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专题16 书面表达 15篇【真题解码】2024-2026三年中考英语真题分类汇编
1．（2026·湖北武汉·中考真题）假如你是李欣，计划今年暑假在父母的指导下，用零花钱去做一件有意义的事，如学习一种乐器（learning a musical instrument）、帮助小动物（helping little animals）、参观大学校园（visiting a campus）等。请你根据以下提示，给好友David写一封邮件，分享你的计划。
Where do you get your pocket money
How are you going to spend the money
What do you think of this plan
Please write more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息，词数100词左右（开头和结尾已给出的词不计入总词数）。
Dear David,
This summer holiday, I plan to use my pocket money to do something meaningful with the help of my parents.
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Yours,
Li Xin
2．（2026·湖南·中考真题）为了引导青少年阳光健康地成长，某英语公众号计划做一期以“Small Actions Lead to a Bright Future”为主题的推文。请根据以下信息写一篇80词左右的英语短文投稿。
要求：
1.文中须包含图示中已给提示信息，并结合自身实际，至少再增加一条其他信息；
2.不得出现真实人名、校名和地名；
3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Small Actions Lead to a Bright Future
A bright future starts with small actions. I’d like to share my opinions.
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3．（2025·四川内江·中考真题）假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Sally给你发来如下邮件。请根据其内容，给她回复一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua, How’s it going I’m a little worried about my weight these days. Could you please give me some advice on how to manage my weight and keep fit I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Sally
参考词汇：exercise, enough sleep, junk food, takeaway food
参考句式：
1. Why not do...
2. You’d better do...
3. It’s a good idea to...
注意：
1. 所写内容应包括以上邮件询问内容，并进行合理拓展；
2. 文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数100词左右。
Dear Sally,
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Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2025·四川攀枝花·中考真题）老子说：“自知者明。”每个人都要善于发现自己的闪光点。为了引导同学们正确认识自我，更好地发展自己的能力，增强自信心，学校英语俱乐部发起了以“学会发现自己闪光点”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，以“My Shining Points”为题写一篇短文。
内容要点：1．结合具体事例，选取任意两个不同的角度，谈谈你身上具备的闪光点；
（提示：角度包括但不限于能力、特长、性格、品质……）
2．在结尾段说说“学会发现自己闪光点”给你带来的益处。
写作要求：1．词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2．短文应包含所有内容要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
My Shining Points
Everyone has their own shining points. It is important to find them out. As for me,
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5．（2025·广东深圳·中考真题）假设你是九年级学生李华，准备向校英语报“毕业寄语”专栏投稿，写一封信给学弟学妹，希望他们过好初中生活。请从学习、兴趣、人际关系等方面选一个或多个方面，给出三点建议，并送上祝福。
要求：
1.词数80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.语句通顺，内容完整，语法正确；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息。
Dear juniors,
As a ninth-grader who is about to graduate, I want to share some advice with you to make your junior high school life wonderful.
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Wish you a colorful and meaningful junior high school life!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
6．（2025·四川宜宾·中考真题）假如你是李华，你校英文报正在举办主题为“体重管理”的征稿活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示写一篇短文投稿。
注意：
1.不能出现真实姓名和校名；
2.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.词数100左右。开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：weight management体重管理；keep a balanced diet保持均衡的饮食
Now more and more people pay attention to weight management. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2025·四川绵阳·中考真题）假定你是校英文广播站主持人李华，学校正在开展“绿色生活，有你有我”主题活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文广播稿，号召全校同学厉行节约，绿色生活。
clear your plate reuse the books ...
注意：1. 短文需包含所有提示信息，并补充至少一点倡议；
2. 词数100左右，首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：call on号召
Boys and girls,
I am Li Hua. Our school is holding an activity named “A Greener Life for You and Me”.
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Thanks!
