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2025-2026学年七年级下册英语期末复习考点培优沪教版（五四学制）
（新教材）专题18 读写综合
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
（一）阅读并回答问题。（每题不超过6个词）
In the wetlands of Yancheng, two rare animals, milu deer (麋鹿) and red-crowned cranes (丹顶鹤), live together happily. The milu deer has four long legs and big antlers (鹿角). It is a kind of lovely animal that feeds on grass in the wetland. It used to live in North China, but now most of them live in nature parks. They love the wetland conditions, and they enjoy the fresh air there.
Red-crowned cranes are unusual and beautiful birds. They have white feathers with red “crowns” on their heads. They fly to Yancheng every year to spend the winter. They live near the water and eat small fish and insects. People here care for them and protect their home.
The wetland is more than a shelter (庇护所) for these animals. It is a wonderland where plants and animals live together. It also helps keep soil in place and keep the environment healthy. The wonderland attracts people from different places. Many animal lovers come here to watch the animals and enjoy the natural beauty. We hope everyone can protect these lovely animals and their home.
1．What animals does the passage mainly introduce
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2．What do milu deer eat in the wetland
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3．Why do red-crowned cranes fly to Yancheng every year
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4．Who likes to come to Yancheng and watch the animals
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5．What can we do for these rare animals
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（二）书面表达。
6．假如你是一种地形地貌（a mountain/the ocean/a plain 三选一），请用第一人称的口吻和拟人手法，写一篇80词左右的短文介绍自己。以下要点可做参考：
①What are you made of
②What is special about you
③What animal friends do you have
④What can you do for humans and animals
⑤......
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A．回答问题
In early June, there were wildfires in Canada. Many schools closed because of the fire. While most kids were happy to enjoy a longer summer vacation, ten-year-old Leo had a bigger plan. After his family lost their home, they had to move into a van (厢式货车) with their dog. Leo wanted to help his family start over, so he decided to mow the lawn (修剪草坪) with an old push mower (割草机).
At first, it was just a $10-per-lawn summer job. But it quickly turned into something bigger. When neighbors heard Leo’s story, they supported him a lot. Some paid 100 dollars or more for one yard. His classmates also heard about what he was doing and wanted to join him. On hot days, they brought him cold drinks in reusable (可循环使用的) bottles. “They are proud of me for working in a green way,” Leo said.
In the end, Leo raised 1,500 dollars and mowed 30 lawns. He will continue until school starts and he also hopes to plant trees in his community (社区) later. He has some advice for other kids. “Follow your heart, help where you can, and remember even small actions can help protect the Earth.”
7．How old is Leo
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8．Why did Leo decide to mow the lawn
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9．Who brought Leo cold drinks on hot days
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10．How much did Leo raise in the end
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11．Where does Leo hope to plant trees later
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B．书面表达
请根据要求完成短文写作。
12．乐于助人是一种美德，乐于助人不仅可以让他人感到温暖，也可以使自己获得快乐。假设你是李华，你校英语报正在组织主题为“Helping others makes me happy”的英语征文活动，请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英文写一篇短文参赛。
注意：
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
As we all know, helping others is a great virtue (美德).
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A．阅读并回答问题。
A plant has four main parts. They are flowers, leaves, stems (茎) and roots (根). Stems grow above ground and roots grow below ground.
Roots bring water from the ground to the plant. The stem carries water from the roots to the leaves and flowers. It holds the leaves and flowers in the sunlight, too.
Leaves make food for the plant. Plants have flowers because the flowers make seeds. New plants grow from seeds.
People eat all parts of plants. For example, we eat the leaves of a cabbage, the root of a carrot. Which part of rice do we eat We eat the seeds. The seeds of the rice plant feed billions of people. What’s a billion It’s 1,000,000,000.
(Answer the following questions with No More Than 5 Words )
13．How many main parts does a plant have
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14．Where do roots grow
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15．What does the stem carry from the roots
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16．Why do plants have flowers
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17．What part of a carrot do we eat
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B．书面表达
18．为了鼓励青少年亲近大自然、走进大自然，某青少年英文网站举办了主题为“Nature”的征文比赛。假如你是李明，请你根据以下思维导图的提示写一篇英文短文投稿。
Nature is our home. It’s a part of our life.
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第一节 阅读下面短文，根据短文内容回答问题。
Chimelong Ocean Kingdom (长隆海洋王国) is a great place for sea animal lovers. Many people go to visit it every year. There are some Chinese white dolphins.
How much do you know about Chinese white dolphins Chinese white dolphins are not really white. They are grey when they are young. The colour is pink when they are old. Chinese white dolphins have a long life. They usually live up to 40 years old. What’s their favourite food Fish.
However, the Chinese white dolphins are in danger. Now there are about 6,000 Chinese white dolphins in the world. The number of them is small, so they are called “giant (巨大的) pandas of the sea”. Why is the number of them so small Well, some people kill them for meat and other things. And they don’t have much food to eat because of people’s activities in the sea. To protect (保护) them, people do a lot these years. People think Chinese white dolphins can bring good luck to them.
