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Unit 2 Travelling Around 旅行计划电子邮件
一、学习目标
依托课本原句掌握旅行主题核心短语，辨析易混短语差异，熟练用于电子邮件写作。
掌握现在进行时表将来、宾语从句、情感表达三大语法句型，区分易混时态与句式，夯实写作语法。
深度解析非正式电子邮件的文体特点、写作要素、段落结构，能写出内容完整、情感自然的旅行计划邮件。
二、例文整体感知（课本 Reading 原文）
本篇为朋友间的非正式电子邮件，作者介绍西安国庆旅行计划，围绕目的地、知名景点、出行交通、时间安排、个人心情展开。句式灵活、情感真挚，是非正式邮件写作的经典范本。
1、核心重点短语
（1）plan to do sth. 计划做某事
课本原句：My parents and I are planning to go to Xi'an to see the Terracotta Army.
易混辨析
plan to do sth.：侧重提前规划、安排行程，旅行写作核心短语；
intend to do sth.：同义高级短语，书面邮件可替换使用。
自主仿写：________________________________________
（2）an amazing sight 一处令人惊叹的景观
课本原句：I've heard that it is an amazing sight, and I can't wait to go.
易混辨析
sight：侧重自然风光、名胜景点（本单元专用）；
view：侧重远处的风景、视野，二者语境不同，不可混用。
自主仿写：________________________________________
（3）can't wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
课本原句：I've heard that it is an amazing sight, and I can't wait to go.
自主仿写：________________________________________
（4）be known as 被誉为；作为……而出名
课本原句：This museum is known as a "Chinese treasure house".
易混辨析（高频易混短语）
be known as + 身份/称号：作为……而出名；
be known for + 特长/特产：因……而出名；
be known to + 人群：为……所熟知。
自主仿写：________________________________________
（5）look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事
课本原句：My dad and I are both looking forward to going to the Shanxi History Museum.
语法提醒：to 是介词，后接动名词，写作必考易错点。
自主仿写：________________________________________
（6）famous sights 著名景点
课本原句：We're also going to the Xi'an City Wall and a few other famous sights.
自主仿写：________________________________________
（7）right away 立刻；马上
课本原句：We're arriving at 9:30 a.m. and will start sightseeing right away.
易混辨析
right away：侧重动作即刻发生，口语+书面通用；
immediately：高级书面词汇，正式邮件优选。
自主仿写：________________________________________
（8）start sightseeing 开始观光游览
课本原句：We're arriving at 9:30 a.m. and will start sightseeing right away.
自主仿写：________________________________________
2、核心语法精讲
语法点1：现在进行时表将来
课本原句：We're taking the train, leaving the day before the October holiday begins.
知识点精讲
结构：am/is/are + doing，专门表示已经规划好的近期出行、活动，旅行类写作核心时态。常用动词：go/leave/take/visit/travel。
易混辨析
现在进行时表将来：只用于有明确安排的动作；
will + 动词原形：泛指未来动作，无提前规划含义，二者语境区分使用。
【课堂小练习】用所给词正确形式填空
We ________ (visit) the Terracotta Army next holiday.
She ________ (leave) for Shanghai tomorrow morning.
My family ________ (take) a bus to the scenic spot this weekend.
语法点2：宾语从句（I've heard that... 高频句式）
课本原句：I've heard that it is an amazing sight.
知识点精讲
结构：主语 + hear/know + that + 完整陈述句，that引导宾语从句，用于转述听闻、介绍景点特色。
易错点：宾语从句必须使用陈述语序，严禁倒装。
【课堂小练习】根据中文补全句子
I've heard that ________________ (西安有很多著名景点).
We know that ________________ (兵马俑是世界奇迹).
语法点3：情感表达常用句型
课本原句：It's an amazing sight. / I can't wait to go.
知识点精讲
两类核心句型：
It is + 形容词 + 名词 （评价景物、景观）；
can't wait to do / look forward to doing （表达期待心情）。
易混&易错辨析
look forward to doing（to为介词）≠ hope to do（to为不定式符号），切勿混用形式。
【课堂小练习】补全句子
It is ________________ (一处令人惊叹的景观).
I ________________ (期待参观古城墙).
3、篇章结构 & 写作深度讲解
（1）写作话题解读
文体：非正式电子邮件（朋友间通信）
核心写作六要素：问候、出行时间、同行人员、目的地、交通方式、景点与个人期待。
写作要求：语气亲切自然，行程描述条理清晰，融入情感表达。
（2）电子邮件标准格式
称呼 → 日常问候 → 引出旅行话题 → 介绍行程安排 → 抒发期待 + 结尾问候 → 结束语 + 署名
（3）逐段写作详解
开头段：简单问候，自然引出“假期旅行”话题，贴合日常交际。
主体段（核心）：依次介绍目的地、交通、核心景点、其他游玩地点，用衔接词串联行程。
结尾段：表达对旅行的期待，收尾并期待对方回信。
（4）逻辑衔接词（行程描述专用）
并列补充：also 此外、还
时间衔接：and then 然后、as soon as 一……就
（5）高分写作技巧
时态搭配：主线使用现在进行时表将来，穿插一般现在时介绍景点；
句式搭配：基础陈述句 + 宾语从句 + 情感句型结合，句式丰富；
内容完整：必须涵盖出行人、时间、地点、交通、景点五大核心信息。
三、综合实战：课堂写作训练
写作任务
你的好友Tom想来中国旅行，请你写一封电子邮件，介绍你的国庆北京旅行计划。
【限时写作要求】
时长：10分钟 词数：80词左右
要求：格式规范，使用本课短语、语法、衔接词；行文连贯，包含行程、景点、出行方式与个人期待。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
四、拓展句子仿写
仿照句型：主语 + be doing（现在进行时表将来）
仿写：________________________________________
仿照句型：I've heard that + 宾语从句
仿写：________________________________________
仿照句型：主语 + can't wait to do sth.
仿写：________________________________________
仿照句型：主语 + look forward to doing sth.
仿写：________________________________________
参考答案 & 参考例句
一、核心重点短语 仿写参考例句
plan to do sth. — I am planning to travel to Beijing this summer vacation.
an amazing sight — The West Lake is really an amazing sight in Hangzhou.
can't wait to do sth. — We can't wait to visit the famous mountain.
be known as — Guilin is known as a city with beautiful mountains and waters.
look forward to doing sth. — I am looking forward to travelling with my family.
famous sights — There are many famous sights in Chengdu.
right away — When we get there, we will start playing right away.
start sightseeing — We will start sightseeing as soon as we arrive in the city.
二、语法课堂小练习 参考答案
语法点1 现在进行时表将来
are visiting 2. is leaving 3. are taking
语法点2 宾语从句
there are many famous sights in Xi'an
the Terracotta Army is a world wonder
语法点3 情感句型
an amazing sight 2. look forward to visiting the Xi'an City Wall
三、综合实战 参考范文
Dear Tom,
How is everything going
The October holiday is coming, and my family and I are planning to go to Beijing. I've heard that it is an amazing city. First, we will visit the Palace Museum, which is known as a world-famous sight. We're taking the high-speed train and will start sightseeing right away. We also plan to visit the Great Wall. I can't wait to enjoy the trip and I'm really looking forward to it.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
四、拓展句子仿写 参考例句
We are leaving for Xi'an on October 1st.
I've heard that the Great Wall is unbelievable.
I can't wait to travel around the country.
We are looking forward to seeing the amazing sight.
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