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2025-2026学年八年级下册英语期末复习考点培优人教版（新教材）
专题18 读写综合
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
A．回答问题
请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，回答问题。
Different people have different hobbies around the world. Some people like collecting things, and others like reading.
Bruce’s hobby is collecting stamps. He collects some of them from different countries. One of his favourite stamps is from China. It’s about the Great Wall. He thinks he can learn a lot about history and culture from stamps.
Peter is fond of making scrapbooks(剪贴簿). He collects many pictures in his scrapbooks. Pictures of animals and plants are his favourite. He enjoys doing this in his free time. Sometimes he loves to visit the nature parks to watch animals and plants. He thinks it’s relaxing to get close to the nature.
Reading is Carrie’s favourite. She can get lots of fun from reading. In fact, she is a bookworm (书迷). And she also likes to collect books. In her study, she has more than one hundred books. Reading can also help with her schoolwork, especially English. Through reading, she learns not only what correct English sentences are like but also history and culture about different countries, which can help improve her English writing.
As for me, I love reading in my free time too. What about you
1．Where does one of Bruce’s favourite stamps come from, China or Canada
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2．What kind of picture does Peter like best
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3．Why does Peter love to visit the nature park
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4．How many books are there in Carrie’s study
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5．What does the writer love doing in his free time
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6．假设你所在的年级正在举行“健康的爱好、快乐地生活”为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根据一下思维导图的提示用英文写一篇为“My hobbies”的短文，介绍自己的爱好。
注意: (1)不能照抄原文; 不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和学生的真实姓名。
(2) 语句连贯, 词数80 左右。作文的标题已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Hobbies
I have many hobbies
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A．回答问题
请仔细阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答五个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、信息完整切题。
March is the month to learn from Lei Feng in China. Lei Feng is probably one of the most famous Chinese soldiers. He helped many people during his 22 years of life. In 1963, Mr Mao called on the nation to learn from Lei Feng, and named 5 March as “Lei Feng Day”.
Once, a group of Malaysian (马来西亚的) students from Changsha Social Work College joined their Chinese schoolmates as volunteers. They served passengers at Changsha Railway Station. They carefully helped passengers get on the train and book tickets.
“I was excited and proud when people called me the ‘Living Lei Feng’! That was the highest praise for me as a volunteer!” said Lan Zhicong, a student from Malaysia. He learnt about Lei Feng’s stories when he was in Malaysia. After coming to Changsha, Lei Feng’s hometown, he became the “Living Lei Feng” and continued to pass “the spirit of Lei Feng” with his actions.
Changsha Social Work College held an activity called “Learn from Lei Feng in Lei Feng’s hometown”. The students, like Lan Zhicong, truly enjoyed being volunteers. They realized volunteer work brought joy to both others and themselves.
Let’s all carry the spirit of Lei Feng forward and make the world a better place.
7．When is “Lei Feng Day”
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8．Did the Malaysian students volunteer at the college or at the railway station
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9．How did Lan Zhicong feel when people called him the “Living Lei Feng”
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10．Where is Lei Feng’s hometown
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11．What did the students realize about volunteer work
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12．B．书面表达
志愿服务既是一种行动，也是一种爱的传递。假如你是李华，你所在的学校举办以“Pass Our Love”为主题的演讲比赛，请你根据以下思维导图的要点写一篇英文演讲言稿。
注意：
1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
2.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯，词数80左右。
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua. It’s my great honor to give a speech about volunteering.
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A．回答问题
Many people worry too much about things that might happen in the future or think back again and again about what they did before. This is what we call “overthinking (精神内耗)”. The longer you think about something, the more tired and stressed you may be. In fact, there is no need to think too much. Can we do something to stop overthinking
Ethan, a 35-year-old salesman, often found himself staying awake at night because he often replayed (回想) a talk with his boss in his mind. “Am I right Is there anything wrong with the talk ” One night in bed, he noticed that his body was under great stress and it was hard for him to breathe. He decided to get out of bed and started doing sit-ups. After a few minutes, he felt less nervous. As he did more, he felt greatly relaxed.
Next time you start worrying too much or getting nervous, holding something cold or warm can also help you feel better quickly. “4-7-8 breathing” is another useful method (方法). That is to spend four seconds taking a deep breath, hold the breath for seven seconds and then breathe out for eight seconds. Soon, you’ll find your mind is peaceful again.
13．How will you feel if you think about something for a long time
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14．In the writer’s opinion, is it necessary (必要的) for us to overthink
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15．Why did Ethan find himself staying awake at night
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16．How did Ethan relax himself at night
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17．What does “7” mean in the “4-7-8 breathing” method
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B．书面表达
18．请根据要求完成短文写作。
假设你是李华，阅读上述文章后，你想起了你曾经也有过精神内耗的情况，随后你运用了适当的方式得以缓解。你希望把你的经历和文章没提到的其他应对精神内耗的方法分享给你的英国笔友 Alan，并期待他回信分享他的经历和应对方式。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，写一封电子邮件给他。
注意：（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现考生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数100左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Alan,
I have read an article about overthinking, which makes me think of one of my experiences. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best,
Li Hua
A．回答问题
请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答五个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、信息完整切题。
One day, Fred’s aunt sent him a new spade (铁锹) and a small box of seeds (种子). As soon as he got them, he went out to the garden to plant the seeds.
His sister Jane went with him. As he dug, she stood near him and talked to him with the box of seeds in her hand. While Jane was speaking, she dropped the box of seeds on the ground by mistake. All the seeds fell out. Jane was afraid and said sorry to Fred, but Fred didn’t speak to her.
“Oh, Fred,” she cried. “Why don’t you speak to me ”
Fred answered, “I want to wait till I count to ten.”
