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2026-2027学年八年级上册英语期中复习考点培优仁爱科普版（新教材）
专题19 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．糖画是中国古老的民间艺术，有几百年历史。请以“My Dream Job as a Sugar Painting Teacher”为题写一篇英语短文，介绍你的梦想职业。
内容要点：
1.为什么想成为一名糖画老师；
2.你打算怎样实现梦想；
3.你对未来的期待。
要求：
1.词数100词左右(开头已给出，不计入词数)；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名；
3.行文连贯，表达准确。
4.提示词：hundreds of years, reason, fall in love, learn, practise, teach, pass down
My Dream Job as a Sugar Painting Teacher
Sugar painting is a traditional Chinese folk art.
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2．假设你是李华，学校“校园之声”栏目邀请你介绍中国科学家罗沛霖的事迹。请根据以下提示，用英文完成介绍，并表达你的观点。
要点：
1. 罗沛霖是一位有探索精神的科学家，为我国电子工业发展做出很多贡献。
2. 以前，我国电子领域发展面临诸多挑战。他放弃富裕生活，花大量时间投身于研究。
3. 他的研究提高了我国电子领域及其他领域的技术水平，为我国科技进步奠定基础。
4. 他认为科学家应该永远保持好奇心，永远希望探索新事物。
5. 你认为……
写作要求：
1. 词数：80~100词；
2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：electronic field (电子领域)，scientific research (科研)，exploration spirit (探索精神)，lay the foundation for (为……奠定基础)
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, I want to tell you about a great Chinese scientist—Luo Peilin.
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3．假如你是张华，某英文报社正在举办题为“My Dream Job”的征文活动，请你根据以下思维导图的提示内容，写一篇英语短文向报刊主编Amanda投稿。
参考词汇：help sb. do, patient, caring, study hard, keep on…
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于80词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Dear Amanda,
I’m Zhang Hua from Grade Eight and I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job.
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
4．假设你是李华，你班正在开展“Family Work Stories”的主题活动，老师要求同学们分享一位家人的工作日常。请你以“My Father’s Workday”为主题，根据写作提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，分享你父亲的工作日常。
写作提示：1.What is your father’s job and where does he work
2.What does he usually do during his workday
3.What can you learn from his work
写作要求：1.发言稿中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2.发言稿中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.词数80左右（发言稿中已给出内容不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, I’d like to talk about my father’s workday.
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Thank you for listening!
5．假如你是李华，请以“My dream Job”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你梦想的职业，向学校英语报投稿。
My Dream Job My dream job is...
Reasons I like this job because....
How to achieve it 1.…… 2.…… 3.……
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：80词左右，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My Dream Job
My dream job is
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6．你的理想与热情，是你航行的灵魂的舵和帆。每个人都有自己的梦想，你梦想中的未来工作是什么样的？请以“My Dream Job”为题，介绍你未来将要从事的工作及其原因，并谈谈为了实现你的梦想工作，你将要做哪些准备。
提示问题：
·What is your dream job
·Why do you want to do this job
·What will you do to make your dream come true
注意：1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名。
2. 内容需连贯，语法正确。
3. 词数70词左右。
My Dream Job
Rich or poor, young or old, we all dream about our future jobs once.
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7．“心中有梦，眼里有光，脚下有路，未来可期”。你一定有自己的梦想，在心中设计了自己美好的未来，并为之不懈努力着。请你写一篇英语发言稿，谈谈你对未来职业的规划。
要点：
1.你的理想职业是什么；
2.你为什么选择它；
3.你打算如何实现它。
要求；
1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数80左右 （开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Hello, everyone!
