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湘少版五年级上英语 Unit 5 May I have a pet
写作训练：写一写我想养的宠物 / 我的宠物
主题句型：May I have ... I have/want ... It can ...
一、写作目标
· 能用 May I have... 礼貌表达想养某种宠物。
· 能用 Yes, you can. / No, you can't. 写请求和回答。
· 能用 It is... / It has... / It can... 描述宠物的样子和本领。
· 能用 feed, hold, touch, take good care of 等词写怎样照顾宠物。
二、课文仿写思路
原文指路
Step 1 开头先写想法或人物: Dongdong wants a pet. / Xiaoxiao loves animals.
Step 2 用请求句提出愿望: May I have a pet / May I have a rabbit
Step 3 写宠物特点和本领: It's lovely. / The parrot can talk.
Step 4 写照顾方式或规则: Can you take good care of it / Have some carrots.
Step 5 结尾写感受: I like it very much. / We are very happy.
核心词汇
pet 宠物 rabbit 兔子 goldfish 金鱼 parrot 鹦鹉 guide dog 导盲犬
lovely 可爱的 cute 可爱的 beautiful 漂亮的 clever 聪明的 helpful 有帮助的
hold 抱着 feed 喂养 touch 触摸 talk 说话 repeat 重复
take good care of 好好照顾 pet shop 宠物店 new home 新家
重点句型精讲
下面这些句型是本单元写作的骨架。先会替换，再会加细节，短文就容易写完整。
重点句型 1: May I have ...
原句: May I have a pet
怎么用: 想向爸爸妈妈或老师提出请求时，用这个句型。写宠物主题时，它可以放在文章开头或对话开头。
可替换内容: a pet -> a rabbit / a goldfish / a parrot / a cute dog
仿写例句: May I have a rabbit / May I have a goldfish / May I have a small cat
易错提醒: May I 后面接动词原形 have，不写 May I has；单个可数名词前要加 a。
重点句型 2: Can you take good care of it
原句: Can you take good care of it
怎么用: 当家长担心孩子能不能养好宠物时，可以用这个句型。写短文时也可以改成 I can take good care of it.
可替换内容: you -> I / we; it -> him / her / my rabbit / my parrot
仿写例句: I can take good care of it. / We can take good care of the rabbit. / Can you take good care of him
易错提醒: care 前面有 good，短语是 take good care of；it 指动物时前文要先出现这个宠物。
重点句型 3: It is ... / It has ...
原句: It's lovely.
怎么用: 描述宠物样子时，先用 It is... 写整体评价，再用 It has... 写具体外貌。
可替换内容: lovely -> cute / beautiful / small / clever; has -> big eyes / short legs / a pink nose
仿写例句: It is cute. / It has big eyes. / It has a pink nose and short legs.
易错提醒: It is 后面接形容词；It has 后面接身体部位。不要写 It is big eyes。
重点句型 4: It can ...
原句: The parrot can talk.
怎么用: 写宠物会做什么时，用 It can...。这能让宠物介绍不只停留在外貌上。
可替换内容: talk -> run / jump / swim / repeat my words / help people
仿写例句: It can talk. / It can swim. / It can help blind people.
易错提醒: can 后面接动词原形，不加 s；The parrot can talks 是错的。
重点句型 5: I can ... with my pet.
原句: What can you do with the pet
怎么用: 写你和宠物一起做什么时，用 I can... with my pet，让文章更像真实生活。
可替换内容: play -> play / walk / run; my pet -> my dog / my cat / my rabbit
仿写例句: I can play with my cat. / I can feed my rabbit. / I can walk with my dog.
易错提醒: with 表示“和……一起”，play with my cat 不要漏掉 with。
句型仿写
根据提示完成句子。先照着句型替换词语，再试着加一点自己的想法。
1. May I have ______
提示: 想养一只兔子: a rabbit
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2. I can take good care of ______.
提示: 我能好好照顾它: it
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3. It is ______.
提示: 这只宠物很可爱: lovely / cute
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4. It has ______.
提示: 它有大眼睛和短腿: big eyes and short legs
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5. It can ______.
提示: 它会说话/游泳/跑: talk / swim / run
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6. I can ______ with my pet.
