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Unit4 作文-Passing on help(教师版)
Writing Task
每一份善意都值得被传递，每一份帮助都能温暖你我。假如你是李华，你校英语报正在开展以“Passing on help”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格内容，请用英语写一篇短文，分享一次传递帮助的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
审题指导：
审人称：人称以第_____一_____人称为主；审时态：时态以_____一般过去______时态为主。
Beginning
众所周知，在我们的日常生活中，帮助他人以及被他人帮助都非常重要。
As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life.
哪怕是一次小小的善举也能产生影响。(make a difference)
Even a small act of kindness can make a difference.
3. 我想分享一下我传递帮助的经历。(I’d like to do sth; pass on)
I’d like to share my experience of passing on help.
Body
4. 上周五放学后，天开始下起了大雨。(when引导时间状语从句)
Last Friday, it began to rain heavily when school was over.
5. 然而，我没有带伞。
However, I didn’t have an umbrella.
6. 我感到既难过又担忧，因为我得步行回家。(have to do sth.)
I felt sad and worried because I had to walk home.
7. 突然，一位善良的女士走到我跟前，把她的雨伞递给了我。(come up to sb.; hand sb. sth.)
Suddenly, a kind woman came up to me and handed me her umbrella.
8. 我被她的善良深深打动了。(被动语态)
I was deeply moved by her kindness.
9. 于是我下定决心要向她学习。(make one’s mind to do sth.)
And I made up my mind to learn from her.
10. 第二天早上，我去了公园散步。(the next morning)
The next morning, I went for a walk in the park.
11. 然后我看到一个小男孩在哭泣。(see sb. doing sth.)
Then I saw a little boy crying.
他告诉我他迷路了。(be lost)
He told me he was lost.
所以我帮他找到了他的父母。(help sb. do sth.)
So I helped him find his parents.
14. 他们感谢我，而我感到非常开心。
They thanked me, and I felt really happy.
Ending
15. 我感到很幸运能拥有这样一段特别的人生经历。(such a/an +adj.+n.单)
I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life.
16. 爱引发更多的爱。(lead to)
Love leads to love.
让我们为他人伸出援手，让我们的世界变得更加美好。(lend a hand to sb.)
Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place.
Example
Passing on help As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life. Even a small act of kindness can make a difference. I’d like to share my experience. Last Friday, it began to rain heavily when school was over. However, I didn’t have an umbrella. I felt sad and worried because I had to walk home. Suddenly, a kind woman came up to me and handed me her umbrella. I was deeply moved by her kindness. And I made up my mind to learn from her. The next morning, I went for a walk in the park. Then I saw a little boy crying. He told me he was lost. So I helped him find his parents. They thanked me, and I felt really happy. I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life. Love leads to love. Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place. 传递帮助 众所周知，在我们的日常生活中，帮助他人以及被他人帮助都非常重要。哪怕是一次小小的善举也能产生影响。我想分享一下我传递帮助的经历。 上周五放学后，天开始下起了大雨。然而，我没有带伞。我感到既难过又担忧，因为我得步行回家。突然，一位善良的女士走到我跟前，把她的雨伞递给了我。我被她的善良深深打动了。于是我下定决心要向她学习。 第二天早上，我去了公园散步。然后我看到一个小男孩在哭泣。他告诉我他迷路了。所以我帮他找到了他的父母。他们感谢我，而我感到非常开心。 我感到很幸运能拥有这样一段特别的人生经历。爱引发更多的爱。让我们为他人伸出援手，让我们的世界变得更加美好。 好词佳句 As we all know 众所周知 make a difference 产生影响；起作用 I’d like to do sth. 想要做某事 begin to do sth. 开始做某事 come up to sb. 靠近某人 be deeply moved 被深深感动 make up one’s mind to do sth. 下定决心做某事 go for a walk 散步 see sb. doing sth. 看见某人正在做某事 lend a hand to sb. /lend sb. a hand 帮助某人；向某人伸出援手
写作模板
As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life. Even a small act of kindness can make a difference. I’d like to share my experience of passing on help. 被帮助的故事：when(时间) where(地点)who(人物) what(起因，经过，结果) 帮助别人的故事：when(时间) where(地点)who(人物) what(起因，经过，结果) I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life. Love leads to love. Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place.Unit4 作文-Passing on help(学生版)
Writing Task
每一份善意都值得被传递，每一份帮助都能温暖你我。假如你是李华，你校英语报正在开展以“Passing on help”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格内容，请用英语写一篇短文，分享一次传递帮助的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
审题指导：
审人称：人称以第__________人称为主；审时态：时态以___________时态为主。
Beginning
众所周知，在我们的日常生活中，帮助他人以及被他人帮助都非常重要。