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8．深圳, 这座以创新为基因的城市, 如灵动的文化熔炉, 既以科技赋能传统中式美学焕新, 又以开放胸怀接纳西方文化精粹, 交融出独特魅力。现深圳宝安图书馆正在筹办中外名画作品赏析展览会, 假设你是李华, 请你向图书馆馆长写一封邮件, 推荐一幅名画, 内容包括:
1. What do you know about the painting and the artist
2. What can you see in the painting
3. What do you think of the painting
要求: 1. 80词左右; 开头已给出, 不计入字数。
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3. 书写规范, 卷面整洁。
提示词: Chinese and Foreign Famous Paintings Appreciation Exhibition 中外名画赏析展览会
aesthetics 审美
Dear Library Director,
I’m excited to recommend
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Best regards,
Li Hua
9．本节课我们学习了谈论最喜欢的艺术形式及其代表作品。请以“My Favorite Form of Art”为题，仿照课文对话写一篇60词左右的英语短文。
要点提示：
1. 你最喜欢的艺术形式(music / painting / dancing / calligraphy...);
2. 该艺术形式的代表作品(a famous work / one of the most famous works);
3. 你喜欢它的原因(至少一点);
4. 你的感受或打算。
要求：
1. 语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范;
2. 使用句型 What’s your favorite form of art / I like ... best. / one of ... 中至少两个;
3. 60—80词。
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10．假如你是李斌，你的英国好友Mike对中国京剧十分感兴趣，请你写一封邮件邀请他一起欣赏京剧。
要点提示：
京剧拥有两百多年历史；
京剧分为生、旦、净、丑四大角色；
演员画上脸谱、穿着传统戏服，伴随传统音乐表演。
要求：
包含全部提示要点，可适当拓展；
词数80～100；
不得出现真实校名、人名。
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11．根据提示，写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式
写作提示：假设你的学校正在举办“我最喜欢的艺术形式”主题征文比赛。请你写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的艺术形式。
要点：
1. 你最喜欢的艺术形式是什么(如：音乐、绘画、书法、戏剧等)；
2. 你为什么喜欢它(至少两个理由)；
3. 你对这门艺术的感受或它对你的影响；
4. 你有什么愿望或计划(如：学习更多、参加活动等)。
要求：1. 语句通顺，逻辑清晰；2. 不少于80词；3. 可适当发挥。
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12．随着中国经济的腾飞，越来越多的中国人意识到保护非物质文化遗产的重要性。请你以“Chinese Xuan Paper”为题，根据表格内容，介绍中国宣纸。
Place Anhui
History Over 1,000 years
Materials used bamboo, rice straw (稻草)
How to make by hand, 18 procedures (工序), about one year
Be used for calligraphy and paintings
Features smell of plants, loved by writers, keep for a long time
注意：
1.短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
2.词数80—100。
Chinese Xuan Paper
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13．中国是一个拥有五千多年历史的国家，在民间流传着许多传统的艺术和文化。皮影戏、京剧、剪纸等都是中国古老的传统艺术。在创新的同时，传承优秀的中国传统文化和艺术是每个中华儿女的责任。请以“My Favourite Traditional Chinese Art”为题，用英语写一篇文章。
提示：
1. What is your favourite traditional Chinese art
2. What do people often do in this art
3. Why do you like it
4. What do you hope for the art
要求：
1. 卷面整洁、语言通顺，书写规范。
2. 不少于80个单词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
提示词：be proud of...为……感到骄傲
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Art
My favourite traditional Chinese art is
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14．中国文化博大精深，各种艺术形式精彩纷呈。舞蹈、音乐、绘画、书法、小说、剪纸、泥塑、孔明灯、戏剧等。艺术陶冶情操，涵养生命，丰富充实人生。请写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的中国传统艺术，并结合你的经历，谈谈喜欢它的缘由以及对其的感悟。
写作要点：
1. 你最喜欢的中国传统艺术是什么；
2. 介绍一下该传统艺术，并指出你喜欢它的原因；
3. 谈谈你对该传统艺术的理解或感悟。
4. 词数100左右 (开头已给出不计入总词数)。
My Favorite Chinese Traditional Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is
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15．保持健康与快乐对中学生很重要。假如你叫李华，你们班将举办以“健康生活，快乐成长”为主题的班会，请根据提示写一篇英语发言稿，在班会上分享你健康快乐生活的做法。
内容包括：
1）业余时间活动：
2）保持健康及乐观生活的方法。
注意：
1）80词左右（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名等信息。
写作提示 核心词汇
1) What do you do in your free time reading, sports, ...
2) What should you do to keep healthy healthy food, exercise, …
3)How can you stay positive (保持积极乐观) talk to friends ...
Hello everyone, I’m Li Hua. Today I want to share how I keep healthy and happy.
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Thank you!
16．健康的生活方式对于我们的成长和学习至关重要。拥有健康的生活，我们才能更好地面对学习和生活中的挑战。请以“How to Live a Healthy Life”为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：
（1）介绍健康生活方式包含的几个方面，如饮食、运动、作息等；
（2）针对每个方面，具体阐述我们应该怎么做；
（3）总结健康生活方式对我们的积极影响。
参考词汇：
healthy lifestyle, balanced diet, exercise, get enough sleep, keep fit, energetic
注意：
（1）文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地点；
（3）词数80个左右 （开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to Live a Healthy Life
Living a healthy lifestyle is important for everyone.
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17．良好的生活习惯对青少年的健康成长至关重要，某英语杂志社以“My Healthy Habits”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你根据以下表格提示，用英语写一篇短文并投稿，词数70个左右。
My Healthy Habits
Eating habits vegetables, fruit, junk food…
Sports every day…
Sleeping habits go to bed early
Other healthy habits My Healthy Habits
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥 (开头已给出, 不计入总词数)；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My Healthy Habits
Hello, everyone! I’m going to share my daily habits to stay healthy with you.
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18．假设你是李华，你想向外国友人介绍具有中国特色的健康生活方式，请根据下面表格的提示信息，以“A Healthy Lifestyle in China”为题，写一篇英语短文。
Healthy eating keep a balanced (平衡的) diet; be good for the spleen and stomach (脾胃)
Gentle exercise Tai Chi and Baduanjin; square dancing (广场舞)
Positive mind Contentment brings happiness (知足者常乐) .
注意：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数为80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
A Healthy Lifestyle in China
Are you interested in how to keep a healthy lifestyle in China Let me tell you something about it.
