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人教版九年级上册 Unit 1
The Changing World 写作指导清单
教材任务 · 重难点突破 · 范文赏析 · 迁移训练
这份清单紧扣新版教材九上 Unit 1 The Changing World 的阅读语篇和写作任务编写。课本里 Section A 的乡村变化访谈、Section B 的蒙内铁路和 Changes in My Life 范文，都在教一件事——用 used to… Now… 和现在完成时把"过去与现在的变化"写清楚。写作指导就围绕这个重难点展开。建议先看教材任务，再练句型，最后对照范文和迁移训练自查。
一、教材写作任务再现
课本 Section B 3a 提供了范文 Changes in My Life（第18页），Project 部分要求学生仿照范文写一写自己的生活或家乡变化。本单元写作任务由此而来：
任务：以 Changes in My Life 或 Changes in My Hometown 为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你生活或家乡的变化。
要点：1. 变化前的样子；2. 现在的样子；3. 你的感受或愿望。
体裁：记叙文；人称：第一人称 I；词数：80—110词。
教材范文：Section B 3a Changes in My Life——作者从上学方式、居住条件、学习方式三个方面对比过去与现在，结尾点出"有一件事没变"。
二、本单元重难点突破
（一）核心语法：used to do 与现在完成时
本单元写作的灵魂是"过去—现在"对比，靠两个结构完成：used to + 动词原形表示"过去常常（现在不这样了）"；have/has + 过去分词表示变化的结果。
课文原句迁移表
功能 课文原句 写作中怎么用
询问/点题 How has life changed in your hometown over the last 20 years 开头点出变化的时间
写过去 Many young people used to work in big cities. / I used to grow a few vegetables on a small farm. 用 used to do 写变化前
写现在 Now, more of them have come back to live and work here. / Now I have large, high-tech greenhouses. 用 Now 衔接现在
写交通 It took 10 hours to get to Nairobi by train. / Food used to take hundreds of lorries, but now it takes only two or three trains. 突出变化之大
写变化结果 Our village has become a tourist attraction. / We have just built a new hospital and a library. 用现在完成时写结果
结尾点题 My life has changed in many ways, but one thing stays the same: the feeling of love. 结尾升华，套用课本
（二）易错点提醒
1. used to 后接动词原形：I used to walk to school（不说 used to walking）；否定用 didn’t use to。
2. 现在完成时不与 yesterday、last year 等具体过去时间连用，常与 over the last few years、since、for 连用。
3. "过去—现在"要成对写，不能只写现在；对比越具体，作文越有内容。
三、课文语料迁移（可直接搬进作文）
分类 课文短语
描述变化 change a lot, change the way we..., over the last few years, take place, greatly improve one’s life
过去与现在对比 used to do, now..., more and more..., become a tourist attraction
家乡事物 small village, high-tech greenhouse, new highway, sell products online, local product
个人生活 primary school, junior high school, take a bus, move to a flat, group discussion
四、范文与亮点解析
范文一：Changes in My Life
Changes in My Life
Now that I am in Grade 9, my life is quite different from when I was in primary school.
I used to live with my grandparents in a small town. Now my family has moved to a new flat in this city. I used to walk to school with my grandparents, but now I take the school bus. I used to spend most of my free time watching cartoons. Now I often read books and play basketball with my classmates after school.
My life has changed in many ways, but one thing stays the same: the love of my family around me.
亮点解析
文中句子 用到的本单元知识
Now that I am in Grade 9, my life is quite different from when I was in primary school. 套用课本 Changes in My Life 开头句型
I used to walk to school..., but now I take the school bus. used to… Now… 对比结构
...one thing stays the same: the love of my family around me. 套用课本结尾，点出不变的东西
范文二：Changes in My Hometown
Changes in My Hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last few years.
My hometown used to be a small quiet village. The roads were narrow, and there were no tall buildings. Now the streets are wide and clean, and many new shops have opened along them. People used to grow rice on the farm, but now many of them run online shops and sell local products to people all over China. Our town has built a new primary school and a hospital.
I am happy to see these changes. I hope my hometown will become even more beautiful.
亮点解析
文中句子 用到的本单元知识
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last few years. 现在完成时点题，标志词 over the last few years
People used to grow rice..., but now many of them run online shops. used to… Now… 对比，迁移课文 sell products online
Our town has built a new primary school and a hospital. 现在完成时写变化结果，迁移课文 have built a new hospital
五、迁移运用（用本单元句型写句子）
1. 我过去常常骑自行车上学，但现在我坐校车。（用 used to）
2. 在过去的几年里，我的家乡发生了很大变化。（用现在完成时）
3. 我们村过去是个小村庄，但现在已经变成了一个现代化的城镇。（用 used to be... / have become）
参考答案
1. I used to ride a bike to school, but now I take the school bus.
2. Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the last few years.
3. Our village used to be a small one, but now it has become a modern town.
六、写作要点速记
项目 要点
话题 生活/家乡的变化
结构 开头点变化 → 中间"过去—现在"对比（至少三方面）→ 结尾点不变的东西或祝愿
时态 过去用一般过去时 / used to do；现在用一般现在时 / 现在完成时；将来用一般将来时
要素 变化前 + 变化后 + 感受或愿望
语法 used to do；have/has done；over the last few years
细节 交通、居住、学习/生活方式至少写三方面，对比要具体

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