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七下英语期中作文
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目 录
CONTENTS
01/写作步骤
02/注意事项
03/如何检查
04/考试范围
05/写作技巧
04/单元范文+期中范文
写作步骤
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写作步骤
1.审人称和时态
4.替换高级词汇
3.加入连接词(过度)
2.列提纲（三段式）
5.美化句子
注意事项
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注意事项
3.书写工整，切勿乱涂改
4.内容不宜太多或太少
1.使用三段式，层次清晰
2.每段首行空3-4个字母
注意事项
5.正确判断人称和时态
写在题目旁边提醒自己
6.在原卷上打草稿后仔细检查题目要点是否齐全
7.写进答题卡前检查语法是否有错误并更改
如何检查
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4.检查名词：
单复数是否正确？
5.检查语法错误：
句子是否符合语法？
6.检查衔接词使用，文章是否通顺？
3.检查动词形式：
通过人称时态判断。
2.检查要点
内容是否齐全？
1.检查单词拼写
是否存在笔误现象。
如何检查
考试范围
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4
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考试范围
U2
介绍自己对幸福的看法
分享我或别人因帮助别人而感到快乐的故事
介绍使人感到幸福快乐的方法
话题：幸福快乐
U1
介绍运动的好处
介绍喜欢的运动及原因
介绍运动经历和故事
话题：体育运动
U3
话题：介绍食物
介绍某种食物的制作过程
介绍日常饮食习惯，针对健康饮食提建议
介绍最喜欢的食物并说明原因
写作技巧
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5
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写作技巧
(1)加入衔接词：
首先 →
众所周知 →
俗话说 →
然而→
事情顺序 →
不仅而且→
此外→
to begin with=first of all
as we（all） know
as the saying goes
however
first ,second, third,finally
not only...but also
moreover/what's more/besides
写作技巧
(1)加入衔接词：
在我看来→
结果→
因此→
最后但是同样重要的→
总而言之→
in my opinion/eyes，as far as I am concerned
as a result
therefore
last but not least
at last/all in all/in a word/
写作技巧
(2)用高级词汇代替基础词汇：
cold→
finish→
get→
game→
think→
keep→
totally→
idea→
freezing
complete
receive
competition
consider
store/remain/continue
completely
opinion
写作技巧
(3)用短语代替单词:
hope→
dangerous→
eat→
walk→
respect→
talk→
want→
enjoy→
many/much→
look forward to doing sth.
be in great danger
feed on
take a walk/go for a walk
show respect for/respect sb. for...
have a conversation with sb.
would like to do sth.
have a good time/enjoy oneself
quite a few / little
写作技巧
(3)用短语代替单词:
positive→
finally→
join→
improve→
like→
walk→
talk→
want→
look on the bright side of the life
in the end/ last but not least
take (an active) part in
make great progress in
show an interest in/be interested in
=be fond of ... 喜欢...
take a walk/go for a walk
have a conversation with sb.
would like to do sth.
写作技巧
(4)使用本学期所学重点句型：
邀请某人做某事→
决定做某事→
看见某人正在做某事→
开始做某事→
准备好做某事→
一直做某事→
忘记做某事→
选择做某事→
同意/不同意做某事→
invite sb. to do sth.
decide to do sth.
see sb. doing sth.
start doing sth.
be ready to do sth.
keep doing sth.
forget to do sth.
choose to do sth.
agree/disagree to do sth.
写作技巧
(4)使用本学期所学重点句型：
因某事而感谢某人→
做某事很遗憾→
做某事而感到惊讶→
继续做某事→
抓住每个机会做某事→
除了做某事别无选择→
鼓励某人做某事→
做某事而自豪→
引导/引领某人做某事→
thank sb. for doing sth.
It’s a shame to do sth.
be surprised to do sth.
continue to do sth.
take every chance to do sth.
have no choice but to do sth.
encourage sb. to do sth.
be proud to do sth.
lead sb. to do sth.
写作技巧
(5)加入高级句型（句子升格）：
加入not only…but also… 不仅……而且……
Healthy eating habits can not only make me strong but also help me focus on my study better.
I love playing basketball because it is not only exciting but also keeps me fit.
动名词做主语（Doing ...is ...）
Playing badminton is good for me because it keeps me healthy.
