【期末考点培优】专题18 读写综合-2025-2026学年八年级下册英语期末复习考点培优外研版(新教材)(含答案解析)

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【期末考点培优】专题18 读写综合-2025-2026学年八年级下册英语期末复习考点培优外研版(新教材)(含答案解析)

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2025-2026学年八年级下册英语期末复习考点培优外研版(新教材)
专题18 读写综合
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
第一节 任务型阅读
Maybe You Should Learn to Relax!
These days, many parents push their children into learning more skills. They believe it helps their kids to better compete in life. However, such a busy life can put students under great pressure.
The Taylors are a typical American family. Life for Cathy Taylor’s three children is very busy. “On most days after school,” Cathy says, “I take one of my two boys to basketball practice and my daughter to football training. Then I have to take my other son to piano lessons. Maybe I could cut out a few of their activities, but I believe these activities are important for my children’s future. I really want them to be successful.” However, the tired children don’t get home until after 7:00 p.m. They have a quick dinner, and then it’s time for homework.
Linda Miller, a mother of three, knows all about such stress. “In some families, competition starts very young and continues until the kids get older,” she says. “Mothers send their small kids to all kinds of classes. And they are always comparing them with other children. It’s crazy. I don’t think that’s fair. Why don’t they just let their kids be kids People shouldn’t push their kids so hard.”
Doctors say too much pressure is not good for a child’s development. Dr. Alice Green says all these activities can cause a lot of stress for children. “Kids should have time to relax and think of themselves, too. Although it’s normal to want successful children, it’s even more important to have happy children.”
1.The main problem mentioned in the passage is ________. (限填1词)
2.Fill in the blanks according to the passage.
Name Number of kids Opinions on kids’ activities
Cathy Taylor 3 The activities are important for kids’ future. She really ________. (不超过5个词)
Linda Miller 3 Let kids be kids. ________. (不超过5个词)
3.What should kids have according to Dr. Alice Green (不超过10词)
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4.In your opinion, what should parents do to help their children (不超过15词)
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第二节 书面表达
5.最新健康调查结果令人揪心:学生近视率居高不下,低龄化态势加剧。校园中,戴眼镜的孩子比比皆是,近视严重威胁着学生的健康成长。请根据下表所提示的内容,用英语写一篇短文,并发表自己的观点。
主要原因 1. 常熬夜,睡眠不足
2. 长时间做作业、用手机或电脑
预防方法 1. 做眼保健操
2. 多进行户外活动
你的观点 1. 好的用眼习惯
2. ……
注意:
1 词数80左右,首段已经给出,不记入总词数;
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点,可适当发挥;
3. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
4. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
(参考词汇:近视的shortsighted, 视力eyesight, 保护protect)
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age.
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A.回答问题
请阅读下面短文,根据所提供的信息,回答5个问题,要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整切题。
Our school robot team is one of the best teams in our city. The team has 5 members, and we call ourselves Tech Stars. We started the team last year because we all love robots.
At first, we didn’t know much about building robots. We often argued about how to design our robot. But later, we learned to listen to each other’s ideas. We divided tasks: Lily designed the robot’s body, Tom programmed it, and I tested it every day.
Last month, we joined a city robot competition. We worked hard for two months, and finally won the first prize. We were so excited! Now we know that a great team needs trust, communication and hard work.
6.What is the name of the school robot team
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7.Why did they start the robot team
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8.What problem did they have at first
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9.Who programmed the robot for the competition
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10.What does a great team need according to the passage
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B.请根据要求完成短文写作。
11.你所在的一个很棒的团队 (比如班级学习小组、运动团队、兴趣小组等),请写一篇短文介绍它。内容包括:
(1) 团队的名字和成员;
(2) 团队的活动/你们一起做的事情;
(3) 你觉得这个团队很棒的原因。
作文要求:
(1) 语句连贯,词数80左右;
(2) 不能照抄原文,不得出现真实信息。
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第一节 任务型阅读
阅读下面短文,根据短文内容回答问题和翻译句子。
Now more and more Chinese teenagers find life more difficult without their parents. They don’t know how to do housework, because their parents do almost everything for them at home. This is a big problem.
Joy is 14 years old. One day her parents went on a trip to Shanghai, so she had to stay at home alone. At first she thought she would be happy because her parents were not in. She could do everything that she liked. But it was seven o’ clock in the evening, and she felt hungry. “Oh,①该吃晚饭了。Where can I get my food " she said to herself. Later she found some food in the fridge, but she didn’t know how to cook. At that moment, she missed her parents very much. At last she could only go to a restaurant to eat.
Many of teenagers are the same as Joy. So I think teenagers should learn some basic life skills such as tidying up their rooms, dressing themselves, cooking some simple dishes and so on. ②They shouldn’t depend too much on their parents,either. Learning to be independent is quite important for them.
12.Do most Chinese teenagers know how to do housework
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13.Where did Joy eat her dinner at last
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14.According to the passage, what is the writer’s advice to solve the problem
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15.把划线句子①翻译成英文。
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16.把划线句子②翻译成中文。
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第二节
17.假如你是Henry,近期你在“树洞聊天室”看到一则Nancy发布的留言,谈到了自己在学习和生活方面遇到的问题,如学习压力大、课外班多、与朋友发生争吵等。请你结合下面的图示,给她写一封邮件,帮助她克服焦虑情绪,轻松、快乐地学习和生活。
注意:
(1)必须包含图示中的所有要点,可适当发挥;(2)语意通顺,逻辑清晰,书写工整;
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息;(4)80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Nancy,
I’m sorry to hear about your problems.
