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【暑假预习】2026-2027学年沪教版七年级英语上册（广州卷）
预习11 Unit 3 The seasons 书面表达专练
一、核心主题定位
（1）课标话题分类
人与自然—四季、天气、自然景色、季节活动
单元核心话题：Four seasons / My favourite season（四季/我最喜欢的季节）
（2）写作育人立意
1. 描述四季不同天气、景色、动植物变化；
2. 介绍每个季节适合开展的户外活动；
3. 表达自己最喜欢的季节，说明喜爱理由（景色、活动、心情）；
4. 感受大自然四季轮回之美，培养热爱自然、观察生活的习惯。
（3）文体、时态、人称
1. 文体：说明文、记叙文（短文为主，少量书信），80词左右；
2. 核心时态：一般现在时（描述四季常态天气与活动）；
3. 人称：第一人称I为主；
（4）绑定本单元语法考点
① 形容词描述天气（windy, snowy, sunny等）；
② There be句型；
③ like doing / love to do 季节活动；
④ 介词 in + 季节（in spring）；
⑤ 频度副词 often/always 描述日常活动。
二、分层写作设计思路
基础层（学困生）三段简单模板
第一段：一年有四个季节，分别是春夏秋冬；
第二段：简单描写每个季节的天气；
第三段：点明自己最喜欢的季节，一句简单理由。
只使用基础简单句，保证要点齐全，无复杂句式。
标准层（中等生）
1. 分段清晰：总起句→四季简单对比→重点详写最喜欢的季节；
2. 增加细节：季节景色（花开、落叶、下雪）+ 对应户外活动；
3. 用上单元天气形容词，搭配衔接词 First, Next, Then, Finally。
提升层（优等生）
1. 增加感官描写（视觉、感受），使用高级形容词；
2. 对比不同季节优缺点；
3. 结尾升华：四季各有美景，我喜欢感受不同自然风景。
教学重难点
重点：正确使用天气形容词、in+季节介词搭配，条理描写季节活动；
难点：段落衔接自然，完整多角度说明喜爱某一季节的理由。
三、单元四大常考书面表达题型
题型1 核心必考：My Favourite Season（最高频）
写作要点：
1. 你最喜欢的季节是什么；
2. 这个季节的天气、景色；
3. 你常做的户外活动；
4. 你喜欢它的原因。
题型2 The Four Seasons（四季完整介绍）
要求完整描写春夏秋冬四季的天气、景色与特色活动，简单表达对四季的看法。
题型3 书信应用文
假定你的外国笔友想了解中国四季，请写一封邮件介绍我国一年四季，以及你最爱哪个季节。
题型4 小短文 My favourite season in my city
结合本地气候，描写家乡四季，侧重地域季节特色。
四、单元写作必备素材
（1）天气&季节词汇
spring春天；summer夏天；autumn/fall秋天；winter冬天
sunny晴朗的；windy多风的；rainy多雨的；snowy下雪的；cool凉爽的；warm温暖的；hot炎热的；cold寒冷的
（2）季节活动短语
fly kites 放风筝；go swimming 游泳；pick apples 摘苹果；make snowmen 堆雪人
take a trip 短途旅行；have a picnic 野餐；walk in the park 公园散步
（3）万能句型
1. There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn and winter.
2. In spring, the weather is warm and windy. Trees turn green and flowers come out.
3. I like spring best because I can fly kites with my friends.
4. It is hot in summer, so I often go swimming.
5. Autumn is cool. We can pick fruit and enjoy the beautiful leaves.
6. Winter is cold and snowy. Making snowmen is my favourite activity.
7. Every season has its beauty. I love all the seasons.
五、书面表达专练
1．假如你是李华，请以“My Favourite Season”为题写一篇演讲稿，参加《英语周报》举办的演讲比赛。
提示：1.你最喜欢的季节；
2.该季节的天气状况、景色变化，人们的活动；
3.你喜欢参与的活动。
要求：1.必须包含所有提示要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称等信息；
3.不少于70词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favourite Season
I am Li Hua. I am happy to give a speech about my favourite season here today. My favourite season is____________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
2．假如你所在的英语俱乐部下周要举行演讲活动，主题是“我最喜欢的季节”。请你根据下面的提示问题，用英语写一篇短文为这次活动做准备。
提示问题：
1. What’s your favourite season
2. What’s the temperature and what’s the weather like in this season in your hometown
3. What things can you do in this season
要求：
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确；
2. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 词数： 不少于70 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hello, everybody. Of all the seasons, I like ______________ best. __________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假设你是李辉，你的澳大利亚好友Alex给你发来一封电子邮件，请你仔细阅读这封邮件并写一封回信，内容包括：
1.介绍四季的特点以及人们的活动；2.推荐并邀请。
Dear Li Hui, How is everything I’m planning a trip to China next year. I’m so excited! But I don’t know what the weather is like in different seasons. Could you tell me about the four seasons in your city Which season do you think is the best for visiting Yours, Alex
要求：
1.词数70左右，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear Alex,
Thanks for your email. I am happy to talk about the seasons in my city. _____________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
4．近日，你校英语报开展主题为“Different Seasons, Different Lives”的征文活动，请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文，分享你和家人在不同季节一起常做的活动及感受，并向报社投稿。
注意事项：
1. 内容须涵盖所有提示信息，可适当发挥：
2. 语言规范，行文连贯，表达准确：
