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2026-2027学年七年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版（五四学制）
（新教材）Unit 1 Trying new things
专题17 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．假如你是李华，你的英国朋友爱丽丝给你发来电子邮件，想了解你是如何保持健康的。请你根据下面表格，给她回一封电子邮件。
饮食 早餐 鸡蛋、牛奶、面包
午餐 鸡肉、胡萝卜、米饭
晚餐 蔬菜、沙拉
运动 喜欢的运动 网球
原因 有趣、容易
表现 和朋友一起打网球
在电视上观看网球比赛
要求：1.根据上面表格信息写一封电子邮件，可适当发挥；
2.字数70词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
提示词：keep 保持
Dear Alice,
Thanks for your e-mail. You want to know how I keep healthy.
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What about you Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．为了丰富学生的校园生活，阳光中学开设了丰富多彩的社团活动。假如你是李华，请根据表格中的要求，写一篇70词左右的邮件，谈一谈你想加入哪个社团；已给开头和结尾不计入总词数。
Club 1 Club 2 Club 3
Football Club Music Club Reading Club
Please let others know: What are you like Why do you want to join the club What do you want to get from the club
Dear all,
My name is Li Hua. I am interested in
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I hope to join the club soon!
3．学校英语俱乐部正在招新。你打算加入俱乐部，请给俱乐部负责人写一封自我介绍信。
Name
Age
Birthplace
Looks
Hobbies
Personalities
Feeling at school
要求:
1. 词数80词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 涵盖表格中所有要点，适当增加细节信息；
3. 文中不得提及真实校名、人名等信息。
This is me
Hello, everyone!
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Thank you!
4．学校英语网站正在开展以“My school life”为主题的征文活动，请用英语写一篇短文向网站投稿，从学校、社团、日常学习等方面谈谈你的初中生活。
提示：1. What’s your school like
2. What club are you in And why do you join it
3. What’s your daily life
4. How do you feel about your school life
要求：1. 条理清晰，要点齐全，逻辑严密，书写规范。可适当拓展。不少于60词。
2. 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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5．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom将来你校交流学习，现向你了解即将开展的“校园文化展”。请根据邮件内容，用英语写一封回信。
Dear Li Hua, I can’t believe the Culture Show is almost here. I hear that there will be many interesting club activities. Could you please tell me more about it For example, where will it be What clubs are you in And what activity do you think is the most fun for me Please write back when you have time! Yours, Tom
要求：1. 文中不得提及真实校名、人名等信息。
2. 内容全面，语言通顺，条理清晰，书写规范。
3. 词数60词左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to get your letter! I’m also excited about the Culture Show.
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I can’t wait to see you at the show. See you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是李华，你校的英语话剧社团 (The English Drama Club) 正在招募社团成员，你打算加入该社团。请你根据下面的信息，给社团联系人Bill写一封电子邮件，介绍一下自己的情况。
要求：
1. 邮件应包括信息的所有要点；
2. 条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名、地名、校名等信息；
4. 词数 60 词左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，请抄写在答题卡上。（不计入词数）
Name Li Hua
Favorite subjects and reason English, music…, fun, useful, …
Abilities tell stories, act out stories, play the guitar, …
Dream job an actor (演员)
… …
Dear
Bill,
I’m really interested in your club.
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Best,
Li Hua
7．新学期开始了，你校的英语社团正在举办以 “My New School Life” 为主题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇英语短文介绍你的新学校生活。
要点：
简单的自我介绍(年龄、外貌、性格);
你的兴趣爱好及原因;
你加入的学校俱乐部及活动;
你对新学期的感受和期望。
要求：
词数：70 左右;
文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
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8．假如你是王明，你校英语俱乐部举行“The Role Model Around Us”评选活动，你想推荐同学吴刚。根据提示，请你给负责人胡老师写一封信，内容需包含表格中所有要点。
基本情况 13 years old, tall and strong, love ...
推荐理由 polite, kind (各举一例)
smart, helpful (各举一例)
…
注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
2. 词数80词左右，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文章须包含全部要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Mr. Hu,
I want to recommend (推荐) Wu Gang for “The Role Model Around Us”. Wu Gang is
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I think Wu Gang is a great role model. I hope he can get the award (奖).
Yours,
Wang Ming
9．假如你是李明，你校英语读书社团正在招募新成员，你想加入该社团。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封申请信。内容包括：
1. 介绍你的基本信息；
2. 介绍你的兴趣爱好；
3. 说明你想加入该社团的理由。
注意：
1. 词数为60左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Ming, a 13-year-old boy from Class 1, Grade 7. I want to join the English Reading Club.
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Can I join the club
Yours,
Li Ming
10．假如你是阳光中学一名七年级的学生李明，新学期学校开设了丰富的俱乐部活动。你想加入学校英语演讲俱乐部 (English Speech Club) ，请你根据俱乐部的招募要求，完成写作任务。
We want you!Love talking in English Want to share your ideas Join English Speech Club! Practise your English, make friends, and have fun! How to join us Write your first speech to tell us about yourself: your personal information (looks, character...) , your hobbies, your school life and your dream. Hope to see you soon.