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Yours truly
A.回答问题
请阅读下面这篇文章,根据所提供的信息,回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。
There are some benefits to living close to nature. To begin with, it helps to reduce stress. Moreover, it can contribute to a longer life. In addition, being less exposed (暴露) to air pollution is important for many people who now live in large cities. Lastly, staying close to nature will also help you learn about various plants and animals that are not like each other.
Stress is a type of physical condition that can be really hard to deal with. Our modern life does not really increase our chances to live in a relaxed environment. According to some studies, over 100 million people die every year as a direct result of stress—one hundred million deaths each year. Just try to think about that number for a second.
Now, in order to lower your stress, you can get close to nature. Ewert and his partners published a study called “Levels of Nature and Stress Response (反应)”. Findings suggest that visiting natural environments can be helpful in reducing stress levels. Visitors to a natural environment have much lower levels of stress, compared with those who often stay indoors in the central city.
The study also showed that long-term exposure to nature was the best choice. Visiting a park in a big city would help, but would only have a little effect. If you want to reduce stress, living close to nature is the best choice you could make.
18.How many advantages of living close to nature are mentioned in the passage
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19.Where do many people who care about air pollution live
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20.How can people reduce their stress
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21.What is the title of the study published by Ewert and his partners
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22.Which has a greater effect on reducing stress, visiting a park in a big city or living in a natural environment for a long time
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B.书面表达
23.学校心理健康周征文,主题为“在成长压力中学会放松”。请你根据表格内容,结合自身经历写一篇征文稿。内容包括:
Relaxation in Growing Up
Stress 从学业、人际交往、亲子相处三类关系中,任选其一,选取一次具体经历,围绕时间、事件、影响进行叙述。
Solutions ①听音乐、②做运动、③……
Benefits 你从这些调整中获得的益处 (至少两点)
作文要求:
1. 不得在作文中出现真实姓名和校名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80词左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Relaxation in Growing Up
As we grow older, we face more pressure from school and life.
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第一节 阅读下面短文,根据短文内容回答问题。
Nature has many wonderful wonders. Qomolangma is the highest mountain in the world. It lies on the border of China and Nepal. It is very high and difficult to climb. Many climbers risk their lives to reach the top. They want to show the spirit of never giving up.
The Grand Canyon is another amazing wonder. It was formed by the Colorado River over millions of years. The canyon is very deep and wide. The colorful rocks on its walls tell the earth’s history. People from all over the world come to visit it.
Victoria Falls is also one of the greatest natural wonders. It lies on the Zambezi River. The water falls down from hundreds of meters high, making loud sounds and heavy mist. It looks especially wonderful on sunny days, as rainbows often appear above it. Every year, many tourists come to enjoy its powerful beauty.
The Great Barrier Reef is famous for its beautiful corals and sea life. It is the largest coral reef system in the world. However, it is now in great danger because of climate change. We should take action to protect it.
The Amazon Rainforest is the largest rainforest. It is home to millions of species. It is called “the lungs of the earth” because it provides us with oxygen. But deforestation (滥伐森林) is harming it.
These wonders are important. Let’s love and protect them for our future.
24.Where is Qomolangma
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25.How can we know about the earth’s history
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26.Is the Great Barrier Reef in great danger now
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27.Why is the Amazon Rainforest called “the lungs of the earth”
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28.Which natural wonders would you like to visit most, and why
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第二节 根据要求完成短文写作。
29.假设你是李华,你的深圳笔友张明计划假期来长沙游玩,想找一处既能亲近自然、放松身心,又能缓解学业压力、调节情绪的好去处。请你给他写一封信,结合以下表格内容要点,介绍长沙一处你喜欢的自然景观 (如岳麓山、橘子洲 、松雅湖等),分享它的游玩价值,并说说你平常用什么方式放松。
要点:
What is the place ...
Where is the place ...
What is it like one of the most beautiful places, ...
Why do you like this place get close to nature, ...
How do you relax yourself in your free time take photos, do sports, ...
参考词汇:橘子洲Orange Isle
要求:
·语句通顺,意思连贯,条理清晰;
·不得出现真实姓名、班名和校名;
·词数不少于80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Zhang Ming,
I’m so glad to hear you’re coming to Changsha!
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I hope you will have a wonderful time here!
Yours,
Li Hua
A.回答问题
请阅读下面这篇文章,根据所提供的信息,回答五个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、信息完整切题。
Do you think you should only try to be happy Think again! Unhappy feelings like sadness or anger can actually be helpful. Scientists say these emotions are good for you. When you feel sad, maybe because of a low score, you might not want to do anything. But this rest helps you recover (恢复). By pushing you to clear your mind, sadness allows for better memory and more careful thought. For example, after a hard and sad day, having a rest helps you recover your energy and get ready for future challenges. If you feel angry, like when your phone breaks, you might want to make it work again at once. Anger drives you to act fast and solve problems quickly. Before a big test, you might feel nervous. This feeling makes you notice possible risks and study harder. It also helps you see things more clearly, so you don’t miss important details. Boredom (无聊) happens when there is nothing exciting. But it’s important. It can push you to try something new, like a hobby or a different way of learning. So next time you feel sad, angry, nervous, or bored, remember that your feelings are trying to help you! They are not bad—they are your helpers. Pay attention to them, and you will do better in life.
30.What can be helpful for people according to scientists
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31.How does sadness allow for better memory and more careful thought
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32.What drives you to take action and solve problems quickly
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33.When might people feel nervous according to the passage
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34.Why is boredom important
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B.书面表达(本题10分)
35.根据要求完成短文写作。
假设你是李明,近期,你的学校正在开展以“如何应对坏情绪”为主题的演讲活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,写一篇演讲稿,表达自己的想法。
注意:(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
How to Deal with Bad Feelings
By Li Ming
Emotions are like a mirror, reflecting our thoughts and feelings.
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That’s all. Thank you!
