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湘少版五年级上英语 Unit 2 I'd like a sandwich
写作训练：写一写午餐想吃什么
主题句型：What would you like I'd like ...
一、写作目标
· 能用 What would you like 询问别人想吃什么或想喝什么。
· 能用 I'd like ... 表达自己想要的食物和饮料。
· 能用 for breakfast/lunch/dinner 写清楚用餐场景。
· 能补充 healthy, delicious, not very hungry 等词，让表达更具体。
二、课文仿写思路
原文指路
课文先问：What would you like, Lingling
回答时用：I'd like beef noodles. / I'd like a sandwich.
点餐时还可以用：Can I help you Here you are. How much is it
阅读部分把人物、食物和饮料放在午餐场景里：Miss Li and the children would like some food and drinks for lunch.
核心词汇
sandwich 三明治 hamburger 汉堡包 beef 牛肉 pork 猪肉
rice 米饭 fish 鱼肉 vegetables 蔬菜 chicken noodles 鸡肉面
water 水 tea 茶 juice 果汁 coffee 咖啡
breakfast 早餐 lunch 午餐 dinner 晚餐
healthy 健康的 delicious 美味的 hungry 饥饿的
可套用句型
What would you like for lunch
I'd like a sandwich, please.
I'd like some rice, fish and vegetables.
I'd like a glass of water too.
The noodles are delicious.
Have a healthy diet. Eat well and feel well.
易错点提示
a sandwich 和 a hamburger 前面要加 a，因为它们是单个可数名词。
some water, some tea, some juice 表示一些饮料，不写 a water。
I'd like 是 I would like 的缩写，后面直接接想要的食物或饮料。
写多种食物时，最后两个词之间可以用 and，如 rice, fish and vegetables。
三、连词成句
把下面的词语连成正确的英文句子，注意大小写和标点。
1. would / what / like / you /
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2. I'd / a / like / sandwich / .
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3. some / I'd / water / like / too / .
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4. would / you / for / what / lunch / like /
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5. healthy / they're / .
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6. it / how / is / much /
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四、写作练习
练习 1 基础写作：My Lunch
写作题目：请写 4-5 句话，说说你午餐想吃什么、喝什么。
写作提示：可用 I'd like... for lunch. I'd like... too.
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练习 2 提升写作：At a Restaurant
写作题目：请写一段点餐小对话，写清服务员询问、你点餐、价格和感谢。
写作提示：可用 Can I help you I'd like..., please. How much is it Here you are.
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练习 3 挑战写作：A Healthy Lunch
写作题目：请写一段话介绍一份健康午餐，并说明你为什么这样选择。
写作提示：可写食物、饮料、味道和健康理由，句式要有变化。
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五、参考范文与讲解
参考范文 1 My Lunch
It is twelve o'clock. I'd like some rice, fish and vegetables for lunch. I'd like a glass of water too. The food is healthy. I like my lunch.
范文讲解
这篇范文先用 It is twelve o'clock. 写出午餐时间。
中间用 I'd like... 写食物和饮料，正好对应本单元核心句型。
最后补充 healthy 和 I like my lunch，让内容有简单评价。
参考范文 2 At a Restaurant
Waitress: Can I help you Tom: I'd like a hamburger and some orange juice, please. Waitress: Here you are. Tom: Thank you. How much is it Waitress: It's fifteen yuan. Tom: OK. Here is the money.
范文讲解
这篇范文用对话形式完成点餐场景，和课文 A 部分很接近。
点餐句使用 I'd like a hamburger and some orange juice, please.，既有食物也有饮料。
后面加入 How much is it 和价格，场景更完整。
参考范文 3 A Healthy Lunch
I want a healthy lunch today. I'd like some fish, beef and vegetables. They are healthy and delicious. I'd like some rice too, because it can give me energy. For drinks, I'd like a glass of water. I don't want a cola for lunch. Have a healthy diet. Eat well and feel well.
范文讲解
挑战范文先点明 healthy lunch，再分别写食物和饮料。
文中用了 because 说明选择 rice 的原因，句式比基础写作更丰富。
最后引用课文句 Have a healthy diet. Eat well and feel well.，结尾有主题提升。
六、参考答案
1. What would you like
2. I'd like a sandwich.
3. I'd like some water too.
4. What would you like for lunch
5. They're healthy.
6. How much is it
写作练习参考要点：基础篇写清午餐食物和饮料；提升篇要有完整点餐对话；挑战篇要说明 healthy lunch 的选择和原因。
七、写作小结
写饮食点餐类作文时，可以按“时间或场景-想要的食物-想要的饮料-味道或健康理由”的顺序写。句型上先用 What would you like 提问，再用 I'd like... 回答。
完成后请检查：a 和 some 有没有用对？食物和饮料是否写全？句尾标点是否正确？
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