19．What colour are Chinese white dolphins when they are old
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20．What do Chinese white dolphins like eating
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21．How many Chinese white dolphins are there in the world
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22．Why don’t Chinese white dolphins have much food to eat
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23．How can we protect Chinese white dolphins
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第二节
24．学校英语社团负责人读完第一节（回答问题）后，深受触动，于是开展以“My Favourite Zoo”为主题的征文活动。假如你是社团成员李华，请根据下面内容提示，写一篇文章投稿。
要求：
（1）短文必须包思维导图中所有的要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）不得出现真实人名、校名和地名；
（3）词数80词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Zoo
My favourite zoo is Wild Woods Zoo.
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（一）阅读并回答问题
A Bond (纽带) of Love
Community is like a big family, and voluntary work is the bond that makes every member close.
In our community, a group of volunteers, including students, office workers and retirees, have been giving their time and energy to helping those in need, making the community a warmer place.
One of the voluntary activities is caring for the elderly who live alone. There are more than 20 elderly people without family companions in our community. Every weekend, volunteers visit them. We chat with them about their daily life, listen to their stories of the past and help them do housework such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the windows. We also buy things and medicines for them. Last winter, we organized an activity called “warmth campaign” and gave away thick sweaters and scarves to the elderly. Many elderly people said that these volunteers are just like their own children.
Another important activity is helping children with their studies. Some parents in the community have to work long hours to make a living and have no time to care for their children. Volunteers who are good at school subjects take turns to give classes every evening. We not only help the children solve study problems but also help them develop good study habits. Many children learn better in their studies.
Community voluntary work also includes environmental protection activities. We organize people to pick up rubbish in the community garden, plant flowers and trees. These activities have improved the community’s environment and made residents more aware of environmental protection.
Voluntary work in the community is not only helpful, but also meaningful. It makes people care for each other and strengthens the connection between community members. Everyone can contribute a little love through voluntary work, and together we can build a more harmonious and beautiful community.
回答下面五个问题，每题答案不超过6个词。
25．Who are the volunteers in the author’s community
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26．How many elderly people living alone are there in the community
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27．What did the volunteers do in the “warmth campaign” last winter
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28．What do the volunteers do besides (除了) helping children with study problems
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29．What do you think of community voluntary work
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（二）书面表达
30．请根据你校校刊TEENS MAG中LET YOUR DREAM FLY栏目有关 “Dream home, Dream neighborhood” 的英文征稿，写一篇文章，表达你的想法。
Hi, At TEENS MAG we like to share ideas about anything you are interested in. In my column, LET YOUR DREAM FLY, you can let other students know what you think. This month, we want you to write about your dream home and dream neighborhood: 1. What is your dream home like 2. What’s in your dream neighborhood 3. Do the neighbors help each other How 4. What do you think of your dream home and neighborhood
注意：
(1) 内容覆盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
(2) 词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dream home, Dream neighborhood
I am glad to share my ideas about my dream home and dream neighborhood.
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第一节
阅读下面短文，根据短文内容回答问题。
The blue whale lives in the sea. It is the largest (最大的) animal in the world, but it eats the smallest animals for food. Many people kill the whales. And not having enough (足够的) clean water is also a problem. There may be only about 1,300 blue whales left.
The wild Bactrian camel lives in Northwest China and Mongolia. It is a large camel and the only species in the world with two humps (驼峰). There are only 950 left in the wild.
Many Asian elephants live in India but you can find them in other countries as well. Many elephants work for people. Every year many Asian elephants are killed for their ivory. There might be 35,000 Asian elephants left in the world.
31．Why does the number of blue whales go down
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32．Where does the wild Bactrian camel live
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33．What is special about the wild Bactrian camel
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34．Are there Asian elephants in other countries
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35．How will you save the animals after you read the passage
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第二节
36．近年来，国内多家动物园发生游客投喂、拍打玻璃导致动物生病甚至死亡的事件。例如，2024年某动物园的一只长颈鹿因误食游客投喂的塑料袋包装食物而死亡；2025年某动物园的一只黑猩猩因长期被游客大声吼叫、拍打玻璃，出现严重应激反应，不再进食。假设你是李华，你在新闻中看到这些事件后，决定给当地动物园负责人写一封英语建议信，内容包括：
1．提到新闻中动物受到伤害的事实（投喂、噪音、拍打玻璃等）；
2．提出至少两条及以上的具体规定建议并解释理由；
3．呼吁大家遵守规则，共同保护动物。
要求：
1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2．语言表达要准确，语句通顺，意思连贯；
3．词数不少于70。
参考词汇：chimpanzee 黑猩猩 die from 死于 plastic bag 塑料袋 tap on the glass 敲打玻璃 Dear Zoo Manager,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student.
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Yours,
Li Hua
A．回答问题
请阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答五个问题，并将答案写在答卷对应题目的答题位置上。要求所写答案语法正确、信息完整切题。
The Chimelong Ocean Kingdom (长隆海洋王国) is a great place for sea animal lovers. Many people go to visit it every year. There are some Chinese white dolphins.
How much do you know about Chinese white dolphins Chinese white dolphins are not really white. They are grey when they are young. The colour is pink when they are old. Chinese white dolphins have a long life. They usually live up to 40 years old. What’s their favourite food Fish.
However, the Chinese white dolphins are in danger. Now there are about 6,000 Chinese white dolphins in the world. The number of them is small, so they are called “giant (巨大的) pandas of the sea”. Why is the number of them so small Well, some people kill them for meat and other things. And they don’t have much food to eat because of people’s activities on the sea. To protect (保护) them, people have done a lot in recent years. People think Chinese white dolphins can bring good luck to them.
