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Unit 2 More Than Fun
单元写作专项训练
一、单元核心信息
二、必备词汇
兴趣爱好
1. hobby 爱好
2. music 音乐
3. rock music 摇滚乐
4. Beijing opera 京剧
5. electric guitar 电吉他
6. erhu 二胡
7. instrument 乐器
8. band 乐队
9. song 歌曲
10. write songs 写歌
11. play the guitar / erhu / piano 弹吉他/拉二胡/弹钢琴
12. sing Beijing opera 唱京剧
13. bird-watching 观鸟
14. reading 阅读
15. writing 写作
16. paper-cutting 剪纸
17. skating 滑冰
18. traditional art 传统艺术
感受与评价
19. fun 乐趣
20. joy 快乐
21. knowledge 知识
22. great 很棒的
23. wonderful 精彩的
24. lonely 孤独的
25. nervous 紧张的
动词短语
e out of 从……出来
27. cut in 插入，打断
28. take part in 参加
29. fire up 启动，点燃
30. share online 在线分享
31. make friends 交朋友
32. look around 环顾四周
33. put on a shelf 放在架子上
34. shake one’s head 摇头
35. open wide 睁大
三、核心句式
介绍爱好
1. I like writing magic stories. 我喜欢写魔法故事。
2. I play the electric guitar in the school band. 我在学校乐队里弹电吉他。
3. Grandpa likes playing the erhu in the park. 爷爷喜欢在公园里拉二胡。
4. I love bird-watching. 我喜欢观鸟。
5. My hobby is reading. 我的爱好是阅读。
描述乐趣与感受
6. There is so much fun in music. 音乐中有很多乐趣。
7. It feels great to enjoy our hobby together. 一起享受爱好感觉很好。
8. It’s my favourite hobby. 这是我最大的爱好。
9. It gives us knowledge about nature. 它给我们关于自然的知识。
10. I want to share the joy of writing. 我想分享写作的乐趣。
描述行动与经历
11. Sometimes I write songs and share them online. 有时我写歌并在网上分享。
12. I decide to take part in it with Grandpa. 我决定和爷爷一起参加。
13. I nod to Grandpa and we fire up our instruments. 我向爷爷点头，我们启动乐器。
14. I put the notebook on a shelf and leave. 我把笔记本放在架子上然后离开。
15. Her eyes open wide. 她睁大了眼睛。
16. How about starting a writing group 成立一个写作小组怎么样？
表达愿望
17. I want to make friends and share the joy of writing. 我想交朋友并分享写作的乐趣。
18. Let’s meet here on Wednesday after lunch. 我们周三午饭后在这里见面吧。
四、写作技巧
1. 一般现在时第三人称单数的正确使用
主语 动词变化 示例
I / You / We / They 动词原形 I play the guitar.
He / She / It 动词 + -s/-es She likes writing. He plays the erhu.
规则：
- 一般情况加 -s：play → plays, like → likes
- 以 o, s, x, sh, ch 结尾加 -es：go → goes, watch → watches
- 辅音字母 + y 结尾，变 y 为 i 加 -es：study → studies
写作提示： 介绍自己爱好用第一人称，介绍他人（如家人、朋友）的爱好时需注意动词的第三人称单数形式。
2. 表达爱好与乐趣的常用句型
句型 用法 示例
I like / love + 名词/动名词 表达喜欢 I like writing stories.
There is / are + 名词 描述存在 There is so much fun in music.
It feels + 形容词 + to do 表达感受 It feels great to enjoy our hobby.
写作提示： 交替使用 like / love / enjoy，搭配 fun / joy / great 等词丰富表达。
3. 用动作描写表达感受
教材中常用动作来间接表达情绪，而不是直接使用形容词。这种写作手法使文章更生动：
动作描写 暗示的感受
Emma shakes her head and stops writing. 失望、孤独、沮丧
Her eyes open wide. 惊讶、惊喜
My mouth feels dry. 紧张
Grandpa gives me a big smile. 开心、满意
写作提示： 在写作中用动作间接表达情绪，比直接说“I feel happy”更有画面感。例如：I nod to Grandpa and we fire up our instruments. → 表达了默契与兴奋。
4. 如何让短文更高级
技巧 说明 示例
添加修饰语 在名词前加形容词 I play electric guitar.
增加细节 说明地点、时间、频率 I play in the school band.
使用连接词 用 and / but / because 连接 I like writing because it’s fun.
描述感受 用 feel 表达个人体验 It feels great to play with Grandpa.
升级示例：
原句 升级后
I like music. I play the guitar. It is fun. I love music. I play the electric guitar in the school band. There is so much fun in music.
I like reading. I want to share books. I make friends. I like reading and I want to share the joy of books. I put my favourite book on the shelf in the library. A week later, I make new friends!
