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Unit 5单元写作指导及练习题
一、单元写作总览（贴合新教材）
本单元主题为 A Path Toward a Better World（通往美好世界的道路），聚焦科技进步、创新发展、美好生活，单元写作核心话题为 How science and technology improve our life（科技如何改善我们的生活），是中考高频热点书面表达话题。
写作核心要求：结合日常实例，介绍科技在交通、通讯、学习、生活、医疗等方面的积极作用，可简单提及理性看待科技，语言流畅、结构清晰，熟练运用单元核心词汇与句型，词数80–120。
二、学习目标、重点、难点（简明课堂版）
学习目标
（1）掌握本单元科技类核心词汇与句型，能熟练运用于写作表达；
（2）掌握科技话题三段式写作结构，条理清晰介绍科技对生活的改变；
（3）能正确使用一般现在时、现在完成时，提升作文高级句式与逻辑质感。
三、单元核心写作素材（教材同步+中考必背）
（一）重点核心词汇
technology n. 科技
scientific adj. 科学的
improve v. 改善；提升
invent v. 发明
invention n. 发明物
develop v. 发展；研发
development n. 发展
convenient adj. 方便的
efficient adj. 高效的
communication n. 交流
online adj. 在线的
modern adj. 现代的
（二）高频万能短语
1. with the development of science and technology 随着科技的发展
2. improve people’s life 改善人们的生活
3. bring great convenience to life 给生活带来极大便利
4. online learning 线上学习
5. fast transportation 快捷的交通
6. communicate with others 与人交流
7. save time and energy 节省时间和精力
8. make our life easier and better 让我们的生活更轻松美好
（三）高分句型（开篇+主体+结尾 全套套用）
【开篇点题】
1. With the rapid development of science and technology, our life has become much better than before.
随着科技的飞速发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。
2. Science and technology plays an important role in our daily life.
科技在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要角色。
【主体举例·核心得分句】
1. Modern technology makes it easy for us to study and work anytime.
现代科技让我们随时学习、工作变得更加便捷。
2. New transportation like high-speed trains shortens our travel time greatly.
高铁等新型交通方式大大缩短了我们的出行时间。
3. We can communicate with people far away through smartphones and the Internet.
我们可以通过手机和互联网与远方的人沟通。
4. Medical technology improves our health and helps us live longer.
医疗科技改善健康，让我们更加长寿。
【结尾升华】
1. Technology brings us a better world, and we should make good use of it.
科技为我们带来美好世界，我们应好好利用它。
2. I believe science and technology will keep improving our life in the future.
我相信未来科技会持续改善我们的生活。
四、标准三段式写作框架（直接套用）
Paragraph 1 开篇（2句）：总起，点明科技飞速发展，极大改善了人们的生活。
Paragraph 2 主体（4–6句）：分点举例，从交通、通讯、学习、生活任意2–3个角度具体阐述，贴合生活实例。
Paragraph 3 结尾（2句）：总结好处，表达合理利用科技、期待未来发展的观点。
五、满分范文精讲（教材适配+中考标准）
写作题目
请以 How science and technology improve our life 为题写一篇短文，介绍科技如何改善我们的生活，可结合学习、出行、交流等方面，词数80–120。
满分范文
How science and technology improve our life
With the development of science and technology, our daily life has changed a lot. It brings us great convenience and makes our world much better.
Technology improves our life in many ways. Firstly, it changes our way of communication. We can talk with our friends and relatives far away easily through smartphones and the Internet. Secondly, fast transportation such as high-speed trains saves lots of time, making our travel easier. Thirdly, online learning provides us with more useful resources and helps us study better anytime.
In short, science and technology is a powerful helper in our life. We should make good use of it to create a brighter future.