A.回答问题
请阅读下面短文,根据所提供的信息,回答五个问题,并将答案写在横线上。要求所写答案语法正确、信息完整切题。
Group activities are an important part of English learning in middle school. Recently, our class is preparing an English play — The Emperor’s New Clothes (皇帝的新衣), which is a famous story loved by students around the world. It helps us improve our spoken English and learn about Western culture.
However, after dividing the work into groups, some problems have appeared in our group. First, some students think their lines are too many and too difficult, so they feel worried about remembering them. Second, other students consider their roles “not important” and have no passion and don’t read their lines carefully.
In fact, every role in a play is necessary, and working together is the key to success. We hope our foreign teacher can help us solve these problems and learn better through this activity.
36.What is the class preparing for English learning
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37.Why do some students feel worried about lines
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38.What do some students think of their roles
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39.What is the key to a successful play
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40.What can students get from the play
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B.书面表达
41. 正如谚语所说:“众人拾柴火焰高。” 一个好的团队需要每个人共同努力。假设你是李华,你们小组在排练英语话剧时出现了问题。请给指导你们的外教老师Mr. Smith写一封邮件,反映小组出现的问题,并提出解决问题的建议。
写作要求:
1.词数80词(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和班级。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to tell you about the problems in our play group.
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Yours,
Li Hua
A 回答问题
请阅读下面这篇文章,根据所提供的信息,回答5个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、语义完整。
A Cook’s Dream
Do you have a big dream Chen Lina’s dream is about food. She deeply loves making xiaolongbao, a traditional Chinese soup dumpling. Her lifelong wish is to make the most delicious xiaolongbao in the world, and she finally made her dream come true with hard work.
Chen began her cooking journey at 19. She studied cooking skills day and night, never giving up even when she met difficulties. She once went to Japan to introduce delicious Shanghai food to local people. After that, many Japanese fell in love with xiaolongbao. After coming back to China, she opened a small restaurant. It became popular right away. Lots of people waited in long lines patiently to taste her food every day.
What makes her xiaolongbao special She treats them as her kids and has created about 28 kinds of xiaolongbao. She chooses fresh and natural food and never uses any extra additives (添加剂). Every dumpling is carefully made by hand, so it is more than simple food but a fine piece of art.
Chen thinks true success is bringing joy to customers. She is warm and kind to everyone around her. Her love for cooking and people is the key to her great success.
42.What does Chen Lina deeply love
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43.When did Chen start her cooking journey
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44.Why did Chen go to Japan
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45.How many kinds of xiaolongbao has Chen created
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46.Is every dumpling carefully made by machine or by hand
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B 书面表达
47.随着科技与AI的快速发展,未来将会出现许多新兴职业。无论传统职业还是新兴职业,都值得我们认真思考。你校英语社团正在举办主题为“My Future Job”的征文比赛。假如你是李华,请你根据下列思维导图,给学校投稿。写作内容如下:
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右。作文开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
My Future Job
Technology is changing our world quickly. Some people choose traditional jobs, while others prefer new ones.
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A.回答问题
请阅读下面短文,根据所提供的信息,回答五个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、信息完整切题。
One day, Fred’s aunt sent him a new spade (铁锹) and a small box of seeds (种子). As soon as he got them, he went out to the garden to plant the seeds.
His sister Jane went with him. As he dug, she stood near him and talked to him with the box of seeds in her hand. While Jane was speaking, she dropped the box of seeds on the ground by mistake. All the seeds fell out. Jane was afraid and said sorry to Fred, but Fred didn’t speak to her.
“Oh, Fred,” she cried. “Why don’t you speak to me ”
Fred answered, “I want to wait till I count to ten.”
“Count to ten ” asked Jane. “Why do you count to ten ”
“Mum once told me to count to ten before I spoke if I felt angry. I know that I was often angry with you, and I want to correct myself and do the right thing,” said Fred.
“Oh, Fred, how nice you are! It was very careless of me to let the seeds fall, but I have collected them all again. Here they are.”
The seeds were planted, and every day Fred and Jane came to watch them grow. At last, a lot of small green plants appeared above the ground. They soon grew larger and had pretty flowers, making the children very happy.
Before you speak something hurtful too fast in anger, count to ten, and if you are still angry, count again.
48.What did Fred do after he got the seeds
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49.Why did Jane say sorry to Fred
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50.Who suggested Fred count to ten
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51.Why did Fred want to correct himself
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52.According to the passage, what can you do if you are angry
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B.书面表达
53.请根据要求完成短文写作。
假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Lily最近心情不太好,看待问题很焦虑和消极,睡眠也很差。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,给她写一封信,给她一些建议,帮助她调整好心态。
要求:(1)短文必须包括思维导图提示中所有内容,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
(3)词数80左右,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Lily,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in a bad mood these days
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Don’t be afraid of having bad moods. Learn to find a proper way to relieve them and grow happily. I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
A、回答问题(共5小题)
请阅读下面短文,根据所提供的信息,回答5个问题,要求所写答案语法正确,语义完整切题。
The Wright Brothers, Wilbur and Orville, are famous for inventing the world’s first successful airplane. Many people think it was the work of one smart man, but their great success came from perfect teamwork.
Wilbur was calm, careful and good at planning. He liked studying data and solving difficult problems. Orville was creative and brave. He was good at doing experiments and trying new ideas. They had different skills, but they never competed against each other. Instead, they always shared ideas, talked about mistakes and learned together.
When they tried to make a flying machine, they failed many times. Sometimes their gliders broke down, and sometimes their ideas did not work. However, they never gave up alone. They encouraged each other, divided their work and corrected mistakes as a team. Wilbur made careful designs, while Orville tested and improved them step by step.
In 1903, their hard teamwork finally paid off. They finished the first powered flight in history. Their story tells us: no one can succeed easily alone. Great dreams always need good teamwork.