Doing housework sometimes makes me feel tired, but I think it's a good way to relax after a day's study.
写作技巧
(5)加入高级句型（句子升格）：
加入条件状语从句：
It is easy to feel sleepy if we don't have breakfast.
It is hard to focus on studies if we don't have breakfast.
加入结果状语从句：
She was so moved/touched that she even smiled and cried.
加入目的状语从句：
You shouldn’t eat as many fruit and vegetables as possible so that you can get enough nutrients营养.
写作技巧
(5)加入高级句型（句子升格）：
加入让步状语从句
Although we were tired that day ,we’re happy.
加入时间状语从句
When I fall ill,my mother always makes plain rice porridge for me.
Stir it until it becomes golden yellow.
加入原因状语从句
We all loves sports because make us healthy ang strong.
I enjoy playing football because it brings me much fun.
写作技巧
(5)加入高级句型（句子升格）：
加入宾语从句：
We brought our notebooks to teach her what we learned during
weekends.
I noticed that she was a bit shy and always on her own.
加入感叹句：
What an unforgettable day it was!
How delicious the cake was!
写作技巧
(6)加入名言名句:
Keep love in your heart.A life without it is like a sunless garden.
心中有爱。没有爱的生活就像一个没有阳光的花园。
Happiness springs from doing good and helping others.
幸福源于行善和帮助别人。
The rose in her hand,the flavor in mine.
Roses given,fragrance in hand.赠人玫瑰，手留余香。
Life lies in movement.生命在于运动。
You are what you eat.人如其食。
An apple a day, keeps the doctor away.一天一苹果，医生远离我。
单元范文+期中范文
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U1 范文一：介绍自己对幸福的看法
以“My Understanding of Happiness”为题谈谈你对幸福的理解，可结合自身经历或事例要求：
1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2.根据所给题目，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，
3. 书写工整、规范。
审题
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时、过去时
My Understanding of Happiness
Happiness means different things to different people. For me, happiness is not just about having a lot of money or being famous. It is about having a positive attitude and enjoying the simple things in life.(引出幸福的概念)
I remember when I was a little kid, my family didn't have a lot of money. But we were very happy. We would sit together and have a simple meal, sharing our day's experiences. That time was filled with laughter and love.
Also, when I help my classmates with their problems and see their smiles, I feel a great sense of happiness. It makes me realize that helping others can bring us a lot of joy.(分享幸福的经历)
In a word, I believe that if we can be grateful for what we have, love our family and friends, and be kind to others, we can find happiness in our daily lives.(总结对幸福的理解)
U1 范文一：介绍自己对幸福的看法
U1 范文二：分享我帮助别人而感到快乐的故事
在平时的学习与生活中你一定帮助过他人。某英文报以“Happiness of Helping Others”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请你根据以下信息，写一篇英语短文。
审题
人称：第一人称
时态：一般过去时
U1 范文二：分享我帮助别人而感到快乐的故事
Happiness of Helping Others
Everyone needs help and I’ve learned a lot from helping Mike.（帮助对象）
I kept going over the experience in my mind. It was a cold morning.（时间） For the coming exam， every student read books quietly in the classroom.（地点） One of my classmates Mike didn’t have breakfast and that made him feel bad.（原因） I shared my breakfast with him. To my surprise， Mike thanked me and gave me his notebook. Finally， we both passed the exam. （行动）
I felt very happy and I believed that helping others is the key to happiness.（“我”的感受）
U1 范文三：分享身边的人帮助别人的故事
赠人玫瑰手有余香。帮助别人自己会感到快乐，得到
别人的帮助更是一种幸运。假设你校正举办以“我身边的好人好事”为主题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下内容提示，以“An Unforgettable Day”为题用英语写一篇记叙文。
内容提示：1.时间 2.地点 3.人物 4.事件 5.感受
审题
人称：第三人称
时态：一般过去时
An Unforgettable Day
As the saying goes, “The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine.” It’s great for us to give a helping hand to those in trouble. I had such an unforgettable day.(开篇用名言引出)