“Count to ten ” asked Jane. “Why do you count to ten ”
“Mum once told me to count to ten before I spoke if I felt angry. I know that I was often angry with you, and I want to correct myself and do the right thing,” said Fred.
“Oh, Fred, how nice you are! It was very careless of me to let the seeds fall, but I have collected them all again. Here they are.”
The seeds were planted, and every day Fred and Jane came to watch them grow. At last, a lot of small green plants appeared above the ground. They soon grew larger and had pretty flowers, making the children very happy.
Before you speak something hurtful too fast in anger, count to ten, and if you are still angry, count again.
19．What did Fred do after he got the seeds
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20．Why did Jane say sorry to Fred
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21．Who suggested Fred count to ten
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22．Why did Fred want to correct himself
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23．According to the passage, what can you do if you are angry
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B．书面表达
24．请根据要求完成短文写作。
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Lily最近心情不太好，看待问题很焦虑和消极，睡眠也很差。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，给她写一封信，给她一些建议，帮助她调整好心态。
要求：(1)短文必须包括思维导图提示中所有内容，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
(3)词数80左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lily,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in a bad mood these days.
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Don’t be afraid of having bad moods. Learn to find a proper way to relieve them and grow happily. I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
第一节 阅读下面短文，根据短文内容回答问题。
Nature has many wonderful wonders. Qomolangma is the highest mountain in the world. It lies on the border of China and Nepal. It is very high and difficult to climb. Many climbers risk their lives to reach the top. They want to show the spirit of never giving up.
The Grand Canyon is another amazing wonder. It was formed by the Colorado River over millions of years. The canyon is very deep and wide. The colorful rocks on its walls tell the earth’s history. People from all over the world come to visit it.
Victoria Falls is also one of the greatest natural wonders. It lies on the Zambezi River. The water falls down from hundreds of meters high, making loud sounds and heavy mist. It looks especially wonderful on sunny days, as rainbows often appear above it. Every year, many tourists come to enjoy its powerful beauty.
The Great Barrier Reef is famous for its beautiful corals and sea life. It is the largest coral reef system in the world. However, it is now in great danger because of climate change. We should take action to protect it.
The Amazon Rainforest is the largest rainforest. It is home to millions of species. It is called “the lungs of the earth” because it provides us with oxygen. But deforestation (滥伐森林) is harming it.
These wonders are important. Let’s love and protect them for our future.
25．Where is Qomolangma
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26．How can we know about the earth’s history
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27．Is the Great Barrier Reef in great danger now
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28．Why is the Amazon Rainforest called “the lungs of the earth”
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29．Which natural wonders would you like to visit most, and why
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第二节 根据要求完成短文写作。
30．假设你是李华，你的深圳笔友张明计划假期来长沙游玩，想找一处既能亲近自然、放松身心，又能缓解学业压力、调节情绪的好去处。请你给他写一封信，结合以下表格内容要点，介绍长沙一处你喜欢的自然景观 (如岳麓山、橘子洲 、松雅湖等)，分享它的游玩价值，并说说你平常用什么方式放松。
要点：
What is the place ...
Where is the place ...
What is it like one of the most beautiful places, ...
Why do you like this place get close to nature, ...
How do you relax yourself in your free time take photos, do sports, ...
参考词汇：橘子洲Orange Isle
要求：
·语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰；
·不得出现真实姓名、班名和校名；
·词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Zhang Ming，
I’m so glad to hear you’re coming to Changsha!
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I hope you will have a wonderful time here!
Yours,
Li Hua
A．回答问题
请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答5个问题，要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整切题。
Different people have different hobbies. For example, some people like reading, some people like swimming and other people like collecting something. I have many hobbies, such as dancing, skating and travelling. I used to read books in my free time. I liked reading because I could learn much by reading. At that time, reading was part of my life. Every day, I spent most of my free time reading books, newspapers and magazines. At night, I could hardly get to sleep without a novel in my hand. But later I found I could only learn from books. I couldn’t get knowledge from others. I needed a change. Travelling is my hobby now. I can visit many different places by travelling. I can learn a lot about people, geography and history. It’s very interesting. I have many good friends. They all have their hobbies. Ann studies very hard. Her hobby is reading all kinds of books. Tony loves working with his hands, and his hobby is gardening. He usually plants flowers and trees in his yard. Judy is a quiet girl. She likes knitting (编织).She always knits sweaters for her dogs. We have different hobbies, but we are all good friends.
31．Why did the writer like reading
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32．How could the writer get to sleep at night
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33．What can the writer do by travelling
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34．List hobbies of the writer’s friends. (at least two)
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35．What’s the main idea of the passage
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B．书面表达
36．在紧张的学习之余,学生应该培养并坚持一项兴趣爱好。请围绕下面的三个问题，用英文介绍一项自己的兴趣爱好。
注意:
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
（3）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A hobby I stick to
I have a lot of hobbies, but my favourite one is
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第一节 任务型阅读
Maybe You Should Learn to Relax!
These days, many parents push their children into learning more skills. They believe it helps their kids to better compete in life. However, such a busy life can put students under great pressure.
The Taylors are a typical American family. Life for Cathy Taylor’s three children is very busy. “On most days after school,” Cathy says, “I take one of my two boys to basketball practice and my daughter to football training. Then I have to take my other son to piano lessons. Maybe I could cut out a few of their activities, but I believe these activities are important for my children’s future. I really want them to be successful.” However, the tired children don’t get home until after 7:00 p.m. They have a quick dinner, and then it’s time for homework.
Linda Miller, a mother of three, knows all about such stress. “In some families, competition starts very young and continues until the kids get older,” she says. “Mothers send their small kids to all kinds of classes. And they are always comparing them with other children. It’s crazy. I don’t think that’s fair. Why don’t they just let their kids be kids People shouldn’t push their kids so hard.”
