线上。
1. 斜度
2. 字母形态
3. 字母比例
4. 间距
5. 标点
6. 贴线
誊
Thank youUnit2: Writing paper
写作内容： 人生不是一帆风顺的，任何人都会遇到挫折和失败。在磨砺和失败中成长，会成就更美好的自己。假设你是李华，请根据以下导图内容并围绕“一次挫折后，你尝试新事物并收获成长”的经历，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的故事。1.What happened 2.How did it make you feel 3. What did you do 4.What do you learn from it
思路导引：
审题指导： 审人称,审时态：人称以第 一 人称为主,时态以 一般过去/一般现在 为主
词句积累： 感受 1.失望的: disappointed 2. 为..骄傲: be proud of
3. 自信的: confident 4. 难过的: upset /sad
5.令人心碎的: heartbreaking 6.忍不住做某事: can't help doing
经历/改变 7.把...变成:turn...into... 8.为什么不: why not do sth.
9.爱上: fall in love with 10.转移注意力: take one's mind off sth.
11. 从痛苦到收获: from pain to gain 12.鼓励某人: encourage sb. to do sth.
收获 13. 取得成功: achieve success 14.未能做成: fail to do
15.树立信心:build up confidence 16.离...更近: get closer to
17.学到: learn from 18.成长: grow up 19.克服: overcome
课文美句 1.It's great to look back and see my pains and gains with fresh eyes. 回首往事，以新的眼光审视曾经的痛苦和收获。
2.Failure is a part of life. 失败是生活的一部分。
3.When one door closes, another opens. 当一扇门关上时，必有另一扇门打开。
4.We need to look at challenges the right way. 我们需要以正确的方式看待挑战。
Part1:开头:开篇点题
1.成长常常伴随着烦恼与困难。（V-ing作主语）
Growing up often comes with troubles and difficulties.
2.我想分享一段我自己的经历。
I’d like to share one of my own experiences.
Part2:描述遇到的挫折及发生的改变
3. 上学期，我参加了学校的英语演讲比赛。 (join/take part in)
Last term, I joined a school English speech competition.
4.我练习了很多次，但我太紧张以至于出了大错。（so...that）
I practised my speech many times, but I was so nervous that a big mistake was made.
5.那时候，我因为紧张、没能获奖而感到非常失望。(课文原句仿写；fail to do)
Back then, I was so disappointed at being too nervous and failing to win the prize.
6.每当想起这件事，我都忍不住哭。（can't help doing；think of）
I couldn’t help crying whenever I thought of it.
7.后来，我的老师建议我先试着写故事，(advise sb to do sth)
Then my teacher advised me to try writing stories first，
8.因为写作能帮清晰地表达我的想法。（express ）
because writing could help me express my ideas clearly.
9.我受到了她的鼓励。(被动语态)
I was encouraged by her.
10.一开始，我写作只是为了转移注意力。(课文原句仿写)
At first, I wrote just to take my mind off things.
11.但后来，我开始享受把想法变成文字的时光。(the time of; turn...into...)
But later, I began to enjoy the time of turning my thoughts into words.
12.我彻底爱上了写作。(fall in love with..)
I fell completely in love with writing.
13.现在，我已经写完了三个故事，还加入了学校的写作社团。(现在完成时强调成果)
Now, I’ve finished three stories and joined the school writing club.
14.从这段经历中，我明白了：每一次失败，都让我们离成功更近一步。 (closer to)
From this experience, I learned that every failure brings us closer to success.
15.只要我们不断努力，就能克服任何困难。 (as long as;overcome)
As long as we keep trying, we can overcome any difficulty.
篇章写作
Part3:简述从中获得的感悟
Growing up often comes with troubles and difficulties. I’d like to share one of my own experiences.
Last term, I joined a school English speech competition. I practised my speech many times, but I was so nervous that a big mistake was made. Back then, I was so disappointed at being too nervous and failing to win the prize. I couldn’t help crying whenever I thought of it.
Then my teacher advised me to try writing stories first because writing could help me express my ideas clearly . I was encouraged by her. At first, I wrote just to take my mind off things. But later, I began to enjoy the time of turning my thoughts into words. I fell completely in love with writing. Now, I’ve finished three stories and joined the school writing club.
From this experience, I learned that every failure brings us closer to success. As long as we keep trying, we can overcome any difficulty.
A time of failure
开头:开篇点题
正文：描述遇到的挫折及发生的改变
结尾：简述从中获得的感悟
1.内容是否完整，表达准确
2.结构是否清晰（合适的开头结尾，行文流畅，逻辑清晰）
3.语法正确（时态，句子结构，单词拼写）
4.卷面工整，书写美观
5.词汇丰富，句子衔接流畅。新八下课文填空检测单 U2
You just don’t get me!（背诵检测单2*20=40） 姓名_________________
[Mum is sitting in the living room, 1.__________(担心的). The clock reads 10:27 pm. The son runs through the door, 2.___________________(气喘吁吁地).]
