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2026秋季人教新教材9上Unit1 单元话题写作
一、单元写作核心要求
话题主题：Changes in My Life（我生活中的变化）
写作核心：围绕个人生活，对比过去与现在的不同，突出成长与生活变迁，贴合本单元“The Changing World”主题
适用时态：一般过去时、used to do（过去常常）、现在完成时、一般现在时
写作角度：学校生活、家庭居住、个人性格、学习状态、日常出行、娱乐方式（任选2-3个角度即可，无需面面俱到）
字数要求：80-100词（初中标准）
结构要求：总分总结构，开头总起、中间分述变化、结尾总结感受，逻辑清晰
写作注意事项 时态区分准确：描述过去用used to或一般过去时，描述现在用一般现在时，避免时态混乱 巧用对比连接词：but, however, while, in the past, now等，让过去与现在的对比更明显 句子长短结合，避免通篇简单句，适当运用本单元定语从句、被动语态基础句式 不堆砌内容，选2-3个最典型的变化即可，突出真情实感，结尾升华个人感受 杜绝成分重复，used to后接动词原形，现在完成时注意have/has搭配
二、高分满分范文
范文一（基础达标版，适配课内要求）
Changes in My Life
My life has changed a lot in the past three years. I have grown up and had many different experiences.
In the past, I used to be a shy boy. I was afraid to talk with my classmates and always studied alone. I used to walk to my primary school every day, and it took me about twenty minutes. My family lived in a small old house at that time.
But now, I become more confident and outgoing. I like to take part in group discussions and make new friends at school. I take the school bus to junior high school with my friends every morning. We have moved into a big and bright flat, and my grandma lives with us happily.
I enjoy these great changes. They make my life more wonderful and meaningful.
范文二（提升高分版，适配考试加分）
Changes in My Life
Great changes have taken place in my life since I became a junior high school student. Time goes by, and I have become a different person from what I used to be.
I used to be short and quiet, and I didn’t dare to answer questions in class. My home was not far from my old school, so I used to walk there with my parents after breakfast every day. We didn’t have many books at home, so I usually read only textbooks in my free time.
Now, I am taller and more active. I am brave enough to put up my hand and answer teachers’ questions. I take a bus to school with my classmates, and we talk happily on the way. My parents bought me many interesting books, so I often read different kinds of books to relax myself.
Thanks to these changes, I have a better life now. I will keep working hard and welcome more nice changes.
三、单元专属词句积累（写作必背）
（一）高频短语（直接套用）
1. 开头总起短语
great changes have taken place 发生了巨大变化
change a lot 变化很大
in the past few years 在过去几年里
since I became... 自从我成为……
2. 描述过去的短语
used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
in the past 在过去
at that time 在那时
be shy/quiet 害羞/安静
live in a small old house 住在小旧房子里
walk to school = go to school on foot 步行去上学
study alone 独自学习
3. 描述现在的短语
now = at present 现在
become more confident/outgoing 变得更自信/外向
move into a big bright flat 搬进宽敞明亮的公寓
take the school bus/bus to school 坐校车/公交车去上学
make new friends 交新朋友
take part in group discussions 参加小组讨论
have a better life 拥有更好的生活
4. 结尾总结短语
enjoy these changes 喜欢这些变化
thanks to these changes 多亏了这些变化
make life more wonderful/meaningful 让生活更精彩/有意义
keep working hard 继续努力
（二）加分句型（考试提分）
1. 开头句型
My life has changed a lot in the past few years.
Great changes have taken place in my life since I...
I have grown up and my life is different from before.
2. 对比句型
I used to..., but now I...
In the past, I..., but now I am more...
While I used to be..., now I become...
3. 结尾句型
I am happy with these great changes.
These changes make my life more colourful.
I will study harder and have a better future.
（三）过渡连接词
but, however, while, in the past, now, at that time, and, so, besides

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