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Unit5 作文-A Nature Explorer(学生仿写版)
Writing Task
人们对大自然充满好奇，不停地探索大自然中不为人知的精彩故事。假如你是李华，学校英语社团正在征集以“A story about a nature explorer”为主题的文章。请你写一篇80词左右的英语短文投稿，讲述袁隆平和杂交水稻的故事，并发表你的评价。
Yuan Longping: A Nature Explorer Nature is full of unknown secrets. And nature explorers make every effort to unlock these secrets. Yuan Longping is one of them. He is called “the father of hybrid rice”. In the 1960s, many people in China didn’t have enough food. So Yuan Longping decided to find a way to produce more rice. He explored wild rice species to develop hybrid rice. However, Yuan met many difficulties. His research conditions were very poor. What’s worse, his experiments failed again and again. Many scientists doubted if it could work. But he didn’t give up and learned from his mistakes. To carry out his research, Yuan and his team studied thousands of rice plants in fields. Finally, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice in 1970. It increased the rice production greatly and solved the food problem in China. In my opinion, Yuan Longping is such a great scientist. He carried out his lifelong exploration in rice fields. He shows us that we should face challenges bravely and keep trying. 袁隆平：一位自然探索者 大自然充满了未知的奥秘。而自然探索者们则竭尽全力去揭开这些秘密。袁隆平就是其中的一位。他被称为“杂交水稻之父”。 在 20 世纪 60 年代，中国有许多人没有足够的食物。因此，袁隆平决定寻找一种方法来增加水稻产量。他探索野生水稻品种，以培育杂交水稻。然而，袁隆平遇到了许多困难。他的研究条件非常艰苦。更糟糕的是，他的实验一次又一次地失败。许多科学家怀疑这是否可行。但他没有放弃，从错误中吸取教训。为了进行研究，袁隆平和他的团队在田间研究了成千上万株水稻。最终，他在 1970 年成功培育出了杂交水稻。它极大地提高了水稻产量，解决了中国的粮食问题。 在我看来，袁隆平是一位如此杰出的科学家。他在稻田中进行了他一生的探索。他告诉我们，我们应该勇敢地面对挑战，并不断努力尝试。
Basic information
Difficulties&results
第三段
CommentsUnit5 作文-A nature explorer(教师版)
Writing Task
人们对大自然充满好奇，不停地探索大自然中不为人知的精彩故事。假如你是李华，学校英语社团正在征集以“A story about a nature explorer”为主题的文章。请你写一篇80词左右的英语短文投稿，讲述袁隆平和杂交水稻的故事，并发表你的评价。
basic information Yuan Longping, “the father of hybrid rice”
difficulties In the 1960s, people didn’t have enough food. His research conditions were very poor. His experiments failed many times.
results develop hybrid rice in 1970 increase the rice production greatly
审题指导：
审人称：人称以第_____三_____人称为主；审时态：时态以_____一般过去______时态为主。
Beginning
大自然充满了未知(unknown)的奥秘。(be full of)。
Nature is full of unknown secrets.
2. 而自然探索者们竭尽全力去揭开这些奥秘。(make every effort)
And nature explorers make every effort to unlock these secrets.
3. 袁隆平就是其中之一。
Yuan Longping is one of them.
4. 他被称为“杂交水稻之父”。(be called)
He is called “the father of hybrid rice”.
Body
5. 在 20 世纪 60 年代，中国有许多人没有足够的食物。(in the 1960s)
In the 1960s, many people in China didn’t have enough food.
6. 所以袁隆平决定寻找一种能生产更多水稻的方法。(decide to do sth)
So Yuan Longping decided to find a way to produce more rice.
7. 他探索野生稻品种，以培育杂交水稻。(to do 表目的)
He explored wild rice species to develop hybrid rice.
8. 然而，袁遇到了许多困难。
However, Yuan met many difficulties.
9. 他的研究条件非常艰苦。
His research conditions were very poor.
10. 更糟糕的是，他的实验(experiment)一次又一次地失败。(what’s worse; again and again)
What’s worse, his experiments failed again and again.
11. 许多科学家都怀疑这是否可行。（if引导宾语从句）
Many scientists doubted if it could work.
12. 但他并没有放弃，而是从自己的错误中吸取教训。(learn from)
But he didn’t give up and learned from his mistakes.
13. 为了开展研究，袁隆平和团队在田里研究了成千上万株水稻植株。(carry out)
To carry out his research, Yuan Longping and his team studied thousands of rice plants in fields.
14. 最终，他在 1970 年成功培育出了杂交水稻。(succeed in doing sth.)