Son: (breathing quickly) I'm back...
Mum: Look at the time! Do you remember your promise
Son: (in a low voice) Yes, I promised 3.________(be) back before 9 tonight. But...
Mum: (interrupting) 4._____________________(承诺就是承诺)! The promise 5.____________(keep), so you can't 6.___________________(待在外面很晚) next time.
Son: Mum, please listen... I was heading back at 8:30.
Mum: Then why are you late
Son: On my way back, I realised that my phone was at Jiacheng's house. I have7.____________(go) back to get it.
Mum: Why did it take that long to get your phone
Son: 8.__________(途中) back, I noticed an old woman under a street 9.__________(灯). She was wearing a thin10.______________(上衣) and it was cold. She looked 11.__________(苍白的). I asked her if she needed help. She said she was lost.
Mum: So you sent her home
Son: No! She couldn't tell me her address.
Mum: Then what did you do
Son: I checked and saw that a yellow band was 12.__________(系) to her 13.__________(手腕). It had her information on it. But I couldn't call her family 14.__________(介词) my phone. So I gave her my jacket and took her to the 15.__________(near) police station. I waited with her until she 16.__________(take) home by a 17.__________(女警察). After that I ran to pick up my phone and came home.
Mum: Oh, what a night! I'm sorry for 18.__________________(对......发火) you. But why didn't you phone me from the police station I was so worried!
Son: Oh, I didn't 19._____________(想到，考虑到) that... Sorry, Mum...
Mum: Now I understand . I'm very 20.__________(pride) of you.
From pain to gain（背诵检测单2*18=36） 姓名_________________
21 October 2023
Dear diary,
I had a really bad day. I 1.________ ________(参加.......的选拔)the basketball team, but the coach said I wasn't tall enough. This has 2.__________(be) my dream since I was a little girl! I have practised so much, and it all ended today. I feel very bad....
17 September 2025
Dear diary,
1 I was just reading my diary from four years ago. How time flies!Back then, I was so 3._____________(失望的) at being too short and 4.___________(未做到) to get on the basketball team. I 5._______________________(忍不住笑出来) at my 6._________________(令人心碎的) words then. Basketball was really a big deal for me. But things changed soon after that.
2 I was so hurt by my 7.__________(fail) back then, and my friends were all worried. "Why not 8.__________(try)something else, like swimming or 9.__________(滑雪) " suggested my best friend. At first, I swam just to take my mind 10.__________(介词) things . But soon, I fell11.____________(完全地) in love 12.__________(介词)the sport. I've won several 13.__________(competition) now and I've made a lot of friends. My life has taken a different turn.
3 It's great 14.__________(look) back and see my pains and gains with fresh eyes. Growing up will never be an easy thing. But we need to look at challenges the right way.
4 Now I understand that failure is a part of life. It may fall 15.__________(在..上面) us at any 16.__________(stage) in our lives. I 17.________________(experience) many other terrible moments since then. But I have never felt so bad again. I know 18.__________(清楚地) that failure lasts just a moment. When one door closes, another opens. Life is waiting for us with many other surprises.
5 Tomorrow is another day.Unit2: Writing paper
写作内容： 人生不是一帆风顺的，任何人都会遇到挫折和失败。在磨砺和失败中成长，会成就更美好的自己。假设你是李华，请根据以下导图内容并围绕“一次挫折后，你尝试新事物并收获成长”的经历，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的故事。1.What happened 2.How did it make you feel 3. What did you do 4.What do you learn from it
思路导引：
审题指导： 审人称,审时态：人称以第 人称为主,时态以 为主
词句积累： 感受 1.失望的: 2. 为..骄傲:
3. 自信的: 4. 难过的:
5.令人心碎的: 6.忍不住做某事:
经历/改变 7.把...变成: 8.为什么不:
9.爱上: 10.转移注意力:
11. 从痛苦到收获: 12.鼓励某人:
收获 13. 取得成功: 14.未能做成:
15.树立信心: 16.离...更近:
17.学到: 18.成长: 19.克服:
课文美句 1.It's great to look back and see my pains and gains with fresh eyes. 回首往事，以新的眼光审视曾经的痛苦和收获。
2.Failure is a part of life. 失败是生活的一部分。
3.When one door closes, another opens. 当一扇门关上时，必有另一扇门打开。
4.We need to look at challenges the right way. 我们需要以正确的方式看待挑战。
Part1:开头:开篇点题
1.成长常常伴随着烦恼与困难。（V-ing作主语）
2.我想分享一段我自己的经历。
Part2:描述遇到的挫折及发生的改变
3. 上学期，我参加了学校的英语演讲比赛。 (join/take part in)
4.我练习了很多次，但我太紧张以至于出了大错。（so...that）
5.那时候，我因为紧张、没能获奖而感到非常失望。(课文原句仿写；fail to do)
6.每当想起这件事，我都忍不住哭。（can't help doing；think of）
7.后来，我的老师建议我先试着写故事，(advise sb to do sth)
8.因为写作能帮清晰地表达我的想法。（express ）
9.我受到了她的鼓励。(被动语态)
10.一开始，我写作只是为了转移注意力。(课文原句仿写)
11.但后来，我开始享受把想法变成文字的时光。(the time of; turn...into...)