写作要求：
1. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文必须包含所给内容提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Hello! My name is Li Ming, a student from Sunshine Middle School.
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11．假如你是李平，你想向你的英国笔友Lucy介绍你的新学校和学习生活。请根据以下信息完成一篇短文。
基本信息 李平，13岁，七年级5班
学校设施 三幢教学楼，一个食堂，一个图书馆，一个操场，…
学习科目 语文、数学、英语、科学…
课后生活 课后参加喜欢的俱乐部
愿望 ……
注意：
1. 邮件必须包括上面所有的提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：80左右，可适当发挥；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
I’m so happy to write a letter to you.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
12．假设你是Flora，请你根据以下写作要点和要求写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下你的学校、你喜欢的科目和俱乐部以及你未来想做的工作。
写作要点：
1. What is your school like
2. What are your favourite subject and club Why
3. What do you want to be in the future
写作要求：
1.短文应包括所有写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3.短文不少于60词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My name is Flora.
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13．假定你是校英文报记者冀方，上周五你采访了来自烹饪俱乐部的成员林辉。请你根据采访记录，写一篇英语短文发给校报。
Why Lin Hui joins this club:●he is interested in cooking ●... What Lin Hui learns in the club: ●make jiaozi ●...
注意：
(1)短文须包括提示中所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
(3)词数60个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Lin Hui is a member of the cooking club.
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14．假设你是某国际学校七年级学生Tony，你将在社团招新活动中为新生介绍你所在的美术俱乐部。请你根据以下海报的提示内容，用英语写一篇发言稿，简要介绍该俱乐部并为其招募新成员。
Art Club
When to meet: every Wednesday afternoon Where to meet: Art Room What we do: ● learn painting skills (技能); ● hold an art show; ● visit art museums (美术馆)
要求：
1. 短文内容应包含题目所给的全部信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范；
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于50。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Hello, everyone! I’m Tony. Now let me introduce our art club to you.
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15．请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
假如你是七年级的学生李华，你的学校正在举办“My Dream Club”创意征集活动，欢迎每一位学生设计并推荐自己心中最理想的社团。请你根据下面的提示信息，用英语为你的“dream club”写一篇简短的介绍。
内容提示：
1. What is the name of your club
2. What activities are there in your club
3. Why do you want to start this club
要求：
1.包含所给信息，可适当发挥；
2.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.60词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Dream Club
Hello, I am Li Hua. I have a dream club. Its name is...
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16．假如你是李华，你远在美国的笔友Peter对你校丰富多彩的社团活动十分感兴趣，请你按下列提示结合你的实际，写一篇短文向他作一介绍。
提示：
1.我们学校有很多社团。它们是音乐社团、美术社团、英语社团等；
2.我参加了英语和数学社团。我认为英语有趣和有用；我擅长跟数字打交道，它似乎有魔力，真有趣；
3.我们每天放学后参加（take part in）不同的活动，老师对我们很热情。
要求：
1.不少于50词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.不能出现真实的校名和人名。
Our Clubs
We have many clubs in our school.
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We are happy because we have colourful activities after school.
17．假如你是李华，为更好地开展社团活动，你校学生会正在以“New Clubs, More Fun”为主题，针对七年级学生进行线上问卷调查。请你根据下面的问卷内容，用英语写一封邮件发给学生会。
1. What is your hobby □Read books □Collect stamps □Play basketball □Others ___________________ 2. What club do you want to join □Music club □Sports club □Reading club □Others ___________________ 3. Why do you want to join the club ___________________________________________________________ 4. What is your advice (建议) on club activities □Hold a talk □Have classes □Watch movies □Others ___________________
参考词汇：help sb. do, happy, fun, learn a lot, make new friends, …
要求：1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范；
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于50。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。）
Dear Students’ Union,
I’m glad to share my ideas about school clubs.
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Yours,
Li Hua
18．亲爱的同学，进入初中的第一个学期快结束了。假如你是李华，请根据以下思维导图中的提示信息，以“My School Life”为题写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下你进入初中后的美好生活吧。
要求：
1. 内容积极向上，不少于60词；
2. 征文须包含思维导图所有要点，可适当拓展；
3. 文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
Studying ·subjects/classes ·homework … My School Life Friends/Classmates ·name ·interest/hobby …
Activities ·clubs ·after-school activities Feelings ·colorful/interesting/busy …
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19．育才中学将举行以“学会生活”为主题的演讲比赛。假如你是参赛选手，请你根据以下表格中的信息，用英文写一篇演讲稿。
学会生活 Clothes 舒适的，适合不同场合的
Food 多吃水果蔬菜，少吃甜品
House 学会做家务，保持房间整洁
Hobbies ……
注意：
1.应包括表格中所有的信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和地名；
3.词数70左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)
Dear teachers and classmates,
Today, I want to talk about how to live happily and healthily.
