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Unit 4 Reading for Writing
Beautiful Ireland and Its Traditions
Learning objectives
By the end of this class, we will be able to
1. Find out and understand the sensory details (sight, hearing, smell, touch, taste) and rhetorical devices used in the text;
2. Imitate(仿写) the text to draft a passage introducing a place that you like.
3. Present the passage to promote a place as its “Cultural Ambassador”
(文化使者）.
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
What attracts you most according to the video
Read for structure
Beautiful IRELAND AND ITS TRADITIONS
Underline the paragraph’s introductory and the ending sentence.
Introductory
sentence
Ending
sentence
Body
Transition sentence
1: Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.
Introductory
sentence:
Ending
sentence:
Body:
11: And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
2-6: Ireland’s influence on people.
7-10: Ireland’s influence on traditions.
Tip 1: Tell readers your topic in the introduction.
Give readers a suggestion/summary in the ending.
Read for structure
Read for language
Dive deep into Ireland
What can you see/hear/feel/smell/taste
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
Read for sensory description
Discuss to find out the sensory details
Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful lanscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. Better yet, enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If you’re lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.
Sight
Hearing
Touch
Smell
Taste
Emerald Isle
Down by the sea
In the mountains
A village pub
Activity 2 Read for language
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes with its rolling green hills
dotted with sheep and cattle.
Metaphor(暗喻)
A direct comparison between two unrelated things, without using like .
Tip 2: Use rhetorical devices(修辞) to make your writing more vivid(生动的).
What can you see
Emerald Isle
Emerald Isle
Down by the sea
In the mountains
A village pub
Activity 2 Read for language
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
Down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
What can you hear
Down by the sea
personification拟人
Emerald Isle
Down by the sea
In the mountains
A village pub
Activity 2 Read for language
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning songs.
What can you feel/smell/hear
In the mountains
personification
Emerald Isle
Down by the sea
In the mountains
A village pub
Activity 2 Read for language
To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub
and relax with . Better yet, enjoy .
a glass of wine or a local beer
a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew
What can you taste
In a village pub
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
Tip 3: Use sensory details to make your writing
vivid and impressive.
How does the writer make his description beautiful
Sight:...a true feast for the eyes...
Hearing:...is a true feast for the ears.…
makes up the music of …
Touch:…feel…on your skin...
Smell: ... breathe in sweet scent…
Taste:To do…, stop by…and relax with… .Better yet, enjoy…
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald IsIe” and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.
绿宝石岛和它的许多绿色郡的宁静风景是一场真正的视觉盛宴，起伏的绿色山丘上点缀着绵羊和牛。
仿写：...的湖的宁静风景是一场真正的视觉盛宴，河岸（bank)边点缀着五颜六色的小花。
The peaceful landscape of the lake in ... is a true feast for the eyes, with its both banks dotted with little colorful flowers.
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
教材原句（红色部分可替换）
And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.
在海边，海浪的咆哮和海鸟的鸣叫构成了海岸的音乐。
仿写：在湖边，泉水(spring water)的叮当声(tinkling)和鸟的叫声，组成大自然美妙的音乐。
And down by the lake, the tinkling of spring water and the cries of the birds make up the wonderful music of nature.
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
仿写：在一个安静的早晨，在（一实验)...漫步，感受阳光照在你的皮肤上，呼吸新鲜花朵的甜美气味，而鸟儿(学生)则用它们的晨歌(读书声)迎接新的一天。
On a quiet morning, wander around the ... , feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
_______________________ the West Lake is _____________________,
with its ___________dotted with ___________________. And down by ________, ________________________, and ____________________
make up ___________________________. On a quiet morning, ______ _______________, ______________________, and ________________
________________________ while birds ______ the new day with their morning song. Stop by _______________ and _______________ the delicious fish and Dongpo meat. Better yet, _____________a cup of Longjing tea.
西湖的宁静景色是一场真正的视觉盛宴，两岸点缀着五颜六色的小花。湖边，泉水的叮当声(tinkling)，鸟儿的叫声，构成了大自然美妙的音乐。在一个宁静的早晨，漫步在公园里，感受阳光洒落在你皮肤上，呼吸鲜花的芬芳，而鸟儿则用晨歌迎接新的一天的到来。去一家老餐馆，用美味的鱼和东坡肉犒赏自己。更好的是，喝一杯龙井茶。
The peaceful landscape of
a true feast for the eyes
both banks
little colorful flowers
the lake
the tinkling of spring water
the song of the birds
the wonderful music of nature
wander
around the park
feel the sun on your skin
breathe in the
sweet scent of fresh flower
greet
an old restaurant
treat yourself to
enjoy / go with
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty
Evaluate your presentation
Use this Beauty Criteria to evaluate your classmates’ presentation.
1. Structure A clear structure with a transition; 2’
2.Content Natural& Cultural beauty; 2’
3.Language Sensory details; A metaphor/personification; 2’
4.Grammar & Handwriting No grammar/spelling mistake; Neat and beautiful handwriting; 2’
5.Fluency Fluent in English and full of emotions. 2’
Homework
1.Polish your writing based on the feedback.
2.(Optional) Record a video promoting the place and post it on your social media.
Feel beauty
Appreciate beauty
Present beauty
Promote beauty

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