My friend Lucy had an accident and broke her leg last week. She was worried about missing lessons because she had to stay in hospital. Knowing that, my classmates and I decided to go to see her last Saturday. We brought her some beautiful flowers to make her happy. We also brought our notebooks to teach her what we learned during the week. She was so moved that she even smiled and cried. We said “Don’t mention it” and hoped she could be better soon.(详细介绍身边人帮助别人的故事)
Although we were tired that day, we were happy. We not only helped Lucy but also reviewed the knowledge we learned. What an unforgettable day it was!(总结助人为乐的意义)
U1 范文四：介绍使人感到幸福快乐的方法
假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友Ben最近有一段不愉快的经历，他希望和你探讨从不愉快经历中走出的方法。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，用英文给他写一封信，介绍你的不愉快经历和你的所思所想。
审题
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时、过去时
U1 范文四：介绍使人感到幸福快乐的方法
Last month， I got bad grades in an exam， and my parents thought I didn’t work hard.（事件）I felt very sad and disappointed.（感受）
During that time， I tried to think about the problem in a positive way and then solved it.I asked teachers for help and talked to my parents.（方法一）Also， I did my favourite sport to make myself feel happy.（方法二）
I think it is important to make ourselves feel happy， because we can solve the problem only when we are in a good mood.（好处一）Also， keeping happy can help us do better in different things.（好处二）
U2 范文一：介绍最喜欢的运动+介绍运动的好处
以“My Favorite Sport”为题，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，介绍你最喜欢的运动，包括你喜欢它的原因、你是如何进行这项运动的以及它给你带来的好处。
要求：1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2. 书写工整、规范；
审题
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
My Favorite Sport
My favorite sport is basketball. I like it because it is a very exciting and challenging game. It can also help me make many friends.(引出最喜欢的运动和原因)
I usually play basketball with my friends in the school playground after class. We divide into two teams and compete with each other. I practice dribbling, shooting, and passing the ball every time we play.(如何进行运动)Basketball has brought me many benefits. It makes me stronger and more energetic. It also improves my teamwork skills and my ability to handle pressure. When I play basketball, I can forget all my troubles and just enjoy the game. (运动带来的好处)
In a word, basketball is not only a sport but also an important part of my life.(总结)
U2 范文二：介绍喜欢的运动及原因
假设你是李明，你想参加学校外语文化艺术节“小主持人”的比赛，比赛包括才艺展示环节，你想做一个题为“我最喜欢的运动”的演讲。请你以此为题，完成这篇演讲稿。
审题
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
There are so many kinds of sports around the world， such as running and swimming.（运动种类）My favourite sport is running， and I join my school’s running club.（最喜欢的运动）
There are many reasons why I like running.To begin with， running is （much） cheaper than many other sports and I just need a pair of good running shoes.（原因一）Besides， running is easy and I enjoy running with my friends， so I don’t feel lonely or bored at all.（原因二）From running， I learn that persistence（坚持） is very important.And I want to be a good runner in the future.（原因三）
The more I run, the healthier I e and Join me. Just try it!（呼吁）
U2 范文二：介绍喜欢的运动及原因
U2 范文三：介绍运动经历和故事
假如你是李平，收到英语口语俱乐部负责人Peter的邮件，请接受邀请并根据该邮件内容作回复。
U2 范文三：介绍运动经历和故事
Dear Li Ping，
We’re going to have a forum（论坛）this Saturday evening.The topic is“Sports make me a better person”.I hear you’re really good at sports and hope you can join us.By the way，what sport do you like best and how often do you do it？Can you share an experience of doing this sport？What do you learn from it？
Looking forward to hearing from you！
Peter Smith
President of English-speaking Club
U2 范文三：介绍运动经历和故事
要求：
（1）短文应包括邮件中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（2）邮件中不能出现真实姓名、学校等相关信息；
（3）词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
审题
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时、过去时、将来时
Dear Peter Smith，
I am very happy to receive your invitation.I am willing to join you.（接受邀请） I like playing basketball best and I can play it very well.（喜欢的运动） When I have time，I will go to the park to play basketball with my friends almost every weekend.（运动频率）
