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外研版八年级下册英语 Unit 4-6 书面表达复习
目录
Unit 4 Helping out — 书面表达 2
一、写作指导 2
二、高分句式与词组 3
三、参考范文 4
四、万能模板 5
Unit 5 Looking into nature — 书面表达 6
一、写作指导 6
二、高分句式与词组 6
三、参考范文 7
四、万能模板 8
Unit 6 Living with nature — 书面表达 10
一、写作指导 10
二、高分句式与词组 10
三、参考范文 12
四、万能模板 12
Unit 4 Helping out — 书面表达
一、写作指导
（一）单元核心话题
本单元围绕“Helping out”（伸出援手）主题，结合课文Leah的故事、善意的循环、动物救助三个语篇素材，可灵活套用。
高频写作题目示例：
1. 假设你是李华，你的朋友在学习上遇到了困难，情绪低落，请你写一篇短文，谈谈你会如何帮助他/她，鼓励他/她不要放弃。
2. 结合本单元Leah的故事，写一篇短文，讲述一次你帮助他人（或被他人帮助）的经历，谈谈你的感受和收获。
3. 如今有许多无家可归的动物，它们处境艰难，请你写一篇短文，呼吁同学们关注并帮助这些动物，说说我们可以做些什么。
（二）写作要求
1. 词数：80-100词（适配初二书面表达要求，中考基础档词数）。
2. 内容：紧扣“帮助”主题，条理清晰，包含“帮助的背景/原因—帮助的过程—感受/收获/呼吁”三个核心部分。
3. 语言：正确使用本单元核心词汇、短语及句型（如afford、give up、raise money、may/can/must表推测、be touched by...等），语法正确，语句通顺。
4. 格式：短文格式，开头点题，中间展开，结尾升华，书写规范。
二、高分句式与词组
（一）开头句式（点题引入）
1. Helping others is a kind of happiness. （帮助他人是一种快乐。）
2. When someone is in trouble, we should lend a helping hand to him/her.
（当有人遇到困难时，我们应该向他/她伸出援手。）
3. I still remember the experience of being helped by others, which made me feel warm.
（我仍然记得被他人帮助的经历，这让我感到温暖。）
（二）中间句式（描述过程）
1. I decided to help him/her because he/she couldn’t afford to...
（我决定帮助他/她，因为他/她负担不起……）
2. With my help, he/she finally got through the difficulty.
（在我的帮助下，他/她终于渡过了难关。）
3. We planned to hold some activities to raise money for them.
（我们计划举办一些活动为他们筹集资金。）
（三）结尾句式（总结升华）
1. From this experience, I learned that kindness can be passed on.
（从这次经历中，我明白了善意可以传递。）
2. It is our duty to help those in need, and we can make a difference with a little kindness.
（帮助有需要的人是我们的责任，小小的善意就能带来改变。）
3. I hope everyone can offer a helping hand, so that our world will become warmer.
（我希望每个人都能伸出援手，让我们的世界变得更温暖。）
（四）高分词组搭配
lend a helping hand 伸出援手
get through 渡过（难关）
give up 放弃
raise money 筹集资金
make up one’s mind 下定决心
be touched by... 被……感动
can’t afford to do sth 负担不起做某事
take care of 照顾
be shocked to do sth 做某事感到震惊
volunteer to do sth 志愿做某事
三、参考范文
（一）帮助遇到困难的朋友
Helping Others Is Happiness
Last week, my good friend Lucy was in trouble. She failed her exam and felt very sad, even wanted to give up. I decided to help her get through this difficult time.
First, I talked to her and encouraged her not to give up. Then, I helped her review the important knowledge every afternoon. Besides, I shared my notebook with her and explained the difficult points patiently.
With my help, Lucy made great progress in the next exam. I felt very happy because I helped my friend. I realized that helping others is helping ourselves, and we should always lend a helping hand to those in need.（98词）
（二）一次帮助他人的经历
A Meaningful Experience
I was deeply touched by Leah’s story. It made me think of my experience of helping a homeless old man last month. He had no home and no food, and he felt very lonely.