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19．假如你叫李华，你校将开展“How to Be a Healthy Student”的演讲比赛，请根据以下思维导图，写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
How to Be a Healthy Student
Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor (荣幸) to give a talk here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student.
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Thanks for listening.
20．假定你是校英文报记者冀方，本月校刊主题为“健康生活”，你采访了你的同班同学Alice关于她的健康生活习惯，请你根据你对她的采访记录写一篇英语短文发给校报。
Alice’s healthy habits:●exercise three times a week ●drink milk every day ●...Alice’s feelings: ●about eating habits ●...
注意：
（1）短文须包括记录中所有信息（含需要补充的两处内容），可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
I’m Ji Fang, a reporter from our school English newspaper. Recently, I interviewed my classmate Alice on the topic of “Healthy Living”.
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参考答案及试题解析
1．
My Dream Job as a Sugar Painting Teacher Sugar painting is a traditional Chinese folk art. It has a history of hundreds of years. My dream job is to be a sugar painting teacher.
The reason is that I fell in love with it when I was young. It is not only beautiful but also delicious. It carries our wonderful Chinese culture. To achieve my dream, I plan to learn from masters and practise hard every day. I will also study art knowledge carefully.
In the future, I expect to teach more students. I hope I can pass down this great art to the world. I believe traditional culture will be popular again.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：记叙文，一般现在时、一般将来时和一般过去时相结合
明确要点：为什么想成为糖画老师，打算怎样实现梦想，对未来的期待
确定人称：第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、校名
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：引出糖画以及自己的梦想职业
主体段：说明喜欢糖画的缘由、讲述自己实现梦想的行动计划
结尾段：展望未来，升华主题
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：为什么想成为糖画老师
喜爱缘由：not only beautiful but also delicious/sweet taste/rich cultural meaning等
要点二：打算怎样实现梦想
行动规划：learn from masters/visit folk artists on weekends/take art classes等
要点三：对未来的期待
未来打算：teach more students/hold shows for visitors/make sugar painting for kids等
2．
例文：
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, I want to tell you about a great Chinese scientist—Luo Peilin.
He is a scientist with an exploration spirit. He made many contributions to the development of China’s electronic field. In the past, our country faced many challenges in this field. However, he gave up a wealthy life and spent much time on scientific research. His research improved technology levels in electronic and other fields and laid the foundation for our country’s scientific progress. He said scientists should always keep curiosity and hope to explore new things.
I think he is a great hero. We should learn from his spirit and study hard for our nation. Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：人物介绍与观点表达类短文，主体以一般过去时为主
明确要点：①罗沛霖是富有探索精神的科学家，为我国电子工业做贡献；②过去我国电子领域困难重重，他舍弃优渥生活投身科研；③他的研究提升技术水平，奠定科技进步基础；④他提出科学家要保持好奇心，探索新事物；⑤个人感悟，向他学习
确定人称：第三人称介绍人物，第一人称表达观点
注意事项：词数80~100词，要点齐全，开头不计入词数
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出，引出科学家罗沛霖
主体段：介绍生平事迹与他的观点，覆盖全部要点
结尾段：表达个人看法，号召大家学习，收尾致谢
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：人物身份与贡献
词汇：a scientist with an exploration spirit/make many contributions to/researcher/achievements等
要点二：科研经历
词汇：challenges/electronic field/gave up a wealthy life/spent much time on scientific research/devote...to/gave up his rich life等
要点三：科研成果
词汇：improved technology levels in electronic and other fields/laid the foundation for our country’s scientific progress/scientific progress/improved technology in many fields等
要点四：人物观点
词汇：curiosity/explore new things /discover等
要点五：个人观点
词汇：learn from/spirit/set a good example/serve the country等
3．
Dear Amanda,
I’m Zhang Hua from Grade Eight and I’m writing to share my ideas about my dream job.
My dream job is to be a doctor in the future. I want to do this job because it is great and meaningful. I hope to help sick people get well and live a happy life. I am a patient and caring person and I often help people when they are in need. I do well in science and I have learned some useful first-aid skills. I will study hard and keep reading books about medicine.
I believe my wonderful dream will come true one day.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文（书信），一般现在时和一般将来时
明确要点：梦想职业、选择该职业的原因、自身具备的品质或能力、实现梦想的计划
确定人称：第一人称(I/my)
注意事项：1. 可选用参考词汇，也可适当发挥；2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4. 词数：不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，引出自己的梦想职业（题干已给出开头）
主体段：介绍梦想职业，说明选择理由、自身品质与能力
结尾段：讲述实现梦想的行动，表达对梦想成真的期盼
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：梦想职业
职业选择：doctor/teacher/police/artist/scientist/reporter等
理由描述：great and meaningful/help people/interesting/wonderful/useful/challenging等
要点二：个人品质与能力
品质词汇：patient, caring, hard working, brave, confident, active等
能力：do well in…/learn some skills/be good at…/have much knowledge等
要点三：实现梦想的办法
行动：study hard, keep on reading books, learn more knowledge, take more courses, practice more等
4．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today, I’d like to talk about my father’s workday. He is a deliveryman in our neighborhood.
