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(共17张PPT)
Writing
Key question
主题范畴：人与自我
Unit 8 Follow your interests
How can we turn our interests into a career
Writing an article about your favourite hobby
你最喜欢的爱好是什么 你为什么喜欢它 写一篇文章，并把它发给我们。
青少年生活杂志
Pre-writing
perform /p 'f m/
body language
v. 演出
肢体语言
New words and phrases
Prediction
王瑶会在文章中包含哪些内容？她会从哪些方面介绍自己的爱好？
Introduction
How I developed my hobby
Why I like my hobby
My hope
Wang Yao’s outline about her favourite hobby.
Brainstorm ideas and make an outline to organize them.
Make an outline
While-writing
Hobbies play an important part in our daily lives. Write an article introducing your favorite hobby. You can refer to the example of "My happy time with dancing".
爱好在我们的日常生活中起着重要作用。写一篇文章介绍你最喜欢的爱好。你可以参考《我跳舞的快乐时光》这个例子。
Tips:
1. Use the mind map in Step 1 to help you.
2. Pay attention to the logic of the text, and how the different parts are connected. You can add transitional sentences to make the text more coherent(连贯的).
3. An opening sentence, a concluding sentence and linking words are necessary for your writing.
1. 文体：
2. 人称：
3. 语言风格：
4. 时态：
5. 写作要点：_______ 个要点，包含：
记叙文
第一人称
客观描述
一般过去时、一般现在时
四
What is my hobby
How I developed my hobby
Why I like my hobby
My hope
Step 1: 题干细审
Step 2: 词汇激活
1. 打羽毛球 ___________________
2. 爱上…… ___________________
3. 起初 ___________________
4. 坚持练习 ___________________
5. 很好地击打羽毛球 ___________________
6. 帮助交新朋友 ___________________
7. 将来 ___________________
fell in love with
at first
hit the shuttlecock well
play badminton
keep practising
help make new friends
in the future
Step 3: 句型点拨
1. 我在一次体育课上爱上了它。
___________________________________________
2. 起初，我并不擅长。然而，我每天坚持练习。
___________________________________________
3. 我喜欢羽毛球，因为它既刺激又放松。
___________________________________________
4. 我希望加入国家羽毛球队。
___________________________________________
5. 我也梦想着在更多人当中推广羽毛球运动。___________________________________________
At first, I was not good at it. However, I kept practising every day.
I fell in love with it during a PE class.
I love badminton because it is exciting and relaxing.
I hope to join the national badminton team.
I also dream of spreading badminton among more people.
Step 4: 谋篇布局
playing badminton
during a PE class
keep practising
exciting and relaxing
help make new friends
join the national badminton team
My Favorite Hobby: Badminton
My favorite hobby is playing badminton.
I fell in love with it during a PE class. The teacher showed us how to play, and I got interested right away. At first, I was not good at it. However, I kept practising every day. Now, not only can I hit the shuttlecock well, but I can also win some matches.
I love badminton because it is both exciting and relaxing. It is so fun that I always forget my worries when playing. What I like most is that it helps me make new friends while exercising.
In the future, I hope to join the national badminton team. And I also dream of spreading badminton among more people, so that they can experience the fun of this amazing sport.
Step 5: 扩充成文
Post-writing
Check and revise 检查和修改
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。
I introduced my favourite hobby clearly at the beginning.
我在开头清晰地介绍了我最喜欢的爱好。
I explained how I developed my hobby and why I like it.
我解释了我如何培养爱好以及为什么喜欢它。
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
我使用了本单元以及学习的语言表达。
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
我使用的正确的拼写，语法以及标点符号。
Grade and share
Elements要素 Level档次
Content内容(6分) 要点齐全，切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当，丰富
Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡
互评总分
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