Doctors say too much pressure is not good for a child’s development. Dr. Alice Green says all these activities can cause a lot of stress for children. “Kids should have time to relax and think of themselves, too. Although it’s normal to want successful children, it’s even more important to have happy children.”
37．The main problem mentioned in the passage is ________. (限填1词)
38．Fill in the blanks according to the passage.
Name Number of kids Opinions on kids’ activities
Cathy Taylor 3 The activities are important for kids’ future. She really ________. (不超过5个词)
Linda Miller 3 Let kids be kids. ________. (不超过5个词)
39．What should kids have according to Dr. Alice Green (不超过10词)
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40．In your opinion, what should parents do to help their children (不超过15词)
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第二节 书面表达
41．最新健康调查结果令人揪心：学生近视率居高不下，低龄化态势加剧。校园中，戴眼镜的孩子比比皆是，近视严重威胁着学生的健康成长。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。
主要原因 1. 常熬夜，睡眠不足
2. 长时间做作业、用手机或电脑
预防方法 1. 做眼保健操
2. 多进行户外活动
你的观点 1. 好的用眼习惯
2. ……
注意：
1 词数80左右，首段已经给出，不记入总词数；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥；
3. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
4. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
(参考词汇：近视的shortsighted, 视力eyesight, 保护protect)
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A．回答问题
请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，回答五个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、信息完整切题。
Do you think you should only try to be happy Think again! Unhappy feelings like sadness or anger can actually be helpful. Scientists say these emotions are good for you. When you feel sad, maybe because of a low score, you might not want to do anything. But this rest helps you recover (恢复). By pushing you to clear your mind, sadness allows for better memory and more careful thought. For example, after a hard and sad day, having a rest helps you recover your energy and get ready for future challenges. If you feel angry, like when your phone breaks, you might want to make it work again at once. Anger drives you to act fast and solve problems quickly. Before a big test, you might feel nervous. This feeling makes you notice possible risks and study harder. It also helps you see things more clearly, so you don’t miss important details. Boredom (无聊) happens when there is nothing exciting. But it’s important. It can push you to try something new, like a hobby or a different way of learning. So next time you feel sad, angry, nervous, or bored, remember that your feelings are trying to help you! They are not bad—they are your helpers. Pay attention to them, and you will do better in life.
42．What can be helpful for people according to scientists
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43．How does sadness allow for better memory and more careful thought
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44．What drives you to take action and solve problems quickly
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45．When might people feel nervous according to the passage
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46．Why is boredom important
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B．书面表达(本题10分)
47．根据要求完成短文写作。
假设你是李明，近期，你的学校正在开展以“如何应对坏情绪”为主题的演讲活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇演讲稿，表达自己的想法。
注意：(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
How to Deal with Bad Feelings
By Li Ming
Emotions are like a mirror, reflecting our thoughts and feelings.
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That’s all. Thank you!
A．回答问题
Emotion Management
Emotions act as our body’s warning sign. Positive emotions help us stay healthy, but negative ones are bad for our health. Studies show that long-term stress or worry may harm the heart, stomach, and brain. And it even weakens the body’s immune system (免疫系统). For example, too much worry can cause stomachaches, and stress often makes people forget things easily.
Positive emotions work like a protective umbrella. Research shows that people with positive emotions may have better heart health. What’s more, happiness improves our immune system and helps reduce pain. Scientists have found that happy people get fewer colds and feel less sick when they do. This shows that positive emotions are good medicine.
Negative emotions can be like dark clouds in our minds, but don’t worry—there are ways to manage them. First, take deep breaths if you feel upset. This will help your body relax quickly. Next, do some sports like running or playing ball games to reduce stress. Besides, share your feelings with people you trust, like parents or close friends. They might have great ideas for you! Finally, listen to your favourite songs to be happy. These methods can help calm your mind and manage negative emotions well.
Just like cleaning up old photos helps your phone work better, managing emotions keeps your mind clear. Don’t hide your emotions. Learning to live with them well is the secret to health.
48．What do positive emotions help us do
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49．Which often makes people forget things easily, stress or worry
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50．Who may get fewer colds and feel less sick from the passage
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51．How can you reduce stress according to the passage
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52．Why is managing emotions important
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B．书面表达
53．同学们，初中的学习生活压力攀升，适当的放松很重要。你会选择什么样的调节方式，是观看电影，还是听音乐、享受美食和运动或是其他呢？请以“Ways to Keep a Balanced Life”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，用英文写一篇短文。
Ways to Keep a Balanced Life Since I entered Grade 8, I have been facing more pressure and challenges.
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A．回答问题
There was a boy who lived in China long ago. His name is Ma Liang. He loved to draw, but he didn’t have a brush. He was too poor to buy one. He often used sticks to draw pictures on the ground. He said to himself, “If I have a brush, I don’t need to draw on the ground with sticks anymore.”
One night, when Ma Liang was asleep, he had a dream. In his dream, he met an old man. The old man gave him a magic brush, and said to him, “I give you a magic brush. You can use it to help the poor in your village.”
The next morning, when he woke up, he found a real brush in his hands. Ma Liang felt very excited. He went to the village and decided to help the villagers. Some villagers said, “There has been a drought (干旱) and our crops (庄稼) are dying.” Ma Liang took out the magic brush and drew some clouds. Then it began to rain. The villagers said thanks to Ma Liang.