On weekdays, he wakes up at 6 a. m. He sorts out packages first, and then starts delivering them. From 8 a. m. to 5 p. m., he runs around the streets, making sure every package reaches the right person. Even on rainy days, he never stops working.
When he comes home, he often says, “Delivering happiness is my job.” I learn from him that no matter how ordinary a job is, it can be meaningful with responsibility.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】写作步骤
【第一步：审题立意】
确定文体：应用文（发言稿），以一般现在时为主
明确要点：父亲的工作日（作息时间、工作内容、工作态度），以及“我”从中获得的感悟
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）和第三人称（he/his）相结合
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；围绕“平凡工作也有意义”的主题展开
【第二步：构思布局】
内容三层式结构：
第一层：介绍父亲的职业身份
第二层：按时间顺序介绍父亲一天的工作流程和态度
第三层：引用父亲的话，总结感受，升华主题
【第三步：要点展开】
要点一：父亲职业
身份说明：deliveryman in our neighborhood/a local delivery worker in our neighborhood等
作用：引出下文对工作日的具体介绍
要点二：工作日流程
时间线索：On weekdays, he wakes up at 6 a.m./He wakes up at 6 a.m. on weekdays.等
工作内容：sorts out packages first, then starts delivering them/divide the packages into different groups and then starts delivering them等
工作时间：From 8 a.m. to 5 p.m./His work starts at 8 in the morning and ends at 5 in the afternoon.等
工作状态：runs around the streets/makes sure every package reaches the right person/makes sure every package is put in the right places等
细节补充：Even on rainy days, he never stops working./He keeps on working even on rainy days.等
作用：体现父亲工作的辛苦与负责
要点三：感悟升华
父亲的话：“Delivering happiness is my job.”/“My job is to deliver happiness.”等
“我”的感悟：I learn from him that no matter how ordinary a job is, it can be meaningful with responsibility./I learn from him that although a job is ordinary, it can be meaningful if we have responsibility.等
作用：点明主题，深化立意
5．
例文：
My Dream Job
My dream job is to be an English teacher. I like this job because I love children and I want to help them learn knowledge. It is meaningful to educate the future. To achieve my dream, I have a plan. First, I will study hard at school. Second, I will read more books to broaden my horizons. Third, I plan to practice speaking English every day. I believe my dream will come true through hard work.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：主题介绍类说明文，以一般现在时和一般将来时为主
明确要点：点明梦想职业、阐述选择该职业的原因、说明实现目标的3条具体路径
确定人称：以第一人称为主
注意事项：不得出现任何真实姓名、校名、地名等私人信息，词数控制在80词左右
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：点明自己梦想的职业
主体段：阐述选择该职业的理由
结尾段：分点列明实现目标的具体行动，收尾表达对未来的期许
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：点明梦想职业
职业选择：an English teacher / a photographer / a writer等
要点二：阐述选择理由
I love children / help them learn knowledge / I get huge joy when I see others learn new things through my help / I am fond of sharing interesting stories about foreign cultures with people around me等
要点三：具体行动
study hard at school / read more books to broaden my horizons / practice speaking English every day / work hard at all my English subjects to get solid language knowledge / take part in speech contests等
6．
My Dream Job
Rich or poor, young or old, we all dream about our future jobs once. My dream job is to be an English teacher. I like children very much and I want to help them learn knowledge happily. To make my dream come true, I will study hard at school from now on. I plan to read more books and practice speaking English every day. I believe I can be a good teacher in the future.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：记叙文，用一般现在时和一般将来时为主
明确要点：梦想的职业；原因以及如何实现这个梦想
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等个人信息，词数70词左右
[第二步：构思布局]
一段式结构：
开头部分：文章已给出
主体部分：介绍梦想工作、阐述原因以及如何实现梦想
结尾部分：总结感受
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：梦想职业
My dream job is to be an English teacher./My dream job is to be a primary school English teacher/have always dreamed of becoming a wildlife photographer/My dream job is to be a pastry chef等
要点二：原因
like children very much and I want to help them learn knowledge happily/be crazy about delicious desserts/bring warm and sweet feelings to more people with my works/get close to cute wild animals and record the beauty of nature/bring them the joy of learning a new language等
要点三：如何实现
will study hard at school from now on. I plan to read more books and practice speaking English every day/work hard to get good grades in all my subjects, especially English/try to be more patient and learn some basic teaching skills/learn professional photography knowledge carefully/learn to make different kinds of Chinese and Western pastries in my free time等
要点四：感受
I believe I can be a good teacher in the future/I believe I can do it/I can make it/I can achieve my dream等
7．
例文
Hello, everyone!