Last Friday，our class had a basketball match with Class 2. At first，we fell behind. However， with our classmates cheering， we took every chance to get a point. Finally， thanks to our teamwork， we won the match.（一次运动经历）
From this experience， I understand we should work together. At the same time，I love playing basketball and I will keep playing it if possible.（收获）
Yours，
Li Ping
U2 范文三：介绍运动经历和故事
U2 范文四：介绍最喜欢的运动+呼吁大家积极参加体育运动
你们学校正在开展“我运动我健康”主题周活动，旨在鼓励同学们踊跃参加，增强健康意识。为此，校报面向全校同学开展“我最喜爱的体育运动”征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文向校报投稿，并在文中呼吁大家积极参加体育运动。
内容包括：1.What’s your favourite sport
2.Why do you like it
3.What do you often do about it
审题
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
My Favourite Sport
Our school is holding the activity named “Sports and Health Week”. I’ve got great benefits from sports. So I’d like to share my favourite sport here.(引出写作目的)
Of all the sports,ping-pong is my favourite because it brings more than enjoyment to me.Playing ping-pong makes me fit and strong.It also gives me a chance to take a break from busy life and helps me relax.Last but not least, I’m brave enough to face any difficulties and never give up, thanks to ping-pong.I often play it with my friends and watch ping-pong matches on TV, and I will continue to play it.(详细介绍喜欢这项运动的原因)
Sport is good for both our body and mind.I hope all of us take an active part in sports. Let’s enjoy doing sports and live a healthy life!(呼吁大家积极参加体育运动)
U3 范文一：介绍某种食物的制作过程
自己制作美食可以提高我们的动手能力和创造能力。你和朋友们打算在周末举办一个美食聚餐，每位朋友带一种美食来一起分享。你会制作什么美食呢？水果沙拉、水果奶昔、三明治、面条、爆米花还是其它美食呢？请写一篇关于介绍美食的制作过程的文章，内容包括：
1.制作何种美食；　
2.介绍该美食的制作过程(包括食材、制作步骤等)；
3.呼吁大家多实践，提高生活技能。
参考词汇：practice more多实践；living skills生活技能
审题
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
I’m going to have a party with my friends this weekend.
I’ll make a strawberry milk shake to serve my friends at the party and let me tell you how to make it.(打算制作的美食) Before we begin，we need to buy some fresh strawberries，a box of ice-cream and a bottle of milk.We also need a blender.(准备食材)Now，it’s time to begin.First，wash at least ten strawberries and cut them up.(步骤1)Next，put the strawberry pieces and some ice-cream into the blender.(步骤2)Then，pour the milk into the blender.(步骤3)Finally，turn on the blender.(步骤4)After only a few minutes，we can enjoy the delicious strawberry milk shake.
I hope all of us can practice more and try to improve the living skills.(呼吁)
U3 范文二：介绍日常饮食习惯，针对健康饮食提建议
新一期的校园杂志正在面向广大学生进行征稿，请
你根据下面的要点提示，以“How to eat healthily”为题,
写一篇100词左右的短文，要求条理清晰，语句通顺。
要点提示：
1.饮食均衡，少吃垃圾食品；
2.多喝水，少喝软饮料；
3.一日三餐，按时吃饭。
审题
人称：第二、三人称
时态：一般现在时
How to eat healthily
Nowadays, many middle school students have bad eating habits. If you want to keep healthy, here is some advice.(引出写作目的)
First, it’s important to have a balanced diet and avoid junk food. You should eat as many fruit and vegetables as possible so that you can get enough nutrients.Second, drinking too many soft drinks can cause tooth problems. You should drink more water. Third, you need to have three meals a day and eat on time.Make sure that you have breakfast every morning and don’t eat too many snacks between meals.(针对如何健康饮食提出建议)
In a word, healthy eating is important for a healthy body and mind. Let’s keep a healthy diet!(总结健康饮食的重要性)
U3 范文三：介绍最喜欢的食物并说明原因
假如你的学校网站将举办一个关于中华美食节的英语征文活动，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示，写一篇英语短文来介绍一种你最喜欢的中国传统美食。
审题
人称：第二、三人称
时态：一般现在时
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Food
As we all know， there are all kinds of traditional Chinese food with a long history.For me， zongzi is the best food in the world. （名称）
People see zongzi as a symbol of traditional Chinese culture. They eat it on the Dragon Boat Festival in memory of the poet Qu Yuan.（文化或历史）Here are the steps to make zongzi. First，we should put rice onto leaves.Then， add mung beans， egg yolk and meat to it. Finally， wrap it with leaves.（制作方法）