54．Why didn’t Ma Liang have a brush
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55．Where did Ma Liang meet an old man
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56．What did the old man tell him to do with the brush
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57．How did he feel after he found a brush in his hands
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58．What did he draw to help the villagers
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B．书面表达。
59．请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文，介绍一个你最喜欢的寓言—《乌鸦喝水》 (The Thirsty Crow)。注意：语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The Thirsty Crow
I would like to tell you one of my favorite
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参考答案及试题解析
1．China. 2．Pictures of animals and plants. 3．Because he thinks it’s relaxing to get close to the nature. 4．More than one hundred. 5．Reading. 6．例文
I have many hobbies, and they make my life colourful and healthy.
One of my favourite hobbies is playing basketball. I usually play it with my classmates after school. It not only helps me stay strong but also teaches me teamwork. Another hobby of mine is drawing. I like drawing animals and nature. It makes me feel relaxed and happy, especially when I am stressed about schoolwork.
In my opinion, good hobbies help us live happily and healthily. I will keep doing what I love and enjoy every moment.
【导语】本文介绍了不同人的不同爱好，包括Bruce集邮、Peter制作剪贴簿、Carrie读书，以及作者本人喜欢阅读。
【详解】1．第二段明确写道“One of his favourite stamps is from China.”，因此答案是原文直接信息China。
2．第三段指出“Pictures of animals and plants are his favourite.”，因此他最喜欢的图片是Pictures of animals and plants，为原文直接信息。
3．第三段末尾写道“He thinks it’s relaxing to get close to the nature.”，这是他喜欢参观自然公园的原因，为原文直接信息。
4．第四段提到“In her study, she has more than one hundred books.”，因此答案是超过一百本书，为原文直接信息。
5．最后一段作者说“As for me, I love reading in my free time too.”，因此作者在空闲时间喜欢阅读，为原文直接信息。
6．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文/经验分享类短文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：介绍两个爱好（每个爱好包括：爱好内容、带来的好处）+ 呼吁养成健康好习惯
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不得照抄原文；不得出现真实姓名、地名、校名；词数80左右（标题已给，不计入总词数）
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，点明爱好使生活多彩且健康
主体段：分别介绍两个爱好（内容、好处）
结尾段：呼吁大家养成健康好习惯，表达坚持爱好的决心
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：爱好一
介绍爱好：play basketball/play it with my classmates/practice basketball after school等
带来的好处：help me stay strong/keep fit/build up my body/teach me teamwork/learn to cooperate/improve my communication skills等
要点二：爱好二
介绍爱好：drawing/like drawing animals and nature/draw pictures in my free time等
带来的好处：make me feel relaxed and happy/bring me peace/cheer me up/especially when I am stressed about schoolwork/when I feel tired/when I have problems等
7．
5 March. / March 5. 8．
At the railway station. 9．
He felt excited and proud. / Excited and proud. 10．
Changsha. / In Changsha. 11．
They realized volunteer work brought joy to both others and themselves. / Volunteer work brought joy to both others and themselves. 12．
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua. It’s my great honor to give a speech about volunteering. Volunteering is meaningful to us and helpful to others, making our world better.
Let me share my experience with you. Last weekend, I went to the city park to pick up rubbish with my classmates. We worked hard for a whole afternoon. Although we were very tired, we felt extremely happy and proud because we made the park cleaner and more beautiful.
Volunteer work brings joy to everyone. Let's take action right now!
Thank you for listening!
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了雷锋精神的传承，以及马来西亚留学生在长沙做志愿者的故事，说明了志愿服务能给他人和自己带来快乐。
【详解】7．根据文章第1段“In 1963, Mr Mao called on the nation to learn from Lei Feng, and named 5 March as ‘Lei Feng Day’.”可推知结论“雷锋日”是3月5日。故填5 March.或March 5.
8．根据文章第2段“They served passengers at Changsha Railway Station.”可推知结论马来西亚学生是在火车站做志愿者。故填At the railway station.
9．根据文章第3段“‘I was excited and proud when people called me the ‘Living Lei Feng’!’ said Lan Zhicong…”可推知结论当人们叫他“活雷锋”时，他感到兴奋和自豪。故填He felt excited and proud.或Excited and proud.
10．根据文章第3段“After coming to Changsha, Lei Feng’s hometown, he became the ‘Living Lei Feng’…”可推知结论雷锋的家乡在长沙。故填Changsha.或In Changsha.
11．根据文章第4段“They realized volunteer work brought joy to both others and themselves.”可推知结论学生们意识到志愿工作给别人和自己都带来了快乐。故填They realized volunteer work brought joy to both others and themselves. 或Volunteer work brought joy to both others and themselves.
12．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主，叙事部分用一般过去时
明确要点：志愿活动的重要性；个人志愿经历；发出倡议
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：礼貌问候；自我介绍；点明演讲主题
主体段：阐述志愿活动的重要性；分享个人经历
结尾段：总结志愿活动的意义 ；发出倡议
[第三步：要点展开]
活动效果：meaningful to us/make our world a better place/build a caring society等
经历类型：pick up rubbish/help the elderly/tutor kids/plant trees等
参加表述：take part in/join in/get involved in等
倡议结尾：Let’s take action right now!/Let’s start small!/Every small act counts!等
13．
I/We will feel tired and stressed. 14．
No, it isn’t. 15．
Because he often replayed a talk with his boss in his mind. 16．
He got out of bed and started doing sit-ups. 17．
It means holding the breath for seven seconds. 18．
例文
Dear Alan,
I have read an article about overthinking, which makes me think of one of my experiences. I used to worry too much about my exams. It made me so stressed that I couldn’t sleep well at night. To solve the problem, I tried listening to light music before going to bed, and it really worked.
Here are some other suggestions for you to stop overthinking. First, doing sports is a good way to relax your body and mind. Second, you can talk with your friends or parents when you feel nervous.