范文亮点解析
1. 贴合教材：完全紧扣Unit5科技改变世界主题，词汇、句式均来自单元核心知识点；
2. 结构满分：经典三段式，总—分—总逻辑清晰，层次分明，符合中考评分标准；
3. 句式高级：运用with伴随结构、such as举例、非谓语动词，句式丰富不单一；
4. 内容真实：通讯、交通、学习三大生活化角度，贴合学生认知，不空洞。
六、高频易错扣分点
1. 主谓一致错误：technology 为不可数名词，谓语动词用单数（plays/improves）；
2. 时态混用：介绍现状多用一般现在时、现在完成时，不随意乱用过去时；
3. 固定搭配错误：improve our life（正确），不可说 change our life better；
4. 中式英语：避免 “technology is very good” 等简单口语化表达，替换为高级句型。
过关练习题
1．现在，我们都知道“科学技术是第一生产力”。身处飞速发展的时代，我们的生活无时无刻不在受着科技的影响。那么，在日常生活中，你认为哪项科技发明或产物对我们的生活影响最大？请以“________ Has/Have Influenced Our Life”为题，根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一篇文章。
写作要点：1. 是什么影响了我们的生活？
2. 它（们）是如何影响我们的生活的？
3. 你对这种影响有何感悟？
写作要求：1. 首先写出完善的文章题目；
2. 文章要语句通顺，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文意连贯；
3. 短文写100词左右；
4. 文中不得出现自己学校真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
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2．本届冬奥会是科技的盛会，各种高科技频繁亮相，无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机，让外国媒体大呼惊艳。不仅如此，科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假如你是九年级一班学生王华，学校正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍身边的科技及其优点。
要求：1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；
2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数：80~100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions.
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China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
3．生活在现代化社会的我们感受到了科技发展日新月异，假如你校正在举办以“the rapid development of technology”为主题的英语演讲比赛，你们班同学推荐你参加此次演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示和写作要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿。(挑战 challenge；电子的 electronic)
要点包括：
1. 科技是如何改变我们的学习和生活的 (如 robots, doubao, DeepSeek等)；
2. 为应对挑战，我们应培养哪些能力并简要阐述 (如培养创新思维、团队合作意识等)；为应对挑战，我们应如何合理使用电子产品 (至少列举两个措施)；(第二要点二选一)
3. 谈谈你对未来科技发展的信心和期待。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，照抄本卷语篇不得分。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
The Rapid Development of Technology
Hello everyone! Today I’m honored to be here and talk about the rapid development of technology. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
答案解析
1．现在，我们都知道“科学技术是第一生产力”。身处飞速发展的时代，我们的生活无时无刻不在受着科技的影响。那么，在日常生活中，你认为哪项科技发明或产物对我们的生活影响最大？请以“________ Has/Have Influenced Our Life”为题，根据下面的要点和要求，用英语写一篇文章。
写作要点：1. 是什么影响了我们的生活？
2. 它（们）是如何影响我们的生活的？
3. 你对这种影响有何感悟？
写作要求：1. 首先写出完善的文章题目；
2. 文章要语句通顺，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文意连贯；
3. 短文写100词左右；
4. 文中不得出现自己学校真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
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【答案】One possible version:
The Smartphone Has Influenced Our Lives
Nowadays, we live in a modern world which is influenced by high technology. Of all the technologies, I think the smartphone has influenced our lives most.
A year ago, I’m crazy about the smartphone at home. The games in it were so fantastic that they made me very excited. Because of playing these games on the smartphone for a long time, my eyesight was weaker and weaker, and I did very badly in all my subjects. Later, thanks to my head teacher and my parents, I realized the danger of playing games. Since then, I’ve got rid of the smartphone slowly. As a result, I had good scores in most of my subjects.