写作提示： 升级后的短文信息更丰富，细节更具体，读起来也更生动有趣。
五、实战演练
一、汉译英
1. 我喜欢写魔法故事。
2. 我在学校乐队里弹电吉他。
3. 音乐中有很多乐趣。
4. 爷爷喜欢在公园里拉二胡。
5. 他们一起唱京剧。
6. 一起享受爱好感觉很好。
7. 我想分享写作的乐趣。
8. 我在架子上放了一本笔记本。
二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子）
句型1：I like / love + 动名词（表达爱好）
例句：I like writing magic stories.
1. 我喜欢在公园里拉二胡。
2. 我喜欢观鸟。
句型2：I play + 乐器（描述演奏乐器）
例句：I play the electric guitar in the school band.
1. 我在学校乐队里弹钢琴。
2. 爷爷在公园里拉二胡。
句型3：There is / are...（描述存在）
例句：There is so much fun in music.
1. 阅读中有很多乐趣。
2. 爱好中有很多快乐。
句型4：It feels + 形容词 + to...（表达感受）
例句：It feels great to enjoy our hobby together.
1. 和朋友一起玩音乐感觉很好。
2. 学习传统艺术感觉很有趣。
句型5：I want to...（表达愿望）
例句：I want to share the joy of writing.
1. 我想交朋友。
2. 我想分享我的爱好。
句型6：主语 + like + 动名词（第三人称单数）
例句：He likes playing the erhu in the park.
1. 她喜欢写故事。
2. 他喜欢在图书馆读书。
句型7：I decide to...（表达决定）
例句：I decide to take part in it with Grandpa.
1. 我决定加入写作小组。
2. 我决定分享我的作品。
句型8：Let’s...（表达建议）
例句：Let’s meet here on Wednesday after lunch.
1. 让我们周五下午见面吧。
2. 让我们一起去观鸟吧。
句型9：How about... （提出建议）
例句：How about starting a writing group
1. 成立一个读书俱乐部怎么样？
2. 在公园里演奏音乐怎么样？
三、书面表达
（话题作文）
1．题目：My Favorite Hobby
要求：
1. 词数不少于80词；
2. 包含以下要点：①你的爱好是什么；②你是如何培养这个爱好的；③这个爱好给你带来的好处；④你对这个爱好的未来规划；
3. 语句通顺，语法正确，避免出现真实人名、校名和地点。
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2．题目：My Favorite After-school Activity
要求：150 词左右，紧扣本单元内容。
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（材料作文）
3．请以My Hobby为题，写一篇短文介绍你的爱好。
提示：
1. 你的爱好是什么；
2. 你为什么喜欢它；
3. 它给你带来了什么（乐趣/知识/朋友等）。
要求：60-80词，语句通顺，语法正确，可适当发挥。
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4．学习之余，你钟爱什么运动？为了了解同学们的运动喜好，校英语社团计划推出一期以“My Favorite Sport”为专题的线上交流活动，假设你是Li Hua，请结合以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的运动项目。词数60词左右。
要求：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，使内容连贯、通顺，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 不得出现真实的姓名和学校。
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（电子邮件）
5．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Peter来信询问你的爱好及梦想。请你根据以下提示给他回一封邮件，介绍你的爱好、你经常做的相关活动，以及你的梦想。词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示：
1. 学校：No. 1 Middle School，干净美丽，有图书馆和操场；班级：Class 2，Grade 7，同学友好；
2. 爱好：阅读（或运动、画画等）；
喜欢的科目：英语（有趣，能和老师用英语交流）；
相关活动：每天阅读30分钟，周末去图书馆等（根据爱好调整）；
3. 梦想：成为一名作家（或运动员、画家等）。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to get your email. You asked about my hobby and dream, so I want to tell you about them.
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I hope my dream will come true one day. What about your hobby and dream Please tell me in your next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
（书信作文）
6．假如你是阳光中学七(1)班的麦克，你想成为学校绘画社团的一名成员，请你根据招聘海报，写一封70词左右的英语自荐信。
You Are Wanted Do you like painting If so, please join us. We want you. Please email at sunshinemiddleschool@ if you want to join us. Please introduce yourself, your hobbies, and why you want to join us. Painting Club
Dear sir or madam,
My name is Mike.
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Mike
（讲稿）
7．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于40词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华，你即将参加学校英语角举办的以“我的校园生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请用英文写一篇发言稿，内容包括你最喜欢的科目、课后活动以及对校园生活的感受等。
提示词语：Chinese, do sports, paint, interesting, busy
提示问题：● What is your favourite subject
● What do you do after school
● What do you think of your school life
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________
（看图作文）
8．假如你是Mike，你们学校这学期将开设新的社团课程，想了解同学们的兴趣爱好以便成立大家喜欢的社团。请根据以下提示介绍你的爱好以及你希望学校能成立的社团。
要求：
1. 语言流畅，要点齐全，条理清楚。
2. 文中不得出现真实的名字。
3. 不得少于70词（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：skill(技巧), practise(练习)，confident(自信的)
My hobby is ________________________, so I’d like to join the ______________ club.
