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Unit 3 Be healthy, be happy
Section E Writing
沪外教版（2024）七年级
上
Learning objectives
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Lead in
Pre-writing
3
While-writing
Post-writing
5
Summary
Assessment
7
Homework
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4
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By the end of the lesson, I will be able to...
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Analyse a model passage to find out the details of the pictures (habits and results).
Write a well-organised passage about Billy's healthy life using the sentences above.
Use the simple past tense and the simple present tense correctly to describe past and present habits.
Use linking words (and, because, so) to connect sentences.
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Learning objectives
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Lead in
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Lead in
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Look ＆ say
Look at the picture and answer:
1. What is the boy doing in the first picture
2. What is he doing in the second picture
He is playing computer games late at night.
He is running / doing exercise.
What are good habits What are bad habits
Can you give an example
Lead in
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Brainstorming
What other good habits or bad habits do you know
Step 1: Study a model. Xiao Peng wrote two sentences for pictures 1 and 4. Study the sentences and find out which details of the pictures Xiao Peng included in his writing. Then help Xiao Peng write more sentences for the other pictures.
Pre-writing
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Billy played computer games late at night.
Billy goes to bed early
and gets enough sleep.
In the past...
Now...
Pre-writing
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1. Tense (时态) In the past (过去): 用 一般过去时，动词用过去式。 Billy played computer games late at night. Now (现在): 用 一般现在时，注意第三人称单数。 Billy goes to bed early and gets enough sleep. 看图时先看标题是 In the past 还是 Now，再决定动词用什么形式。
2. Time (时间细节) In the past: late at night (深夜) 图中线索：时钟指向深夜。 Now: early (早地) 图中线索：时钟指向早睡时间。 不要漏掉图片中的时钟、白天黑夜等时间线索，把这些时间状语写进句子里。
3. Actions (动作细节) In the past: played computer games (玩电脑游戏) Now: goes to bed (去睡觉) / gets enough sleep (获得充足睡眠) 用动词短语准确描述图片中的人物正在做什么。
Step 1
Pre-writing
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Billy skipped breakfast.
Billy felt sleepy
in class.
In the past...
Now...
Billy has
breakfast.
Billy jumps
rope.
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Step 2 Think. Think about the results of the habits and take notes. Then make long sentences.
Pre-writing
03
Bad habits in the past
Billy played computer
games late at night.
Good habits now
Results
He felt sleepy in class.
Results
Billy felt sleepy
because he played
computer games
late at night.
Subskill | Connecting sentences
我们可以使用and, because,
so等连接词来连接句子。
这样可以让我们的文章
通顺易懂。
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Pre-writing
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Bad habits in the past
Billy played computer
games late at night.
Good habits now
Billy eats breakfast.
Billy jumps rope.
Results
He felt sleepy in class.
Billy feels healthy
because he eats
breakfast.
Results
He feels healthy.
He is energetic.
Billy jumps rope, so he is energetic.
While-writing
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Structure
Step 3 Write. Write a passage with the sentences above.
While-writing
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Structure
Example
Billy's Healthy Life
Billy is a middle school student. In the past, he had some unhealthy habits. He played computer games late at night, so he felt sleepy in class. He also skipped breakfast.
But now Billy has changed his bad habits. He goes to bed early and gets enough sleep. He eats breakfast and jumps rope.
Billy lives a healthier life now. He feels healthy and energetic because he has good habits.
一般过去时 vs. 一般现在时 (Tenses)
一般过去时 (Past Simple): 用于描述过去的坏习惯。
Billy played computer games late at night...
...he felt sleepy in class.
He also skipped breakfast.
一般现在时 (Present Simple): 用于描述现在的好习惯和当前的状态。
He goes to bed early and gets enough sleep.
He eats breakfast and jumps rope.
He feels healthy and energetic...
拓展例句
1. He didn't do any exercise.
2. He plays basketball after school.
Language Points
While-writing
04
连词与逻辑关系 (Linking Words)
so (所以): 表示结果。
He played computer games late at night, so he felt sleepy in class.
and (和/并且): 表示并列或补充。
He goes to bed early and gets enough sleep.
He eats breakfast and jumps rope.
because (因为): 表示原因。
He feels healthy and energetic because he has good habits.
拓展例句
1. He ate too much ice cream, so he had a stomachache.
2. He drinks milk and eats fruit.
3. He is energetic because he goes to bed early.
Language Points
While-writing
04
练习题
Task 1: Fill in the blanks with the correct tense of the given verbs.