3. 词数：70 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Different Seasons, Different Lives
Every season gives special moments to my family and me.________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．每个季节都有其独特的美，在不同的季节中我们感受着不同的风景，体验着不同的乐趣。相信你所在的城市冬天一定很美吧！假设你是李辉，请你以“Winter in my hometown”为题，写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍你所在城市的冬天。
要点：
1. 城市冬天的天气和景色；
2. 人们通常在冬天做什么；
3. 你的感受。
注意：
(1) 词数：70词左右，标题已为你写好，不计入总词数；
(2) 内容应包括所有的提示信息，可适当发挥；
(3) 语句通顺、意思连贯、语法正确；
(4) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Winter in my hometown
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．假设你是李明，你的好朋友王刚想了解你家乡四季的情况，请你给王刚写一封电子邮件，告诉他你家乡的细节。
写作提示：
1. 介绍家乡四季美景（春季五彩缤纷；夏季炎热；秋季凉爽；冬季经常下雪）。
2. 介绍四季人们不同的活动（春季踏青；夏季游泳；秋季可以收集树叶；冬季可以滑雪、滑冰）。
3. 邀请好朋友来家乡游玩。
写作要求：
1. 文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数70左右（文中已给出内容不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：everywhere 到处；colorful 五彩缤纷的；leaves 树叶（复数）；skate 滑冰
Dear Wang Gang,
How are things going I hope you are well. Let me tell you about my hometown.______________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．四季的轮回变化给我们的生活增添了一抹绚丽的色彩！不同的季节、不同的天气、不同的景色，是否使你的课外活动也更加丰富呢？请根据以下提示以“My favourite season”为题，用英语介绍一下你最喜欢的季节。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
2. 词数：70词左右；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
My favourite season
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8．一年之计在于春，春天是万物复苏的季节，是四季的开端。校报英语栏目正在开展以“I love spring”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请根据下表提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍春天的特点以及你的感受。
要求：
1．短文应包括下表提示中所有的写作要点；
2．条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3．文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
4．词数：70左右，文章标题和开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
I love spring
Features (特征) Feelings
◆begin to grow ◆enjoy flying kites
◆warm, and sometimes windy ◆a good time to study
◆… ◆…
I love spring
Different people like different seasons because each season has its own features. I love spring best.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom正在学习中文，他在邮件中分享了自己最喜欢的季节是秋天，并询问你：“在你最喜欢的季节里，会和朋友做哪些活动？”请你根据他的问题回复一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 你最喜欢的季节及选择它的理由(如天气，景色等)；
2. 在这个季节里，你和朋友常做的活动；
3. 这些活动带给你的感受与体会。
要求：
1）词数不少于70词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2）需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3）语言通顺，条理清晰，不得透露真实学校、姓名等信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know autumn is your favorite season. As for me, _____________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I really enjoy the time with friends in this season. What about your autumn activities with friends
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
全运会期间，学校校报想向来自全国的运动员们及观众们介绍广州的四季，现在向全校同学征集稿件，请你以“My Favourite Season in Guangzhou”为题，介绍一个自己喜欢的广州的季节，给校报投稿。内容要点如下：
要求：
1. 词数70左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，但要注意语言通顺、流畅、准确；
3. 标题和开头要抄到答题卡上。
My Favourite Season in Guangzhou
Guangzhou is a beautiful city.__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
1．例文：
My Favourite Season
I am Li Hua. I am happy to give a speech about my favourite season here today. My favourite season is spring, and let me tell you the reasons.
I think spring is the best season because it is a beautiful season. There are lots of beautiful flowers in spring, and the weather is not too hot or too cold. People start to do sports outside after a long winter, and some children fly kites. I also like flying kites because I think it is interesting and fun. In spring, I also go to the park to go for a walk. There are many cute and lively animals in the park in spring time.