_________________________________________________________________________________
哪怕是一次小小的善举也能产生影响。(make a difference)
_________________________________________________________________________________
3. 我想分享一下我传递帮助的经历。(I’d like to do sth; pass on)
_________________________________________________________________________________
Body
4. 上周五放学后，天开始下起了大雨。(when引导时间状语从句)
_________________________________________________________________________________
5. 然而，我没有带伞。
_________________________________________________________________________________
6. 我感到既难过又担忧，因为我得步行回家。(have to do sth.)
_________________________________________________________________________________
7. 突然，一位善良的女士走到我跟前，把她的雨伞递给了我。(come up to sb.; hand sb. sth.)
_________________________________________________________________________________
8. 我被她的善良深深打动了。(被动语态)
_________________________________________________________________________________
9. 于是我下定决心要向她学习。(make one’s mind to do sth.)
_________________________________________________________________________________
10. 第二天早上，我去了公园散步。(the next morning)
_________________________________________________________________________________
11. 然后我看到一个小男孩在哭泣。(see sb. doing sth.)
_________________________________________________________________________________
他告诉我他迷路了。(be lost)
_________________________________________________________________________________
所以我帮他找到了他的父母。(help sb. do sth.)
_________________________________________________________________________________
14. 他们感谢我，而我感到非常开心。
_________________________________________________________________________________
Ending
15. 我感到很幸运能拥有这样一段特别的人生经历。(such a/an +adj.+n.单)
_________________________________________________________________________________
16. 爱引发更多的爱。(lead to)
_________________________________________________________________________________
让我们为他人伸出援手，让我们的世界变得更加美好。(lend a hand to sb.)
_________________________________________________________________________________
Example
Passing on help As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life. Even a small act of kindness can make a difference. I’d like to share my experience. Last Friday, it began to rain heavily when school was over. However, I didn’t have an umbrella. I felt sad and worried because I had to walk home. Suddenly, a kind woman came up to me and handed me her umbrella. I was deeply moved by her kindness. And I made up my mind to learn from her. The next morning, I went for a walk in the park. Then I saw a little boy crying. He told me he was lost. So I helped him find his parents. They thanked me, and I felt really happy. I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life. Love leads to love. Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place. 传递帮助 众所周知，在我们的日常生活中，帮助他人以及被他人帮助都非常重要。哪怕是一次小小的善举也能产生影响。我想分享一下我传递帮助的经历。 上周五放学后，天开始下起了大雨。然而，我没有带伞。我感到既难过又担忧，因为我得步行回家。突然，一位善良的女士走到我跟前，把她的雨伞递给了我。我被她的善良深深打动了。于是我下定决心要向她学习。 第二天早上，我去了公园散步。然后我看到一个小男孩在哭泣。他告诉我他迷路了。所以我帮他找到了他的父母。他们感谢我，而我感到非常开心。 我感到很幸运能拥有这样一段特别的人生经历。爱引发更多的爱。让我们为他人伸出援手，让我们的世界变得更加美好。 好词佳句 As we all know 众所周知 make a difference 产生影响；起作用 I’d like to do sth. 想要做某事 begin to do sth. 开始做某事 come up to sb. 靠近某人 be deeply moved 被深深感动 make up one’s mind to do sth. 下定决心做某事 go for a walk 散步 see sb. doing sth. 看见某人正在做某事 lend a hand to sb. /lend sb. a hand 帮助某人；向某人伸出援手
写作模板
As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life. Even a small act of kindness can make a difference. I’d like to share my experience of passing on help. 被帮助的故事：when(时间) where(地点)who(人物) what(起因，经过，结果) 帮助别人的故事：when(时间) where(地点)who(人物) what(起因，经过，结果) I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life. Love leads to love. Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place.(共18张PPT)
Unit 4 Helping out
— writing
教材分析
Lead in
What’s the video about
Helping others.