Finally, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice in 1970.
它极大地提高(increase)了水稻的产量(production)，解决了中国的粮食问题。
It increased the rice production greatly and solved the food problem in China.
Ending
16. 在我看来，袁隆平是一位非常杰出的科学家。(such a/an +adj.+n.单)
In my opinion, Yuan Longping is such a great scientist.
17. 他在稻田里进行了他一生的探索。(carry out)
He carried out his lifelong exploration in rice fields.
18. 他向我们展示，我们应该勇敢地面对挑战，并不断努力尝试。
He shows us that we should face challenges bravely and keep trying.
Example
Yuan Longping: A Nature Explorer Nature is full of unknown secrets. And nature explorers make every effort to unlock these secrets. Yuan Longping is one of them. He is called “the father of hybrid rice”. In the 1960s, many people in China didn’t have enough food. So Yuan Longping decided to find a way to produce more rice. He explored wild rice species to develop hybrid rice. However, Yuan met many difficulties. His research conditions were very poor. What’s worse, his experiments failed again and again. Many scientists doubted if it could work. But he didn’t give up and learned from his mistakes. To carry out his research, Yuan and his team studied thousands of rice plants in fields. Finally, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice in 1970. It increased the rice production greatly and solved the food problem in China. In my opinion, Yuan Longping is such a great scientist. He carried out his lifelong exploration in rice fields. He shows us that we should face challenges bravely and keep trying. 袁隆平：一位自然探索者 大自然充满了未知的奥秘。而自然探索者们则竭尽全力去揭开这些秘密。袁隆平就是其中的一位。他被称为“杂交水稻之父”。 在 20 世纪 60 年代，中国有许多人没有足够的食物。因此，袁隆平决定寻找一种方法来增加水稻产量。他探索野生水稻品种，以培育杂交水稻。然而，袁隆平遇到了许多困难。他的研究条件非常艰苦。更糟糕的是，他的实验一次又一次地失败。许多科学家怀疑这是否可行。但他没有放弃，从错误中吸取教训。为了进行研究，袁隆平和他的团队在田间研究了成千上万株水稻。最终，他在 1970 年成功培育出了杂交水稻。它极大地提高了水稻产量，解决了中国的粮食问题。 在我看来，袁隆平是一位如此杰出的科学家。他在稻田中进行了他一生的探索。他告诉我们，我们应该勇敢地面对挑战，并不断努力尝试。 好词佳句 be full of 充满 make every effort to do sth. 竭尽全力做某事 decide to do sth. 决定做某事 a way to... 一种......的方法 what’s worse 更糟糕的是 again and again 一又一次地 give up 放弃 carry out 实施；执行 thousands of 成千上万 succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事 in my opinion 依我看来 such a/an adj. n.单 如此......Yuan Longping: A Nature Explorer
Nature is full of unknown secrets. And nature explorers make every effort to unlock these secrets. Yuan Longping is one of them. He carried out his lifelong exploration in rice fields.
In the 1960s, many people in China didn’t have enough food. So Yuan Longping decided to find a way to produce more rice. He explored wild rice species to create hybrid rice. However, Yuan met many difficulties. His research conditions were very poor, and many scientists doubted his ideas. What’s worse, he tried many times but his experiments failed in the end. But he didn’t give up and learned from his mistakes. To carry out his research, Yuan and his team studied thousands of rice plants in fields. Finally, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice in 1970. It helped solve China’s food problem.
In my opinion, Yuan Longping is such a great scientist. As “the father of hybrid rice”, he made great contributions to China and the world.(共16张PPT)
Unit5 Looking into nature
---Writing
教材分析
Lead in
What’s the video about
Nature.
Writing Task
人们对大自然充满好奇，不停地探索大自然中不为人知的精彩故事。假如你是李华，学校英语社团正在征集以“A story about a nature explorer”为主题的文章。请你写一篇80词左右的英语短文投稿，讲述袁隆平和杂交水稻的故事，并发表你的评价。
basic information Yuan Longping, “the father of hybrid rice”
difficulties In the 1960s, people didn’t have enough food.
His research conditions were very poor.
His experiments failed many times.
results develop hybrid rice in 1970
increase the rice production greatly
要点
人称
第三人称
时态
一般过去时
Beginning
Ending
Writing structure
Body
basic information 基础信息
difficulties&results 遇到的困难和成果
comments 评价
basic information
1. 大自然充满了未知(unknown)的奥秘。(be full of)
——————————————————————————
2. 而自然探索者们竭尽全力去揭开这些奥秘。(make every effort)
——————————————————————————
3. 袁隆平就是其中之一。
——————————————————————————
4. 他被称为“杂交水稻之父”。(be called)
——————————————————————————
Beginning
basic information
Nature is full of unknown secrets.