37．What colour are Chinese white dolphins when they are old
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38．What do Chinese white dolphins like eating
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39．How many Chinese white dolphins are there in the world
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40．Why don’t Chinese white dolphins have much food to eat
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41．Are Chinese white dolphins white
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B．书面表达
请根据要求完成短文写作，并将短文写在答卷对应题目的答题位置上。
42．假设你是成都大熊猫研究基地的管理员林伟，请你根据以下思维导图给参观的游客介绍一下大熊猫以及参观的注意事项。
大熊猫基本情况1、栖息地：主要生活在四川； 2、外形特征； 3、饮食习惯。 参观注意事项1、严禁喂食； 2、环境维护； 3、…… 呼吁1、希望游客自觉遵守规则； 2、携手共同保护大熊猫。
注意：(1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和考生的真实姓名。
(3) 语句连贯，词数70左右，作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I am the panda keeper (饲养员), Lin Wei. Let me tell you something about pandas and some rules for visiting the Chengdu Research Base (研究基地) .________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A．回答问题。
阅读下面短文，根据所提供的信息，回答五个问题。要求所写答案语法正确、信息完整切题。
We all know that trees are really important to us. They give us oxygen, which we need to breathe. Trees are also our friends because they can make our lives more beautiful. There is an interesting thing about trees in Changchun.
As the cold season arrives, people in Changchun start wearing sweaters and warm jackets. To people’s surprise, some large roadside trees also “wear” colorful sweaters. On Dongsi Road, trees were dressed in colorful sweaters. With bright colors, the tree sweaters have become popular among citizens (市民) and tourists (游客). Many people visit this road because they want to take photos. The sweaters warm not only the trees but also people’s hearts.
We should plant more trees and take care of them to make our world more beautiful.
43．What do trees give people
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44．Which road are the dressed trees on
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45．Do citizens and tourists love the trees in colorful sweaters
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46．Why do many people visit this road
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47．What should we do to make our world more beautiful according to this passage
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B．书面表达
48．为了帮助学生们亲近大自然，认识和了解植物，我们学校决定成立植物俱乐部。假如你是该俱乐部的负责人，请你根据下面的提示信息及写作要求写一篇英语短文，介绍一下这个植物俱乐部。
The plant club
时间 每周六上午八点半
活动 ◆参加关于植物的课程 ◆去野外(the wild)观察植物 ◆……
益处 ●学到更多关于植物的知识 ●结交有相同爱好的朋友
写作要求：
(1) 文中须包含表格中的要点提示，可适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
(3) 词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Do you love plants Do you want to learn more about plants Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you.
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阅读下面的语篇，根据语篇内容回答问题。
Friday, 30 May
Today we went on a school trip to a farm! It was tiring but great fun! In the morning, we explored the farm. There were large tents with tomatoes, cucumbers, and many other fruits and vegetables. The farmer told us about how these fruits and vegetables go from the fields to our tables. I was very interested because I usually only see them in the supermarket.
Then we got straight to work! First, we picked some strawberries. The work seemed easy, but it took time to get it right. Slowly, we filled many baskets. In the afternoon, the farmer taught us how to cut branches and tomato plants. This helps them to grow more fruit. Finally, we watered the plants. Plants need so much work! It was tiring, but I enjoyed working with my hands.
One thing I learnt today: Farming isn’t easy! It made me think of the saying, “Every grain comes from hard work.” The farmer let us take some vegetables home. My mum cooked some for dinner, and they were fresh and delicious! They certainly taste better when you work for them! Today was really a day to remember.
49．Where did Sam go for his school trip
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50．How did he feel about the trip
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51．What did he learn from the trip
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52．Did he take some vegetables home
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53．请翻译“Every grain comes from hard work.”
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54．假如你是李华，读完第一节（回答问题）后，深受触动，大自然亦是良师。在大自然中，孩子们不仅可以获取丰富的野外考察旅行，请根据以下内容提示，以Our field trip为题写一篇英语短文描述此次经历。
Time last Friday
Weather Sunny and warm
People Mr Lee and my class
Place forest
Activities Watched birds, grew trees, collected leaves
Feelings Tired but happy
Our Field Trip
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请仔细阅读下面短文，用完整句子回答问题。
I’m Owen. Last weekend, I visited one of my friends. His name is Tom and he lives in a big house out of the city. My dad drove me there on Friday evening, and then he went back to our house in the city. First, I met Tom’s parents. They were really friendly. They showed me my room. Then, we had a big dinner together. After dinner, Tom and I watched a movie on TV.
The next day, we got up early. Tom’s mom made breakfast for us. After breakfast, we went for a walk in the forest. After a long walk, we arrived at a lake. We then played near the lake. The water was cold, but it was very clean. After eating some bread, we continued (继续) walking in the forest. An hour later, we found a cave (山洞). It was very dark, so we didn’t go in there. Then, we turned back home. We were so tired and dinner was waiting for us.
In the evening, we went to bed very early because we were really tired. The next morning, my dad came to take me home. I had a great time with Tom and his family. I think it was a special weekend for me.