Have you ever had similar experiences I am looking forward to your reply to share your experiences and ways to deal with it.
Best,
Li Hua
【导语】本文介绍了“精神内耗”的危害，并给出两种缓解方法。
【详解】13．第一段“The longer you think about something, the more tired and stressed you may be.”表明，如果我们思考某事很长时间，会感到疲倦和紧张。
14．第一段“In fact, there is no need to think too much.”表明，我们没有必要想太多。
15．第二段“Ethan …often found himself staying awake at night because he often replayed a talk with his boss in his mind.”表明，Ethan夜不能寐是因为他经常在脑海中回放与老板的对话。
16．第二段“He decided to get out of bed and started doing sit-ups. After a few minutes, he felt less nervous. As he did more, he felt greatly relaxed.”表明，Ethan通过起床做仰卧起坐来放松自己。
17．第三段“That is to spend four seconds taking a deep breath, hold the breath for seven seconds and then breathe out for eight seconds.”表明“7”代表屏住呼吸7秒。
18．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文，以一般过去时（描述自己曾经的精神内耗经历）和一般现在时（描述建议和感悟）为主。
明确要点：简述自己曾经的精神内耗经历、补充文章中未提到的其他应对方法、询问对方经历并期待回信
确定人称：第一人称（I/my/me）
注意事项：信息完整，语气真诚，结构清晰，不能照抄原文，不出现真实姓名，词数100左右（开头结尾已给出）。
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段（已给出）：引出主题——读到关于精神内耗的文章，想起自己的经历。
主体段：①简述自己的经历（曾担心考试→导致失眠→听轻音乐缓解）②补充文章中未提到的其他建议（做运动、与朋友/父母倾诉）
结尾段：询问对方是否有类似经历，期待回信分享。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：简述自己的经历
问题：used to worry too much about exams/kept thinking about test results等
感受：so stressed that I couldn’t sleep well at night/made me feel tired and anxious all day等
缓解方式：tried listening to light/soft/peaceful music等
要点二：补充其他应对方法
应对方法：doing sports/exercise/talk with your friends or parents/write down your thoughts on paper/drawing or painting等
要点三：期待回信
期待：I am looking forward to your reply to share your experiences and ways to deal with it./ Write back and tell me your stories./I can’t wait to hear from you.等
19．He went to the garden to plant the seeds. 20．Because she dropped the box of seeds on the ground by mistake. 21．His mother./His mum. 22．Because he was often angry with his sister and wanted to improve. 23．Count to ten before speaking. 24．Dear Lily,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in a bad mood these days. To help you feel better, I suggest trying these methods:
First, share your worries with trusted friends. Talking about feelings can lighten your burden. For example, discuss what makes you anxious over a cup of tea. Second, practice relaxation techniques. Listen to gentle music before bed or take deep breaths for five minutes when stressed. These actions calm your mind and improve sleep. Finally, maintain healthy routines. Exercise daily, like jogging or yoga, to release positive energy. Also, ensure you eat balanced meals.
Don’t be afraid of having bad moods. Learn to find a proper way to relieve them and grow happily. I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文主要讲述了Fred在妹妹不小心弄掉种子时，通过数到十来控制自己愤怒情绪的故事，告诉我们在生气时说话前要先数到十来平复心情。
【详解】19．根据文章第一段“As soon as he got them, he went out to the garden to plant the seeds.”，可知Fred拿到种子后去花园种种子了。
20．根据文章第二段“While Jane was speaking, she dropped the box of seeds on the ground by mistake. All the seeds fell out. Jane was afraid and said sorry to Fred”，可知Jane向Fred道歉是因为她不小心把种子掉在了地上。
21．根据文章第六段“Mum once told me to count to ten before I spoke if I felt angry.”，可知是Fred的妈妈建议他数到十的。
22．根据文章第六段“I know that I was often angry with you, and I want to correct myself and do the right thing”，可知Fred想改正自己是因为他经常生妹妹的气。
23．根据文章最后一段“Before you speak something hurtful too fast in anger, count to ten, and if you are still angry, count again.”，可知生气时可以在说话前数到十。
24．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：观点建议类书信，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：对Lily的情况表示同情并表明写信目的；给出调整心态的具体建议；表达鼓励与祝愿。
确定人称：第一人称(I/we)，第二人称(you)
注意事项：控制词数，不得透露真实信息
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出，礼貌共情，点明写信目的，引出建议
主体段：分点阐述调整心态的具体建议，层次清晰
结尾段：呼应开头，表达鼓励与美好祝愿，收束全文
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一： 调整心态的建议
分享烦恼、释放压力：share your worries with trusted friends/lighten your burden/discuss what makes you anxious over a cup of tea/open up to your close friends/ease your anxiety/chat about your feelings with someone you trust等
学会放松、改善睡眠：practice relaxation techniques/Listen to gentle music/calm your mind and improve sleep/learn to slow down and relax/take a few deep breaths等
关注生活、保持健康习惯：maintain healthy routines/to release positive energy/ensure you eat balanced meals/stick to a healthy lifestyle/stay active with sports/keep a balanced diet等
要点二：鼓励与祝愿
做法：Don’t be afraid of having bad moods/find a proper way to relieve/will be better/Bad moods are nothing to worry about/deal with negative feelings and keep a happy heart等
25．It lies on the border of China and Nepal./On the border of China and Nepal. 26．From the colorful rocks on the walls of the Grand Canyon. 27．Yes, it is. 28．Because it provides us with oxygen. 29．开放性试题，言之有理即可。参考答案为：I’d like to visit Victoria Falls most. Because it looks especially wonderful on sunny days with rainbows above it, and I want to enjoy its powerful beauty. 30．例文
Dear Zhang Ming,
I’m so glad to hear you’re coming to Changsha! I’d like to recommend Orange Isle to you.
