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写作规范练(四)
(建议用时：45分钟　总分：40分)
Ⅰ．应用文写作(满分15分)
(2026·浙江强基联盟模拟)
假定你是李华，外教老师Jenny准备在班里举办一次辩论赛，她给出了“Mobile phones in class？”和“Group or individual study？”两个题目供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你的选择；
2．说明理由。
注意：1．写作词数应为80个左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jenny，
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Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅱ．读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2026·长沙市一中模拟)
I'd always been told to take care of my older brother，Brian，who was born weak and small．I'd often tie his shoes or prepare another glass of water for him．My mom saw my larger size and strong body as a sign that I was to be a kind of guardian angel (守护天使) for Brian．However，that was not the case．
One day our school sponsored a pumpkin-carving contest．First prize was $100，and I knew just how I would spend it．There was a brand-new game I was dying to own．So I decided the first place bonus definitely had to land in my pocket．
When I had to carve the perfect pumpkin I'd picked out，it dawned on me that with my big clumsy fingers I'd surely screw it up (搞砸)．I thought of Brian's smaller，delicate hands and knew he was the man for the job．I immediately begged Brian．Unexpectedly，he asked for a cut．That was fifty-fifty．Quickly doing the math in my head，I figured out even if I split (分摊) the first prize，I'd still have enough cash for the game．So I gave in to Brian's demands．With skillful hands Brian carved the perfect face，and now we had the best pumpkin ever．
Then the unexpected happened：we came in second．Unfortunately，second prize was only $50，and I needed every penny of that to buy the game．The day of the awards ceremony，the principal handed over the money to me because Brian was home，sick with a cold．
If he really wanted to win，he would have been here today，I thought to myself，justifying stealing the cash from under poor Brian's runny nose．With hardly a thought，I ran to the store and bought my dream game．That night when Brian asked if we had won，I denied it，afraid to look into his eyes．
The whole thing was never mentioned again until the day when Brian was packing for college．I played my usual role in helping him pack when I came across an old album filled with photos he had taken as the school photographer．
注意：1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式作答。
I was enjoying the photos when one caught my eye． ______________________
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“You actually knew and didn't say anything？” I was shocked． ___________
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_____________________________________________________________________写作规范练(四)
Ⅰ．【参考范文1】
Dear Jenny，
I'd like to recommend “Mobile phones in class？” as our debate topic．It's a practical and engaging issue that affects all of us directly．
This topic sparks strong opinions．Some argue phones aid learning through online searches and apps，while others believe they distract students．A debate would help us weigh these views fairly．Plus，it encourages critical thinking about technology's role in education．
I hope this suggestion is helpful．It's a topic everyone can relate to，ensuring lively discussions．Looking forward to your feedback!
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文2】
Dear Jenny，
I'd like to suggest “Group or individual study？” as our debate topic．This is a meaningful choice that every student encounters in their learning process．
Group study encourages collaboration and diverse perspectives，while individual study allows for personalized focus．Some students thrive in team discussions，whereas others prefer quietude and independence．Exploring both approaches would help us understand their respective strengths in different learning situations．
I believe this topic will lead to a practical and insightful discussion．It could even help classmates improve their study habits．Hope you find this suggestion useful!
Yours，
Li Hua
Ⅱ．【参考范文】
I was enjoying the photos when one caught my eye．It was a picture of the pumpkin we had carved together．Underneath，Brian had written，“My first real win with my brother．Even if we didn't get first，it was a victory because we worked as a team．” Seeing those words，a wave of guilt washed over me．I remembered how I had selfishly taken all the money and lied to him．I realized how much I had let him down．I turned to Brian，ready to confess everything．
“You actually knew and didn't say anything？” I was shocked．Brian just smiled gently and said，“I always knew．But I also knew that you needed that game more than the money at that time．And I was proud of our teamwork，not the prize．I hoped one day you'd understand the real meaning of winning together．” His words made me feel even more ashamed．I apologized sincerely，vowing to make it up to him．From then on，I truly understood my role as his guardian angel and the importance of true brotherhood．

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