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外研版八年级英语下学期期末写作提升训练
Unit6 Living with nature
一、命题与考点说明
常考文体：观点议论文、环保倡议短文、书信、征文；
写作必备要素：人与自然的关系、现存环境问题、具体保护做法、个人倡议与感悟；
本单元写作核心语法：一般现在时表客观事实、不定式表目的、情态动词表建议、if条件状语从句、并列连词用法。
二、标准范文与考点标注
原文 考点
Nature is the most important gift for humans, and we should learn to live with nature peacefully. 开篇点题，阐明人与自然应和谐共处
However, some people pollute the environment and waste natural resources in daily life. however 转折连词，引出环境问题
To protect nature, we can start with small things around us. 不定式 to do 表目的，引出具体行动
We should save water and electricity, and avoid throwing rubbish everywhere. 并列连词用法，列举环保小事
If everyone tries to protect nature, the world will become much more beautiful. if 条件状语从句，主将从现
Living in harmony with nature is the best way to protect our home. 结尾主旨升华，贴合单元主题
行文思路
开头：点明人与自然息息相关，引出和谐共处的主题；
主体：先简述现存环境问题，再列举日常环保具体做法；
结尾：发出环保倡议，升华人与自然共生的核心主旨。
易错警示
1. 客观真理、自然现象类描述多用**一般现在时**，杜绝时态混用；
2. if 引导条件状语从句严格遵循“主将从现”规则；
3. 表行动目的统一使用 to do 不定式，句式规范统一。
三、同话题变式范文
变式1 倡议书信（呼吁保护环境、与自然共生）
Dear Lucy,
Our nature is facing many serious environmental problems now. It’s our duty to protect our natural home.
We can do many small things to make a difference. We should save resources, plant more trees and stop polluting the air and water. Living peacefully with nature can bring us a better life.
I hope more people will realize the importance of protecting nature and live in harmony with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
变式2 观点短文（如何与自然共处）
Nature gives us endless resources and beautiful scenery. We can’t live a good life without a good natural environment.
However, human activities have done great harm to nature. To change this situation, every one of us should take action. We need to protect wild animals, save water and reduce pollution.
Only by living with nature peacefully can we keep our home beautiful forever.
四、词句积累板块
（一）基础表达→进阶替换
protect nature（保护自然）→ guard our natural home（守护自然家园）
live peacefully（和平共处）→ live in harmony with nature（与自然共生）
do good things（做有益的事）→ take positive action（采取积极行动）
important（重要的）→ of great importance（至关重要的）
make a change（做出改变）→ make a big difference（产生巨大影响）
（二）单元实用句式
It is of great importance for us to live in harmony with nature.（与自然和谐共生对我们至关重要。）【开头亮明观点】
Many human activities are doing harm to our natural environment.（许多人类活动正在破坏自然环境。）【中间阐述问题】
Small daily actions can make a big difference to environmental protection.（日常微小举动，对环保意义重大。）【中间列举做法】
Protecting nature is protecting ourselves.（保护自然，就是保护我们自己。）【结尾升华主题】
五、分层练习设计
练习1 原文填空巩固
Nature is the most important gift for humans, and we should __________ (学习与自然共生) peacefully.
Some people pollute the environment and waste __________ (自然资源) in daily life.
We can start with small things __________ (为了保护) nature.
We should save water and electricity, and __________ (避免乱扔垃圾).
__________ (如果) everyone tries to protect nature, the world will become much more beautiful.
练习2 句式改写训练
中文提示：自然是人类的家园，与自然和谐共生十分重要，我们要从小事做起保护环境，让世界更加美好。
采分提示：必须使用 in harmony with、of great importance、protect nature 三个短语。
要求：选用指定词汇完成句子写作。
练习3 写作训练
题目：Live in Harmony with Nature
写作要点：①阐述自然对人类的重要性；②目前存在的环境问题；③具体的环保行动；④个人感悟与倡议
简易写作提纲
开头：________________________________________
中间：________________________________________
结尾：________________________________________
参考答案
练习1
1. learn to live with nature
2. natural resources
3. to protect
4. avoid throwing rubbish everywhere
5. If
练习2 改写参考
Nature is our home. It is of great importance for us to live in harmony with nature. We should start with small things to protect nature and make the world more beautiful.
练习3 三档范文
低档（5分）
Nature is our precious home. We need to protect it well. I think living with nature is very important. We can do small things to save resources and protect our environment.
【错点标注：句式简单、缺少高级词汇、逻辑衔接薄弱、主题表达平淡】
中档（8分｜嵌入一处进阶短语）
Nature is the precious home of human beings. It is of great importance for us to protect the environment. In our daily life, we can save resources and avoid polluting nature. Small actions can help us live a better life with nature.
【亮点：单元核心进阶短语赋能，句式规整，时态统一，要点完整，行文流畅】
高分（10分｜2个进阶短语+1个结尾加分句）
Nature is our most precious home. It is of great importance to live in harmony with nature. We should take positive action in daily life, such as saving resources and reducing pollution. Small actions can make a big difference to our environment.
Protecting nature is protecting ourselves, and only in this way can we keep our home beautiful forever.
【亮点：两处单元核心进阶短语精准运用，结尾主题升华句型亮眼，语法零错误，完全贴合单元考点，适配期末高分标准】

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