It lies in the middle of the Xiangjiang River and is one of the most beautiful places in Changsha. There are green trees, fresh air and flowers everywhere. When you walk there, you can get close to nature and forget your pressure. That’s why I love it so much.
As for me, I relax by taking photos of the views or walking with my family there. Sometimes I also run along the riverside. It helps me feel relaxed and happy.
I hope you will have a wonderful time here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文介绍了珠穆朗玛峰、科罗拉多大峡谷、维多利亚瀑布、大堡礁和亚马逊雨林等世界自然奇观，分别说明了它们的位置、特点、现状及保护意义。
【详解】25．第一段直接说明：“It lies on the border of China and Nepal.”，因此答案是原文直接信息。
26．第二段提到：“The colorful rocks on its walls tell the earth’s history.”，因此答案是通过科罗拉多大峡谷岩壁上的彩色岩石了解地球历史。
27．第四段明确指出：“However, it is now in great danger because of climate change.”，因此答案为肯定回答。
28．第五段直接给出原因：“because it provides us with oxygen”，因此答案是原文引述。
29．本题是开放性试题，答案不唯一，但观点需基于文中事实，结合自己的看法和理由作答。参考答案为：I’d like to visit Victoria Falls most. Because it looks especially wonderful on sunny days with rainbows above it, and I want to enjoy its powerful beauty.
30．[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：书信体应用文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：景点信息 (地点、位置、环境特点)、游玩价值 (亲近自然、缓解压力、调节情绪)、个人放松方式 (日常缓解压力的活动)
确定人称：第一人称 (写信人李华)，第二人称 (收信人张明)
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名；词数不少于 80 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出固定开头，点明得知对方来长沙的消息，自然引出推荐
主体段：介绍推荐的景点 (橘子洲)，说明位置、环境特点，解释其亲近自然、缓解压力的价值；分享自己平时的放松方式，贴合“缓解学业压力、调节情绪”的主题
结尾段：送上祝福，表达期待对方游玩愉快
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：景点信息与游玩价值
地点选择：Orange Isle/Yuelu Mountain/Songya Lake等
位置描述：It lies in the middle of the Xiangjiang River./It lies in the west of Changsha, near Hunan University./It is in the north of Changsha, a large wetland park.等
环境特点：one of the most beautiful places in Changsha/with green trees/fresh air and flowers everywhere/famous for its ancient temples and red maple leaves/clear lake water and wide grasslands等
游玩价值：get close to nature/forget pressure/relax both body and mind/climb the mountain to enjoy the city view/watch birds and feel close to nature等
要点二：个人放松方式
活动选择：take photos of the views/walk with family/run along the riverside/listen to soft music/play badminton with friends等
作用效果：help me feel relaxed and happy/ease study pressure/let out tiredness and pressure/calm my mind after study等
31．Because he/she could learn much by reading. 32．With a novel in his/her hand. 33．He/She can visit many different places and learn a lot about people, geography and history. 34．Reading and gardening. / Reading, gardening and knitting. 35．Different people have different hobbies. / Hobbies of the writer and his/her friends. 36．A hobby I stick to
I have a lot of hobbies, but my favourite one is reading. I have kept this hobby for about five years.
To develop my hobby, I usually spend at least one hour reading books every day. On weekends, I often go to the library to read books.
Reading brings me a lot of benefits. First, it opens up my eyes and helps me learn more about the world. Second, reading makes me more confident when I talk with others. What’s more, I have made many friends who also love reading. In a word, reading makes my life colorful and meaningful.
【导语】本文介绍了作者不同时期的爱好变化以及朋友们各自不同的爱好。作者过去喜欢阅读，现在喜欢旅行。朋友们分别喜欢阅读、园艺和编织。
【详解】31．文中第一段提到“I liked reading because I could learn much by reading.”，直接提取信息，用指示代词“she/he”代替“the writer”即可。
32．文中第一段结尾指出“At night, I could hardly get to sleep without a novel in my hand.”，说明作者晚上需要读小说才能入睡。用形容词性物主代词“his/her”代替“my”，直接提取方式状语“With a novel in his/her hand.”
33．文中第二段提到“I can visit many different places by travelling. I can learn a lot about people, geography and history.”，用指示代词“she/he”代替“the writer”，整合信息，用and连接并列结构：He/She can visit many different places and learn a lot about people, geography and history.
34．文中第三段提到Ann喜欢阅读，Tony喜欢园艺，Judy喜欢编织，因此至少写出其中两个即可。
35．文章开篇点明主题“Different people have different hobbies.”，并围绕作者及朋友们的不同爱好展开，直接提取首句信息或总结为Hobbies of the writer and his/her friends.
36．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明介绍类短文，以一般现在时为主。
明确要点：众多爱好中最喜欢阅读、如何培养/坚持爱好、阅读带来的好处。
确定人称：第一人称。
注意事项：语句通顺，逻辑清晰，词数80左右，不透露真实姓名与学校名称。
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
第一段：点明众多爱好中最喜欢阅读，并说明坚持这一爱好的时长（总起）。
第二段：具体说明如何培养和坚持阅读习惯——每天至少读一小时、周末去图书馆。
第三段：列举阅读带来的多项好处（开阔眼界、增强自信、结交朋友），并总结阅读的意义。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：点明最喜欢的爱好及坚持时长
爱好表达：I have a lot of hobbies, but my favourite one is...; Among all my hobbies, I like... best; Reading is my favourite hobby...
具体爱好：reading, drawing, swimming, playing basketball, singing, dancing, collecting stamps...
要点二：如何培养/坚持爱好
日常习惯：spend at least one hour reading every day, read for 30 minutes before bed, do reading as soon as I get home...