55．How did Owen go to Tom’s house
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56．What did Owen and Tom do after dinner on Friday evening
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57．Who made breakfast for Owen and Tom on Saturday morning
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58．Why didn’t Owen and Tom go into the cave
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59．What does Owen think of his weekend
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60．书面表达
假如你是李明，上文中的Owen是你的外国朋友。你跟他分享了几张上周日去敬老院做志愿者的照片，他看过后向你询问你当日的情况，请你给他回复一封邮件， 介绍你去敬老院的经历。内容包括:
1. 你和谁一起，乘坐什么交通工具去敬老院;
2. 你们在敬老院做了什么 (至少两点) ;
3. 谈谈你的感受。
写作要求:
1. 不能抄袭原文; 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，要点齐全，不少于70词。
Hi, Owen!
I’m happy you like my photos.
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Yours,
Li Ming
/ 让学习更有效 期末备考培优 | 英语学科
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参考答案及试题解析
1．Milu deer and red-crowned cranes. 2．They feed on grass. 3．To spend the winter. 4．Many animal lovers. 5．Protect them and their home. 6．例文
Hello, everyone! I am a mountain.
I am made of hard rocks and rich soil. Trees and colorful flowers grow on me. I am very tall and strong. Many wild animals live on me, such as lovely monkeys and birds. They are my good friends. I provide fresh air and clean water for humans. I also give safe homes to animals.
I hope people can protect me and keep me beautiful. Let’s live together happily in nature.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了盐城湿地中生活的两种珍稀动物——麋鹿和丹顶鹤的生活习性，以及湿地对环境的重要性，呼吁人们保护动物及其家园。
【解析】1．根据文章第1段“two rare animals, milu deer and red-crowned cranes, live together happily”可推知结论文章主要介绍了这两种动物。
2．根据文章第1段“It is a kind of lovely animal that feeds on grass in the wetland.”可推知结论麋鹿吃草。
3．根据文章第2段“They fly to Yancheng every year to spend the winter.”可推知结论丹顶鹤来盐城是为了过冬。
4．根据文章第3段“Many animal lovers come here to watch the animals”可推知结论动物爱好者喜欢来看动物。
5．根据文章第3段“We hope everyone can protect these lovely animals and their home.”可推知结论我们应该保护它们和家园。
6．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
文体：介绍性说明文，时态以一般现在时为主
人称：第一人称I/my
核心要点：点明自己的身份，描述自己的构成，阐述自己对人类和动物的作用，表达对人类的期望
注意事项：必须用拟人手法，结构清晰，字数约80词
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段：打招呼，点明身份
主题段：自身构成和特点，对人类/动物的作用
结尾段：表达期望，升华主题
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：点明身份和构成
常用表达：I am a mountain/ I am made of hard rocks and rich soil/ocean/plain/water等
要点二：对人类和动物的作用
常用表达：Many wild animals live on me/provide fresh air and clean water for humans/give safe homes to animals/food/water/等
要点三：升华主题
常用表达：I hope/Let’s/I wish等
7．He is ten/10 years old./Ten/10. 8．Because he wanted to help his family start over./To help his family start over. 9．His classmates. 10．He raised 1,500 dollars./1,500 dollars. 11．In his community. 12．范文：
As we all know, helping others is a great virtue. Last Sunday I did voluntary work in the city park.
When I got there, I found a lost little boy crying and comforted him. I sent him to the police station and helped him reunite with his mother. After that, I helped the cleaners pick up the rubbish in the park. Seeing the clean park and the boy’s happy smile, I felt very proud and happy.
Helping others is helping ourselves. I hope people will offer help to those in need.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了10岁的加拿大男孩Leo在野火烧毁家园后，为了帮助家人重新开始，通过修剪草坪筹集资金，并得到邻居和同学支持的感人故事。
【解析】7．根据第一段中的“While most kids were happy to enjoy a longer summer vacation, ten-year-old Leo had a bigger plan.”可知，Leo十岁了。
8．根据第一段中的“Leo wanted to help his family start over, so he decided to mow the lawn (修剪草坪) with an old push mower (割草机).”可知，Leo决定修剪草坪是因为他想帮助家人重新开始。
9．根据第二段中的“His classmates also heard about what he was doing and wanted to join him. On hot days, they brought him cold drinks in reusable (可循环使用的) bottles.”可知，是他的同学们给他带了冷饮。
10．根据第三段中的“In the end, Leo raised 1,500 dollars and mowed 30 lawns.”可知，Leo最后筹集了1500美元。
11．根据第三段中的“He will continue until school starts and he also hopes to plant trees in his community (社区) later.”可知，Leo希望以后在他的社区种树。
12．写作步骤：
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时、一般现在时为主
明确要点：介绍助人的时间地点、写明两件具体助人行为、个人感受、呼吁大家日常生活中要乐于助人
确定人称：第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项：词数80词左右，不得出现真实校名、地名、姓名
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：借用给定开篇，交代上周日在城市公园参与志愿、帮助他人（点明时间地点）
主体段：列举两件具体助人事件：安抚走失小男孩并帮他找妈妈、帮保洁捡拾垃圾；写出内心自豪快乐的感受
结尾段：点明助人即助己，呼吁大家在日常生活中主动帮助有需要的人
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：介绍帮助他人的时间和地点
时间和地点：last Sunday/did some voluntary work/last Sunday/took part in voluntary activities/helped people there等
要点二：具体助人行为
具体行为：saw a little boy crying/walked to him and tried to calm him down/took him to the police station nearby/helped him find his mother/helped the cleaners pick up the rubbish in the park/noticed a little boy crying for losing his mom/comforted him patiently/sent him to the nearby police station to reunite with his mother/helped an old man cross the road等
要点三：内心感受
感受：felt very proud and happy/was filled with pride and joy等
要点四：呼吁大家在日常生活要乐于助人
呼吁：Helping others is helping ourselves./I hope that everyone can give a helping hand to those in need in our daily life./We benefit ourselves when we help others./I expect all of us to offer help to people in trouble in daily life.等
13．Four. 14．Below ground. 15．Water. 16．To make seeds. 17．The root. 18．例文
Nature is our home. It’s a part of our life.