My dream job is to be an English teacher. I want to help students learn knowledge and grow up happily. Teaching is meaningful because I can make a difference in their lives. To achieve my dream, I will study hard in all subjects. Also, I plan to read more books to broaden my horizons. I believe practice makes perfect. Besides, I will improve my speaking skills. I will never give up. I am sure my dream will come true in the future. Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：英语发言稿，混合一般现在时、一般将来时，讲述个人理想职业规划
明确要点：①说出理想职业；②说明选择该职业的原因；③讲述实现梦想的做法
确定人称：第一人称I/my
注意事项：发言稿格式，开头已给出，词数80左右，不能出现真实姓名学校
[第二步：构思布局]
单段式结构
开头：问候大家
中间：分两层展开：①介绍自己的理想职业，讲明选择这份职业的原因；②写出自己打算如何行动来实现梦想
结尾：表达信念，收尾致谢
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：理想职业阐述
常用表达：to be an English teacher/doctor/pilot/scientist等
要点二：选择职业的理由
常用表达：help students learn knowledge/grow up happily/meaningful/make a difference/save people’s lives等
要点三：实现梦想的行动
常用表达：study hard/It teaches me/read more books/practice makes perfect/improve my speaking skills/never give up/keep exercising等
8．例文
Dear Library Director,
I’m excited to recommend The Starry Night for the Chinese and Foreign Famous Paintings Appreciation Exhibition.
It was created by Vincent van Gogh, a great Dutch painter. He loved expressing strong feelings through colours. In the painting, we can see rolling dark hills, a bright glowing moon and swirling stars in the sky. The thick brush strokes make the night lively.
I think this work greatly improves our aesthetics. It shows the beauty of nature and the painter’s deep inner world. I believe visitors will love it.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：电子邮件，介绍推荐的名画及其作者，主体使用一般现在时
明确要点：对名画及作者的了解、画中所见内容、对这幅画的评价；词数80左右，开头不计入
确定人称：第一人称I；第三人称he（指画家）
注意事项：不出现真实姓名、校名
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出，点明推荐的作品名称
主体段：先介绍画家与作品背景，再描写画中可见的具体内容
结尾段：表达对这幅画的看法与推荐理由
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：对名画及作者的了解
It was created by Vincent van Gogh, a great Dutch painter./He loved expressing strong feelings through colours./He was famous for his unique style of painting等
要点二：画中可见的内容
we can see rolling dark hills, a bright glowing moon and swirling stars in the sky./The thick brush strokes make the night lively./The blue sky and bright stars catch our eyes等
要点三：对这幅画的评价
I think this work greatly improves our aesthetics./It shows the beauty of nature and the painter’s deep inner world./I believe visitors will love it等
9．范文：
My Favorite Form of Art
My favorite form of art is painting. I like it best because it is very interesting.
My favorite painting is the Mona Lisa. It is a famous oil painting by the Italian artist Leonardo da Vinci. I also like Chinese paintings. Many of them show the beauty of nature.
I want to be a painter in the future. Now I practice drawing every day. Art makes our life colorful. What’s your favorite form of art
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点： 最喜欢的艺术形式； 该艺术形式的代表作品； 喜欢这种艺术形式的原因；针对这种艺术形式的感受或打算
确定人称：第一人称(I/my)
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：开头点题，最喜欢的艺术形式及原因；
主体段：介绍该艺术形式的代表作品；
结尾段：针对这种艺术形式的感受或打算。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一： 最喜欢的艺术形式及原因；
艺术形式：My favorite form of art is painting/dancing/singing等
喜欢的原因：I like it best because it is very interesting/exciting/funny等
要点二：介绍该艺术形式的代表作品
代表作品：My favorite painting is the Mona Lisa/It is a famous work called... Many of them show the beauty of nature等
喜欢原因：It is a famous oil painting by the Italian artist Leonardo da Vinci./It is a famous sculpture by the French artist Auguste Rodin.等
要点三：针对这种艺术形式的感受或打算
自己的感受：Art makes our life colorful/meaningful等
未来打算： I want to be a painter/singer/dancer in the future等
10．例文：
Dear Mike,
I’m glad you are interested in Beijing Opera. I’m writing to invite you to enjoy it with me this weekend.
Beijing Opera has a history of more than 200 years. It has four main roles: Sheng, Dan, Jing and Chou. Performers paint colorful facial makeups and wear traditional costumes. They perform along with traditional music. It is really amazing Chinese culture full of local beauty.
Would you like to come with me I believe you will have great fun and learn more about our culture. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Bin
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：邀请类电子邮件，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：京剧两百多年历史；四大角色生、旦、净、丑；演员画脸谱、穿传统戏服、伴随传统音乐表演；发出观看京剧的邀请
确定人称：第一人称 (I/my)，第二人称 (you/your)
注意事项：词数80～100，邮件格式规范，包含全部提示要点，不得出现真实校名、人名
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：得知对方对京剧感兴趣，点明邮件目的，发出邀请并补充时间
主体段：介绍京剧历史、四大角色、演员装扮以及表演形式，简单评价京剧文化
结尾段：再次发出邀请，表达期待，期盼对方回复
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：邮件目的与发出邀请
邮件目的：be interested in/write to invite you/know you love Chinese art/write to tell you a plan等
发出邀请：enjoy it with me/this weekend/would love you to come/experience traditional Chinese art等
要点二：京剧的历史与角色
京剧历史：have a history of more than 200 years/a long history/be one of national treasures等
四大角色：four main roles/different kinds of characters/different parts in the play等
要点三：演员装扮、表演形式以及京剧评价
演员装扮：colorful facial makeups/traditional costumes/bright facial paintings/special traditional clothes等
表演形式：perform along with traditional music/put on wonderful shows/act to old style music等
评价京剧文化：amazing Chinese culture full of local beauty/a great art form/full of Chinese charm等
要点四：期待收获与邮件结尾
收获：have great fun/learn more about our culture/enjoy the show/get to know our tradition等
邮件结束语：look forward to your reply/wait for your answer/hope you can join us等
11．参考范文
My Favorite Art Form—Music
My favorite art form is music.