The circle of goodwill
Writing Task
每一份善意都值得被传递，每一份帮助都能温暖你我。你送出的善意，终会以某种方式回到你的身边或者照亮另一个人的世界。假如你是李华，你校英语报正在开展以“Passing on help”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格内容，请用英语写一篇短文，分享一次传递帮助的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
要点
被帮助经历
时间/地点/人物/经过
5W1H
帮助别人的经历
时间/地点/人物/经过
5W1H
感悟
人称
第一人称
时态
一般过去时
Beginning
Ending
Writing structure
Body
The important of help
The experience of being helped 5W1H
The experience of helping others 5W1H
Lessons
1. 众所周知，在我们的日常生活中，帮助他人以及被他人帮助都非常重要。(动名词doing作主语)
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2. 哪怕是一次小小的善举也能产生影响。(make a difference)
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3. 我想分享一下我传递帮助的经历。(I’d like to do sth; pass on)
——————————————————————————
Beginning
互相帮助的重要性
As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life.
Even a small act of kindness can make a difference.
I’d like to share my experience of passing on help.
As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life. Even a small act of kindness can make a difference. I’d like to share my experience of passing on help.
第一段：开篇点题，引出经历
写作指导1
写作模板
Tip1：学会使用过渡句，引出正文
Body
记叙文六要素：
when(时间)
where(地点)
who(人物)
what(起因，经过，结果)
1. When did it happen
2. Where did it happen
3. What did he/you do？
The experience of being helped 5W1H
The experience of helping others 5W1H
Body
When
last...
Where
at the school gate
Who
a kind woman and I
What
It rained heavily.
How did you feel at first？
The experience of being helped 5W1H
What did she do？
What did you feel at last？
4. 上周五放学后，天开始下起了大雨。(when引导时间状语从句)
—————————————————————————————————
5. 然而，我没有带伞。
—————————————————————————————————
6. 我感到既难过又担忧，因为我得步行回家。(have to do sth.)
—————————————————————————————————
Body
The experience of being helped 5W1H
Last Friday, it began to rain heavily when school was over.
However, I didn’t have an umbrella.
I felt sad and worried because I had to walk home.
7. 突然，一位善良的女士走到我跟前，把她的雨伞递给了我。
(come up to sb.; hand sb. sth.)
—————————————————————————————————
8. 我被她的善良深深打动了。(被动语态)
—————————————————————————————————
9. 于是我下定决心要向她学习。(make one’s mind to do sth.)
—————————————————————————————————
Body
The experience of being helped 5W1H
Suddenly, a kind woman came up to me and handed me her umbrella.
I was deeply moved by her kindness.
And I made up my mind to learn from her.
Tip2：用5W1H描述一个故事/经历
Body
When
the next morning
Where
in the park
Who
a little boy and I
What
The boy was crying.
What happened to the little boy
The experience of being helped 5W1H
What did you do？
What did you feel ？
10. 第二天早上，我去了公园散步。(the next morning)
—————————————————————————————————
11. 然后我看到一个小男孩在哭泣。(see sb. doing sth.)
