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读后续写技能提升篇2027高三写作专项备考
【肩部动作描写】
一、积累教材续写语料——有效强化教考衔接
【词汇积累】
环境描写：mist; humble
动作描写：pop up; compete; emphasise; gesture
情感描写：sympathy; emotional; facial; intention; soul; urgently
【佳句积累】
1.The day I heard that the Rainbow Bookstore was closing after 50 years of business, I was heartbroken.（情感描写）
得知经营了五十年的彩虹书店即将停业的那天，我心痛不已。
2.Sighing deeply, he told me how it was becoming difficult to run an independent bookstore.（情感描写）
他深深地叹了口气，向我诉说经营一家独立书店如今举步维艰。
3.When I left the bookstore, it was becoming cold and dark outside. I turned to wave goodbye to Casey, but both he and his bookstore were already hidden in a thick mist.（场景描写）
我走出书店时，外面天色渐暗，寒气袭人。我转身想跟凯西挥手道别，可他和整间书店都已经隐没在浓雾之中。
二、拓展续写话题素材—— 精准构建表达基石
动作描写：动“肩膀”
【经典词汇】
shrug vt.耸肩sway v.扭动hug v.拥抱
clap v.拍打raise v. 拾起tap v.轻拍
【靓点语块】
1.shrug one’s shoulders 耸肩
2.look over one’s shoulder 回头看
3.sb.’s shoulders shake 某人的肩膀颤抖着
4.tap/pat sb on the shoulder 拍某人的肩膀
5.shoulder one’s way 挤出去
6.stand shoulder to shoulder 肩并肩站着
7.snuggle up against one’s shoulder 依偎在某人的肩膀上
【出彩佳句】
1.He shouldered the door open.
他用肩膀顶开了门。
2.My shoulders dropped with relief.
我的肩膀松弛了下来。
3.The child sat on his father’s shoulders to watch the parade go by.
这个小孩坐在他父亲的肩膀上看着游行队伍经过。
4.I just looked over my shoulder and shrugged my shoulders, ignoring what he said.
我只是回头看了看，耸了耸肩膀，没有理会他说的话。
5.She shouldered her way through the crowd.
她从人群中挤了出来。
6.They filed along, walking shoulder to shoulder with their heads bent against the rain.
他们步伐一致，肩并肩低着头顶着雨走着。
7.The article touched my soul so much that my shoulders shook with my eyes in a mist of tears.
这篇文章深深地触动了我的灵魂，我的肩膀颤抖着，泪眼蒙眬。
三、重拳锤炼续写场景——积累内化应用提升
【学以致用】
场景导入：“我”的丈夫建议 “我” 别再沉迷于网络世界，起初 “我” 并未在意，直到后来 “我” 被一篇帖子所触动，决定把生活重心放到现实生活上…
My husband 1. _______________ (拍着我的肩膀), kindly suggesting that I should not be addicted to the posts on social media any longer, but I just 2. _______________ (耸了耸肩膀), ignoring what he said. One day when I surfed the Internet, 3. _______________ (一个朋友的帖子弹了出来). She wrote, “Let go of anything unrealistic and all activities that do not mirror your brightest intentions for yourself.” The post 4. _______________ (深深触动了我的灵魂，我的肩膀颤抖着，泪眼蒙眬；so ... that ...). My husband sat next to me and I 5. _______________ (依偎在他的肩膀上), muttering, “I will focus on real life instead of the virtual world from now on.” With my husband’s comfort, 6. _______________ (我的肩膀也随之放松了下来).
【趁热打铁】
场景导入：我整日埋头加班工作，长久忽略家人。丈夫多次提醒我多陪伴孩子，我起初不以为意。直到偶然看到一段记录亲子时光的短视频，内心深受触动，决定平衡工作与生活，珍惜现实陪伴……
I buried myself in endless work all day long, neglecting my family completely. My husband 1. _______________ (轻轻拍着我的肩膀), reminding me to spare more time for our child, but I just 2. _______________ (耸了耸肩膀) and kept focusing on my work emails. One evening when I took a break to browse my phone, 3. _______________ (一段亲子日常的短视频弹了出来). It showed warm parent-child interactions without busy work distractions.
The video 4. _______________ (深深触动了我的灵魂，我的肩膀不住颤抖，泪眼蒙眬；so…that…). My husband sat beside me quietly, and I 5. _______________ (依偎在他的肩膀上), murmuring that I would stop overworking and cherish every moment with my family from then on. With his gentle comfort, 6. _______________ (我的肩膀随之放松了下来，满心释然).
【拔高提升】
场景导入：Emily深陷热恋，被爱意冲昏头脑，不顾窗外大雪纷飞、夜色凛冽，执意独自出门奔赴男友的约会。好友再三劝阻，她起初固执己见、不为所动，直到看到一段话彻底清醒，褪去盲目痴情，懂得珍惜自己与身边人的善意。
Crazy about her boyfriend, Emily insisted on going out to meet him on a freezing snowy night. Her best friend 1. _______________ (轻轻拍着她的肩膀), trying to persuade her to stay indoors for fear that she would get lost or catch a cold in the heavy snow. However, Emily just 2. _______________ (耸了耸肩膀), turning a deaf ear to her friend’s sincere warning. As she was about to step into the cold night, 3. _______________ (一段清醒人心的文字弹了出来) on her phone screen. It read, “Never risk your safety for someone who never considers your feelings.”
The words 4. _______________ (深深触动了她的灵魂，她的肩膀微微颤抖，泪眼朦胧；so...that...). Regretting her silly and impulsive decision, Emily walked back to her friend and 5. _______________ (依偎在她的肩膀上), apologizing for her stubbornness. With her friend’s gentle comfort, 6. _______________ (她紧绷的肩膀缓缓放松，内心满是释然与愧疚).
参考答案
【学以致用】
1.tapped me on the shoulder
2.shrugged my shoulders
3.a friend’s post popped up
4.touched my soul so much that my shoulders shook, my eyes wrapped in a mist of tears
5.snuggled up against his shoulder
6.my shoulders dropped with relief
【趁热打铁】
1.tapped me gently on the shoulder
2.shrugged my shoulders
3.a short video about daily parent-child moments popped up
4.touched my soul so deeply that my shoulders shook, my eyes wrapped in a mist of tears
5.snuggled up against his shoulder
6.my shoulders dropped with relief
【拔高提能】
1. tapped her gently on the shoulder
2. shrugged her shoulders
3. a sobering sentence popped up
4. touched her soul so deeply that her shoulders shook slightly and her eyes were covered in a mist of tears
5. snuggled up against her shoulder
6. her tense shoulders dropped with relief and guilt

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