8．（2025·山东滨州·中考真题）生活中总有让我们感动的瞬间，像阳光一样温暖着我们，如父母的一个拥抱、老师的一个微笑、触动心灵的一本书……假设你是李华，请结合自身经历，以“A Ray (一缕) of Sunshine in My Heart”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享你心中的这缕“阳光”。
内容包括：
1.这缕“阳光”是什么；
2.分享你的一次经历；
3.表达这次经历带给你的温暖。
要求：
1.要点齐全，并适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3.80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A Ray of Sunshine in My Heart
In our lives, there are always some touching moments, warming our hearts like sunshine. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．（2025·海南·中考真题）假定你是李华。你的英国朋友Lily近期将来华学习汉语，希望你能帮她取一个寓意美好，朗朗上口的中文名字。请你给她回复一封邮件。
要点包括：
1.赞同她取中文名字的想法；
2.以“李”为姓，帮她从“海”“丽”“慧”“乐”中选取一个或两个字作为她的名；
3.从所取名字的字面含义、读音及所寄托的美好祝福等方面说明理由。
注意：
1.要点齐全，适当拓展；
2.行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名；
4.100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：last/family name 姓; first/given name 名; pronunciation/sound 音; meaning 意义
Dear Lily,
I’m so excited to know that you are coming to China to study Chinese.
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10．（2025·黑龙江哈尔滨·中考真题）假如你是九年一班的学生李平，你校英语网站正在评选“最美中学生（the Most Beautiful Middle School Student）”，请你用英语给负责此项活动的老师写一封自荐信。
写作要点：
1.对同学友善；
2.努力学习；
3.积极参加校内外活动。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
4.词数100左右。
参考词汇: select（vt.评选）, activities inside and outside the school（校内外活动）
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11．（2024·四川攀枝花·中考真题）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友John来信说对你校课后服务课程很感兴趣，请你给他写一封回信。
内容包括：
1. 本学期开设的三门课程：Calligraphy（书法），Martial Art（武术），Vegetable-planting；
2. 你选择的其中一门课程及其开课情况（如上课时间、地点等）；
3. 你选择这门课程的原因。
要求：
1. 词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 要点提示均须涉及，有恰当的结尾，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯合理；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear John,
Knowing that you’re interested in optional courses in our school, I’m writing to tell you something about them.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
12．（2024·江苏南京·中考真题）You see this announcement in an international teenage magazine. Write your article (60 words)
Articles Wanted! School camping Where can we go camping What should we take with us, and why The best article will be published in next month’s magazine.
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数不少于60字（已给出文章开头，不计入总字数）
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Camping is a good way to relax.
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13．（2024·甘肃甘南·中考真题）作为一名初三的学生、你即将毕业离开母校。在过去的三年中，你在学校度过了很快乐的时光。请你根据下面的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，表达你对母校、老师、同学和工作人员的感激之情。
1. 母校：校园非常美丽，是一个学习的好地方等；
2. 老师：关心学生，对我们有耐心等；
3. 同学：勤奋好学，互相帮助等；
4. 工作人员：工作努力，晚睡早起等；
5. 个人想法：……
要求：
1. 词数80~100 (首句已给出，不计入总词数) ；
2. 要点提示均需涉及，可适当增加内容；
3. 字迹工整，卷面整洁，文意连贯，语言流畅；
4. 不用真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词语：patient, help each other, thanks for
Hello, everyone. I’d like to talk about my life in our school.
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Thanks for listening.
14．（2024·四川绵阳·中考真题）假定你是李华，请阅读你的外国网友 Mike的邮件，并用英语回复，给他至少3条建议并说明理由。词数100左右，首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Li Hua From: Mike
Dear Li Hua, Is everything going well with you I have spent much time on my mobile phone these days. I often watch videos or play online games. I know it’s a waste of time and bad for my eyes, but I just can’t stop it. What should I do Would you please give me some advice All the best, Mike
To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Dear Mike,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
15．（2024·四川·中考真题）假如你是李平， 夏季是你的家乡最美的季节，请用英文写一封邮件介绍你的家乡，邀请你的英国笔友Peter来旅游。邮件内容包括：
Location Sichuan Province, China
Population 300, 000
Weather cool in summer
Places to visit villages, mountains, lakes, grasslands.
Things to eat mushrooms, yak meat (牦牛肉), yogurt..
... ...
注意：
(1)邮件必须包括表格中的信息，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
(2)不得出现个人真实信息，如姓名、校名等；
(3)词数：80~100，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Have you ever seen a place as beautiful as my hometown in summer
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Looking forward to your reply.
Li Ping
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《专题16 书面表达 15篇【真题解码】2024-2026三年中考英语真题分类汇编》参考答案
1．
例文：
Dear David,
This summer holiday, I plan to use my pocket money to do something meaningful with the help of my parents.