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I believe the ______________ club will make my school life more colorful.
参考答案
一、汉译英
1. I like writing magic stories.
2. I play the electric guitar in the school band.
3. There is so much fun in music.
4. Grandpa likes playing the erhu in the park.
5. They sing Beijing opera together.
6. It feels great to enjoy our hobby together.
7. I want to share the joy of writing.
8. I put a notebook on the shelf.
二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子）
句型1：
1. I like playing the erhu in the park.
2. I love bird-watching.
句型2：
1. I play the piano in the school band.
2. Grandpa plays the erhu in the park.
句型3：
1. There is so much fun in reading.
2. There is so much joy in hobbies.
句型4：
1. It feels great to play music with friends.
2. It feels interesting to learn traditional art.
句型5：
1. I want to make friends.
2. I want to share my hobby.
句型6：
1. She likes writing stories.
2. He likes reading in the library.
句型7：
1. I decide to join the writing group.
2. I decide to share my works.
句型8：
1. Let’s meet on Friday afternoon.
2. Let’s go bird-watching together.
句型9：
1. How about starting a reading club
2. How about playing music in the park
三、书面表达
1．例文：
My Favorite Hobby
My favorite hobby is reading books. I started to love reading when my mom read storybooks to me at the age of five. Now I read for 30 minutes every night before bed, and I often borrow books from the school library. Reading makes me smart and happy. It lets me learn about different places and stories without leaving home. It also helps me write better in English and Chinese. In the future, I want to read more science books and even try to write my own short stories. Reading will always be my best friend.
2．参考范文
My Favorite After-school Activity
My favorite after-school activity is playing basketball. I join the school basketball club and practice for an hour every afternoon.
At first, I was not good at dribbling or shooting, but my teammates and coach helped me a lot. Now I can play well in matches. I love basketball because it’s exciting and helps me stay strong. When I run on the court and pass the ball to my teammates, I feel full of energy.
Playing basketball also teaches me teamwork. We have to work together to win matches. I’ve made many good friends in the club. We cheer for each other when we score points and encourage each other when we make mistakes.
This activity is more than just fun. It helps me grow both physically and mentally. I will keep playing basketball and enjoy every moment of it.
3．参考范文
My Hobby My hobby is reading books. I spend nearly an hour reading every day after finishing my homework.
I love reading because there are so many wonderful stories and useful knowledge in books. When I read, I can forget all my tiredness from study.
Reading brings me lots of fun. It also helps me make more friends who share the same love for books. I will keep this good hobby forever.
4．例文：
My Favorite Sport
Hi, I’m Li Hua, a 14-year-old student. Among all the sports, I like playing basketball best.
I play basketball every Thursday. It’s really beneficial to me. When I play basketball, I can also make many friends and improve my teamwork skills.
My idol is Yao Ming. He is a great basketball player. I hope one day I can play basketball as well as him.
5．例文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to get your email. You asked about my hobby and dream, so I want to tell you about them.
I study at No. 1 Middle School. It’s clean and beautiful with a library and a playground. I’m in Class 2, Grade 7. My classmates are very friendly.
My hobby is reading. Every day I read for about 30 minutes. On weekends, I often go to the library to borrow books. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting. I can talk with my teacher in English. My dream is to become a writer. I need to read a lot and practice writing.
I hope my dream will come true one day. What about your hobby and dream Please tell me in your next email.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．例文
Dear sir or madam,
My name is Mike. I’m from Class 1, Grade 7. I’m 13 years old. I’m tall and strong. And I’m a fan of art. I like painting a lot. I always try to paint different things, like the flowers or the animals. Painting is really good for me. It makes my life interesting. I hope to learn new skills and meet others in the Painting Club. I can share my ideas about art with them. In the future, I want to be an artist like my role model Xu Beihong.
Mike
7．例文
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. My favorite subject is Chinese because I love learning about the rich history and culture. After school, I enjoy doing sports and painting, which I find very interesting and relaxing. I think my school life is busy but fulfilling. I have a lot of homework to do every day, but I can also learn a lot of new things. I like my school life very much. That’s all. Thanks.
8．例文：
My hobby is playing football, so I’d like to join the football club.
I usually play football after school. I am fond of football because it can help me keep healthy. When I run on the grass, I get stronger. Playing with friends always brings me lots of happiness. In the football club, I want to learn cool skills like passing the football from the teacher. I also want to practise every week and take part in some small matches. Besides, it’s important to become confident.
I believe the football club will make my school life more colorful.

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