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Thanks for your listening.
20．为了弘扬中国饮食，培养学生生活技能，学校准备这学期开设厨艺俱乐部。假如你是班长张华，请你根据写作要点提示及要求，写一封电子邮件给在你班就读的外籍交换生Mike，告诉他学校厨艺俱乐部的老师、活动时间地点和内容安排并邀请他加入。
写作要点：
1. Tell him things about the Cooking Club; (When; where; what and how... )
2. Ask him to join the club.
要求：
1. 邮件应包括所有写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 邮件不少于60词。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to tell you that our school wants to create “Cooking Club” this term!
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Bye for now. Please write back to me early!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
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参考答案及试题解析
1．例文
Dear Alice,
Thanks for your e-mail. You want to know how I keep healthy. I’m happy to tell you about my eating habits and sports.
I have good eating habits. For breakfast, I have eggs, milk and bread. For lunch, I eat chicken, carrots and rice. For dinner, I only eat vegetables and fruit salad. I also do sports every day. Tennis is my favorite sport, because it’s easy and fun for me. I often play tennis with my friends after school, and I also watch tennis games on TV.
What about you Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】写作步骤
第一步：审题立意
确定文体：电子邮件，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：饮食、运动
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
第二步：构思布局
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，引出话题
主体段：分别介绍饮食和运动方面的情况
结尾段：表达愿望，升华主题
第三步：要点展开
要点一：饮食
早餐：breakfast/have eggs/milk/bread等
午餐：lunch/eat chicken/carrots/rice/always/want等
晚餐：dinner/only/vegetables/fruit salad/good for my body等
要点二：运动
喜欢的运动：Tennis/favorite sport等
原因：easy/fun/interesting/help me stay healthy等
表现：often/play tennis with my friends/after school/also/watch tennis games on dTV/sometimes/matches等
2．范文
Dear all,
My name is Li Hua. I am interested in the Reading Club.
I am a quiet and patient boy. I love reading books very much in my free time. I want to join the club because I think reading is meaningful. It helps me learn about the world. I hope to make more friends with the same hobby. Also, I want to improve my reading skills and share ideas with others. I would be glad to recommend good books for club members if possible.
I hope to join the club soon!
【解析】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：邮件，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：介绍自身性格；说明加入社团的原因；讲述希望从社团收获什么
确定人称：第一人称为主
注意事项：70词左右，语句通顺，可适当扩展，书写工整卷面整洁
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：邮件称呼，自我介绍，点明想要加入的社团
主体段：介绍自身性格爱好，说明入团原因，讲述自己的期待与收获
结尾段：表达希望尽快加入社团的愿望
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：介绍自身情况与选定社团
范文表达：My name is Li Hua. I am interested in the Reading Club. I am a quiet and patient boy. I love reading books very much in my free time.
拓展表达：I’m Li Hua. I’d like to join the Reading Club. I’m a quiet person and reading is my favourite hobby in my spare time.
要点二：说明想要加入社团的原因
范文表达：I want to join the club because I think reading is meaningful. It helps me learn about the world.
拓展表达：I would like to be a member of this club, for reading opens up a whole new world for me and brings me lots of fun.
要点三：讲述希望从社团收获什么
范文表达：I hope to make more friends with the same hobby. Also, I want to improve my reading skills and share ideas with others.
拓展表达：I expect to meet book lovers here. I hope to get better at reading and exchange thoughts about different books with partners.
个人感想：讲述自己对社团的感想
范文表达：I would be glad to recommend good books for club members if possible.
拓展表达：I believe I can have a wonderful time in the reading club.
3．例文
This is me
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old. I was born in a small city in the south of China. I am tall and thin with short black hair and big eyes. I like reading and playing basketball in my free time. I often play basketball with my friends after school. I am friendly and outgoing. I am always ready to help others. I feel very happy at school. I really want to join the English club. I hope I can improve my English and make more friends there.
Thank you!
