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外研版八年级英语下学期期末写作提升训练
Unit2 Growing pains and gains
一、命题与考点说明
常考文体：记叙短文、英文书信、生活日记；
写作必备要素：过往缺点与烦恼、他人帮助与鼓励、自身改变与进步、成长感悟收获；
本单元写作核心语法：used to 过去常态句型、宾语从句、时间/原因状语从句、enough to 不定式结构。
二、标准范文与考点标注
原文 考点
I used to be very shy and afraid of speaking in public when I was in Grade Seven. used to 表过去习惯；when 时间状语从句
At that time, I never answered questions in class because I worried about making mistakes. because 原因状语从句
Luckily, my English teacher noticed my problem and encouraged me to change. encourage sb. to do 不定式固定搭配
She told me that mistakes are necessary on the way of growing up. that 引导宾语从句
Little by little, I began to take part in class discussions and speak out my ideas. 过渡短语行文，串联成长过程
Now I’m outgoing enough to give short speeches in front of classmates. adj. + enough to do 不定式结构
This experience teaches me that growing pains can turn into great gains as long as we dare to change. 宾语从句内嵌条件状语从句
行文思路
开头：用 used to 介绍自己过去的性格缺点与困扰；
主体：讲述老师的鼓励与帮助，详细描写自己一步步的改变与进步；
结尾：总结成长感悟，点明困境成就成长的主题，升华全文。
易错警示
1. used to do 表“过去常常”，切勿与 be used to doing（习惯于）混用；
2. encourage 后必须接 to do 不定式，不可省略 to；
3. 前后时态区分清晰：过去用一般过去时，现在用一般现在时。
三、同话题变式范文
变式1 书信（写给朋友介绍自身改变）
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to tell you my great changes in recent years. I used to be too shy to speak in public and always feared making mistakes.
My English teacher gave me lots of useful advice and encouraged me to try bravely. I practiced oral English every day. Gradually, I became confident enough to share my ideas in class.
I truly learn that pains can turn into gains during our growth.
Yours,
Li Hua
变式2 生活日记（记述自我成长经历）
June 12th Friday Sunny
I used to keep silent in class and had no courage to communicate with others. I felt upset for a long time.
Thanks to my teacher’s help, I stopped being afraid of mistakes and kept practicing speaking English. Little by little, I overcame my shyness and became outgoing.
This experience lets me know that every difficulty is a chance for us to improve ourselves.
四、词句积累板块
（一）基础表达→进阶替换
in the past（在过去）→ used to（过去常常）
afraid of doing sth.（害怕做某事）→ fear doing sth.（畏惧做某事）
little by little（渐渐地）→ gradually（逐步地）
help sb.（帮助某人）→ encourage and support sb.（鼓励并扶持某人）
make a change（做出改变）→ turn over a new leaf（焕然一新、改过进步）
become better（变得更好）→ make progress（取得进步）
（二）单元实用句式
I used to…, but now…（我过去……，但现在……）【作文开头：今昔对比，突出成长变化】
With one’s help and encouragement, I changed a lot.（在某人的帮助与鼓励下，我改变了许多。）【作文中间：叙述成长契机】
I learn that mistakes are important parts of growing up.（我明白犯错是成长的必经之路。）【作文中间：阐述成长感悟】
Pains in growth can finally turn into gains.（成长的挫折终会变成收获。）【作文结尾：升华主题】
五、分层练习设计
练习1 原文填空巩固
I __________ (过去常常) be very shy and afraid of speaking in public.
I never answered questions in class __________ (因为) I worried about making mistakes.
Luckily, my English teacher noticed my problem and __________ (鼓励我去) change.
She told me __________ (that从句) mistakes are necessary on the way of growing up.
__________ (渐渐地), I began to take part in class discussions and speak out my ideas.
Now I’m outgoing enough __________ (去发表) short speeches in front of classmates.
练习2 句式改写训练
中文提示：过去我害怕跑步，体能很差，在同学的帮助下我坚持锻炼，慢慢取得进步，明白了坚持的意义。
采分提示：必须使用 used to、with one’s help、make progress 三个短语。
要求：选用指定词汇完成句子写作。
练习3 写作训练
题目：My Changes
写作要点：①自己过去的缺点或烦恼；②他人的帮助与鼓励；③如今的改变与进步；④个人成长感悟
简易写作提纲
开头：________________________________________
中间：________________________________________
结尾：________________________________________
参考答案
练习1
1. used to
2. because
3. encouraged me to
4. that
5. Little by little
6. to give
练习2 改写参考
I used to be afraid of running and had poor physical health. With my classmates’ help, I kept exercising every day and made great progress. I finally understand the importance of persistence.
练习3 三档范文
低档（5分）
I was shy before. I was afraid of running. My classmates helped me exercise. Now I am strong. I know I should never give up.
【错点标注：句式简单、无进阶词汇、表达平淡】
中档（8分｜嵌入一处进阶短语）
I used to be afraid of running and had poor physical health. My classmates exercised with me and gave me lots of encouragement. I kept running every day and made great progress. Gradually, I became much healthier and more confident.
【亮点：进阶短语替换基础词汇，贴合本单元核心词汇，时态统一，要点齐全】
高分（10分｜2个进阶短语+1个结尾加分句）
I used to be afraid of running and had poor physical health. With my classmates’ encouragement, I kept exercising every day.Gradually, I overcame my weakness and became strong enough to take part in sports activities.
I learn that pains in growth can finally turn into gains.
【亮点：两处本单元核心进阶短语精准运用，结尾专属高分句型升华主题，贴合单元核心语法，零语法错误】

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