I gave him some bread and water first. Then, I asked my parents for help, and we took him to a nearby shelter. I also talked to him and listened to his stories. I told him that there are many kind people who are willing to help him.
This experience was very meaningful for me. I felt warm when I saw the old man’s smile. I learned that a little kindness can bring great happiness to others, and we should always keep a kind heart and help those in trouble.（96词）
（三）呼吁帮助无家可归的动物
Help Homeless Animals
Nowadays, there are many homeless animals around us, such as cats and dogs. They have no homes, no food and no medical care, and their life is very hard.
We can do many things to help them. First, we can raise money to buy food and medicine for them. Then, we can volunteer to take care of them in animal shelters. Besides, we can also tell our friends and family to protect animals and not to hurt them.
Animals are our good friends. It is our duty to help them. I hope more people can lend a helping hand to these homeless animals, so that they can live a happy and safe life.（93词）
四、万能模板
以下模板适用于“帮助他人”类话题，可直接填空套用：
第一段（开头点题，1-2句）：
Nowadays, many people/animals need help. / Last week, my friend/classmate was in trouble, so I decided to help him/her. / I was deeply touched by Leah’s story, and I want to share my experience of helping others.
第二段（中间展开，2-3句）：
First, I... （措施1）. Then, I helped him/her/them... （措施2）. Besides, I told him/her/them not to give up. / We can raise money to help them, and we can also... （补充措施）.
第三段（结尾升华，1-2句）：
After helping him/her/them, I felt very happy. I realized that helping others is helping ourselves. / I hope more people can lend a helping hand to those in need.
Unit 5 Looking into nature — 书面表达
一、写作指导
（一）单元核心话题
本单元围绕“ Looking into nature”（探索自然）主题，结合语篇话题（琥珀、科学家事迹、自然奇观），考查运用单元核心词汇、短语、句型（尤其是宾语从句）进行书面表达的能力。
高频写作话题示例：
1. 介绍一种自然探索的发现（如琥珀、恐龙的秘密、沸河等），描述发现的内容、意义。
2. 介绍一位热爱自然探索的科学家（如王文采），讲述他的事迹、精神品质，表达自己的敬佩和启示。
3. 谈谈自己对自然探索的看法，呼吁人们热爱自然、坚持探索。
（二）写作要求
1. 词数：80-100词。
2. 内容：三段式结构，开头点题、中间展开、结尾升华。
3. 语言：正确使用宾语从句（that/whether/if引导）、单元核心短语（thanks to、carry on with、belong to等）。
二、高分句式与词组
（一）开头句式（引出话题）
1. As a window on the past, amber helps us unlock many secrets of nature.
（作为一扇通往过去的窗户，琥珀帮助我们揭开许多自然的秘密。）
2. There are many great scientists who devote themselves to nature exploration.
（有许多伟大的科学家致力于自然探索。）
3. I think nature is full of secrets, and we should try our best to explore them.
（我认为自然充满了秘密，我们应该尽最大努力去探索。）
（二）中间句式（阐述细节）
1. Thanks to amber, scientists have discovered that dinosaurs had feathers.
（多亏了琥珀，科学家们发现恐龙有羽毛。）
2. He is a great scientist who carried on with his research even though he had poor sight.
（他是一位伟大的科学家，即使视力不好，仍然继续他的研究。）
3. We all know that nature provides us with many natural resources, so we should protect it.
（我们都知道自然为我们提供了许多自然资源，所以我们应该保护它。）
4. Scientists believe that there are still many unknown species waiting for us to discover.
（科学家们认为，还有许多未知物种等待我们去发现。）
（三）结尾句式（总结升华）
1. I admire him very much, and I want to learn from him to be a person who loves nature and keeps exploring. （我非常敬佩他，我想向他学习，做一个热爱自然、坚持探索的人。）
2. Exploring nature is meaningful, and it can help us know more about the world around us.
（探索自然是有意义的，它能帮助我们更多地了解我们周围的世界。）
3. Let’s make every effort to protect nature and unlock more secrets together.
（让我们尽一切努力保护自然，一起揭开更多的秘密。）
（四）高分词组搭配
unlock the secrets of... 揭开……的秘密
thanks to 多亏了，幸亏
carry on with sth 克服困难继续做某事
belong to 属于
a window on the past 一扇通往过去的窗户
devote oneself to... 致力于……
natural resources 自然资源
make every effort to do sth 尽一切努力做某事
unknown species 未知物种
scientific findings 科学发现
三、参考范文
（一）介绍琥珀
A Wonderful Discovery — Amber
As a window on the past, amber is a wonderful discovery that helps us unlock many secrets of nature. Thanks to amber, scientists have discovered more than 300 unknown species and proved that dinosaurs had feathers. For hundreds of years, people believed that dinosaurs looked like huge lizards, but amber told us the truth.