1. My grandpa ________ (smoke) a lot in the past, but now he _____________ (not smoke) any more.
2. Lucy ________ (drink) too much cola last year. Now she ________ (drink) water every day.
3. In the past, Tom ________ (stay) up late to watch TV. Now he ________ (go) to bed at 9:00 p.m.
Task 2: Fill in the blanks with "and", "so", or "because".
1. My brother ate too much candy, ________ he had a toothache.
2. He feels tired ________ he didn't sleep well last night.
3. I like swimming ________ playing basketball.
Language Points
While-writing
04
smoked
doesn't smoke
drank
drinks
stayed
goes
so
and
because
Post-writing
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Check & review
Step 4: Check. Read your own writing and answer the questions.
1 Did you use proper words or expressions to describe the pictures
2 Did you use proper tenses to describe each picture
3 Did you use linking words to connect the sentences
Post-writing
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Check & review
Step 5: Peer review. Exchange your writing with another student. Answer the questions.
1 Does the writer use proper words or expressions to describe the pictures
2 Does the writer use proper tenses to describe each picture
3 Does the writer use proper linking words to connect the sentences
Summary
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English to Chinese
1. computer games
2. goes to bed
3. enough sleep
4. late at night
5. early
Chinese to English
6. 困倦的
7. 改变
8. 习惯
9. 在过去
10. 不健康的
电脑游戏
去睡觉
充足的睡眠
深夜
早地
sleepy
change
habit
in the past
unhealthy
The words we have learned
Summary
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gets enough sleep；changed his bad habits；played computer games；eats breakfast；unhealthy habits；felt sleepy in class
1. In the past, Billy ________________________ late at night, so he felt sleepy in class.
2. He stayed up late, so he________________________.
3. But later, Billy ________________________.
4. Now Billy goes to bed early and ________________________.
5. Every morning, Billy ________________________.
6. In the past, he had some ________________________.
felt sleepy in class
played computer games
changed his bad habits
The phrases we have learned
gets enough sleep
eats breakfast
unhealthy habits
Summary
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1. 因为夜里玩游戏，比利课堂上总是昏昏欲睡。
_______________________________________________
2. 比利决定改掉自己的坏习惯。
_______________________________________________
3. 他早睡，并且能睡够。
_______________________________________________
4. 现在比利过着更健康的生活，因为他拥有好习惯。
_______________________________________________
Translate the following sentences into English.
Billy felt sleepy in class because he played games at night.
Billy decided to change his bad habits.
He goes to bed early and gets enough sleep.
Billy lives a healthier life now because he has good habits.
The sentences we have learned
Summary
06
1. He feels healthy ________ he has good habits.
2. He ate too much junk food, ________ he had a stomachache.
3. She drinks milk ________ eats fruit every day.
4. He is energetic ________ he goes to bed early.
5. He eats lots of vegetables ________ fruit every day.
6. It was rainy yesterday, ________ we stayed at home.
7. She is very happy ________ she got a good grade.
8. He feels tired ________ he didn't sleep well last night.
9. My brother ate too much ice cream, ________ he had a stomachache.
Fill in the blanks with "and", "because", or "so".
The grammar we have learned
because
so
and
because
and
so
because
because
so
Writing: Billy’s Healthy Life
Paragraph Key Points
Opening Introduce Billy. Write about his bad habits in the past. What did he do What problem did he have
Body 1 Write about his change. How did he give up his bad habits
Body 2 Write about his new good habits now. What does he do to keep healthy
Closing Share your ideas about good habits.
Useful Expressions
In the past, Billy ...
He ..., so he ...
But now Billy has changed his bad habits.
Now he ... and ...
He ... to keep healthy.
Quick Checklist
Described past habits and present habits
Used correct tenses (past / present)
Used linking words: and, so, because
Wrote clear results for each habit
Assessment
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Self-assessment
I can use proper tenses to describe past and present habits.
I can use linking words (and, because, so) to connect sentences.
I can write a passage about a healthy life with the sentences above.
Basic (基础)
Improving(提升)
Extend (拓展)
Homework
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Write 5–8 sentences about your healthy life. Use the sentence patterns we learned. (e.g., In the past, I... / But now, I... / I feel... because...)
Write a complete passage (about 80–100 words) about "My Healthy Life". Use at least two different linking words from Step 2 (e.g., and, because, so).
Make a "Healthy Life" poster (or a short video) and present it to the class. Content: Describe your past and present habits, the results, and your feelings.
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