Thinking back now, I shouldn’t spend too much time playing games on the smartphone although the smartphone can bring us different feelings. After all, we teens need to develop healthy habits of studying and playing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给的问题提示确定主题，并完成写作，可适当添加细节，注意时态和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先确定主题，补充完整题目，点明主题——智能手机影响了我们的生活；
第二步，结合自身的经历介绍它是如何影响我们的生活的；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①be influenced by受……的影响
②be crazy about着迷于
③get rid of 摆脱
④thanks to由于，幸亏
⑤spend too much time doing sth花太多时间做某事
[高分句型]
①Nowadays, we live in a modern world which is influenced by high technology. (which引导的定语从句，被动语态)
②Thinking back now, I shouldn’t spend too much time playing games on the smartphone although the smartphone can bring us different feelings.(although引导的让步状语从句)
2．本届冬奥会是科技的盛会，各种高科技频繁亮相，无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机，让外国媒体大呼惊艳。不仅如此，科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假如你是九年级一班学生王华，学校正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍身边的科技及其优点。
要求：1. 要点齐全，适当发挥；
2. 句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数：80~100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone!
I am Wang Hua in Class One, Grade 9. It’s a great honor for me to speak here.
The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. Smart phones, robots, high-speed trains and electric cars are four great inventions. The smart phone brings both convenience and pleasure to our life. We can shop online, watch movies, and have video chats through it. As for the robot, it can help us with housework, help our children with their homework and so on. It saves us a lot of time and energy. The high-speed train has greatly improved our travel speed. It travels at high speed. It’s very fast and comfortable. The electric car has also changed our life. It can not only save energy but also protect the environment to a great extent. It is convenient and green.
China is taking the lead in some ways. I’m really proud of my country.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给思维导图的提示，以“科技改变生活”为主题，写一篇作文介绍身边的科技及其优点。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。写作时思维导图的提示全部要涵盖在内，可以从四个方面介绍身边的科技：智能手机、机器人、电动汽车以及高铁。针对细节可适当发挥，行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
3．生活在现代化社会的我们感受到了科技发展日新月异，假如你校正在举办以“the rapid development of technology”为主题的英语演讲比赛，你们班同学推荐你参加此次演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示和写作要求，用英语写一篇演讲稿。(挑战 challenge；电子的 electronic)
要点包括：
1. 科技是如何改变我们的学习和生活的 (如 robots, doubao, DeepSeek等)；
2. 为应对挑战，我们应培养哪些能力并简要阐述 (如培养创新思维、团队合作意识等)；为应对挑战，我们应如何合理使用电子产品 (至少列举两个措施)；(第二要点二选一)
3. 谈谈你对未来科技发展的信心和期待。
注意：
1. 词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥，照抄本卷语篇不得分。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
The Rapid Development of Technology
Hello everyone! Today I’m honored to be here and talk about the rapid development of technology. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The Rapid Development of Technology
Hello everyone! Today I’m honored to be here and talk about the rapid development of technology.
Technology has greatly changed our study and life. Robots can help us clean houses and do dangerous jobs, saving us time and energy. Tools like Doubao and DeepSeek are amazing. We can ask them questions about study, and they offer clear answers at once. Also, online classes make learning more convenient as we can study anywhere through the Internet.
However, rapid technology development brings challenges. To deal with them, we should develop creative thinking. This helps us solve problems in new ways. Teamwork is also important because we can share ideas and learn from each other. Besides, we should use electronic products wisely. For example, set time limits for using them to avoid addiction. Also, choose useful learning apps instead of spending too much time on games or social media.
I believe future technology will be even more amazing. It may make our life easier and help us explore the unknown world. Let’s get ready to embrace the wonderful future of technology!
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，具体介绍科技是如何改变我们的学习和生活的；
第二步，说明为应对挑战，我们应培养哪些能力或如何合理使用电子产品；
第三步，书写结尾，谈谈自己对未来科技发展的信心和期待。
[亮点词汇]
①at once立刻
②deal with解决
③each other互相
④instead of反而
[高分句型]
①Also, online classes make learning more convenient as we can study anywhere through the Internet.（as引导的原因状语从句）
②I believe future technology will be even more amazing.（宾语从句）

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