周末活动：go to the library, visit the bookshop, stay in my reading corner, join a reading club...
其他坚持方式：keep a reading diary, set a reading goal, share book reviews with friends...
要点三：阅读带来的好处
开阔眼界：opens up my eyes, broadens my horizon, helps me learn more about the world, lets me see different cultures...
增强自信：makes me more confident, helps me speak better, gives me more knowledge to share, improves my communication skills...
结交朋友：made many friends who also love reading, found a reading group, met people with the same interest, joined a book club...
37．pressure 38． wants them to be successful Don’t push kids so hard 39．Time to relax and think of themselves. 40．They should give children less pressure and let them have a happy childhood.（答案不唯一） 41．例文：
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. Two main reasons cause this problem: some students often stay up late and don’t get enough sleep, while others spend too long doing homework or using phones and computers.
To prevent it, we should do eye exercises regularly and go out for more outdoor activities to enjoy natural light.
I think we must develop good eye habits, like reading in proper light and keeping a safe distance from books. Protecting our eyes is protecting our future.
【导语】本文讨论了当代家长让孩子参加过多课外活动导致孩子压力过大的问题。通过Cathy Taylor和Linda Miller两位家长的不同观点以及医生的建议，指出让孩子快乐比让他们成功更重要。
【详解】37．全文围绕孩子因过多课外活动而承受巨大压力展开讨论，且第一段提到“such a busy life can put students under great pressure”，因此文章提到的主要问题是“压力”。
38．①第二段Cathy Taylor提到“I really want them to be successful.”，说明她希望孩子们成功。
②第三段Linda Miller提到“People shouldn’t push their kids so hard.”，说明她认为人们不应该把孩子逼得太紧。
39．最后一段Dr. Alice Green提到“Kids should have time to relax and think of themselves, too.”，说明孩子们应该有时间放松并为自己着想。
40．本题为主观开放题，答案不唯一。结合文中医生的建议以及Linda Miller的观点，提出父母应该如何帮助孩子的建议即可。
41．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：问题分析与建议类短文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：包含三个方面——主要原因、预防方法、自己的观点
确定人称：第一人称复数（we/our）
注意事项：文中不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名；首段已给出；词数80左右；要点齐全；可适当发挥
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
第一段：承接已给开头，分析导致近视的主要原因
第二段：提出预防近视的方法
第三段：发表个人观点并呼吁
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：主要原因
原因：stay up late/don’t get enough sleep/spend too long doing homework/using phones and computers/spend too much time playing video games等
要点二：预防方法
方法：do eye exercises regularly/go out for more outdoor activities/enjoy natural light/control the usage time of electronic products等
要点三：个人观点
观点：develop good eye habits/read in proper light/keep a safe distance from books/take a 10-minute break every hour when using electronic devices等
呼吁：protecting our eyes is protecting our future/work together to protect our eyesight for a bright future等
42．Unhappy feelings like sadness or anger. 43．By pushing people to clear their minds. 44．Anger. 45．Before a big test. 46．Because it can push people to try something new. 47．例文：
How to Deal with Bad Feelings
By Li Ming
Emotions are like a mirror, reflecting our thoughts and feelings. Learning to deal with bad feelings is really important for us to grow up healthily. Last term, I failed my math exam. I was so angry that I shouted at my best friend for no reason. Later, I felt very sorry for my rude behavior. Here are my suggestions on dealing with bad feelings. First, we should accept that it is normal to have some bad feelings. Second, we can talk to our parents or friends about our problems, which can help us feel relaxed. Finally, doing some sports like running can also make us feel better.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本文介绍了悲伤、愤怒、紧张、无聊等负面情绪并非有害，反而能给人带来帮助，是生活中的“助手”。
【详解】42．根据短文“Scientists say these emotions are good for you”(这里的“these emotions”指前文的“Unhappy feelings like sadness or anger”)，可知答案：Unhappy feelings like sadness or anger.
43．根据短文“By pushing you to clear your mind, sadness allows for better memory and more careful thought”，可知答案：By pushing people to clear their minds.
44．根据短文“Anger drives you to act fast and solve problems quickly”，可知答案：Anger.
45．根据短文“Before a big test, you might feel nervous”，可知答案：Before a big test.
46．根据短文“It can push you to try something new, like a hobby or a different way of learning”，可知答案：Because it can push people to try something new.
47．[写作步骤]
第一步：审题立意
确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：观点(处理坏情绪很重要)+个人经历+处理建议
确定人称：第一人称(I)
注意事项：80词左右
第二步：构思布局
开头：承接已给内容，引出观点
主体1：讲述个人经历及影响
主体2：提出处理坏情绪的具体建议
结尾：衔接落款
第三步：要点展开
观点：learning to deal with bad feelings is really important for us to grow up healthily/learning to deal with bad feelings is necessary for our daily life
个人经历：failed an important exam / felt frustrated and shouted at my friend / ignored my mom’s care that night / regretted my actions the next day
处理建议：accept that it is normal to have some bad feelings / take a 10-minute walk to calm down / write down negative thoughts in a notebook / talk to a close friend about our troubles
48．They help us stay healthy, and they also bring us better heart health, improve our immune system and reduce pain. 49．Stress. 50．Happy people. 51．We can take deep breaths, do some sports, share feelings with trusted people and listen to our favourite songs to reduce stress. 52．Because it helps calm our mind and keep us healthy./Because it keeps our mind clear. (言之有理即可) 53．
范文：
Ways to Keep a Balanced Life
Since I entered Grade 8, I have been facing more pressure and challenges. I often feel tired and stressed after a long day of study.