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文 (自我介绍信)，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：
姓名 (Name)
年龄 (Age)
出生地 (Birthplace)
外貌 (Looks)
爱好 (Hobbies)
性格 (Personalities)
在校感受 (Feeling at school)
确定人称：第一人称(I/my)
注意事项：不得出现真实信息；开头和结尾已给出；词数80左右，不包含已给出部分
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出部分，打招呼，引出自我介绍
主体段：
第一层：基本信息 (姓名、年龄、出生地)
第二层：外貌、爱好、性格
第三层：在校感受，并表示想加入俱乐部
结尾段：已给出，表达感谢
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：基本信息
My name is.../I am...years old./I was born in.../I come from.../I am a student in Grade...等
要点二：外貌
I am tall/short/thin/strong./I have short black hair and big eyes./I wear glasses./I have a round face and a sweet smile./I am of medium height.等
要点三：爱好
I like/enjoy/love.../My hobby is.../I am good at.../In my free time, I often.../I am interested in...等
要点四：性格
I am outgoing/friendly/kind/patient/humorous./I am always ready to help others./I am a little shy, but I am friendly./I like making friends./I never give up when facing difficulties.等
要点五：在校感受
I feel happy at school./I enjoy my school life./I have made many good friends here./My school life is colourful and meaningful./I love my school very much.等
要点六：想加入俱乐部
join/want to join/hope to join/be a member of/English club/improve my English/make more friends/try my best/be a good member/learn more/be interested in/I really want to join the English club./I hope to be a member of the English club./I am writing to apply to join the English club./I would like to join the club because I love English.等
4．例文
My school life is wonderful. My school is modern and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers. I am in the Music Club because I love singing. It makes me relaxed. In my daily life, I usually get to school at 7:30. I study hard and listen to the teachers carefully. After class, I often play sports with friends. I feel happy and fulfilled. I really enjoy my school life.
【解析】写作步骤
【第一步：审题立意】
确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：校园环境，校内活动，日常生活，整体感受等
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
【第二步：构思布局】
内容三层式结构：
第一层：概括校园生活感受
第二层：分别介绍校园环境、俱乐部活动和日常学习生活
第三层：总结感受，升华主题
【第三步：要点展开】
要点一：校园环境
特点描述：modern and beautiful/My school is not only modern but also beautiful.等
景物描写：many trees and flowers/different kinds of trees and flowers等
要点二：课外活动
俱乐部选择：the Music Club/the Art Club等
参加原因：love singing/love listening to music/love drawing pictures等
作用效果：It makes me relaxed./I always feel relaxed when I am in the club.等
要点三：日常学习生活
到校时间：get to school at 7:30/arrive at school at 7:30等
学习表现：study hard/listen to the teachers carefully/take notes and review after class等
课后活动：play sports with friends/play badminton with classmates等
作用效果：feel happy and fulfilled/have fun together等
要点四：总体感受
情感表达：enjoy my school life/like my school life a lot等
5．Dear Tom,
I’m glad to get your letter! I’m also excited about the Culture Show. It will be held on the school playground this Friday afternoon. I’m sure it would be a great show. I am in the Chinese Calligraphy Club. And I think paper cutting is the most fun for you because it’s a beautiful Chinese traditional art and very easy to try. You can make wonderful pictures with red paper. I promise you would enjoy it.
I can’t wait to see you at the show. See you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】一、审题立意
文体：电子邮件/回信，以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。
内容要点：必须回答Tom邮件中的三个核心问题——文化展在哪里举行；你加入了什么社团；你认为对Tom来说最有趣的活动是什么。
人称：第一人称（I, my）。
注意事项：未出现真实校名和人名，符合要求。
二、构思布局
例文采用三段式结构：
开头段：表达收到来信的喜悦和对文化展的期待。
主体段：告知文化展的时间和地点。介绍自己所在的社团。推荐Tom体验剪纸，并说明理由。
结尾段：表达期待见面。
三、要点对照
要点一：文化展地点
It will be held on the school playground this Friday afternoon.
拓展：
school hall；art room；library square
要点二：个人社团
I am in the Chinese Calligraphy Club.
拓展：
Paper Cutting Club；Peking Opera Club；Tea Art Club
要点三：最有趣的活动
I think paper cutting is the most fun for you…
拓展：
making dumplings；painting Peking Opera masks；tea ceremony
要点四：理由
because it’s a beautiful Chinese traditional art and very easy to try.
拓展：
can take it home；interesting and meaningful；experience Chinese culture
6．Dear
Bill,
I’m really interested in your club and I want to be a member of your club.
My name is Li Hua. English and music are my favorite subjects because they are fun and useful. I can tell stories and act them out well. I have lots of time for club activities. Besides, I am good at playing the guitar.
My dream is to be an actor. I hope I can join you soon.
Best,
Li Hua
【解析】写作步骤：
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：申请信，一般现在时为主
明确要点：自我介绍与擅长的能力、爱好学科、个人梦想、入会愿望
确定人称：第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项：语言简洁，表达入会意愿
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：表明想加入俱乐部
主体段：介绍喜欢的学科、自身特长
结尾段：讲述个人梦想，表达希望加入的愿望
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：表明入会意愿
意愿表达：interested in your club/want to be a member/would like to join your club/hope to become one of you等
要点二：个人学科与特长
特长表达：favorite subjects/fun and useful/tell stories/act them out/play the guitar/love these subjects/enjoy learning them/perform stories/play musical instruments等
要点三：梦想与期待
期待表达：dream to be an actor/hope I can join you soon/my future goal is to be an actor/look forward to joining the club等
7．例文：
My New School Life
I am a 12-year-old Grade 7 student. I am slim and wear glasses. I am friendly and always ready to help others.