I like zongzi because it tastes very delicious. （喜欢该食物的原因一）Besides， the taste and smell of zongzi can often bring back warm memories. （喜欢该食物的原因二）
U3 范文四：介绍最喜欢的食物并分享品味这道菜的经历
家常菜总是与温暖的家联系在一起。学校英文报正在以“我最爱的家常菜”为题开展征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇征文，介绍你家的家常菜。
审题
人称：第二、三人称
时态：一般现在时
My Favourite Homemade Dish
Homemade dishes are always related to a warm home.Mapo tofu is my favourite homemade dish.（菜名）It needs ingredients like tofu， pork， green onions， Sichuan pepper and bean paste.（食材）It looks red and delicious.It tastes salty and spicy.（味道）
When I was five， I didn’t like to eat and was very thin.（品尝时间）My grandma learned it from my mum.She decided to stay with me and cooked for me.The first dish she cooked for me was mapo tofu.I loved it at the first taste of it.With the help of my grandma， I began to eat more and became stronger.（经过）
I think homemade dishes are a symbol of family and love.I think of my grandma when I eat mapo tofu.（感受）
期中综合作文一
拥有健康的身体对于我们而言非常重要，而健康生活需要良好的生活习惯。假设你是李华，下周你们学校准备举办主题为“告别不良习惯，倡导健康生活”的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇发言稿呼吁同学们健康生活。
审题
人称：第一、三人称
时态：一般现在时
Good morning， everyone.I am glad to share something about how to develop healthy living habits with you.Healthy living habits can not only help us have a good body to study well （健康的生活习惯的重要性一）， but also make us live a happy life （重要性二）.
Here I will share some healthy living habits with you.First of all， we should do enough sports every day， such as playing basketball and running.（方法一） Then， we’d better eat fresh vegetables and fruit every day， because they can keep us healthy.（方法二）Last but not least， have an 8-hour sleep every night and keep in a good mood.
I hope everyone can form the right living habits from now on and lead a healthy life.（呼吁）.
期中综合作文二
健康的身体是幸福生活的源泉，拥有良好的生活习惯和饮食习惯对人体健康是非常重要的。请根据以下提示，以“Living a healthy life”为题写一篇英文倡议书，呼吁大家平时养成良好的习惯来保持健康。
要点提示：
（1）培养爱好：运动，读书；
（2）交友：朋友可以给我们帮助；
（3）健康饮食；
（4）保持快乐。
参考词汇：心情 mood
审题
人称：第二、三人称
时态：一般现在时
Living a Healthy Life
As we know, it is important to live a healthy life.(引出主题)
Here are my ideas about living a healthy life. First, we should develop good interests and hobbies, such as doing exercise or reading interesting books.(培养爱好) Second, we should have several good friends. When we have problems, they are always there to offer help.(交友) What’s more, healthy eating habits are also necessary for us. Healthy diets always mean strong bodies. (健康饮食)It’s good for us to be in good moods all the time. We should always wear smiles on our faces. Always be happy, and life will be better and better. (保持快乐)
In a word, we can live a healthy life when we have both healthy lifestyles and good moods. (总结)
That’s all. Thank you.
期中综合作文三
随着“双减”政策的实施，同学们有更多的课余时间来培养自己的兴趣爱好，把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。亲爱的同学，你想做一个快乐的人吗？请你以 "How to Be a Happy Student" 为题，根据以下表格写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
审题
人称：第一人称
时态：一般现在时
To be happy Good Health Running
Playing basketball
Good Hobbies Reading
Traveling
Good Moods (情绪) Singing
Be active
Be friendly
Good Habits A balanced diet
Enough sleep
How to Be a Happy Student
Everyone wants to be happy.As a student,what can we do to be happy Here is my advice.(引出写作目的)
First, we should keep fit. Some sports, such as running and playing basketball, are good for our health.(健康)Second, it's necessary for us to have good hobbies. We can develop good hobbies like reading, travelling and singing.(爱好)Third, staying in a good mood is very important. We should be active and be friendly to others.(心情)Last but not least, it's helpful for us to form good habits. For example, we should have a balanced diet and enough sleep.(好习惯)
I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.(总结)
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