I love listening to music and playing the piano. It makes me feel happy and relaxed. I like music for many reasons. First, music helps me express my feelings. When I am sad, I listen to slow and gentle music. When I am happy, I listen to cheerful and lively songs. Second, music brings people together. I enjoy singing with my friends and going to concerts with my family. We share happy moments through music.
I hope to become a better musician in the future and share my music with more people. Music is truly a gift in my life.
【详解】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：本文是一篇材料作文，一般现在时为主；
明确要点：介绍自己最喜欢的艺术形式；
确定人称：第一人称为主；
注意事项：语句通顺，逻辑清晰；不少于80词。
[第二步：构思布局]
开头段，介绍最喜欢的艺术形式是音乐；
主体段，介绍喜欢音乐的原因，以及对音乐的感受或音乐对自己的影响；
结尾段，介绍自己的计划。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：
艺术形式（原因/感受/影响）：music/playing the piano/feel happy and relaxed/express my feelings/lively songs/brings people together/enjoy singing/share happy moments through music/traditional Chinese painting/calligraphy/folk music/full of beauty and culture/have special meanings/look amazing and attractive/carry rich history/improve my patience
要点二：
计划：musician/in the future/share my music with more people/a gift in my life/learn more skills about it/practise it in my free time/learn from excellent artists/pass on this traditional art/make more wonderful works
12．例文
Chinese Xuan Paper
Xuan Paper is one of our famous Chinese cultural treasures. It is mainly produced in Anhui Province.
It has a long history of over 1,000 years. People make it with natural materials like bamboo and rice straw. The whole work is done by hand. It needs 18 procedures and it takes about one year to finish.
Xuan Paper is widely used for Chinese calligraphy and paintings. It has a fresh plant smell and is loved by writers. What’s more, works on it can be kept for a long time. It is truly a great part of our intangible cultural heritage.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性说明文，以一般现在时为主，客观介绍中国宣纸的相关信息
明确要点：表格中所有内容（产地、历史、制作材料、制作方式、用途、特点），可适当补充细节
确定人称：第三人称（it/people），避免使用第一人称，保持说明的客观性
注意事项：词数控制在80—100之间，涵盖所有要点，语言简洁易懂，符合初中生英语水平
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，点明宣纸是中国非物质文化遗产，引出其产地
主体段：依次介绍宣纸的历史、制作材料、制作方式，清晰呈现核心信息
结尾段：介绍宣纸的用途和特点，总结其价值，呼应开头的非物质文化遗产主题
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：产地与地位
地点描述：Anhui Province/mainly produced in Anhui/from Anhui/in southern Anhui等
地位说明：one of our famous Chinese cultural treasures/a symbol of Chinese culture/a national treasure等
历史介绍：over 1,000 years/a long history of over 1,000 years/with a history of more than 1,000 years等
要点二：材料与制作
材料选择：bamboo, rice straw/bamboo and rice straw/natural materials like bamboo and rice straw等
制作方式：by hand/made by hand/completely made by hand/all done by hand等
工序时间：18 procedures, about one year/18 steps, takes about one year/18 procedures and about one year等
要点三：用途与特点
用途说明：calligraphy and paintings/used for calligraphy and paintings/widely used for Chinese calligraphy and paintings等
特点描述：smell of plants/fresh plant smell/a fresh plant smell/has a plant smell等
受欢迎程度：loved by writers/deeply loved by writers/popular with writers and artists等
保存特性：keep for a long time/can be kept for a long time/lasts for centuries/works on it can be kept for a long time等
13．
例文
My Favourite Traditional Chinese Art
My favourite traditional Chinese art is paper cutting. People often use scissors to cut red paper into beautiful shapes like flowers, animals, and lucky symbols. They do this during traditional festivals, such as Chinese New Year, to decorate homes and bring good luck. I like it because it is truly creative and relaxing. It helps me express my unique ideas and makes me happy. I am very proud of this art.
I hope that more young people will learn it, cherish it and keep it alive for the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：为“一般现在时态”和“一般将来时态”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开门见山，引出话题；
第二步：详细描述剪纸的相关内容；
第三步：书写结尾，表达愿望；
[亮点词汇]
①paper cutting 剪纸
②beautiful shapes 漂亮的形状
③unique ideas 独特的想法
④keep it alive 保持它的活力
[高分句型]
①I like it because it is truly creative and relaxing. (原因状语从句)
②I hope that more young people will learn it, cherish it and keep it alive for the future. (宾语从句)
14．例文：
My Favorite Chinese Traditional Art
Among all the traditional Chinese art forms, my favorite is paper-cutting. Paper-cutting uses scissors or knives to cut patterns into paper. These patterns can be animals, flowers, or even stories, presenting a vivid and charming visual feast.