提示: 我可以和宠物一起玩: play
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易错点提示
May I... 是礼貌请求，回答常用 Yes, you can. 或 No, you can't.
rabbit, goldfish, parrot 是单个可数名词，前面常用 a。
It is cute. 写整体特点；It has big eyes. 写身体部位；It can talk. 写本领。
宠物如果是动物，前文不清楚性别时用 it 比较稳妥；写有名字的宠物也可以用 he 或 she。
三、连词成句
把下面的词语连成正确的英文句子，注意大小写和标点。
1. have / may / I / pet / a /
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2. have / may / I / rabbit / a /
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3. good / care / take / can / you / of / it /
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4. lovely / is / it / .
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5. can / the / talk / parrot / .
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6. very / I / much / like / it / .
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四、写作练习
练习 1 基础写作：I Want a Pet
写作题目：请写 4-5 句话，说说你想养什么宠物，并简单描述它。
写作提示：可用 May I have... I want... It is... It has...
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练习 2 提升写作：My Pet
写作题目：请写一段话介绍你的宠物或你想养的宠物，写出外貌、本领和你能做什么。
写作提示：可写 name, look like, can do, feed, hold, play with。
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练习 3 挑战写作：A Talk About a Pet
写作题目：请仿照课文，写一段你和家人关于养宠物的对话或小故事。
写作提示：可按“提出请求-家人提问-你承诺照顾-描述宠物-结尾感受”的顺序写。
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五、参考范文与讲解
参考范文 1 I Want a Pet
May I have a pet, Mum I want a rabbit. It is small and lovely. It has long ears and red eyes. I can feed it every day. I like rabbits very much.
范文讲解
开头直接用 May I have a pet, Mum ，把本单元的请求句放在第一句，主题非常明确。
文章用了 I want a rabbit. 说明想要的宠物，再用 It is... 和 It has... 写整体特点和外貌细节。
I can feed it every day. 写出了照顾宠物的动作，不只是说喜欢。
可以直接仿写的句子是 It is small and lovely. 换成 It is cute and clever. 就能写别的宠物。
参考范文 2 My Pet
I have a cat. Her name is Mimi. She is cute. She has big blue eyes, a pink nose and short legs. She can run and jump. I feed her every morning. I can play with her after school. She is my good friend, and I love her very much.
范文讲解
开头 I have a cat. Her name is Mimi. 先交代宠物和名字，读者马上知道写的是谁。
外貌部分用了 She is... 和 She has...，先写整体 cute，再写 big blue eyes, a pink nose and short legs。
She can run and jump. 写本领；I feed her... 和 I can play with her... 写你和宠物的日常。
结尾 She is my good friend 把宠物和情感联系起来，比只写 I love her 更具体。
参考范文 3 A Talk About a Pet
Dongdong: Mum, may I have a pet Mum: What pet do you want Dongdong: May I have a goldfish It is beautiful and quiet. Mum: Can you take good care of it Dongdong: Yes, I can. I can feed it every day. I can also clean its bowl. Mum: OK. Dongdong: Thank you, Mum. I will love it very much.
范文讲解
挑战范文采用对话形式，第一句 May I have a pet 直接模仿课文开头。
Mum 的问题 What pet do you want 让对话向下发展，不是简单一问一答。
Dongdong 用 It is beautiful and quiet. 描述宠物特点，又用 I can feed it... 和 I can also clean its bowl. 承诺照顾。
I can also... 让句式有变化；结尾 Thank you 和 I will love it very much 让对话有礼貌、有感情。
六、参考答案
句型仿写参考答案
1. May I have a rabbit
2. I can take good care of it.
3. It is lovely. / It is cute.
4. It has big eyes and short legs.
5. It can talk. / It can swim. / It can run.
6. I can play with my pet.
连词成句参考答案
1. May I have a pet
2. May I have a rabbit
3. Can you take good care of it
4. It is lovely.
5. The parrot can talk.
6. I like it very much.
写作练习参考要点：基础篇要写清想养什么宠物和 1-2 个特点；提升篇要写外貌、本领和日常照顾；挑战篇要有请求、回应、承诺照顾和结尾感受。
七、写作小结
写宠物类作文时，可以按“我想养/我有一只宠物-它是什么-它长什么样-它会做什么-我怎样照顾它-我喜欢它”的顺序来写。核心句型是 May I have... , It is..., It has..., It can..., I can... with it.
完成后请检查：May I 后面是不是动词原形？It is / It has / It can 有没有用对？有没有写到照顾宠物的动作？
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