Last summer, I went hiking with my parents. The air was fresh and the trees were green. I saw beautiful flowers and heard birds singing. I felt relaxed and peaceful. Nature made me forget my worries.
Getting close to nature has many benefits. It helps us relax. We can learn a lot from nature. It also keeps us healthy.
Let’s go into nature and enjoy its beauty. We should protect nature and live in harmony with it.
【导语】本文是一篇说明文，主要介绍了植物的四个主要部分——花、叶、茎和根，并分别说明了每个部分的功能。
13．根据第一段“A plant has four main parts.”可知，植物有四个主要部分。
14．根据第一段“Stems grow above ground and roots grow below ground.”可知，根生长在地下。
15．根据第二段“Roots bring water from the ground to the plant. The stem carries water from the roots to the leaves and flowers.”可知，茎从根输送水。
16．根据第三段“Plants have flowers because the flowers make seeds.”可知，植物有花是因为花能产生种子。
17．根据第四段“People eat all parts of plants. For example, we eat the leaves of a cabbage, the root of a carrot.”可知，我们吃胡萝卜的根。
18．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：议论文，以一般过去时描述经历，以一般现在时描述好处和呼吁
明确要点： 走进大自然的经历及感受、走进大自然的好处、呼吁、
确定人称：第一人称（I/my/we）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，点明大自然是我们生活的一部分
主体段：描述一次走进大自然的经历及感受；说明走进大自然的好处
结尾段：发出呼吁，升华主题
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：走进大自然的经历及感受
经历选择：hiking in the mountains/walking in the park/camping by the lake/climbing a hill等
环境描述：The air was fresh/The trees were green/The flowers were beautiful Birds were singing happily等
活动内容：enjoy the view/take photos/breathe fresh air/listen to birds/watch butterflies等
感受表达：I felt relaxed/peaceful/happy/excited等
要点二：走进大自然的好处
放松身心：helps us relax our body and mind/reduces stress/makes us feel calm等
学习知识：learn how plants grow/learn about animals and insects/understand the balance of nature等
保持健康：breathe fresh air/do outdoor activities/keep fit等
其他好处：enjoy the beauty of nature/spend time with family and friends等
要点三：呼吁
倡议行动：Let’s go into nature and enjoy its beauty/We should protect nature and live in harmony with it/Don’t stay indoors all the time等
主题升华：A healthy nature means a healthy life Nature is our home, and we are part of it/Only by protecting nature can we have a better future等
19．Pink. 20．They like eating fish. 21．About 6,000. 22．Because of people’s activities in the sea. 23．（答案不唯一，合理即可）Don’t throw rubbish into the sea. /Tell others not to kill them for meat or other things./Let more people know they’re in danger and the importance of protecting them. 24．例文
My favourite zoo
My favourite zoo is Wild Woods Zoo. I like it because it’s big and clean.
There are many different kinds of animals in it, like foxes, lions, penguins and elephants. Foxes are smart with beautiful fur, lions are strong and penguins are cute. I like friendly elephants best, for they can carry heavy things with their trunks.We have some zoo rules. We can’t litter, feed animals or make noise. Following them can make the zoo better. All in all, it is a great fun place for us to learn about animals.
【导语】本文主要介绍了长隆海洋王国里中华白海豚的外形、寿命、食性、濒危现状、濒危原因以及人类的保护举措。
19．第二段明确指出“The colour is pink when they are old.”，这是原文中的具体颜色信息，直接提取。
20．第二段提到“ What’s their favourite food Fish.”，这直接说明中华白海豚最喜欢的食物是鱼。
21．第三段说明“Now there are about 6,000 Chinese white dolphins in the world.”，这是原文中的具体数量信息，直接提取。
22．第三段阐述原因“And they don’t have much food to eat because of people’s activities in the sea.”，直接点明食物短缺的缘由。
23．本题是开放性试题，答案不唯一，但观点需基于文中事实。结合文章内容和自身认知，围绕保护中华白海豚的做法合理作答即可。
24．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意］
确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：动物园整体特点、园内动物种类及特征、游园规则
确定人称：第一人称
注意事项：不得出现真实人名、校名和地名
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，点明最喜爱的动物园，概括整体特点（如大而整洁）
主体段：分别介绍园内多样的动物，结合动物外形、性格特征展开描写
结尾段：介绍游园规则，总结感受，升华主题
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：动物园整体特点
特点描述：big and clean
位置或印象：in the city/in the suburb/close to nature/a wonderful place等
要点二：园内动物种类及特征
具体举例：foxes/lions/penguins/elephants/monkeys/giraffes/pandas/tigers等
特征形容词：beautiful/smart/strong/friendly/cute/lovely/gentle/playful/clever等
要点三：游园规则及感受
规则要点：Don’t litter./Don’t feed animals./Don’t make noise./Keep the zoo clean./Stay on the path./Don’t tease animals.等
遵守规则的意义：make the zoo better/protect the animals/keep everyone safe等
25．Students, office workers and retirees. 26．More than 20. 27．Gave away warm clothes. 28．Help the children develop good study habits. 29．Helpful and meaningful. 30．例文：
Dream home, Dream neighborhood
I am glad to share my ideas about my dream home and dream neighborhood.