And nature explorers make every effort to unlock these secrets.
Yuan Longping is one of them.
He is called “the father of hybrid rice”.
Nature is full of unknown secrets. And nature explorers make every effort to unlock these secrets. Yuan Longping is one of them. He is called “the father of hybrid rice”.
第一段：开篇介绍基本信息
写作指导1
写作模板
Body
difficulties&results
5. 在 20 世纪 60 年代，中国有许多人没有足够的食物。(in the 1960s)
——————————————————————————
6. 所以袁隆平决定寻找一种能生产更多水稻的方法。(decide to do sth)
——————————————————————————
7. 他探索野生稻品种，以培育杂交水稻。(to do 表目的)
——————————————————————————
In the 1960s, many people in China didn’t have enough food.
So Yuan Longping decided to find a way to produce more rice.
He explored wild rice species to develop hybrid rice.
Body
difficulties&results
8. 然而，袁遇到了许多困难。
——————————————————————————
9. 他的研究条件非常艰苦。
——————————————————————————
10. 更糟糕的是，他的实验(experiment)一次又一次地失败。
——————————————————————————
11. 许多科学家都怀疑这是否可行。（if引导宾语从句）
——————————————————————————
However, Yuan met many difficulties.
His research conditions were very poor.
What’s worse, his experiments failed again and again.
Many scientists doubted if it could work.
Body
difficulties&results
12. 但他并没有放弃，而是从自己的错误中吸取教训。(learn from)
——————————————————————————
13. 为了开展研究，袁隆平和团队在田里研究了成千上万株水稻植株。
——————————————————————————
14. 最终，他在 1970 年成功培育出了杂交水稻。(succeed in doing sth.)
——————————————————————————
15. 它极大地提高(increase)了水稻的产量(production)，解决了中国的粮食问题。
——————————————————————————
But he didn’t give up and learned from his mistakes.
To carry out his research, Yuan Longping and his team studied thousands of rice plants in fields.
Finally, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice in 1970.
It increased the rice production greatly and solved the food problem in China.
写作指导2
第二段：袁隆平培育杂交水稻的经历
Tip：描述一件事情的经过，用时间顺序
In the 1960s, many people in China didn’t have enough food. So Yuan Longping decided to find a way to produce more rice. He explored wild rice species to develop hybrid rice. However, Yuan met many difficulties. His research conditions were very poor. What’s worse, his experiments failed again and again. Many scientists doubted if it could work. But he didn’t give up and learned from his mistakes. To carry out his research, Yuan and his team studied thousands of rice plants in fields. Finally, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice in 1970. It increased the rice production greatly and solved the food problem in China.
Ending
16. 在我看来，袁隆平是一位非常杰出的科学家。(such a/an +adj.+n.单)
——————————————————————————
17. 他在稻田里进行了他一生的探索。(carry out)
——————————————————————————
18. 他向我们展示，我们应该勇敢地面对挑战，并不断努力尝试。
——————————————————————————
comments
In my opinion, Yuan Longping is such a great scientist.
He carried out his lifelong exploration in rice fields.
He shows us that we should face challenges bravely and keep trying.
In my opinion, Yuan Longping is such a great scientist. He carried out his lifelong exploration in rice fields. He shows us that we should face challenges bravely and keep trying.
写作指导3
第三段：感悟
写作模板
Yuan Longping: A Nature Explorer
Nature is full of unknown secrets. And nature explorers make every effort to unlock these secrets. Yuan Longping is one of them. He is called “the father of hybrid rice”.
In the 1960s, many people in China didn’t have enough food. So Yuan Longping decided to find a way to produce more rice. He explored wild rice species to develop hybrid rice. However, Yuan met many difficulties. His research conditions were very poor. What’s worse, his experiments failed again and again. Many scientists doubted if it could work. But he didn’t give up and learned from his mistakes. To carry out his research, Yuan and his team studied thousands of rice plants in fields. Finally, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice in 1970. It greatly increased the rice production and solved the food problem in China.
In my opinion, Yuan Longping is such a great scientist. He carried out his lifelong exploration in rice fields. He shows us that we should face challenges bravely and keep trying.