I love reading because I can learn a lot from books. I also like running to keep healthy. I join the Reading Club and we share great books every week.
I feel happy with my new teachers and classmates. I hope to make more friends and make great progress this term.
【解析】【第写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：简单自我介绍（年龄、外貌、性格）、兴趣爱好及原因、加入的学校俱乐部及活动、新学期感受和期望
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不得透露真实人名、校名和地名，词数控制在70左右
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：完成基础自我介绍，交代年龄、外貌与性格特点
主体段：依次介绍兴趣爱好及原因、加入的俱乐部和日常活动
结尾段：表达新学期的真实感受，点明自己的成长期望
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：简单自我介绍
年龄外貌性格：12-year-old Grade 7 student, slim and wear glasses, friendly and always ready to help others/13-year-old student, tall and have big eyes, outgoing and easy to get along with等
要点二：兴趣爱好及原因
爱好内容：love reading because I can learn a lot from books, like running to keep healthy/love drawing because it makes me relaxed, like singing to show my ideas等
要点三：学校俱乐部及活动
俱乐部与活动：join the Reading Club and we share great books every week/join the Sports Club and we play ball games every Friday, join the Art Club and we draw pictures in the art room等
要点四：新学期感受和期望
感受与期望：feel happy with my new teachers and classmates, hope to make more friends and make great progress this term/feel excited about the new term, hope to try new things and get better grades等
8．范文：
Dear Mr. Hu,
I want to recommend Wu Gang for “The Role Model Around Us”. Wu Gang is 13 years old. He is tall and strong. He has many hobbies. He likes sports and he often plays football in his free time.
Wu Gang is polite. He always greets his classmates and teachers when they meet. He is kind as well. He is nice to everyone and cares about old people. He is also smart. He does well in all the subjects. Besides, he is helpful. He is always ready to help his classmates with their problems after school. Everybody around likes him very much. He sets a good example for us.
I think Wu Gang is a great role model. I hope he can get the award.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文推荐信，以一般现在时为主，用具体日常小事支撑推荐理由
明确要点：介绍吴刚的基本年龄外形爱好、分别用具体事例体现他的礼貌、善良、聪明、乐于助人的品质、总结他作为榜样的意义
确定人称：第三人称（he/his）为主，以第一人称（I/my）的推荐视角串联全文
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名等隐私信息，所有事例贴合普通校园生活场景，词数控制在80词左右
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：承接题目给出的总起句，完整介绍吴刚的年龄、外形与爱好
主体段：依次用具体小事对应四个品质要点，自然串联内容，补充一句大家对他的评价
结尾段：沿用题目给出的收尾句，点明吴刚是值得大家学习的好榜样
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：吴刚的基本情况
年龄外形：13 years old / tall and strong
兴趣爱好：loves sports / he plays football in his free time等
要点二：礼貌与善良的具体事例
礼貌表现：always says hello to every teacher he meets / never talks loudly in the library等
善良表现：often shares his snacks with classmates / he helps the old man carry things on his way home等
要点三：聪慧与乐于助人的具体事例
聪慧表现：good at all his lessons / he always comes up with new ideas in group work等
乐于助人表现：helps me with my math homework every week / he fixes broken stationery for classmates for free等
要点四：收尾补充
他人评价：all our classmates like him very much等
榜样意义：he sets a warm and good example for all of us等
9．例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Ming, a 13-year-old boy from Class 1, Grade 7. I want to join the English Reading Club. I’m interested in reading books because reading can open my mind. I often spend lots of time reading in the school library. In my free time, I love to act out English stories with my family at home. It’s really fun. I’d like to make more friends in the club. I’m sure we can have fun together and learn from each other.
