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九年级英语（外研版）衔接必备
七八年级核心考点精讲精练
专题二十一 写作提升：段落框架与写作模板
【考点精讲】
一、开头段（引入话题）
作用：快速切入主题，吸引阅卷人注意力，直接亮出观点。
背景引入法：介绍话题当下发展现状
Nowadays, more and more people are paying attention to...
With the development of..., ...has become a hot topic.
现象描述法：结合生活现象、个人日常切入
Recently, I have noticed that...
In my daily life, I often find that...
问题引入法：设问引发思考
Have you ever wondered...
What do you think of...
观点陈述法：开门见山直接表态
In my opinion, ...
I strongly believe that...
二、正文段（展开论述）
全文核心得分段，每段必须包含主题句 + 支撑句，搭配逻辑连接词串联内容。
主题句：置于段首，概括本段中心
There are several reasons why I like reading.
First of all, reading can help us learn more about the world.
支撑句：围绕主题补充事例、理由、细节
For example, we can learn about different cultures from books.
Besides, reading makes us think more deeply.
逻辑衔接：段内、段间使用过渡词，消除语句割裂感。
三、结尾段（总结升华）
作用：收束全文、重申立场，不新增无关信息。
总结归纳法：概括前文核心观点
In conclusion, I believe that...
All in all, ...
呼吁建议法：提出倡议、给出可行意见
Let's ... together.
I hope everyone can...
展望未来法：表达对未来的期许
I am sure that...will become better.
In the future, I hope...
三级过关精练
过关一 基础达标
一、根据提示补全对应段落
依据主题，完成 2—3 句开头段
主题：The Importance of Reading
根据给定主题句，写 4—5 句正文段
主题句：There are several reasons why I like reading.
围绕主题句，完成 2—3 句结尾段
主题句：In conclusion, reading is very important for us.
结合首尾段，补充 3—4 句正文段
开头段：Nowadays, more and more people are using mobile phones. They bring us many benefits but also some problems.
结尾段：In my opinion, we should use mobile phones wisely.
依据开头、正文，补充 2—3 句结尾段
开头段：Last month, I went to the countryside to visit my grandparents. It was a wonderful experience.
正文段：I helped my grandparents with farm work. I fed the chickens, picked vegetables and watered the plants. I also played with the village children.
过关二 能力提升
二、根据题目与要求完成写作
观点对比型写作
题目：Some people think that students should do homework every day. Others think that students should have more free time. What is your opinion
要求：使用观点对比模板；至少运用 3 个连接词；词数 80—100。
问题解决型写作
题目：How can we keep healthy Write a passage to give your suggestions.
要求：使用问题解决模板；至少提出 3 条健康建议；词数 80—100。
记叙经历类现象分析写作
题目：Write a passage about an unforgettable experience in your life.
要求：使用记叙经历模板；完整交代时间、地点、人物、事件；词数 80—100。
过关三 综合突破
三、综合写作训练
社会现象类分析作文
题目：Nowadays, many students spend too much time on screens. What do you think of this phenomenon Write a passage to share your opinion.
要求：使用现象分析（评析社会现象）模板；全面分析利弊并表明自身态度；至少使用 4 个过渡连接词；词数 100—120。
观点对比拔高作文
题目：Some people think that teenagers should use social media. Others think that teenagers should stay away from social media. What is your opinion
要求：使用观点对比模板；完整陈述双方观点并亮明个人立场；至少使用 4 个过渡连接词；词数 100—120。
参考答案与解析
过关一 基础达标
参考范文
Nowadays, more and more people are paying attention to the importance of reading. Reading is not only a way to gain knowledge but also a good habit that can enrich our lives.
参考范文
There are several reasons why I like reading. First of all, reading can help me learn new things and open my mind to different ideas. Besides, reading is a great way to relax after a long day of study. What's more, I can improve my language skills by reading different kinds of books.
参考范文
In conclusion, reading is very important for us. It helps us learn, grow and relax. I hope everyone can develop a good reading habit and enjoy the pleasure of reading.
参考范文
On the one hand, mobile phones make our lives more convenient. We can communicate with others easily and get information quickly. On the other hand, spending too much time on phones can be bad for our eyes and health.
参考范文
From this experience, I have learned that life in the countryside is simple but happy. I really enjoyed the time I spent with my grandparents and I hope to visit them again soon.
过关二 能力提升
参考范文（观点对比型）
Recently, the topic of homework has become a hot issue. Some people think that students should do homework every day. However, others believe that students should have more free time.
On the one hand, those who support daily homework have their reasons. They think that homework helps students review what they have learned in class. Besides, it can help students develop good study habits.
On the other hand, some people hold the view that students need more free time. They argue that too much homework can make students feel stressed. What's more, free time allows students to develop other interests.
In my opinion, I think students should have some homework, but not too much. A proper amount of homework is helpful, but students also need time to relax and play.
参考范文（问题解决型）
Nowadays, health has become a big concern for many people. It is important for us to find ways to keep healthy.
Here are some suggestions on how to stay healthy. First of all, we should eat a balanced diet with more vegetables and fruit. Besides, it is also important to exercise regularly. We can run, swim or play ball games to keep fit. What's more, we should get enough sleep every night. This helps our bodies rest and recover.
In a word, if we follow these suggestions, we can live a healthier and happier life. Let's start from today!
参考范文（记叙经历 现象分析型）
Last year, I took part in a school speech competition. It was a meaningful experience that I will never forget.
At first, I felt very nervous because I had never spoken in front of so many people. I practiced my speech many times. Then, when I stood on the stage, I took a deep breath and started speaking. Finally, I finished my speech successfully and received a lot of applause.
From this experience, I have learned that the hardest part is just the beginning. I believe that if we face our fears bravely, we can achieve our goals.
过关三 综合突破
参考范文（社会现象 现象分析型）
Nowadays, many students spend too much time on screens, such as phones and computers. This phenomenon has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, screens bring us many benefits. For example, we can learn new things online and communicate with friends easily. Besides, screens can help us relax after a long day of study.
On the other hand, spending too much time on screens also has some problems. First, it can be bad for our eyesight. Second, it may reduce the time we spend on outdoor activities and face-to-face communication.
In conclusion, I think that screens are useful tools, but we should use them wisely. We should set time limits and take regular breaks to protect our health.
参考范文（拔高观点对比型）
Recently, the topic of social media has become a hot issue. Some people think that teenagers should use social media. However, others believe that teenagers should stay away from social media.
On the one hand, those who support social media have their reasons. They think that social media helps teenagers stay connected with friends and family. Besides, it can be a platform for learning and self-expression.
On the other hand, some people hold the view that social media is harmful to teenagers. They argue that too much time on social media can lead to anxiety and low self-esteem. What's more, some information online is not true.
In my opinion, I think teenagers should use social media, but in a proper way. We should set time limits and be careful about what we see online. In conclusion, social media is a useful tool if we use it wisely.

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