I think amber is very magical, and it teaches us that nature is full of surprises. Let’s keep exploring and learn more about the past from nature.（86词）
（二）介绍科学家王文采
A Great Scientist — Wang Wencai
There are many great scientists who devote themselves to nature exploration, and Wang Wencai is one of them. He is a famous botanist who spent his life studying plants in China.
Even though he had poor sight, he still carried on with his research and made many important scientific findings. He believed that every plant had its own secret, and we should try our best to discover them. His spirit of never giving up moved many people.
I admire him very much, and I want to learn from him to be a person who loves nature and keeps exploring. Exploring nature is meaningful, and it can help us know more about the world around us.（95词）
（三）谈自然探索的看法
The Joy of Exploring Nature
I think nature is full of secrets, and we should try our best to explore them. Exploring nature is not only interesting but also meaningful.
Scientists believe that there are still many unknown species waiting for us to discover. Thanks to modern technology, we can unlock more secrets of nature. For example, scientists have found that some rivers boil because of special chemicals underground. These findings show us how amazing nature is.
Let’s make every effort to protect nature and unlock more secrets together. I believe that the more we explore, the more we will know about our beautiful world.（90词）
四、万能模板
以下模板适用于“自然探索”类话题，可直接填空套用：
第一段（开头点题，1-2句）：
As a window on the past, ... helps us unlock many secrets of nature. / There are many great scientists who devote themselves to nature exploration, and ... is one of them. / I think nature is full of secrets, and we should try our best to explore them.
第二段（中间展开，2-3句）：
Thanks to..., scientists have discovered that... / He is a great scientist who carried on with his research even though... / We all know that nature provides us with..., so we should...
第三段（结尾升华，1-2句）：
I admire him very much, and I want to learn from him... / Exploring nature is meaningful, and it can help us know more about the world. / Let’s make every effort to protect nature and unlock more secrets together.
Unit 6 Living with nature — 书面表达
一、写作指导
（一）单元核心话题
本单元围绕“Living with nature”（与自然共处）主题，语篇覆盖二十四节气的文化内涵、坎儿井系统的古代智慧、人与自然和谐共处三个方向，可灵活套用。
高频写作题目示例：
1. 介绍二十四节气（地位、对古代村民的作用、现代人的态度、你的看法）。
2. 介绍坎儿井系统（吐鲁番的环境、坎儿井的构造与作用、保护意义）。
3. 谈谈如何保护自然环境和文化遗产，体现人与自然和谐共处。
（二）写作要求
1. 词数：80-100词。
2. 内容：三段式结构，开头点题、中间展开、结尾升华。
3. 语言：正确使用宾语从句（what/where/how/why/when引导）、单元核心短语（be known as、thanks to、take action to do等）及句型（so...that、as long as、It is adj that...等）。
4. 注意：专有名词首字母大写（the 24 Solar Terms, Turpan, karez）；不可数名词（wheat, energy, rainfall）不加s。
二、高分句式与词组
（一）开头句式（点题引入）
1. The 24 Solar Terms are an important part of Chinese culture.
（二十四节气是中国文化的重要组成部分。）
2. Turpan is a city surrounded by desert, but people can survive thanks to the ancient karez system. （吐鲁番是一座被沙漠环绕的城市，但多亏了古老的坎儿井系统，人们能够生存。）
3. There are many great ancient cultural heritages in China that show the wisdom of our ancestors. （中国有许多伟大的古代文化遗产，展现了我们祖先的智慧。）
（二）中间句式（描述细节）
1. They are known as the "Fifth Great Invention of China" and bear social and cultural meanings. （它们被称为“中国第五大发明”，承载着社会和文化意义。）