12.我彻底爱上了写作。(fall in love with..)
13.现在，我已经写完了三个故事，还加入了学校的写作社团。(现在完成时强调成果)
14.从这段经历中，我明白了：每一次失败，都让我们离成功更近一步。 (closer to)
15.只要我们不断努力，就能克服任何困难。 (as long as;overcome)
篇章写作 自评/互评
1.内容是否完整，表达准确
2.结构是否清晰（合适的开头结尾，行文流畅，逻辑清晰）
3.语法正确（时态，句子结构，单词拼写）
4.卷面工整，书写美观
5.词汇丰富，句子衔接流畅。
Part3:简述从中获得的感悟
A time of failure
开头:开篇点题
正文：描述遇到的挫折及发生的改变
结尾：简述从中获得的感悟八下U2重点短语默写(一)
1.与此同时 2.与某人友好相处
3.对某人抱有期望 4.信守/违背承诺
5.做出承诺 6.承诺做某事
7.使我的父母担心/骄傲 8.气喘吁吁
9.深呼吸 10.屏住呼吸
11.低声说/高声说 12.一诺千金！
13.成交 14.处理；解决
八下U2重点短语默写(三)
29.给某人提好的建议 30.观点，看法
31.拒绝；调小 32.把我的手机拿走
33.与...切断联系 34.做的好
35.转移某人的注意力 36.一会儿
37.进行家庭对话 38.害怕做某事
39.和某人有不同的意见 40.参加...的选拔
41.试验，试用 42.时光飞逝！
八下U2重点短语默写(二)
15.在外面呆到很晚 16.回来；往回走
17.在某人返回的路上 18.路灯
19.一件薄衬衫 20.看起来苍白的
21.告诉某人某事 22.附属于，喜爱
23.和某人一起等待 24.捡起；搭载；取回
25.因...道歉 26.对某人生气
27.对...感到骄傲 28.老年人
八下U2重点短语默写(四)
43.在那时 44.对...失望
45.未能做成某事 46.加入篮球队
47.忍不住做某事 48.一件重要的事
49.分散某人的注意力 50.爱上...
51.出现不同的转变 52.回头看
53.用全新的视角 54.用正确的方式看待挑战
55.落在某人身上 56.在我们一生中的任何阶段八下U2重点短语
at the same time 与此同时
get along with sb. 与某人友好相处
expect from sb. 对某人抱有期望
keep/break a promise 信守/违背承诺
make a promise 做出承诺
promise to do sth. 承诺做某事
make my parents worried/proud 使我的父母担心/骄傲
out of breath 气喘吁吁
take a deep breath 深呼吸
hold one’ breath 屏住呼吸
in a low/loud voice 低声说/高声说
A deal is a deal! 一诺千金！
make a deal 成交
deal with 处理；解决
stay outside late 在外面呆到很晚
head back 回来，往回走
on one’s way back 在某人返回的路上
street lamp 路灯
a thin blouse 一件薄衬衫
look pale 看起来苍白的
tell sb. sth.= tell sth. to sb. 告诉某人某事
be attached to... 附属于，喜爱
wait with sb. 和某人一起等待
pick up 捡起；搭载；取回
be sorry for 因...道歉
be cross with=be angry with 对某人生气
be proud of = take pride in 对...感到骄傲
the elderly 老年人
give good advice to... 给某人提好的建议
a point of view 观点，看法
turn down 拒绝；调小
take my phone away 把我的手机拿走
cut off 与...切断联系
do a really good job 做的好
draw one’s attention away 转移某人的注意力
for a while 一会儿
have a family conversation 进行家庭对话
be afraid of doing= be afraid to do 害怕做某事
have a disagreement with sb. 和某人有不同的意见
try out for 参加...的选拔
try out 试验，试用
How time flies! 时光飞逝！
back then 在那时
be disappointed at 对...失望
fail to do sth. 未能做成某事
get on the basketball team 加入篮球队
couldn’t help doing sth. 忍不住做某事
a big deal 一件重要的事
take one’s mind off 分散某人的注意力
fall in love with 爱上...
take a different turn 出现不同的转变
look back 回头看
with fresh eyes 用全新的视角
look at challenges the right way 用正确的方式看待挑战
fall upon sb. 落在某人身上
at any stage in our lives 在我们一生中的任何阶段

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