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湘少版五年级上英语 Unit 3 I can email my friends with the computer
写作训练：写一写我的电脑和它的用途
主题句型：I can ... with the computer. We can't use it for too long.
一、写作目标
· 能用 I can... with the computer 写电脑的用途。
· 能用 I can also... 扩展第二、第三个功能。
· 能在邮件中写 Dear..., Regards, 等基本格式。
· 能提醒自己合理使用电脑：We can't use the computer for too long.
二、课文仿写思路
原文指路
课文先写 Mingming 得到电脑：He can do a lot of things with the computer.
核心活动包括 email my friends, send greetings, search for information, take online lessons。
读写部分用邮件格式介绍电脑：Dear..., How are you I'm so excited!
结尾提醒：Don't play computer games too often. It's not good for your eyes.
核心词汇
computer 电脑 useful 有用的 excited 兴奋的
email my friends 给朋友发邮件 send greetings 发送问候
search for information 搜索信息 take online lessons 上在线课程
chat with my friends 和朋友聊天 know more about the world 更多地了解世界
play computer games 玩电脑游戏 be bad for our eyes 对眼睛有害
可套用句型
I have a new computer.
It is very useful.
I can email my friends with the computer.
I can also search for information and take online lessons.
But we can't use the computer for too long.
Please write back soon.
易错点提示
with the computer 表示“用电脑”，不要漏掉 with。
I can 后面接动词原形，如 email, send, search, take。
写邮件时 Dear 后面写收信人，结尾可用 Regards。
写电脑优点后最好补一句提醒，文章更完整。
三、连词成句
把下面的词语连成正确的英文句子，注意大小写和标点。
1. can / I / my / email / friends / .
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2. can / search / I / information / for / .
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3. take / can / online / lessons / I / .
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4. is / very / it / useful / .
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5. can't / use / for / we / it / too long / .
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6. write / please / back / soon / .
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四、写作练习
练习 1 基础写作：My Computer
写作题目：请写 4-5 句话介绍你的电脑能做什么。
写作提示：可用 I have... It is... I can... I can also...
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练习 2 提升写作：A Useful Computer
写作题目：请写一段话介绍电脑的 3 个用途，并提醒大家合理使用。
写作提示：可写 email friends, search for information, take online lessons, not use it for too long。
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练习 3 挑战写作：An Email About My Computer
写作题目：请给朋友写一封短邮件，介绍你的新电脑和使用建议。
写作提示：注意邮件格式：Dear..., 正文, Please write back soon, Regards。
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五、参考范文与讲解
参考范文 1 My Computer
I have a new computer. It is very useful. I can email my friends with the computer. I can also search for information. I like my computer very much.
范文讲解
这篇范文先写 I have a new computer，直接点明主题。
中间用 I can... 和 I can also... 写两个功能，句式清楚。
结尾表达喜欢电脑，适合基础仿写。
参考范文 2 A Useful Computer
My computer can help me a lot. I can email my friends and send greetings with it. I can search for information and know more about the world. I can take online lessons too. But I can't use the computer for too long. It is bad for my eyes.
范文讲解
开头用 can help me a lot 总写电脑有用。
中间连续写三个用途，内容来自课文词组，容易模仿。
最后用 But 转折，提醒不能用太久，文章更有完整性。
参考范文 3 An Email About My Computer
Dear Peter, How are you I'm so excited! I have a new computer. It's very useful. I can email my friends with it. I can also search for information and take online lessons. Sometimes I chat with my friends. But we can't use the computer for too long, because it is bad for our eyes. What do you think of computers Please write back soon. Regards, Mingming
范文讲解
挑战范文保留了课文邮件格式，包括 Dear, Please write back soon 和 Regards。
正文先写电脑有用，再写多个用途，层次比较完整。
because 说明不能长时间用电脑的原因，句式比简单罗列更丰富。
六、参考答案
1. I can email my friends.
2. I can search for information.
3. I can take online lessons.
4. It is very useful.
5. We can't use it for too long.
6. Please write back soon.
写作练习参考要点：基础篇写清电脑和用途；提升篇至少写 3 个用途并加提醒；挑战篇要有邮件格式、电脑用途和合理使用建议。
七、写作小结
写电脑用途类作文时，可以按“我有一台电脑-它很有用-我能做什么-使用提醒”的顺序写。
完成后请检查：句子顺序是否正确？核心句型是否用上？内容是否有开头、细节和结尾？
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