Can I join the club
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文（申请信），以一般现在时为主
明确要点：基本信息已给出，需重点展开兴趣爱好和加入理由
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数为60左右（不包括已给出词数）
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构： 开头段：问候并介绍自己，表明写信目的（想加入英语读书社团）
主体段：介绍兴趣爱好（爱读书、读英文书、表演英文故事），说明加入理由（提高英语水平、结交朋友）
结尾段：再次表达加入愿望，礼貌收尾
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：基本信息
身份介绍：a 13-year-old boy/from Class 1, Grade 7/a student of.../be in Grade...等
写信目的：want to join the English Reading Club/write to you to join/would like to be a member of...等
要点二：兴趣爱好
爱好内容：am interested in reading books/read fast/act out English stories/read English novels/be fond of等
具体表现：open my mind/spend lots of time reading/in my free time/at home/enjoy reading等
要点三：加入理由
提升自我：improve my English level/read English books/enrich my knowledge/broaden my horizons等
结交朋友：make more friends/learn a lot from each other/have fun together/help each other等
10．例文
Hello! My name is Li Ming, a student from Sunshine Middle School. I am a 13-year-old boy with short hair and bright eyes. I am outgoing and friendly, so I have many good friends at school. In my free time, I enjoy reading English books and playing basketball with my classmates. My school life is busy but meaningful. I work hard at all subjects, especially English. My dream is to be an excellent English teacher in the future. I believe that joining the English Speech Club can help me make progress and improve my speaking skills. I really hope to become a member of your club.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文（演讲稿） ，一般现在时
明确要点：个人信息（外貌、性格）；爱好；学校生活；个人梦想
确定人称：第一人称 (I)
注意事项：需包含全部提示要点，开头已给出，词数90左右，文中不能出现真实人名、校名和地名
[第二步：构思布局]
一段式结构：
开头：已给出，自我介绍
主体：第一部分介绍外貌与性格；第二部分介绍个人爱好；第三部分介绍学校生活；第四部分介绍个人梦想
结尾：表达加入英语演讲俱乐部的愿望
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：个人信息（外貌、性格）
外貌描述：I am a 13 year old boy with short hair and bright eyes/I have short hair and bright big eyes等
性格描述：I am outgoing and friendly/I am outgoing and easy going等
要点二：爱好
爱好表达：I enjoy reading English books and playing basketball with my classmates/I like reading English books and playing basketball with classmates等
要点三：学校生活
校园感受：My school life is busy but meaningful/My school life is busy but wonderful等
学习表现：I work hard at all subjects, especially English/I study hard in every subject and I like English best等
要点四：个人梦想
梦想表达：My dream is to be an excellent English teacher in the future/I hope to become a great English teacher later等
入会想法：I believe that joining the English Speech Club can help me make progress and improve my speaking skills/I think joining the club can help me improve my spoken English and make great progress等
要点五：结尾愿望
申请表达：I really hope to become a member of your club/I really hope I can join your club等
11．范文
Dear Lucy,
I’m so happy to write a letter to you.
Now let me introduce my new school and life to you. I’m Li Ping, a 13-year-old student in Class 5, Grade 7. My school is big and beautiful. There are three classroom buildings, a dining hall, a library and a playground. We have many subjects, such as Chinese, Math, English and Science. I like English best. After school, I join my favorite clubs.
I hope to study hard and make more friends here. I also wish to have a happy school life. What about your school
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：电子邮件/书信，以一般现在时为主。
明确要点：基本信息；学校设施；学习科目；课后生活；愿望。
确定人称：第一人称（I/my）。
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；注意书信格式完整。
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：书信首句。
主体段：依次介绍基本信息、学校设施、学习科目和课后生活。
结尾段：表达个人愿望，并以反问句询问对方学校情况，增强互动性。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：基本信息与学校设施
基本信息：a 13-year-old boy/a boy of 13/study in Class 5, Grade 7等
学校总体描述：modern and clean/large and bright/not very big but beautiful等
设施列举句型：There are three classroom buildings…/Our school has a big dining hall…等
位置描述：next to the teaching building/in front of the library/behind the playground等
场所活动：read books in the library/play basketball on the playground/have lunch in the dining hall等
要点二：学习科目与课后生活
学科列举：Chinese, Math, English, Science, History, Geography, Art, Music, P.E.等
喜爱表达：My favorite subject is English./I like English best./I’m interested in…等
原因说明：because it is interesting/because the teacher is kind/because it is useful等
课后活动：join my favorite clubs/play sports/do after-school activities/read books等
效果评价：It helps me learn a lot./It makes me relaxed and happy.等
要点三：愿望与书信结尾
愿望表达：I hope to study hard./I want to make more friends./I wish to have a happy school life.等
结尾互动：What about your school /How is your school life 等
书信格式：Best wishes!/Yours, Li Ping等
12．My name is Flora. I study in a beautiful school with a big library and a modern playground.
My favourite subject is English because it is very interesting and useful for communication. I also join the music club. I like singing songs there with my friends. It makes me feel relaxed and happy. In the future, I want to be an English teacher. I hope to help students learn knowledge and love learning.
I will study hard to make my dream come true.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：英语介绍短文，开头My name is Flora已给出不计入总词数
明确要点：①介绍学校样貌；②最喜欢的科目、俱乐部及对应理由；③未来想要从事的工作；词数不少于60词，禁止出现真实人名、校名、地名，行文连贯可适当发挥
确定人称：第一人称，主体时态采用一般现在时
注意事项：包括所有写作要点，不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息
[第二步：构思布局]
开头：沿用给定开头，简单引出就读的学校
主体：描写校园环境设施，展现学校整体风貌；第二层写明喜爱的科目，阐释缘由，介绍加入的俱乐部与日常活动
结尾：讲述自己未来的职业理想，表明会刻苦学习去实现目标
[第三步：要点词汇]
要点一：描述校园环境
beautiful/big library/modern playground/tidy/bright classrooms/green trees等
要点二：喜爱科目与俱乐部+理由
interesting/useful/communicate/relaxed/meaningful/learn foreign cultures/take part in activities等
要点三：未来理想职业
English teacher/study hard/realize dream/educate students/stick to goals/achieve ambition等
13．One Possible Version:
Lin Hui is a member of the cooking club. He goes to the club on Monday and Friday. He joins this club because he is interested in cooking. And he thinks he can help cook at home after he learns to cook.