My dream home is a bright house with a small garden and a cozy study. There are enough warm rooms for my family to live comfortably.
In my dream neighborhood, there is a clean park, a small library and a quiet coffee shop. Green trees and beautiful flowers are everywhere.
Neighbors here are very kind. They often help the elderly carry things and look after each other’s pets.
I love my dream home and neighborhood very much. They are warm and peaceful, making me feel relaxed and happy every day.
【导语】本文以“爱的纽带”为主题，介绍了社区里的志愿者开展的关爱老人、辅导孩子、保护环境等志愿活动，体现了社区志愿工作的意义与价值。
25．文中第二段提到“a group of volunteers, including students, office workers and retirees”，提取三类人群即可，且不超过 6 个词。
26．第三段明确写道“There are more than 20 elderly people without family companions”，直接摘录数字信息。
27．第三段“give away thick sweaters and scarves to the elderly”，提炼关键行为。
28．第四段指出“We not only help the children solve study problems but also help them develop good study habits”，直接提取后半部分内容。
29．最后一段第一句明确说明“Voluntary work… is not only helpful, but also meaningful”，直接用两个形容词概括观点。
30．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：梦想中的家（样子）、梦想中的社区（有什么）、邻居是否互相帮助及方式、对梦想中的家和社区的看法
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：内容覆盖所有要点，可适当发挥，词数80左右，开头已给出不计入总词数
[第二步：构思布局]
四段式结构：
开头段：总起句，表明很高兴分享关于梦想中的家和社区的想法
主体段1：介绍梦想中的家的样子
主体段2：介绍梦想中的社区有什么以及邻居互相帮助的方式
结尾段：总结对梦想中的家和社区的看法
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：梦想中的家的样子
房子类型：bright house/big villa/small but cozy apartment等
配套设施：with a small garden/with a big swimming pool/with a spacious living room等
房间情况：enough warm rooms/several comfortable bedrooms等
作用效果：for my family to live comfortably/make me feel at home等
要点二：梦想中的社区有什么以及邻居互相帮助的方式
社区设施：a clean park/a big supermarket/a modern gym等
社区环境：Green trees and beautiful flowers are everywhere./The streets are clean and wide.等
邻居互相帮助方式：They often help the elderly carry things./They look after each other’s children when parents are busy./They share food with each other during festivals.等
要点三：对梦想中的家和社区的看法
描述特点：They are warm and peaceful./They are convenient and comfortable.等
表达感受：making me feel relaxed and happy every day./giving me a sense of belonging.等
31．Because people kill the whales and there isn’t enough clean water. 32．In Northwest China and Mongolia. 33．It is the only species in the world with two humps. 34．Yes, there are. 35．I will not buy things made of ivory and tell people the importance of protecting animals.（开放性答案，合理即可） 36．Dear Zoo Manager,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m writing to you to talk about the problems of animals in the zoo. Recently, I read the news that some animals got hurt or even died because of visitors’ bad behaviors, such as feeding them, making loud noises and tapping on the glass.
To protect the animals, I have some suggestions. First, please make strict rules to stop visitors from feeding animals. Feeding them with unsuitable food will make them sick. Second, ask visitors to keep quiet and not to tap on the glass. Loud noises and tapping will make animals feel stressed.
I hope everyone can follow the rules and work together to protect the animals in the zoo.
Yours sincerely,
LiHua
【导语】本文主要讲述了蓝鲸、野生双峰驼、亚洲象三种濒危动物的生存现状、面临的威胁。
31．第一段直接明确给出蓝鲸数量减少的原因：“Many people kill the whales. And not having enough clean water is also a problem.”因此答案是原文直接信息。
32．第二段第一句直接描述了野生双峰驼的栖息地：“The wild Bactrian camel lives in Northwest China and Mongolia.”因此答案是原文直接信息。
33．第二段第二句直接点明野生双峰驼的特别之处：“It is a large camel and the only species in the world with two humps.”因此答案是原文直接信息。
34．第三段第一句直接给出亚洲象的分布信息：“Many Asian elephants live in India but you can find them in other countries as well.”因此答案是肯定回答。
35．本题为开放性试题，可结合文章中动物面临的威胁给出合理做法，如拒绝购买象牙制品、宣传保护动物的重要性等，符合题意即可。
36．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文（建议信），以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
明确要点：提到新闻中动物受伤害的事实（投喂、噪音、拍打玻璃等）、提出至少两条及以上的具体规定建议并解释理由、呼吁大家遵守规则，共同保护动物
确定人称：用第一人称（I/my）表明身份，第二人称（you/your）向动物园提建议
注意事项：按照信件的格式书写；语句连贯，词数不少于 70 词
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：表明身份，说明写信目的，提及新闻中动物受伤害的事实
主体段：提出饮食、行为方面的具体建议并解释理由
结尾段：鼓励行动，送上祝福
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：表明身份与提及事实
表示身份：I’m Li Hua, a middle school student.