I get my pocket money by doing housework and saving my birthday gifts. I plan to spend it on learning to play the guitar. I have always loved music and want to play for my family and friends. I will join a summer guitar class near my home. This plan makes me happy because it helps me develop a new skill and enjoy music in a deeper way. I also believe it will make my summer holiday more colourful and unforgettable.
I’m really looking forward to it. What about your summer plan I hope you can have a great holiday too.
Yours,
Li Xin
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文，以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
明确要点：零花钱的来源、如何使用零花钱、对计划的看法、补充更多细节
确定人称：第一人称（I）和第二人称（you）为主
注意事项：不得透露个人真实信息，需以李欣身份给David写信
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出，引出暑假计划
主体段：说明零花钱的来源，说明如何使用零花钱（学习乐器等）及具体安排，阐述对计划的看法和感受
结尾段：表达期待并询问对方计划
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：零花钱来源
来源：doing housework/saving birthday gifts/getting allowance from parents/doing part-time jobs等
要点二：如何使用零花钱
用途：learning to play the guitar/joining a summer guitar class/buying a guitar and music books/paying for lessons等
具体安排：near my home/three times a week/every afternoon等
要点三：对计划的看法与感受
看法：meaningful/helps me develop a new skill/enjoy music in a deeper way/make my summer colourful and unforgettable等
感受：happy/excited/looking forward to it等
要点四：补充细节
细节：I will practise every day/My parents will support me/I hope to give a small concert for my family等
要点五：结尾询问
询问：What about your summer plan /Do you have any special plan for the holiday /How will you spend your summer 等
2．例文
Small Actions Lead to a Bright Future
A bright future starts with small actions. I’d like to share my opinions.
First, doing some reading can open our eyes and make us think independently. Reading various books, we can gain wisdom. Second, doing housework regularly helps us learn to look after ourselves well. It makes us gradually understand the hard work that our family members bear. Third, exercising regularly helps build up our body and make us energetic enough to face challenges.
These small actions might seem simple, but they help us grow little by little. If we keep doing them, we will have a bright future.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文（公众号推文），全文以一般现在时为主
明确要点：①阅读带来的作用；②做家务的意义；③自主新增一条小事；④总结小事成就美好未来
确定人称：第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项：词数 80 词左右，给定开头不计入总词数；包含图示全部信息，额外补充一条内容；禁止真实人名、校名、地名
[第二步：构思布局]
按三段式梳理结构：
开头段：给出主题句，引出各类有益的小事；
中间段：依次阐述阅读、做家务、新增运动小事的积极作用；
结尾段：总结小事的价值，点明主旨
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：阅读的意义
阅读的作用：do some reading, open our eyes, make us think independently, gain wisdom, read books widely, broaden horizons, develop independent thinking
要点二：做家务的意义
家务的作用：do housework, learn to look after ourselves, understand family’s hard work, do daily chores, develop self-care ability, know parents’ tiredness
要点三：新增小事：规律锻炼
运动的作用：exercise regularly, build up our body, make us energetic enough to face challenges, take daily exercise, keep strong, deal with difficulties actively
要点四：总结升华
主旨表达：These small actions might seem simple, but they help us grow little by little; Small daily deeds matter a lot. They push us to make progress step by step and bring us a promising future
3．
例文
Dear Sally,
How’s it going I’m sorry to hear you’re worried about your weight. Don’t worry too much — I have some advice for you.
First, why not exercise more You can take a walk or ride a bike after school every day. It will make you feel energetic and happy. Second, you’d better stop eating junk food and takeaway food. They are bad for your health. Third, it’s a good idea to get enough sleep every night, as it helps your body stay healthy.
I hope my advice will help you. Let me know how it goes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文（电子邮件），以一般现在时为主，围绕给笔友提供体重管理与健康建议展开写作
明确要点：回应对方关于体重焦虑的求助，给出具体健康建议，表达关心与鼓励
确定人称：第一人称（I）
注意事项：语言流畅，语气友好，不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数约100词
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段：问候并表达对对方的关心，引出后续建议
主体段：分点给出体重管理与保持健康的具体建议，结合参考句式展开
结尾段：表达对建议的信心，鼓励对方并期待回复
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：开头回应与共情表达
回应问候：How’s it going /I’m glad to hear from you
共情表达：I’m sorry to hear you’re worried about your weight/Don’t worry too much
要点二：健康管理建议
运动建议：why not exercise more /take a walk/ride a bike after school
饮食建议：you’d better stop eating junk food and takeaway food/eat more vegetables and fruit
作息建议：it’s a good idea to get enough sleep every night/go to bed early and get up early
要点三：结尾鼓励与祝福
核心观点：I hope my advice will help you/Everything will be better soon
具体表达：Let me know how it goes!/I’m always here for you
4．例文
My Shining Points
Everyone has their own shining points. It is important to find them out. As for me, my English is excellent, and I like communicating with my classmates in English. As a student, I always ask teachers for help when I have problems, so I am making progress all the time.