That’s all. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我最喜欢的季节，这个季节的情况介绍，我在这个季节所做的事情”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述喜欢的季节是什么，喜欢的原因，以及介绍春季人们的活动情况等；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①lots of许多
②go for a walk散步
[高分句型]
①I think spring is the best season because it is a beautiful season.（省略that的宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句）
②There are lots of beautiful flowers in spring, and the weather is not too hot or too cold.（there be句型，and连接的并列句）
2．例文：
Hello, everybody. Of all the seasons, I like winter best.
The temperature in winter in my hometown is usually between -10 and -5 degrees. It’s cold and it snows from time to time. When it snows, I can make snowmen with my family. I love to enjoy the beautiful snow scenes as well.
I often go to a park to take lots of photos on snowy days. Winter is also a good time to go skating. At weekends, I often go skating with my friends. Although it is cold in winter, I can always have lots of interesting things to do and have a good time.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：本文的时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据所给提示问题进行写作，注意要点衔接自然顺畅，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己最爱的季节；
第二步，介绍这个季节的温度及能做的事；
第三步，结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①between...and...在……和……之间
②from...to... 从……到……
③take lots of photos拍很多照片
④have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①When it snows, I can make snowmen with my family. （When引导的时间状语从句）
② Although it is cold in winter, I can always have lots of interesting things to do and have a good time. （Although引导的让步状语从句）
3．例文：
Dear Alex,
Thanks for your email. I am happy to talk about the seasons in my city.
There are four seasons in my city. Spring is warm and beautiful. People often go for a picnic to enjoy the flowers. Summer is hot, so swimming in the pool is very popular. Autumn is cool and comfortable. It is a good time to climb mountains and pick fruits. Winter is cold and sometimes it snows. We can make snowmen and have snowball fights.
I think autumn is the best season for visiting because the weather is neither too hot nor too cold. I hope you can come to my city this autumn. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体和时态：应用文（书信），以一般现在时为主。
明确要点：1.介绍所在城市四季的特点及人们的活动；2.推荐最佳旅游季节并发出邀请。 确定人称：第一人称（I, my）和第二人称（you）。
注意事项：词数70左右，开头结尾已给出，不得出现真实信息。
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
第一段（承接已给开头）：承接已给开头“Thanks for your email. I am happy to talk about the seasons in my city.”，自然过渡到对四季的介绍。
第二段（四季特点+活动）：分述春夏秋冬四个季节的天气特点和人们的活动。
第三段（推荐+邀请+结尾）：推荐最佳旅游季节，发出邀请，表达期待回复。
要点一：四季特点与活动
Spring: warm and beautiful/go for a picnic/enjoy the flowers/fly kites/take a walk in the park等
Summer: hot/go swimming/eat ice-cream/stay in air-conditioned rooms/go to the beach等
Autumn: cool and comfortable/climb mountains/pick fruits/enjoy the colorful leaves/ go hiking等
Winter: cold/make snowmen/have snowball fights/wear warm coats/stay at home等
要点二：推荐与邀请
I think autumn is the best season for visiting./The weather is neither too hot nor too cold./You can enjoy the beautiful views./I hope you can come to my city./I’m looking forward to your reply./Welcome to my hometown.等
4．例文：
Different Seasons, Different Lives Every season gives special moments to my family and me.
In spring, the weather turns warm and flowers bloom. We often fly kites and go hiking. Summer is my favorite season. We love to eat ice cream and go swimming. When autumn comes, leaves fall. We usually walk in the park and enjoy the golden scenery. In winter, we eat hot pot together.
These seasonal activities let us enjoy every moment of life.
【详解】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：不同季节里“我”和家人的专属活动、每个季节的特点、活动带来的感受
确定人称：第一人称（I/my/we）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：点明每个季节都能给“我”和家人带来特别的时刻
主体段：按春夏秋冬的顺序，描述每个季节的特点及“我”和家人的专属活动（对应原文春、夏、秋、冬的英文表述及活动）
结尾段：总结季节性活动带来的意义，升华主题
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：不同季节的特点与专属活动季节选择：fly kites and go hiking/eat ice cream and go swimming/walk in the park and enjoy the golden scenery/eat hot pot together...
要点二：活动的感受：love to/enjoy/happy...
5．例文：
Winter in my hometown
Winter in my hometown is cold and snowy. Everything is covered with white snow, making the scenery very beautiful. Trees and houses look like they are wearing white hats.
People here enjoy various winter activities, such as ice skating on the frozen lake or skiing in the nearby mountains. Families gather indoors to share warm meals and stories around the table.
I find the winter in my hometown to be enchanting. It is a time for reflection and togetherness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示要点介绍家乡的冬天，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍家乡冬天的天气和景色；
第二步，介绍人们在冬天的活动；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be covered with被……覆盖着
②look like看起来像
③such as例如
[高分句型]
Trees and houses look like they are wearing white hats. (宾语从句)
6．例文：
Dear Wang Gang,
How are things going I hope you are well. Let me tell you about my hometown.