表示事实：Recently, I read the news that some animals got hurt.../Recently, I was shocked by the news that.../ These bad behaviors have brought great harm to the animals.
要点二：具体建议与理由
建议 1（禁止投喂/禁止进入动物生活区域）： First, please make strict rules to stop visitors from feeding animals. Feeding them with unsuitable food will make them sick./First, it’s necessary to ban visitors from entering animals’ living area等
建议 2（禁止喧哗 / 敲玻璃）： Second, ask visitors to keep quiet and not to tap on the glass. Loud noises and tapping will make animals feel stressed./Second, please ask visitors to keep quiet in animal areas and never tap on the glass. Long-term noise and glass-tapping will make animals anxious and affect their normal life.
要点三：呼吁与祝福
表示呼吁：I hope everyone can follow the rules and work together to protect the animals in the zoo./I hope all visitors can abide by the rules and protect animals. Let’s build a safe home for them.
表示祝福：Wish the animals in the zoo can live a healthy and happy life./wish the animals in the zoo can have a wonderful life/wish the zoo business become better and better等
37．They are pink. 38．Fish. 39．About 6,000. 40．Because of people’s activities on the sea. 41．No, they aren’t. 42．范文：
Hello, everyone! I am the panda keeper, Lin Wei. Let me tell you something about pandas and some rules for visiting the Chengdu Research Base.
Pandas mainly live in Sichuan. They are black and white, with round faces and fat bodies. They look very cute. Pandas eat bamboo for about 12 hours a day.
When you visit, please follow these rules. First, never feed the pandas. Human food is bad for their health. Second, keep the environment clean. Don’t litter. Third, keep quiet and don’t use flash when taking photos.
I hope you will follow the rules and help protect pandas together.
【导语】本文主要介绍了中华白海豚的外貌特征、寿命、食物以及濒危现状，阐述了它们被称为“海上大熊猫”的原因，并提到了人类活动对它们生存的威胁及保护措施。
37．第二段明确说明了中华白海豚年长时的颜色：“The colour is pink when they are old.”，因此答案是原文直接信息，直接提取。
38．第二段最后一句明确说明了中华白海豚喜欢的食物：“What’s their favourite food Fish.”，答案是原文直接信息。
39．第三段明确说明了中华白海豚的现存数量：“Now there are about 6,000 Chinese white dolphins in the world.”，答案是原文直接信息。
40．第三段明确说明了它们食物减少的原因：“And they don’t have much food to eat because of people’s activities on the sea.”，答案是原文直接信息。
41．第二段明确说明了中华白海豚并非白色：“Chinese white dolphins are not really white.”，因此答案是否定的。
42．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文/导游讲解类文章，以一般现在时和祈使句为主
明确要点：大熊猫基本情况（栖息地、外形特征、饮食习惯）、参观注意事项（严禁喂食、环境维护、补充一条）、呼吁（希望游客遵守规则、携手保护大熊猫）
确定人称：第一人称（I）和第二人称（you）为主
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，需涵盖思维导图所有内容
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出，自我介绍并引出主题
主体段一：介绍大熊猫的基本情况（栖息地、外形、饮食）
主体段二：说明参观注意事项（至少三条）
结尾段：发出呼吁，表达期望
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：大熊猫基本情况
栖息地：mainly live in Sichuan/in the forests of southwestern China等
外形特征：black and white/round faces/fat bodies/look very cute等
饮食习惯：eat bamboo/eat for about 12 hours a day/eat a lot every day等
要点二：参观注意事项
严禁喂食：never feed the pandas/human food is bad for their health/don’t give them food等
环境维护：keep the environment clean/don’t litter/put rubbish in bins等
补充事项：keep quiet/don’t use flash when taking photos/don’t shout/don’t touch the pandas等
要点三：呼吁
遵守规则：follow the rules/be a good visitor/respect the animals等
共同保护：help protect pandas together/protect pandas and their homes等
43．They give people oxygen. 44．They are on Dongsi Road. 45．Yes, they do. 46．Because they want to take photos. 47．We should plant more trees and take care of them. 48．例文：
Do you love plants Do you want to learn more about plants Let me introduce our new club—the plant club to you.
We meet at 8:30 every Saturday morning. There are lots of different activities in the club. You can have classes about plants. You can go to the wild to watch different plants. You can even grow some plants yourself!
In the club, you can learn more about plants and make new friends with the same hobby. You can also get close to nature and have a good time.
Come and join us! Let’s share the joy of learning about plants together.