In the club, he learns many different things. He learns to make jiaozi, and he also learns how to cook different kinds of vegetables and meat.
Lin Hui has a great time in the club.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：新闻报道，时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点：以校英文报记者视角，介绍林辉加入烹饪俱乐部的原因、在俱乐部学到的内容，适度补充细节拓展
确定人称：第三人称客观介绍人物情况
注意事项：覆盖题干全部提示信息，规避真实校名地名，词数控制在60词左右，给定开头不计入总词数
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：依托给定开篇语句，点明林辉烹饪俱乐部成员身份，交代参与俱乐部的频次与入社原因
主体段：围绕俱乐部学习经历展开，介绍掌握包饺子及各类荤素菜品烹饪的相关技能
结尾段：说明林辉在俱乐部的整体体验感受
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：加入俱乐部的缘由
兴趣动因：interested in cooking /has strong passion for cooking等
额外动因：can help cook at home after he learns to cook/wants to improve daily cooking skills for family等
要点二：俱乐部所学内容
核心技能：make jiaozi/master the steps of making jiaozi等
拓展技能：cook different kinds of vegetables and meat/prepare various home style dishes等
要点三：补充细节与收尾
体验感受：has a great time in the club/enjoys the warm learning atmosphere there等
14．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Tony. Now let me introduce our art club to you.
Our club is a wonderful place for painting lovers. We meet every Wednesday afternoon in the Art Room. At the club, we can learn different painting skills. We also hold an art show at school to show our works. On weekends, we go to visit art museums.
If you are interested in art, come and join us! You will love it here.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：发言稿，一般现在时为主
明确要点：集会时间，集会地点，俱乐部活动，招揽新成员
确定人称：第一人称和第二人称
注意事项：短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：自我介绍，引出介绍美术俱乐部
主体段：依次介绍集合时间、集合地点、日常俱乐部活动，并适当拓展
结尾段：发出邀请，呼吁感兴趣的同学加入俱乐部
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：集会时间和地点
时间：every Wednesday afternoon/on Wednesday afternoons等
地点：meet...in the Art Room/gather together in the Art Room等
要点二：俱乐部活动
learn different painting skills/ hold an art show/show our works/visit art museums/display our art works/enjoy artistic works/improve our painting ability等
要点三：招募邀请
be interested in art/come and join us/become a member of us/join in our big family等
15．例文
My Dream Club
Hello, I am Li Hua. I have a dream club. Its name is “Fun English Club”.
In my club, we can do many fun things. We can sing English songs and play English word games. Sometimes, we can watch nice English films, too.
I like English because it is interesting and useful. I want to start this club because it can help us learn English in a happy way and help us learn about the world.
Welcome to my “Fun English Club”.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：校园征文介绍短文，时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点：1.社团名称；2.社团开展的活动；3.创办社团的原因
确定人称：第一人称I（Li Hua）
注意事项：覆盖全部三个提示，语句简单贴合七年级水平
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：承接给定开头，直接点明梦想社团名称
主体段：列举社团内丰富有趣的特色活动
结尾段：说明创办社团的初衷与意义，简单发出邀请
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：社团名称
名称选择：Fun English Club/Reading Club/Sports Club/Art Group等
要点二：社团特色活动
活动选择：sing English songs/play word games/watch English films/read storybooks/perform short plays等
要点三：创办社团的缘由
原因选择：learn about the world/know more about the world/make new friends/improve oral skills/develop cultural insight等
16．例文：
Our Clubs
We have many clubs in our school. They are the music club, the art club, the English club and so on.
I am in the English and maths clubs. I like English and I think it is interesting and useful. And I am good with numbers. It feels like magic and is really fun. We take part in different activities in the club every day after school. The teachers are very friendly to us.
We are happy because we have colourful activities after school.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文，介绍校园社团，全文以一般现在时为主
明确要点：①学校拥有多种社团；②自己参加的社团以及想法；③放学后参与活动，老师十分热情；
注意事项：保证覆盖全部三条提示要点，首尾句子已给出不计入总词数，词数不少于50词，语句通顺，可适当拓展无需出现真实人名、校名
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起介绍学校有许多社团，对应要点 1（固定句给出）
主体段：介绍自身参加的社团、想法以及课后社团活动、老师情况，对应要点 2、要点 3
结尾段：抒发感受，收束全文（固定句给出）
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：学校各类社团
核心表达：We have many clubs in our school. They are the music club, the art club, the English club and so on.
配套拓展词汇：club member/colourful activities/interest group等
要点二：参与社团与个人想法
核心表达：I am in the English and maths clubs. I think English is interesting and useful. I am good with numbers. It feels like magic and it is really fun.