54.What are the Wright Brothers famous for
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55.What was Orville good at
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56.How did they work together to solve problems as a team
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57.When did the Wright Brothers finish the first powered flight in history
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58.What can we learn from the Wright Brothers’ story
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B、书面表达
59.请根据要求完成短文写作。
一个人的力量终究有限,团队的协作才是制胜的关键。合作凝聚人心、汇聚力量,更是集体收获成功的核心。我校正举办以团队合作为主题的征文活动,请你以李华的身份,根据以下思维导图的提示,结合自身一次合作经历,围绕合作的意义与个人感悟,写一篇英文短文投稿。
团队合作的重要性
对团队合作的看法 一次团队合作的经历 1. 时间,人物 2. 事件的经过 3. …… 个人感悟
注意:
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现真实学校名和考生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯,词数80左右,作文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Teamwork is important
I think teamwork is very important in our life.
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参考答案及试题解析
1.pressure 2. wants them to be successful Don’t push kids so hard 3.Time to relax and think of themselves. 4.They should give children less pressure and let them have a happy childhood.(答案不唯一) 5.例文:
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. Two main reasons cause this problem: some students often stay up late and don’t get enough sleep, while others spend too long doing homework or using phones and computers.
To prevent it, we should do eye exercises regularly and go out for more outdoor activities to enjoy natural light.
I think we must develop good eye habits, like reading in proper light and keeping a safe distance from books. Protecting our eyes is protecting our future.
【导语】本文讨论了当代家长让孩子参加过多课外活动导致孩子压力过大的问题。通过Cathy Taylor和Linda Miller两位家长的不同观点以及医生的建议,指出让孩子快乐比让他们成功更重要。
【解析】1.全文围绕孩子因过多课外活动而承受巨大压力展开讨论,且第一段提到“such a busy life can put students under great pressure”,因此文章提到的主要问题是“压力”。
2.①第二段Cathy Taylor提到“I really want them to be successful.”,说明她希望孩子们成功。
②第三段Linda Miller提到“People shouldn’t push their kids so hard.”,说明她认为人们不应该把孩子逼得太紧。
3.最后一段Dr. Alice Green提到“Kids should have time to relax and think of themselves, too.”,说明孩子们应该有时间放松并为自己着想。
4.本题为主观开放题,答案不唯一。结合文中医生的建议以及Linda Miller的观点,提出父母应该如何帮助孩子的建议即可。
5.写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:问题分析与建议类短文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:包含三个方面——主要原因、预防方法、自己的观点
确定人称:第一人称复数(we/our)
注意事项:文中不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名;首段已给出;词数80左右;要点齐全;可适当发挥
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
第一段:承接已给开头,分析导致近视的主要原因
第二段:提出预防近视的方法
第三段:发表个人观点并呼吁
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:主要原因
原因:stay up late/don’t get enough sleep/spend too long doing homework/using phones and computers/spend too much time playing video games等
要点二:预防方法
方法:do eye exercises regularly/go out for more outdoor activities/enjoy natural light/control the usage time of electronic products等
要点三:个人观点
观点:develop good eye habits/read in proper light/keep a safe distance from books/take a 10-minute break every hour when using electronic devices等
呼吁:protecting our eyes is protecting our future/work together to protect our eyesight for a bright future等
6.Tech Stars. 7.Because they all love robots. 8.They often argued about how to design their robot. 9.Tom. 10.Trust, communication and hard work. 11.范文:
My Great Team
I am in the English Corner team at school. Our team has ten members, all of whom love English.
We meet every Friday afternoon. We read English stories, practice spoken English and put on small plays together. Last month, we even took part in the school English speech contest and won the first prize.
I think our team is great because everyone is friendly and helpful. Working in this team makes me more confident and outgoing. I really enjoy being part of it.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文,主要讲述了学校机器人团队“Tech Stars”的组建背景、遇到的问题、分工协作以及参加市机器人比赛并获得一等奖的经历,传递了团队成功需要信任、沟通与努力的核心观点。
【解析】6.根据文章第一段中“The team has 5 members, and we call ourselves Tech Stars.”可推知,团队名称是“Tech Stars”。
7.根据文章第一段中“We started the team last year because we all love robots.”可推知,组建原因是因为他们都喜欢机器人。
8.根据文章第二段中“At first, we didn’t know much about building robots. We often argued about how to design our robot.”可推知,起初遇到的问题是经常争论如何设计机器人。
9.根据文章第二段中“We divided tasks: Lily designed the robot’s body, Tom programmed it...”可知,编程人员是Tom。
10.根据文章第三段中“Now we know that a great team needs trust, communication and hard work.”可推知,伟大团队需要的品质是信任、沟通和努力工作。
11.写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,以一般现在时为主,可穿插一般过去时描述过往活动
核心要点: 团队的名字和成员; 团队的活动/一起做的事情; 认为团队很棒的原因
确定人称:第一人称(I/we/my/our)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名、班级、学校等信息;词数控制在80词左右;语句连贯,避免照抄原文
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:开门见山,介绍团队的名称和成员构成,点明主题
主体段:具体描述团队的日常活动、一起参与的项目或经历(如训练、比赛、合作任务等)
结尾段:阐述认为团队很棒的原因(如互助、信任、共同成长等),升华主题并表达自己的感受
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:团队的名字和成员
团队名称参考:English Corner/Basketball Team/Reading Club等
成员描述:5/8/10 members/crazy about/interested in English/sports/robots/friendly and easy to work with/come from different classes but share the same goal等
要点二:团队的活动/一起做的事情
活动场景:meet every Friday afternoon/every weekend to.../practice together for 2 hours every day after school/discuss ideas, share opinions and solve problems together等
要点三:认为团队很棒的原因
原因:friendly and helpful/listen to each other and respect different ideas/trust, communication and understanding between us/like a warm family等
12.No, they don’t. 13.She ate in a restaurant. 14.Teenagers should learn some basic life skills and not depend too much on their parents. 15.It’s time for dinner. 16.他们也不应该过于依赖父母。 17.Dear Nancy,
I’m sorry to hear about your problems. Here is some advice to help you live a happy life.