Example
PracticeUnit5 作文-A nature explorer(学生版)
Writing Task
人们对大自然充满好奇，不停地探索大自然中不为人知的精彩故事。假如你是李华，学校英语社团正在征集以“A story about a nature explorer”为主题的文章。请你写一篇80词左右的英语短文投稿，讲述袁隆平和杂交水稻的故事，并发表你的评价。
basic information Yuan Longping, “the father of hybrid rice”
difficulties In the 1960s, people didn’t have enough food. His research conditions were very poor. His experiments failed many times.
results develop hybrid rice in 1970 increase the rice production greatly
审题指导：
审人称：人称以第__________人称为主；审时态：时态以___________时态为主。
Beginning
大自然充满了未知(unknown)的奥秘。(be full of)。
______________________________________________________________________________
而自然探索者们竭尽全力去揭开这些奥秘。(make every effort)
______________________________________________________________________________
3. 袁隆平就是其中之一。
______________________________________________________________________________
4. 他被称为“杂交水稻之父”。(be called)
______________________________________________________________________________
Body
5. 在 20 世纪 60 年代，中国有许多人没有足够的食物。(in the 1960s)
______________________________________________________________________________
6. 所以袁隆平决定寻找一种能生产更多水稻的方法。(decide to do sth)
______________________________________________________________________________
7. 他探索野生稻品种，以培育杂交水稻。(to do 表目的)
______________________________________________________________________________
8. 然而，袁遇到了许多困难。
______________________________________________________________________________
9. 他的研究条件非常艰苦。
______________________________________________________________________________
10. 更糟糕的是，他的实验(experiment)一次又一次地失败。(what’s worse; again and again)
______________________________________________________________________________
11. 许多科学家都怀疑这是否可行。（if引导宾语从句）
______________________________________________________________________________
12. 但他并没有放弃，而是从自己的错误中吸取教训。(learn from)
______________________________________________________________________________
13. 为了开展研究，袁隆平和团队在田里研究了成千上万株水稻植株。(carry out)
______________________________________________________________________________
14. 最终，他在 1970 年成功培育出了杂交水稻。(succeed in doing sth.)
______________________________________________________________________________
它极大地提高(increase)了水稻的产量(production)，解决了中国的粮食问题。
______________________________________________________________________________
Ending
16. 在我看来，袁隆平是一位非常杰出的科学家。(such a/an +adj.+n.单)
______________________________________________________________________________
17. 他在稻田里进行了他一生的探索。(carry out)
______________________________________________________________________________
18. 他向我们展示，我们应该勇敢地面对挑战，并不断努力尝试。
______________________________________________________________________________
Example
Yuan Longping: A Nature Explorer Nature is full of unknown secrets. And nature explorers make every effort to unlock these secrets. Yuan Longping is one of them. He is called “the father of hybrid rice”. In the 1960s, many people in China didn’t have enough food. So Yuan Longping decided to find a way to produce more rice. He explored wild rice species to develop hybrid rice. However, Yuan met many difficulties. His research conditions were very poor. What’s worse, his experiments failed again and again. Many scientists doubted if it could work. But he didn’t give up and learned from his mistakes. To carry out his research, Yuan and his team studied thousands of rice plants in fields. Finally, he succeeded in developing hybrid rice in 1970. It increased the rice production greatly and solved the food problem in China. In my opinion, Yuan Longping is such a great scientist. He carried out his lifelong exploration in rice fields. He shows us that we should face challenges bravely and keep trying. 袁隆平：一位自然探索者 大自然充满了未知的奥秘。而自然探索者们则竭尽全力去揭开这些秘密。袁隆平就是其中的一位。他被称为“杂交水稻之父”。 在 20 世纪 60 年代，中国有许多人没有足够的食物。因此，袁隆平决定寻找一种方法来增加水稻产量。他探索野生水稻品种，以培育杂交水稻。然而，袁隆平遇到了许多困难。他的研究条件非常艰苦。更糟糕的是，他的实验一次又一次地失败。许多科学家怀疑这是否可行。但他没有放弃，从错误中吸取教训。为了进行研究，袁隆平和他的团队在田间研究了成千上万株水稻。最终，他在 1970 年成功培育出了杂交水稻。它极大地提高了水稻产量，解决了中国的粮食问题。 在我看来，袁隆平是一位如此杰出的科学家。他在稻田中进行了他一生的探索。他告诉我们，我们应该勇敢地面对挑战，并不断努力尝试。 好词佳句 be full of 充满 make every effort to do sth. 竭尽全力做某事 decide to do sth. 决定做某事 a way to... 一种......的方法 what’s worse 更糟糕的是 again and again 一又一次地 give up 放弃 carry out 实施；执行 thousands of 成千上万 succeed in doing sth. 成功做某事 in my opinion 依我看来 such a/an adj. n.单 如此......

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