I live in a small town in the north of China. In spring, there are colourful flowers everywhere. We often go out to enjoy them. Summer is hot. People like to swim in the river. In autumn, the weather is cool. The leaves turn red and yellow, we often go to the forest and collect beautiful leaves. In winter, it snows a lot. I like skiing and skating. The life in my hometown is wonderful.
I hope you can come for a visit. You will have fun here.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：题目要求根据提示介绍自己的家乡，包含家乡四季美景、对应活动，并向对方发出邀请。写作时注意适当增加细节，不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候并引出话题；
第二步，根据所给要点，按照季节顺序描述景色与活动，覆盖所有提示点；
第三步，向对方发出邀请。
[亮点词汇]
① go out 出去
② a lot 很多
③ come for a visit 来参观
[高分句型]
① In spring, there are colourful flowers everywhere.（用there be句型表示某地有某物）
② We often go out to enjoy them.（动词不定式作目的状语）
7．例文：
My favourite season
My favourite season is spring.
The weather in spring is warm and sunny. Flowers bloom everywhere, turning the world into a colorful garden.
I often fly kites with friends in the park. Sometimes, I go on a picnic with my family and enjoy food while seeing the scenery.
Spring brings hope and makes me energetic and happy. That’s why I love it!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，介绍最喜欢的季节；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，包括最喜欢的季节、喜欢的原因、天气情况以及能进行的活动，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接点明最喜欢的季节是春天；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“天气、景色以及能进行的活动”等方面重点介绍喜欢春天的原因；
第三步，书写结语。表达春天带来的感受以及喜欢春天的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①everywhere 到处
②go on a picnic 去野餐
③energetic 精力充沛的
[高分句型]
①Flowers bloom everywhere, turning the world into a colorful garden.（现在分词作结果状语）
8．例文：
I love spring
Different people like different seasons because each season has its own features. I love spring best. In spring, plants begin to grow and flowers are blooming, making the world colorful. The weather is warm but sometimes windy. I really enjoy flying kites with friends in the park. Spring is not only a good time to study but also makes me feel hopeful. The fresh air makes me feel energetic.
I love spring!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：一般现在时。
③提示：需包含春天的特征及个人感受。需确保不遗漏任何提示信息，并可适当发挥以丰富内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步：用标题句引入主题，承接已给开头句。直接点明对春天的喜爱。
第二步：具体阐述春天的特征，如植物生长、花开、天气温暖且有时有风等，同时结合个人感受，如喜欢和朋友在公园放风筝，春天是学习的好时机，以及春天带来的希望感。
第三步：书写结语，总结全文，再次表达对春天的热爱之情。
[亮点词汇]
①begin to grow开始生长
②make the world colorful让世界变得丰富多彩
③feel hopeful感到充满希望
[高分句型]
Spring is not only a good time to study but also makes me feel hopeful. (not only...but also...并列结构)
9．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to know autumn is your favorite season. As for me, spring is my favorite season because the weather is warm and comfortable. The trees turn green and flowers bloom everywhere, making the world colorful.
In this season, I often fly kites with my friends in the park. We also like to have picnics on sunny weekends. Sometimes we play badminton or take walks near the lake.
These activities make me feel happy and relaxed. I enjoy the fresh air and the beauty of nature. Spending time with friends helps me forget my stress and become more energetic.
I really enjoy the time with friends in this season. What about your autumn activities with friends
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示信息介绍自己最喜欢的季节，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你最喜欢的季节及选择它的理由；
第二步，介绍在这个季节里，你和朋友常做的活动；
第三步，介绍这些活动带给你的感受与体会。
[亮点词汇]
①have picnics野餐
②take walks散步
[高分句型]
①As for me, spring is my favorite season because the weather is warm and comfortable. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②The trees turn green and flowers bloom everywhere, making the world colorful. (现在分词作状语)
10．例文：
My Favourite Season in Guangzhou
Guangzhou is a beautiful city. My favourite season here is winter.
Unlike other cities, Guangzhou’s winter weather is always warm—never too cold. You can still see green plants everywhere, and some birds even stay here all year.
Spring Festival often falls in winter. We have big family dinners and visit relatives, which makes me feel warm and happy. During this season, I also like taking walks in the park with friends. It’s really the nicest time in Guangzhou!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己在广州最喜欢的季节——冬天；
第二步，介绍该季节的天气、动植物状态、对应的节日、常做的活动，融入个人感受等；
第三步，书写结语，概括该季节的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①green plants绿植
②fall in适逢，降临
③take walks散步
[高分句型]
①We have big family dinners and visit relatives, which makes me feel warm and happy.（which引导定语从句）

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