First, learn to relax by watching movies or listening to music after study. It can reduce your study pressure. Second, communicate more with your parents and friends. Talk to them about your worries and the fight with your friend, and you will feel better. Finally, try to make a reasonable plan for your study and after-school classes.
I hope these suggestions can help you.
Yours truly
Henry
【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章主要讲述了现在很多中国青少年缺乏基本的生活技能,过度依赖父母,并以Joy为例说明了这一问题,最后作者建议青少年应该学习基本的生活技能,学会独立。
【解析】12.根据文章第一段“They don’t know how to do housework, because their parents do almost everything for them at home.(他们不知道如何做家务,因为他们的父母在家里几乎为他们做了一切。)”可推知结论大多数中国青少年不知道如何做家务。故填No, they don’t.
13.根据文章第二段“At last she could only go to a restaurant to eat.(最后她只能去餐馆吃饭。)”可推知结论Joy最后在餐馆吃晚饭。故填She ate in a restaurant.
14.根据文章第三段“So I think teenagers should learn some basic life skills such as tidying up their rooms, dressing themselves, cooking some simple dishes and so on.(所以我认为青少年应该学习一些基本的生活技能,比如整理房间、自己穿衣服、做一些简单的菜等等。)”可推知结论作者建议青少年应该学习一些基本的生活技能来解决这个问题。故填Teenagers should learn some basic life skills and not depend too much on their parents.
15.根据中文提示“该吃晚饭了”,考查固定句型It’s time for sth.或It’s time to do sth.,意为“该做某事了”。晚饭为dinner。故填It’s time for dinner.
16.根据英文句子“They shouldn’t depend too much on their parents, either.”,shouldn’t意为“不应该”,depend on意为“依赖”,too much意为“太多”,either用于否定句末,意为“也”。故填他们也不应该过于依赖父母。
17.写作步骤:
第一步:审题立意
确定文体:电子邮件,一般现在时为主
明确要点:帮助Nancy克服焦虑,轻松快乐地学习和生活
确定人称:第二人称为主
注意事项:80词左右,必须包含图示中的所有要点,可适当发挥,文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息
第二步:构思布局
三段式结构
开头段:表达同情,简述Nancy遇到的问题,引出下文的建议
主体段:根据图示逐一给出建议,包括学会放松(看电影、听音乐)、与父母和朋友沟通,并补充一个合理的建议
结尾段:表达祝愿,希望建议对她有帮助
第三步:要点展开
要点一:
简述Nancy遇到问题引出建议:sorry\hear about\problems\here is\some advice\help\live a happy life等
要点二:
给出建议:first\second\finally\learn\relax\watch movies\listen to music\after study\reduce your study pressure\communicate\talk to\worries\feel better\try\make a reasonable plan等
表达祝愿:hope\wish\suggestion\can\help等
18.
Four. 19.
They live in large cities. 20.
They can get close to nature. 21.
Levels of Nature and Stress Response. 22.
Living in a natural environment for a long time. 23.
例文:
Relaxation in Growing Up
As we grow older, we face more pressure from school and life.
Last term, I felt really stressed because of my heavy schoolwork. I often stayed up late and felt tired every day, which made me even more worried about my grades.
Later, I tried some ways to relax. I listened to soft music before bed and played badminton with my friends after school. These activities helped me calm down and sleep better. They also taught me that taking time to relax can make me more focused and confident in my studies.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文,介绍了亲近自然的多种益处,如减轻压力、延长寿命、减少空气污染暴露、了解动植物,并引用研究说明长期接触自然在减压方面的效果更好。
【解析】18.第一段指出“To begin with…Moreover…In addition…Lastly…”可知,文中提到了亲近自然的四个好处:减轻压力、延长寿命、减少空气污染暴露、了解不同的动植物。
19.第一段指出“…being less exposed to air pollution is important for many people who now live in large cities.”,许多关心空气污染的人住在大城市里。
20.第三段“Now, in order to lower your stress, you can get close to nature. Findings suggest that visiting natural environments can be helpful in reducing stress levels.”及第四段指出“living close to nature is the best choice you could make.”,人们可以通过亲近自然、去自然环境或住在靠近自然的地方来减轻压力。
21.第三段指出“Ewert and his partners published a study called ‘Levels of Nature and Stress Response’.”,Ewert 和他的伙伴发表的研究标题是Levels of Nature and Stress Response。
22.第四段指出“The study also showed that long-term exposure to nature was the best choice. Visiting a park in a big city would help, but would only have a little effect.”,长期生活在自然环境中比在大城市的公园散步减压效果更好。
23.写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,以第一人称叙述自身经历,用一般过去时和一般现在时为主
明确要点:成长中的一次压力经历、应对压力的放松方法、从调整中获得的益处
确定人称:第一人称
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:给出总起句,点明成长中压力与放松的主题
主体段:具体叙述一次压力经历;介绍应对压力的放松方法,说明这些方法带来的益处
结尾:自然收束,点明放松对成长的意义
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:压力经历
场景选择:heavy schoolwork/exams、friendship problems、arguments with parents
具体描述:Last term/Last year, I felt really stressed because of… (heavy schoolwork/arguments with my best friend/endless quarrels with my parents)
带来影响:I often stayed up late/felt tired every day/was afraid to talk to others/got angry easily, which made my situation worse.