I first saw paper-cutting at a festival. The delicate designs and bright colors amazed me. Since then, I’ve learned to make simple ones. It’s really fun and helps me relax after study.
Paper-cutting shows Chinese people’s wisdom and creativity. It’s like a bridge connecting us to our rich culture and long history. I feel proud to learn and share this beautiful art, and hope more people can love it.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“写作要点”中关于中国传统艺术的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍自己最喜欢的传统艺术是剪纸；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己了解剪纸的过程和喜欢剪纸的原因；
第三步，书写结语。介绍剪纸的意义
[亮点词汇]
①all the traditional Chinese art forms 所有的中国传统艺术形式
②cut...into... 把……剪成……
③since then自从那时起
[高分句型]
①Since then, I’ve learned to make simple ones.（现在完成时）
②It’s really fun and helps me relax after study.（and连接并列成分）
15．
Hello everyone, I’m Li Hua. Today I want to share how I keep healthy and happy.
In my spare time, I enjoy reading books and playing basketball with my classmates. To keep healthy, I have a balanced diet every day. I eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Also, I exercise for at least an hour every day. It is really important to stay positive. When I have trouble or feel sad, I talk to my friends or teachers actively. They always give me useful advice and help me out. I hope we can all grow up healthily and happily together.
Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤：
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：英文演讲稿，用一般现在时
明确要点：①业余时间活动；②保持健康的方法；③保持积极乐观的方法
确定人称：第一人称
注意事项：符合演讲稿的口语化表达，传递积极正向的态度，内容贴合日常实际，逻辑清晰
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：自我介绍，点明演讲主题
主体段：①业余时间活动；②保持健康的方法；③保持积极乐观的方法
结尾段：致谢
[第三步：要点展示]
要点一：业余时间活动
enjoy reading books and playing basketball/do sports like running and playing basketball/enjoy reading storybooks等
要点二：保持健康的方法
have a balanced diet/eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food/exercise for at least an hour every day/eat more healthy food such as vegetables and fruit, and exercise for an hour every day等
要点三：保持积极乐观的方法
talk to my friends or teachers actively/listen to music等
16．范文：
How to Live a Healthy Life
Living a healthy lifestyle is important for everyone.
First, we should have a balanced diet. It is wise to eat more vegetables and fresh fruit instead of junk food. Second, doing exercise regularly helps us keep fit. We can run or play ball games after school. Third, getting enough sleep is necessary for students. We’d better go to bed early and not stay up late for homework.
If we follow these rules, we will be energetic and study better. A healthy life helps us face different challenges in our study and daily life. Let’s start now!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文，时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点：①从饮食、运动、作息等方面介绍健康生活方式；②分别写出每个方面的具体做法；③总结健康生活带来的积极影响
确定人称：第一人称（we）
注意事项：开头已给出，不计入总词数；词数80左右；不能出现真实人名、校名、地名；包含所给的要点提示
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出句子，点明健康生活方式很重要
主体段：分三点依次写均衡饮食、坚持运动、充足睡眠，每一点写具体做法
结尾段：总结坚持健康习惯，我们会精力充沛，学习更好，发出倡议
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：饮食（balanced diet）
饮食表达：eat more vegetables and fresh fruit instead of junk food/stay away from junk food/eat different kinds of food/try to have less sweet drinks and fried food等
要点二：运动（exercise）
运动表达：run or play ball games after school/take outdoor activities/do some sports like running or playing ball games after school/swim in summer to build up our body等
要点三：作息（get enough sleep）
作息表达：go to bed early/not stay up late for homework/form a good sleeping habit/don’t spend too much time on mobile phones before bedtime等
要点四：积极影响
影响表达：be energetic/study better/helps us face different challenges/makes us ready for difficulties in study and life等
17．例文
My Healthy Habits
Hello, everyone! I’m going to share my daily habits to stay healthy with you.
First, I have healthy eating habits. I eat lots of fresh vegetables and fruit, and seldom eat junk food. I also drink much water and milk every day. Second, I do sports every day because sports can build up my body. Third, I get enough sleep. And I never stay up late. Lastly, I often share my feelings with others. It can help me feel better.
In short, I think these habits are great ways for me to stay healthy.