What’s more, I am always ready to help others. I once worked as a volunteer and helped those in trouble, which was not only interesting but also meaningful.
All in all, it’s amazing to find that I have shining points. I have become much more confident than before, and I believe I will have a shining future!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：记叙文，用一般现在时为主，穿插一般过去时叙述事例
明确要点：两个不同角度的闪光点（结合具体事例）、发现闪光点带来的益处
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：承接给出首句，引出自己的闪光点
主体段：分两层阐述两个不同角度的闪光点及具体事例
结尾段：总结发现闪光点的益处，升华主题（自信、未来）
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：第一个闪光点
角度选择：Excellent English/Good at communication/Diligent in learning等
具体事例：Communicating with classmates in English/Asking teachers for help actively等
效果描述：Making progress/Enjoying the fun of communication等
要点二：第二个闪光点
角度选择：Ready to help others/Kind/Responsible等
具体事例：Worked as a volunteer/Helped people in trouble等
感受评价：Interesting and meaningful等
要点三：总结发现闪光点的益处
心理变化：Becoming much more confident等
未来展望：Having a shining future/Believing in doing better等
5．例文
Dear juniors,
As a ninth-grader who is about to graduate, I want to share some advice with you to make your junior high school life wonderful.
First, for study, try to make a good study plan. Preview before class and go over what you’ve learned on time, which will help you improve your grades easily. Second, for hobbies, develop at least one hobby you enjoy. It can help you relax when you feel tired from busy study. Third, for relationships, be kind to your classmates and teachers. A warm smile will help you make more close friends easily.
Wish you a colorful and meaningful junior high school life!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文，用一般现在时
明确要点：建议（学习、兴趣、人际关系等方面）
确定人称：第二人称（you）
注意事项：不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：点明主题
主体段：给出具体建议
结尾段：表达祝福
[要点展开]
学习建议：make a good study plan/preview/go over等
兴趣建议：develop/help you relax等
人际关系建议：be kind to/a warm smile等
6．例文：
Now more and more people pay attention to weight management. As teenagers, we should also care about it because a healthy weight helps us grow well and study better.
To manage our weight, we can start from three aspects. First, keep a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables and fruit, and less junk food. Second, exercise every day. We can run, swim or play ball games for at least an hour. Third, get enough sleep. It helps our body rest and keeps us active.
I think weight management is important for everyone. Let’s take action now to develop healthy habits and enjoy a better life!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文/建议类短文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：根据思维导图，包含重要性、方法（饮食/运动/睡眠）、呼吁
确定人称：第一人称（we）为主，体现青少年身份
注意事项：不得出现真实姓名和校名；词数100左右（开头已给出不计入总词数）
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出（引入话题），并补充青少年也应关注体重管理
主体段：分四层——①重要性；②方法（饮食、运动、睡眠）
结尾段：呼吁行动，养成健康习惯
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：重要性
帮助成长：helps us grow well
促进学习：study better/feel energetic
要点二：方法
饮食方面：keep a balanced diet/eat more vegetables and fruit/less junk food
运动方面：exercise every day/run/swim/play ball games/at least an hour
睡眠方面：get enough sleep/helps body rest/keeps us active
要点三：呼吁
总结观点：weight management is important for everyone
号召行动：take action now/develop healthy habits/enjoy a better life
7．例文
Boys and girls,
I am Li Hua. Our school is holding an activity named “A Greener Life for You and Me”. I’m here to call on everybody to take part in this activity and live a greener life.
First of all, we should clear our plates while having meals. Wasting food is not a good habit. Besides, it is a good idea to reuse the old books. Instead of throwing away those used books, we’d better give them away to the students who are in need. Last but not least, turn off the lights before leaving. We should try our best to save energy.