【导语】本文介绍了树木对人类的重要性，并讲述了长春市为路边树木穿上彩色毛衣的暖心现象。
43．第一段中“They give us oxygen”明确指出树木为我们提供氧气，答案是原文直接信息。
44．第二段中“On Dongsi Road, trees were dressed in colorful sweaters”说明穿着毛衣的树木位于东四路，答案是原文直接信息。
45．第二段中“the tree sweaters have become popular among citizens and tourists”提到彩色毛衣在市民和游客中很受欢迎，因此作肯定回答。
46．第二段中“Many people visit this road because they want to take photos”解释了人们前来这条路的原因，这是原文中的具体信息，直接提取。
47．最后一段中“We should plant more trees and take care of them”提出了让世界更美丽的做法，答案是原文直接信息。
48．写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文（俱乐部介绍）
明确要点：俱乐部活动时间、活动内容、活动益处
确定人称：第一人称（we）和第二人称（you）
注意事项：不得出现真实信息，开头已给出，需包含表格中所有要点
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：承接开头，介绍活动时间
主体段：详细介绍俱乐部活动内容
结尾段：说明加入俱乐部的益处并发出邀请
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：活动时间
具体时间：at 8:30 every Saturday morning/at 8:30 a.m. every Saturday/from 8:30 to 10:30 on Saturdays等
频率说明：every week/once a week/each Saturday等
要点二：活动内容
课堂活动：have classes about plants/learn about plants in class/take plant lessons等
户外活动：go to the wild to watch plants/observe plants in nature/study plants outside等
补充活动：grow some plants/plant flowers/take care of plants等
要点三：活动益处
知识收获：learn more about plants/get plant knowledge/understand nature better等
社交收获：make new friends with the same hobby/find friends who love plants/meet like-minded people等
其他益处：get close to nature/relax/enjoy the fresh air/have a good time等
结尾邀请：come and join us/join us now/welcome to our club等
49．To a farm. / He went to a farm. 50．He felt tired but he had great fun. 51．Farming isn’t easy. 52．Yes, he did. 53．每一粒粮食都来自辛勤的劳动。 54．范文
Our Field Trip Last Friday, the weather was sunny and warm. Mr Lee took my class to the forest for a field trip. We watched birds flying freely in the sky. Then we grew trees together, which was meaningful. After that, we collected many colorful leaves. Although we felt tired, we were really happy. We learned a lot from nature.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文，主要讲述了Sam参加学校组织的农场之旅的经历和感受。
49．根据文章“Today we went on a school trip to a farm!”可知，Sam去了农场参加学校旅行。故填To a farm. / He went to a farm.
50．根据文章“It was tiring but great fun!”可知，Sam对这次旅行的感受是既累又开心。故填He felt tired but he had great fun.
51．根据文章“One thing I learnt today: Farming isn’t easy!”可知，Sam从这次旅行中学到务农不易。故填Farming isn’t easy.
52．根据文章“The farmer let us take some vegetables home.”可知，Sam带了一些蔬菜回家。故填Yes, he did.
53．这是一个简单句，结构为主语 + 谓语 + 宾语。主语是“Every grain”（每一粒粮食）；谓语是“comes”（来；来自）；状语是“from hard work”（来自辛勤的劳动），是介词短语，在句中作状语，其中“from”是介词，“hard work”（辛勤的劳动）是介词“from”的宾语。故填“每一粒粮食都来自辛勤的劳动。”
54．【总体分析】
①题材：材料作文（描述一次野外考察旅行经历）；
②时态：一般过去时；
③提示：根据表格中的时间、天气、人物、地点、活动和感受等提示信息进行写作。
【写作步骤】
第一步：开篇点明时间、天气以及出行人员和目的地；
第二步：详细描述在森林里进行的活动；
第三步：表达此次旅行后的感受以及从自然中学到很多的收获。
【亮点词汇】①field trip 野外考察旅行
②learn…from从……中学习
【高分句型】
①We watched birds flying freely in the sky. （“watch sb./sth. doing sth.”结构，现在分词作宾语补足语）
②Then we grew trees together, which was meaningful. （非限制性定语从句）
55．He went by car. 56．They watched a movie on TV. 57．Tom’s mother made breakfast for them. 58．Because it was very dark. 59．He thinks it was special. 60．例文
Hi, Owen!
I’m happy you like my photos. I went to the old people’s home with my friends. We went there by bus. We helped the old people clean their rooms, sang to them and read newspapers to them. Also, we listened to their stories and they sounded interesting.
All in all, we enjoyed spending time with the old people and we were really happy to help them. We’ll go there again next Sunday morning.
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本文主要讲述了欧文上周末去朋友汤姆家度过的经历，包括去的方式、在汤姆家的活动安排以及欧文对此次周末的感受等。
【解析】55．根据“My dad drove me there on Friday evening”可知，欧文的爸爸开车带他去的汤姆家，即欧文是坐汽车去的汤姆家。故填He went by car.
56．根据“After dinner, Tom and I watched a movie on TV.”可知，周五晚饭后欧文和汤姆一起在电视上看电影。故填They watched a movie on TV.
57．根据“Tom’s mom made breakfast for us.”可知，周六早上汤姆的妈妈为欧文和汤姆做早餐。故填Tom’s mother made breakfast for them.
58．根据“It was very dark, so we didn’t go in there.”可知，因为山洞里很黑，所以欧文和汤姆没有进去。故填Because it was very dark.
59．根据“I think it was a special weekend for me.”可知，欧文认为这个周末对他来说很特别。故填He thinks it was special.
60．[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中去敬老院的经历介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“很高兴Owen喜欢照片”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“和谁一起去、乘坐什么交通工具、在敬老院做了什么”等方面重点介绍去敬老院的经历的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“享受和老人在一起的时光、帮助老人很开心”的感受，并告知下次去的时间。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②all in all总之
[高分句型]
①All in all, we enjoyed spending time with the old people and we were really happy to help them.（and连接的并列句）
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