Last month, I felt really worried before the mid-term exam. I could hardly sleep well. Then I decided to go for a run after school. The fresh air and movement helped me calm down. I felt much better and thought more clearly. Finally, I did well in the exam.
In daily life, I also relax by listening to music and reading storybooks. These simple ways make me feel peaceful and happy. I believe a balanced life helps us study better and grow healthily.
【导语】本文主要阐述了情绪管理的重要性，分析了积极情绪对健康的保护作用、消极情绪对身体的不良影响，并提出了深呼吸、运动、倾诉、听音乐等调节负面情绪的方法。
48．第二段说明了积极情绪的作用：“Positive emotions work like a protective umbrella. Research shows that people with positive emotions may have better heart health. What’s more, happiness improves our immune system and helps reduce pain.” 综合第一段“Positive emotions help us stay healthy”，积极情绪还能帮助保持健康。答案是原文信息的整合。
49．第一段最后一句明确说明了导致健忘的原因：“...stress often makes people forget things easily.” 因此答案是原文直接信息。
50．第二段最后说明了快乐的人更少生病：“Scientists have found that happy people get fewer colds and feel less sick when they do.” 因此答案是原文直接信息。
51．第三段提到了多种缓解压力的方法，其中包含“First, take deep breaths if you feel upset...Next, do some sports like running or playing ball games to reduce stress. Besides, share your feelings with people you trust, like parents or close friends...Finally, listen to your favourite songs to be happy.” 答案是原文直接信息。
52．本题为开放性试题，需结合全文总结管理情绪的重要性。可从保持身心健康、保持思维清晰等角度展开，言之有理即可。
53．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：记叙文/经历分享类文章，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
明确要点：初中学习压力带来的影响、描述一次缓解压力的经历、日常放松的方式（至少两点）
确定人称：第一人称（I）为主
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需涵盖思维导图所有要点
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：点明初中学习压力带来的影响（疲惫、紧张等）
主体段一：描述一次具体的缓解压力的经历；介绍日常放松的方式（至少两种）
结尾段：总结平衡生活的重要性
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：压力影响
压力表现：feel tired and stressed/can’t sleep well/lose focus/lose appetite等
要点二：一次缓解压力的经历
压力情境：worried before the mid-term exam/felt upset after a bad grade等
缓解行动：went for a run/talked to a friend/listened to music/watched a movie等
缓解效果：felt much better/thought more clearly/calmed down/felt relaxed等
积极结果：did well in the exam/finished the task successfully等
要点三：日常放松方式
方式一：listening to music/listening to soft music等
方式二：reading storybooks/reading for fun等
方式三：taking a walk/eating healthy food/doing yoga等
放松感受：feel peaceful and happy/feel relaxed and refreshed等
要点四：总结平衡生活
总结表达：a balanced life helps us study better/grow healthily/both body and mind need rest等
号召：find your own way to relax/enjoy a healthy life等
54．Because he was too poor to buy one. 55．In his dream. 56．He told him to use it to help the poor in his village. 57．He felt very excited. 58．He drew some clouds. 59．范文：
The Thirsty Crow I would like to tell you one of my favorite fables.
I first heard it from my mom when I was a kid. One hot day, a thirsty crow looked everywhere for water. Finally, he saw a bottle with water in it. But the water was too low to reach. He picked up small stones and dropped them into the bottle one by one. Slowly, the water level rose, and he was able to drink the water at last.
I love this story because it teaches me to stay calm and use my head when facing problems.
【导语】本文主要讲述了马良的故事，马良很喜欢画画但因贫穷没有画笔，后来在梦中得到一位老人赠送的神笔，并用神笔帮助村民解决干旱问题。
54．文章第一段明确指出：“He loved to draw, but he didn’t have a brush. He was too poor to buy one.”，这是对马良没有画笔原因的直述，可直接提取。
55．第二段中明确写道：“One night, when Ma Liang was asleep, he had a dream. In his dream, he met an old man.”，这是对马良遇到老人地点的直述，可直接提取。
56．第二段中明确写道：“The old man gave him a magic brush, and said to him, ‘I give you a magic brush. You can use it to help the poor in your village.’”，这是对老人让马良用神笔做什么的直述，可直接提取。
57．第三段中明确写道：“The next morning, when he woke up, he found a real brush in his hands. Ma Liang felt very excited.”，这是对马良找到画笔后心情的直述，可直接提取。
58．第三段中明确写道：“Some villagers said, ‘There has been a drought and our crops are dying.’ Ma Liang took out the magic brush and drew some clouds.”，这是对马良为帮助村民所画内容的直述，可直接提取。
59．[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性记叙文（寓言分享），以一般过去时为主
明确要点：分享一则寓言故事的来源、完整情节、个人感悟
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）、第三人称（it/he）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：点明主题，引出自己最喜欢的寓言
主体段：讲述寓言的完整情节与细节
结尾段：分享寓言带来的感悟与收获
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：寓言引入与背景
主题引入：tell you one of my favorite fables
来源背景：first heard it from my mom when I was a kid/learned it from my parents/read it in a book等
要点二：寓言情节描述
故事起因：One hot day, a thirsty crow looked everywhere for water/the crow was very thirsty on a hot day等
遇到困难：saw a bottle with water in it. But the water was too low to reach/found a bottle with water but couldn’t reach it等
解决办法：picked up small stones and dropped them into the bottle one by one/dropped stones into the bottle to raise the water level等
最终结果：the water level rose, and he was able to drink the water at last/finally got the water he needed等
要点三：个人感悟与收获
喜爱原因：I love this story because it teaches me to stay calm and use my head when facing problems/it tells me to be smart and patient when in trouble等
核心启示：stay calm and use my head/think carefully when meeting difficulties/never give up and find ways out等
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