Let’s take action now and start with the little things around us!
Thanks!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇广播稿；
②时态：主要运用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中的每一项内容，适当添加细节，如阐述这些行为的意义，并突出写作重点，即号召全校同学厉行节约，绿色生活。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图；
第二步：分别从节约粮食、旧书再利用、节约能源等角度，列举一系列具体且可行的环保行动，并适当阐述意义；
第三步：书写结语，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①call on号召
②instead of而不是
③turn off关闭
④take action采取行动
[高分句型]
①I’m here to call on everybody to take part in this activity and live a greener life.（动词不定式作目的状语）
②Instead of throwing away those used books, we’d better give them away to the students who are in need.（who引导的定语从句）
③Let’s take action now and start with the little things around us!（祈使句）
8．One possible version:
A Ray of Sunshine in My Heart
In our lives, there are always some touching moments, warming our hearts like sunshine. For me, a ray of sunshine in my heart is my teacher’s care.
Last term, I failed a math test. I felt so upset that I lost confidence in myself. My math teacher noticed my sadness. After class, he left a note in my math book. He encouraged me to believe in myself and not to give up. That note was not just a message on a piece of paper; it was the support that I needed most.
My teacher’s care, like sunshine, warmed my heart.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，指出自己心中的那缕阳光是老师的关怀；
第二步，具体阐述一次自己考试失利后老师给予关怀的经历；
第三步，最后表达这次经历给自己带来的温暖感受。
[亮点词汇]
① feel upset感到沮丧
② lose confidence in失去对……的信心
③ notice注意到
④ encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
⑤ believe in oneself相信自己
⑥ give up放弃
[高分句型]
① I felt so upset that I lost confidence in myself.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）
② That note was not just a message on a piece of paper; it was the support that I needed most.（that引导的定语从句）
9．
Dear Lily,
I’m so excited to know that you are coming to China to study Chinese. I think it’s a great idea to have a Chinese name!
Since your English name is Lily, I suggest using “李乐” (Lǐ Lè) as your Chinese name. “李” is a common last name, and “乐” means “happy” or “joyful.” The pronunciation is simple and cheerful, just like your personality. If you prefer a two-character given name, “李慧乐” (Lǐ Huìlè) is also nice. “慧” means “wise,” and “乐” keeps the meaning of happiness. Together, they express the wish for you to be both smart and joyful in China.
I hope you like the name!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，需包含对取中文名字的赞同、名字选项及寓意说明，需突出名字的字面含义、读音特点及祝福寓意，注意标点符号及大小写规范，避免语法错误，保持上下文逻辑连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体赞同取中文名字的想法，并说明姓氏选择；
第二步，分别介绍单字名“李乐”和双字名“李慧乐”的读音、含义及祝福；
第三步，表达对名字选择的期待，传递友好情感。
[亮点词汇]
①common last name常见姓氏
②cheerful欢快的
③express the wish表达祝愿
[高分句型]
①Since your English name is Lily, I suggest using “李乐” (Lǐ Lè) as your Chinese name. （原因状语从句）
②If you prefer a two-character given name, “李慧乐” (Lǐ Huìlè) is also nice.（条件状语从句）
10．
例文：
Dear Teacher,
My name is Li Ping from Class 1, Grade 9. I am writing to recommend myself for “the Most Beautiful Middle School Student”.
I am always friendly to my classmates. When they have problems, I try my best to help them. Besides, I study hard and often get good grades. I also take an active part in activities inside and outside the school, such as volunteer work and sports meetings.
I hope I can be selected. Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping
【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要使用一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全。
【写作步骤】第一步：开头表明身份和写信目的；
第二步：分点说明自身优点，适当补充细节；
第三步：结尾表达期望和感谢。
【亮点词汇】①friendly友善的
②take an active part in积极参与
③volunteer work志愿活动
【高分句型】When they have problems, I try my best to help them.（when引导的时间状语从句）
11．范文
Dear John,
Knowing that you’re interested in optional courses in our school, I’m writing to tell you something about them.
This term, our school offers three courses: Calligraphy, Martial Art and Vegetable-planting. They are all popular among students. I chose Calligraphy. It is held every Tuesday and Thursday afternoon in the art room. Our teacher is an experienced calligrapher who teaches us basic brush techniques and how to write different styles of characters.