—————————————————————————————————
12. 他告诉我他迷路了。(be lost)
—————————————————————————————————
13. 所以我帮他找到了他的父母。(help sb. do sth.)
—————————————————————————————————
14. 他们感谢我，而我感到非常开心。
—————————————————————————————————
Body
The next morning, I went for a walk in the park.
Then I saw a little boy crying.
They thanked me, and I felt really happy.
The experience of helping others 5W1H
So I helped him find his parents.
He told me he was lost.
写作指导2
第二段：被帮助和帮助别人的经历
Tip1：用5W1H描述一个故事/经历
Tip2：按时间顺序描述事情的经过
Tip3：正确使用过渡句，衔接两个故事。
Last Friday, it began to rain heavily when school was over. However, I didn’t have an umbrella. I felt sad and worried because I had to walk home. Suddenly, a kind woman came up to me and handed me her umbrella. I was deeply moved by her kindness. And I made up my mind to learn from her.
The next morning, I went for a walk in the park. Then I saw a little boy crying. He told me he was lost. So I helped him find his parents. They thanked me, and I felt really happy.
Ending
15. 我感到很幸运能拥有这样一段特别的人生经历。(such a/an +adj.+n.单)
——————————————————————————
16. 爱引发更多的爱。(lead to)
——————————————————————————
17. 让我们为他人伸出援手，让我们的世界变得更加美好。(lend a hand to sb.)
——————————————————————————
感悟
I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life.
Love leads to love.
Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place.
I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life. Love leads to love. Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place.
写作指导3
第三段：感悟
写作模板
Passing on help
As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life. Even a small act of kindness can make a difference. I’d like to share my experience.
Last Friday, it began to rain heavily when school was over. However, I didn’t have an umbrella. I felt sad and worried because I had to walk home. Suddenly, a kind woman came up to me and handed me her umbrella. I was deeply moved by her kindness. And I made up my mind to learn from her.
The next morning, I went for a walk in the park. Then I saw a little boy crying. He told me he was lost. So I helped him find his parents. They thanked me, and I felt really happy.
I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life. Love leads to love. Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place.
Example
PracticeUnit4 作文-To be a good team leader(学生仿写版)
Writing Task
每一份善意都值得被传递，每一份帮助都能温暖你我。假如你是李华，你校英语报正在开展以“Passing on help”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下表格内容，请用英语写一篇短文，分享一次传递帮助的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
Passing on help As we all know, helping others and being helped are both important in our daily life. Even a small act of kindness can make a difference. I’d like to share my experience. Last Friday, it began to rain heavily when school was over. However, I didn’t have an umbrella. I felt sad and worried because I had to walk home. Suddenly, a kind woman came up to me and handed me her umbrella. I was deeply moved by her kindness. And I made up my mind to learn from her. The next morning, I went for a walk in the park. Then I saw a little boy crying. He told me he was lost. So I helped him find his parents. They thanked me, and I felt really happy. I feel lucky to have such a special experience in life. Love leads to love. Let’s lend a hand to others and make our world a better place. 传递帮助 众所周知，在我们的日常生活中，帮助他人以及被他人帮助都非常重要。哪怕是一次小小的善举也能产生影响。我想分享一下我传递帮助的经历。 上周五放学后，天开始下起了大雨。然而，我没有带伞。我感到既难过又担忧，因为我得步行回家。突然，一位善良的女士走到我跟前，把她的雨伞递给了我。我被她的善良深深打动了。于是我下定决心要向她学习。 第二天早上，我去了公园散步。然后我看到一个小男孩在哭泣。他告诉我他迷路了。所以我帮他找到了他的父母。他们感谢我，而我感到非常开心。 我感到很幸运能拥有这样一段特别的人生经历。爱引发更多的爱。让我们为他人伸出援手，让我们的世界变得更加美好。
The important of help
The experience of being helped 5W1H
The experience of helping others 5W1H
第三段
Lessons

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