2. In ancient times, they helped villagers know when to farm, harvest and rest, so they meant so much to them.
（古代时候，它们帮助村民知道何时耕种、收割和休息，所以对他们意义重大。）
3. The secret lies in the ancient karez system, which was completed with only hand tools.
（秘密在于古老的坎儿井系统，它仅用手工工具就建成了。）
4. No wonder it is among the top three projects of ancient China.
（难怪它是中国古代三大工程之一。）
（三）结尾句式（总结升华）
1. I think we should learn more about them and pass them down, because they are the wisdom of our ancestors. （我认为我们应该更多地了解它们并传承下去，因为它们是我们祖先的智慧。）
2. We should take action to protect the karez system and pass down this great ancient wisdom.
（我们应该采取行动保护坎儿井系统，传承这一伟大的古代智慧。）
3. Only in this way can we live in harmony with nature and pass down these precious cultural heritages. （只有这样，我们才能与自然和谐共处，并将这些珍贵的文化遗产传承下去。）
（四）高分词组搭配
be known as 被称为，以……而闻名
bear social and cultural meanings 承载社会和文化意义
mean so much to sb 对某人意义重大
thanks to 多亏了，幸亏
lie in 在于
as long as 只要；和……一样长
take action to do sth 采取行动做某事
no wonder 难怪
among the top three 前三名之中
a shortage of ……的短缺
live in harmony with nature 与自然和谐共处
pass down 传承，传下去
三、参考范文
（一）介绍二十四节气
The 24 Solar Terms
The 24 Solar Terms are an important part of Chinese culture. They are known as the "Fifth Great Invention of China" and bear social and cultural meanings.
In ancient times, they meant so much to villagers because they helped them know when to farm, harvest and rest. Today, many people still keep traditional activities related to them, such as eating spring pancakes at Start of Spring and dumplings at Start of Winter.
I think the 24 Solar Terms are the wisdom of our ancestors. We should learn more about them and pass them down, because they help us live in harmony with nature.（98词）
（二）介绍坎儿井系统
The Ancient Karez System
Turpan is a city in Xinjiang, surrounded by desert. It is one of the hottest areas in the world, but people can survive thanks to the ancient karez system.
The karez system includes wells and large underground canals. Amazingly, it was completed with only hand tools. No wonder it is among the top three projects of ancient China. However, today Turpan faces a water shortage, and more and more young people are taking action to protect it.
I think we should take action to protect the karez system and pass down this great ancient wisdom. As long as we respect nature, we can live in harmony with it.（96词）
（三）保护文化遗产与自然环境
Protect Our Cultural Heritage
There are many great ancient cultural heritages in China, such as the 24 Solar Terms and the karez system. They show the wisdom of our ancestors and help us live in harmony with nature.
However, some of them are facing problems now. For example, Turpan faces a water shortage, and the karez system needs protection. I think we can take action to protect them. First, we can learn more about them and tell our friends about their importance. Second, we should respect nature and save natural resources. Third, we can take part in activities to protect cultural heritages.
Only in this way can we pass down these precious cultural heritages to the future and live in harmony with nature.（94词）
四、万能模板
以下模板适用于“人与自然和谐共处/文化遗产保护”类话题，可直接填空套用：
第一段（开头点题，1-2句）：
The 24 Solar Terms are an important part of Chinese culture. / Turpan is a city surrounded by desert, but people can survive thanks to the ancient karez system. / There are many great ancient cultural heritages in China that show the wisdom of our ancestors.
第二段（中间展开，2-3句）：
In ancient times, they helped villagers know when to farm and harvest, so they meant so much to them. / The karez system includes wells and underground canals, and it was completed with only hand tools. No wonder it is among the top three projects of ancient China. / However, some of them are facing problems now, so we should take action to protect them.
第三段（结尾升华，1-2句）：
I think we should learn more about them and pass them down, because they are the wisdom of our ancestors. / We should take action to protect them and pass down this great ancient wisdom. / Only in this way can we live in harmony with nature and pass down these precious cultural heritages.

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