要点二:放松方法
方法选择:listen to soft music/play badminton with friends/take a walk in the park/read light books/talk to my diary
具体说明:I tried some ways to relax. I listened to soft music before bed and played badminton with my friends after school. These activities helped me calm down and forget my worries.
要点三:获得的益处
益处说明:They helped me sleep better, and I felt more energetic the next day. They also taught me that taking time to relax can make me more focused and confident in my studies.
24.It lies on the border of China and Nepal./On the border of China and Nepal. 25.From the colorful rocks on the walls of the Grand Canyon. 26.Yes, it is. 27.Because it provides us with oxygen. 28.开放性试题,言之有理即可。参考答案为:I’d like to visit Victoria Falls most. Because it looks especially wonderful on sunny days with rainbows above it, and I want to enjoy its powerful beauty. 29.例文
Dear Zhang Ming,
I’m so glad to hear you’re coming to Changsha! I’d like to recommend Orange Isle to you.
It lies in the middle of the Xiangjiang River and is one of the most beautiful places in Changsha. There are green trees, fresh air and flowers everywhere. When you walk there, you can get close to nature and forget your pressure. That’s why I love it so much.
As for me, I relax by taking photos of the views or walking with my family there. Sometimes I also run along the riverside. It helps me feel relaxed and happy.
I hope you will have a wonderful time here!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文介绍了珠穆朗玛峰、科罗拉多大峡谷、维多利亚瀑布、大堡礁和亚马逊雨林等世界自然奇观,分别说明了它们的位置、特点、现状及保护意义。
【解析】24.第一段直接说明:“It lies on the border of China and Nepal.”,因此答案是原文直接信息。
25.第二段提到:“The colorful rocks on its walls tell the earth’s history.”,因此答案是通过科罗拉多大峡谷岩壁上的彩色岩石了解地球历史。
26.第四段明确指出:“However, it is now in great danger because of climate change.”,因此答案为肯定回答。
27.第五段直接给出原因:“because it provides us with oxygen”,因此答案是原文引述。
28.本题是开放性试题,答案不唯一,但观点需基于文中事实,结合自己的看法和理由作答。参考答案为:I’d like to visit Victoria Falls most. Because it looks especially wonderful on sunny days with rainbows above it, and I want to enjoy its powerful beauty.
29.[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:书信体应用文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:景点信息 (地点、位置、环境特点)、游玩价值 (亲近自然、缓解压力、调节情绪)、个人放松方式 (日常缓解压力的活动)
确定人称:第一人称 (写信人李华),第二人称 (收信人张明)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名、校名;词数不少于 80 词,开头已给出,不计入总词数
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出固定开头,点明得知对方来长沙的消息,自然引出推荐
主体段:介绍推荐的景点 (橘子洲),说明位置、环境特点,解释其亲近自然、缓解压力的价值;分享自己平时的放松方式,贴合“缓解学业压力、调节情绪”的主题
结尾段:送上祝福,表达期待对方游玩愉快
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:景点信息与游玩价值
地点选择:Orange Isle/Yuelu Mountain/Songya Lake等
位置描述:It lies in the middle of the Xiangjiang River./It lies in the west of Changsha, near Hunan University./It is in the north of Changsha, a large wetland park.等
环境特点:one of the most beautiful places in Changsha/with green trees/fresh air and flowers everywhere/famous for its ancient temples and red maple leaves/clear lake water and wide grasslands等
游玩价值:get close to nature/forget pressure/relax both body and mind/climb the mountain to enjoy the city view/watch birds and feel close to nature等
要点二:个人放松方式
活动选择:take photos of the views/walk with family/run along the riverside/listen to soft music/play badminton with friends等
作用效果:help me feel relaxed and happy/ease study pressure/let out tiredness and pressure/calm my mind after study等
30.Unhappy feelings like sadness or anger. 31.By pushing people to clear their minds. 32.Anger. 33.Before a big test. 34.Because it can push people to try something new. 35.例文:
How to Deal with Bad Feelings
By Li Ming
Emotions are like a mirror, reflecting our thoughts and feelings. Learning to deal with bad feelings is really important for us to grow up healthily. Last term, I failed my math exam. I was so angry that I shouted at my best friend for no reason. Later, I felt very sorry for my rude behavior. Here are my suggestions on dealing with bad feelings. First, we should accept that it is normal to have some bad feelings. Second, we can talk to our parents or friends about our problems, which can help us feel relaxed. Finally, doing some sports like running can also make us feel better.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】本文介绍了悲伤、愤怒、紧张、无聊等负面情绪并非有害,反而能给人带来帮助,是生活中的“助手”。
【解析】30.根据短文“Scientists say these emotions are good for you”(这里的“these emotions”指前文的“Unhappy feelings like sadness or anger”),可知答案:Unhappy feelings like sadness or anger.
31.根据短文“By pushing you to clear your mind, sadness allows for better memory and more careful thought”,可知答案:By pushing people to clear their minds.
32.根据短文“Anger drives you to act fast and solve problems quickly”,可知答案:Anger.
33.根据短文“Before a big test, you might feel nervous”,可知答案:Before a big test.
34.根据短文“It can push you to try something new, like a hobby or a different way of learning”,可知答案:Because it can push people to try something new.
35.[写作步骤]
第一步:审题立意
确定文体:演讲稿,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:观点(处理坏情绪很重要)+个人经历+处理建议
确定人称:第一人称(I)
注意事项:80词左右
第二步:构思布局
开头:承接已给内容,引出观点
主体1:讲述个人经历及影响
主体2:提出处理坏情绪的具体建议
结尾:衔接落款
第三步:要点展开
观点:learning to deal with bad feelings is really important for us to grow up healthily/learning to deal with bad feelings is necessary for our daily life
个人经历:failed an important exam / felt frustrated and shouted at my friend / ignored my mom’s care that night / regretted my actions the next day
处理建议:accept that it is normal to have some bad feelings / take a 10-minute walk to calm down / write down negative thoughts in a notebook / talk to a close friend about our troubles
36.