【详解】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：发言稿，时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点：分享保持健康的日常习惯；饮食、运动、睡眠、情绪调节；结尾总结感悟
确定人称：第一人称I
注意事项：发言稿格式；恰当使用逻辑连接词；不出现真实个人信息；词数符合要求
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：引出话题，分享自己保持健康的日常习惯
主体段：用“First, Second, Third, Lastly”分层介绍饮食习惯、运动、睡眠、情绪疏导
结尾段：简短总结，点明好习惯有助于保持健康
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：引出话题
可用表达：I’m going to share my daily habits to stay healthy with you./Let me tell you about my healthy living habits./Here are some useful ways to keep healthy that I’d like to share with you.等
要点二：介绍各类健康习惯
可用表达：I eat lots of fresh vegetables and fruit, and seldom eat junk food./I also drink much water and milk every day./I do sports every day because sports can build up my body./I get enough sleep./And I never stay up late./I often share my feelings with others./It’s important to have breakfast every morning./Eating too much sweet food is bad for our teeth and health.等
要点三：总结感悟
可用表达：In short, these habits are great ways for me to stay healthy./Good habits help us keep healthy./It’s important for us to have healthy habits.等
18．
例文：
A Healthy Lifestyle in China
Are you interested in how to keep a healthy lifestyle in China Let me tell you something about it.
First, healthy eating matters. We keep a balanced diet, which is good for the spleen and stomach. We choose fresh food and avoid too much oily food every day. Second, gentle exercise is popular. Many people practice Tai Chi and Baduanjin. Square dancing is also common in city parks. Third, we hold a positive mind. We believe contentment brings happiness and keep calm in daily life.
In a word, these wonderful ways help us stay healthy. Welcome to China to experience our special healthy culture!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文
明确要点：标题A Healthy Lifestyle in China；身份李华；包含健康饮食、温和运动、积极心态三块全部表格信息；
确定人称：第一人称We
注意事项：词数80左右；开头已给不计入词数；行文流畅，适当发挥
[第二步：构思布局]
开头段：引出话题，介绍要讲中国健康生活方式
主体段：分三点依次介绍均衡饮食、太极八段锦与广场舞、知足常乐的心态
结尾段：总结，发出邀请，欢迎来中国体验
[第三步：要点展开]
健康饮食：keep a balanced diet/be good for the spleen and stomach/choose fresh food/avoid oily food等
温和运动：Tai Chi and Baduanjin/square dancing/practise in parks/good for body等
积极心态：Contentment brings happiness/stay calm/keep a peaceful mood等
19．
How to Be a Healthy Student
Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to give a talk here. Health is important for students. Here is my advice about how to be a healthy student.
First, we should have good living habits. It's necessary to go to bed early and get up early. Also, we should do some cleaning to keep our rooms clean. Second, good eating habits are also important. We'd better eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food. Third, doing sports is a good way to keep fit. For example, we can run or play basketball for an hour every day. Last but not least, we should stay in a good mood. Try to be happy and smile every day.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：生活起居习惯；饮食习惯；运动；心情；发出健康倡议
确定人称：第一人称
注意事项：词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；不得出现真实信息
[第二步：构思布局]
开头段：题干已给出，引出健康话题并说明演讲目的
主体段：分层提出建议——第一，养成良好起居习惯；第二，养成良好饮食习惯；第三，坚持运动锻炼；第四，保持好心情
结尾段：题干已给出，致谢收束
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：生活起居习惯
早睡早起：go to bed early and get up early/keep early hours/rise early and sleep early等
整理清洁：do some cleaning/tidy the room/organize the room等
要点二：饮食习惯
多吃蔬果：eat more vegetables and fruit/have more greens/have a balanced diet等
远离垃圾食品：instead of junk food/stay away from fast food/cut down on sweets等
要点三：运动锻炼
运动方式：run or play basketball/play football/go swimming/do morning exercises等
运动频率：for an hour every day/once a day/three times a week/regularly等
要点四：保持好心情
保持心情：stay in a good mood/keep happy/be positive/keep a positive attitude等
快乐微笑：be happy and smile/stay cheerful/look on the bright side/keep a light heart等
20．One Possible Version:
I’m Ji Fang, a reporter from our school English newspaper. Recently, I interviewed my classmate Alice on the topic of “Healthy Living”.
Alice has great healthy habits. She exercises three times a week. She often goes jogging to stay fit. She drinks milk every day. Also, she goes to bed early to ensure 8-hour sleep. She eats plenty of fruit and vegetables too.
Regarding health, Alice thinks it’s the foundation of a happy life. Good eating habits make her feel energetic and positive. She thinks it is great to exercise with friends. She hopes more students can pay attention to health and live a happy life.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：校英文报报道短文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：①介绍Alice的健康生活习惯；②写出Alice对于饮食习惯的感受
确定人称：以第三人称she为主
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、学校名称；词数80个左右，给出的开头不计入总词数
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：给定开头，交代身份与本次采访主题
主体段：介绍Alice的各项健康生活习惯，包含题干原有信息与补充内容
结尾段：写出Alice对饮食习惯的看法和个人感受，发出期许
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：健康生活习惯
习惯表达：exercise three times a week/drink milk every day/eat fruit and vegetables/go to bed early/keep enough sleep等
要点二：Alice对饮食习惯的感受
感受表达：feel energetic/positive/stay in good condition/keep strong body等
要点三：Alice的其他想法与期许
想法表达：the foundation of a happy life/pay attention to health/make friends while exercising等
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