I picked Calligraphy because I’ve always been interested in Chinese traditional culture. Through this course, I can not only improve my writing skills but also learn more about the history behind Chinese characters.
What do you think of these courses Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容（本学期开设的三门课程、自己选择的课程及开课情况、选择该课程的原因），适当添加细节，确保内容完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明写信目的，介绍学校本学期开设的三门课后服务课程；
第二步，具体说明自己选择的课程及其开课情况；
第三步，阐述选择这门课程的原因，最后以询问对方看法作结尾，呼应开头。
[亮点词汇]
①offer 提供
②experienced 有经验的
③basic techniques 基本技巧
④traditional culture 传统文化
[高分句型]
① Our teacher is an experienced calligrapher who teaches us basic brush techniques and how to write different styles of characters.（who引导的定语从句）
② Through this course, I can not only improve my writing skills but also learn more about the history behind Chinese characters.（not only...but also... 连接并列成分）
12．例文
Camping is a good way to relax. We can go camping in the forest or near a river. These places are quiet and full of fresh air. When we go camping, we should take a tent, sleeping bags, and some food. We also need to bring water, a flashlight, and a first-aid kit. These things can help us stay safe and comfortable. Camping is fun and helps us enjoy nature. It’s a great way to spend time with friends and family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容完成写作，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍要去哪里露营；
第二步，介绍我们应该带什么以及原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②need to do sth.需要做某事
[高分句型]
①When we go camping, we should take a tent, sleeping bags, and some food. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②It’s a great way to spend time with friends and family. (动词不定式作定语)
13．例文
Hello, everyone. I’d like to talk about my life in our school.
Our school is really beautiful. There are many trees and flowers. It’s a great place to study. The teachers care about us a lot. They’re patient and always ready to help whenever we have problems. My classmates are hard-working, too. We often help each other with our lessons. We share happiness and sadness together. The school workers are also great. They work hard, get up early and go to bed late.
I’m so thankful for my school, teachers, classmates and workers. I’ll never forget these three years.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，完善表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主旨；
第二步，结合要点提示，介绍学校环境，并向老师、同学、工作人员等表达感激之情；
第三步，谈谈个人的想法，并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①care about 关心
②each other 互相
③get up early 早起
④go to bed late 晚睡
[高分句型]
①There are many trees and flowers. （there be句型）
②They’re patient and always ready to help whenever we have problems. （时间状语从句）
14．例文：
To: Mike
From: Li Hua
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you, though I’m sorry to learn about your situation. Here are some suggestions to help you reduce phone usage.
First, try setting specific time limits for using your phone each day. This will help control the amount of time you spend on it. Second, engage in alternative activities such as reading or exercising, which are both more beneficial for your mind and body. Lastly, consider using apps that monitor and restrict phone usage. They can remind you not to exceed your limit.
Hope these suggestions are helpful.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据Mike的邮件中提到的问题，给出合理建议，注意语句通顺，条理清晰，句中无单词和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表示收到信件并了解到问题。
第二步，针对问题给出三条建议：设定时间限制、参与其他活动、使用限制应用。
第三步，表示希望建议有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②set limits 设定限制
③engage in 参与
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to hear from you, though I’m sorry to learn about your situation. (though引导的让步状语从句)
②Second, engage in alternative activities such as reading or exercising, which are both more beneficial for your mind and body. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
③Lastly, consider using apps that monitor and restrict phone usage. (that引导的限制性定语从句)
15．例文：
Dear Peter,
Have you ever seen a place as beautiful as my hometown in summer I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown.
My hometown is located in Sichuan Province, China. It is a beautiful place, especially during the summer .The weather is cool. It has a population of about 300, 000. There are many wonderful places to visit, such as beautiful villages, wonderful mountains, lakes and vast grasslands. You will love the natural beauty here. Moreover, you can enjoy delicious local foods like fresh mushrooms, yak meat and yogurt. I am sure you will have a wonderful time in my hometown.
I would be more than happy to show you around. Looking forward to your reply.
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的家乡，邀请笔友Peter来旅游，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍家乡的位置、人口、天气、景点和当地美食；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②have a wonderful time玩得开心
③show sb. around 带领某人参观
[高分句型]
I am sure you will have a wonderful time in my hometown. (宾语从句)
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