An English play— The Emperor’s New Clothes . 37.
Because they think their lines are too many and too difficult. 38.
They think their roles are not important. 39.
Working together. 40.
They can improve their spoken English and learn about Western culture. 41.
例文:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to tell you about the problems in our play group.
Some members think their lines are too many and too difficult to remember. Others feel their roles are not important, so they lose passion.
To solve these problems, we suggest that you give us some tips on memorizing lines quickly. Also, could you help us understand that every role in a play is necessary and valuable We hope you can encourage the students who think their roles are unimportant and help them realize the importance of teamwork.
Thank you for your help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文,主要讲述了作者班级在准备英语短剧《皇帝的新衣》时遇到的一些问题,以及作者对解决这些问题的看法。
【解析】36.根据文章第一段“Recently, our class is preparing an English play — The Emperor’s New Clothes”可推知,结论班级正在准备一部英语剧——《皇帝的新衣》。
37.根据文章第二段“First, some students think their lines are too many and too difficult, so they feel worried about remembering them.”可推知,结论是因为他们觉得台词太多太难。
38.根据文章第二段“Second, other students consider their roles ‘not important’ ”可推知,是他们认为自己的角色不重要。
39.根据文章第三段“In fact, every role in a play is necessary, and working together is the key to success.”可推知,结论团队合作是成功的关键。
40.根据文章第一段“It helps us improve our spoken English and learn about Western culture.”可推知,学生们可以提高英语口语并了解西方文化。
41.写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:电子邮件,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:有同学觉得台词多记不住,有同学觉得自己角色不重要,并针对这些问题提出合理的解决建议,表达期望。
确定人称:第一人称(I, we)
注意事项:词数80词,条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确,不出现真实姓名和班级(使用Li Hua)
[第二步:构思布局]
开头段:点明写信目的——汇报小组问题
主体段:描述具体问题(成员觉得自己的台词太多且难以熟记,还有些人失去了热情),提出建议
结尾段:表达期望——希望老师鼓励那些认为自己角色不重要的同学
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:介绍问题
Some members think their lines are too many and too difficult to remember. Others feel their roles are not important, so they lose passion./Some students are worried about forgetting their lines because there are too many.等
要点二:提出建议
give us some tips on memorizing lines quickly /help us understand that every role in a play is necessary and valuable/ divide the lines into smaller parts to make them easier to remember等
要点三:表达期望
encourage the students who think their roles are unimportant and help them realize the importance of teamwork/help students improve their memory等
42.She deeply loves making xiaolongbao, a traditional Chinese soup dumpling. 43.Chen began her cooking journey at 19. 44.To introduce delicious Shanghai food to local people. 45.About 28 kinds of xiaolongbao. 46.By hand. 47.例文
My Future Job
Technology is changing our world quickly. Some people choose traditional jobs, while others prefer new ones. I want to be a doctor to help others.
I choose this job because doctors can save lives and help patients feel better. Seeing doctors work hard during the pandemic moved me deeply and inspired me a lot.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard, especially biology and medicine. I will also read more medical books and practice communicating with patients kindly. I believe my dream will come true with hard work and patience. Let’s work hard for our future jobs together!
【导语】本文介绍了厨师陈丽娜对小笼包的热爱以及她通过努力实现梦想的故事。
【解析】42.第一段提到陈丽娜热爱制作小笼包“She deeply loves making xiaolongbao”,答案是原文直接信息。
43.第二段提到她19岁开始烹饪之旅“Chen began her cooking journey at 19”,答案是原文直接信息。
44.第二段提到她去日本是为了向当地人介绍美味的上海菜“to introduce delicious Shanghai food to local people”,答案是原文直接信息。
45.第三段提到她创造了大约28种小笼包“created about 28 kinds of xiaolongbao”,答案是原文直接信息。
46.第三段提到每个小笼包都是手工精心制作的“Every dumpling is carefully made by hand”,因此答案是By hand。
47.写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文(未来职业规划),用一般现在时(描述选择和原因)和一般将来时(描述行动计划)
明确要点:选择的未来职业(医生)、选择原因(能挽救生命、帮助病人、疫情期间医生的工作令人感动和受到激励)、为实现梦想做出的行动(努力学习特别是生物和医学、多读医学书籍、练习与患者善意沟通)、呼吁(努力为未来工作而奋斗)
确定人称:第一人称(I)
注意事项:需包含所有要点,开头已给出,词数80左右,不得出现真实信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,引出未来职业选择的话题
主体段:阐述选择的职业(医生)及原因(挽救生命、帮助病人、疫情期间深受感动和激励)
结尾段:说明为实现梦想采取的行动(努力学习生物和医学、多读医学书籍、练习与患者沟通)并呼吁共同努力
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:选择的职业
职业表达:I want to be a doctor to help others/My future job is to become a doctor等
要点二:选择原因
原因一:doctors can save lives and help patients feel better/Doctors have the ability to save lives and ease pain等
原因二:Seeing doctors work hard during the pandemic moved me deeply and inspired me a lot/Their hard work during the pandemic touched my heart and gave me strength等
要点三:为实现梦想的行动
行动一:study hard, especially biology and medicine/work hard on biology and medical knowledge等
行动二:read more medical books/do more medical reading to learn deeply等
行动三:practice communicating with patients kindly/develop good communication skills with patients等
要点四:呼吁
呼吁表达:Let’s work hard for our future jobs together/Let’s all put effort into making our career dreams come true等
信念表达:I believe my dream will come true with hard work and patience/Hard work and patience will lead me to success等
48.He went to the garden to plant the seeds. 49.Because she dropped the box of seeds on the ground by mistake. 50.His mother./His mum. 51.Because he was often angry with his sister and wanted to improve. 52.Count to ten before speaking. 53.Dear Lily,
I’m sorry to hear that you are in a bad mood these days. To help you feel better, I suggest trying these methods:
First, share your worries with trusted friends. Talking about feelings can lighten your burden. For example, discuss what makes you anxious over a cup of tea. Second, practice relaxation techniques. Listen to gentle music before bed or take deep breaths for five minutes when stressed. These actions calm your mind and improve sleep. Finally, maintain healthy routines. Exercise daily, like jogging or yoga, to release positive energy. Also, ensure you eat balanced meals.
Don’t be afraid of having bad moods. Learn to find a proper way to relieve them and grow happily. I hope you will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文主要讲述了Fred在妹妹不小心弄掉种子时,通过数到十来控制自己愤怒情绪的故事,告诉我们在生气时说话前要先数到十来平复心情。
【解析】48.根据文章第一段“As soon as he got them, he went out to the garden to plant the seeds.”,可知Fred拿到种子后去花园种种子了。
49.根据文章第二段“While Jane was speaking, she dropped the box of seeds on the ground by mistake. All the seeds fell out. Jane was afraid and said sorry to Fred”,可知Jane向Fred道歉是因为她不小心把种子掉在了地上。
50.根据文章第六段“Mum once told me to count to ten before I spoke if I felt angry.”,可知是Fred的妈妈建议他数到十的。
51.根据文章第六段“I know that I was often angry with you, and I want to correct myself and do the right thing”,可知Fred想改正自己是因为他经常生妹妹的气。
52.根据文章最后一段“Before you speak something hurtful too fast in anger, count to ten, and if you are still angry, count again.”,可知生气时可以在说话前数到十。
53.写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:观点建议类书信,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:对Lily的情况表示同情并表明写信目的;给出调整心态的具体建议;表达鼓励与祝愿。
确定人称:第一人称(I/we),第二人称(you)
注意事项:控制词数,不得透露真实信息
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:已给出,礼貌共情,点明写信目的,引出建议
主体段:分点阐述调整心态的具体建议,层次清晰
结尾段:呼应开头,表达鼓励与美好祝愿,收束全文
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一: 调整心态的建议
分享烦恼、释放压力:share your worries with trusted friends/lighten your burden/discuss what makes you anxious over a cup of tea/open up to your close friends/ease your anxiety/chat about your feelings with someone you trust等
学会放松、改善睡眠:practice relaxation techniques/Listen to gentle music/calm your mind and improve sleep/learn to slow down and relax/take a few deep breaths等
关注生活、保持健康习惯:maintain healthy routines/to release positive energy/ensure you eat balanced meals/stick to a healthy lifestyle/stay active with sports/keep a balanced diet等
要点二:鼓励与祝愿
做法:Don’t be afraid of having bad moods/find a proper way to relieve/will be better/Bad moods are nothing to worry about/deal with negative feelings and keep a happy heart等
54.
They are famous for inventing the world’s first successful airplane. 55.
He was good at doing experiments and trying new ideas. 56.
They encouraged each other, divided their work and corrected mistakes as a team. 57.
They finished it in 1903. 58.
No one can succeed easily alone./Great dreams always need good teamwork. 59.
例文:
Teamwork is important I think teamwork is very important in our life. It enables us to overcome difficulties efficiently.
Last semester, my teammates and I participated in a school singing competition. Initially, we practiced separately and our voices didn’t match. Later, we decided to practice together every day and helped each other improve. Finally, we won the first prize.
This experience teaches me that cooperation leads to success. Together, we can achieve more than alone.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了莱特兄弟通过完美的团队合作发明了世界上第一架成功的飞机,并阐述了团队合作对于成功的重要性。
【解析】54.文章首段直接点明“The Wright Brothers, Wilbur and Orville, are famous for inventing the world's first successful airplane”,据此直接提取核心信息作答。
55.第二段明确写到“Orville was creative and brave. He was good at doing experiments and trying new ideas”,摘取对应能力内容即为答案。
56.第三段讲述二人团队协作的做法,原文“They encouraged each other, divided their work and corrected mistakes as a team”是团队解决问题的具体方式,直接摘抄整合即可。
57.文末段落出现“In 1903, their hard teamwork finally paid off. They finished the first powered flight in history”,提取时间年份作答。
58.文章最后一句“Their story tells us: no one can succeed easily alone. Great dreams always need good teamwork.”点明主旨道理,任选其一作答。
59.写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,时态以一般现在时、一般过去时为主
明确要点:点明团队合作的重要性,记叙团队参赛经历,总结合作感悟
确定人称:第一人称(I/my/we/our)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名、学校等个人信息,叙事逻辑清晰,时态区分准确
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起点明主旨,直接表明团队合作在生活中十分重要,简单说明合作的作用
主体段:记叙校园歌唱比赛的亲身经历,描写从配合不佳到共同练习、互帮互助、最终获奖的过程
结尾段:结合个人经历总结感悟,升华合作铸就成功、众人合力事半功倍的主题
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:点明合作重要性
核心词汇:teamwork/cooperation等
价值作用:important/meaningful/valuable/efficiently/quickly/smoothly等
能力提升:overcome difficulties/solve problems/deal with troubles等
要点二:团队参赛经历
活动赛事:singing competition/dancing contest/sports meeting/match等
前期问题:practice separately/voices didn’t match/perform badly/cooperate poorly/practice alone等
改进方式:practice together/help each other/learn from each other/support one another/work together等
最终结果:win the first prize/get the champion/achieve good results等
要点三:总结合作感悟
感悟总结:cooperation leads to success/teamwork brings victory/achieve more/gain greater progress/make better achievements等
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