配套拓展词汇：learn new skills/make friends/open up our minds等
要点三：课后社团活动与老师
核心表达：We take part in different activities every day after school. The teachers are very friendly to us.
配套拓展词汇：take part in competitions/share ideas/learn from each other等
17．参考范文：
Dear Students’ Union,
I’m glad to share my ideas about school clubs.
My hobby is reading books. I want to join the reading club because it can help me read more interesting stories and share good books with friends. I think reading makes me happy and smart. I can also make new friends. My advice for club activities is to hold talks about books and sometimes watch movies about the stories. This will make the club more fun and I will learn a lot. I hope we can have classes to learn how to choose good books, too.
Hope my advice will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体： 英文电子邮件（应用文）；一般现在时态为主，结尾可以用一般将来时态
明确要点： ① 个人爱好；② 想要加入的社团；③ 加入该社团的原因；④ 对社团活动的建议；字数≥50 词，使用参考词汇，不出现真实个人信息
确定人称： 第一人称I
注意事项： 语句通顺无语法错误，紧扣问卷四个问题，书信格式完整，可适当拓展内容，套用给定参考词help sb. do, happy, fun, learn a lot, make new friends
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段： 套用题目给出的固定开头句，表明写信目的——分享自己对于学校社团的看法
主体段： 分两层写，第一层介绍爱好、意向社团及加入理由；第二层提出对社团活动的具体建议
结尾段： 简单收尾，表达期待
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一： 爱好+意向社团+加入原因
My hobby is reading books. I want to join the reading club because it can help me read more interesting stories and share good books with friends. I think reading makes me happy and smart. I can also make new friends./My hobby is reading books. I’d like to become a member of the reading club. It can help me learn a lot from different books and make new friends who love reading. Reading always keeps me happy and helps me become smarter.等
要点二：社团活动建议
My advice for club activities is to hold talks about books and sometimes watch movies about the stories. This will make the club more fun and I will learn a lot. I also hope we can have classes to learn how to choose good books, too./I have some suggestions for club activities. We can hold book-sharing talks and watch movie adaptations of classic stories in our free time. These activities will make the club full of fun. Besides, we can also take lessons to learn the skills of picking wonderful books.等
18．例文
My School Life
My junior high school life is wonderful.
I have many subjects like English and math. They are very interesting. I finish my homework carefully every day. I have a good friend named Tom. He loves playing basketball. We often play together after class. I join the music club. After-school activities make me relaxed.
Although I am busy, my life is colorful and interesting. I love my school life very much.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍类说明文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：学习科目与作业、社团及课后活动、好友信息与爱好、自身校园感受
确定人称：第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项：全文不少于60词；禁止出现真实人名、校名
[第二步：构思布局]
一段式结构：
开篇总起：用中心句总述初中校园生活十分美好
中间主体：学习科目、日常作业；好友姓名、爱好与课余相伴时光；参与的社团、课后活动带来的放松体验
末尾收束：概括校园忙碌但多彩有趣，抒发对校园生活的热爱
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：学习方面
罗列学科：English/P.E./art/music/history/geography/biology/science等
评价学科：interesting/fun/useful/easy/lively/helpful/attractive/meaningful等
作业情况：finish my homework carefully/on time/step by step/with patience/with my best effort等
要点二：交友方面
介绍好友：good friend/close friend/deskmate/classmate/best friend/partner等
好友爱好：playing basketball/playing football/reading books/drawing pictures/running/listening to music/playing badminton/dancing等
相处日常：play together/do homework together/share interesting stories/walk home together/take part in games/help each other/talk about hobbies/practise sports等
要点三：课外活动
参与社团：music club/sports club/art club/reading club/English club/dancing club/chess club/running club/handcraft club等
活动感受：relaxed/happy/energetic/pleased/comfortable/joyful/refreshed/light-hearted等
要点四：校园感受
具体说明：colorful and interesting/wonderful/lively/unforgettable/great/full of joy/warm/fantastic等
19．例文：
Dear teachers and classmates,
Today, I want to talk about how to live happily and healthily.
First, we should wear comfortable clothes, and the clothes must be suitable for different occasions. Next, we should eat lots of vegetables and fruit. We should eat less sweet food because it’s bad for our teeth. Then, we should learn to do housework and keep our rooms tidy. Last, we should have a hobby to relax our bodies and minds.
All in all, it’s important for us to live a healthy life.
Thanks for your listening.
【解析】写作步骤：
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：穿着选择、饮食习惯、居家家务、兴趣爱好四大生活要点，分享健康快乐生活方式
确定人称：第一人称 (we/us/our)
注意事项：不得出现真实人名和地名，主体段落词数控制在70词左右，开头结尾不计入词数
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：已给出固定开篇，点明演讲主题——如何健康快乐生活
主体段：分四点依次介绍衣着、饮食、家务、爱好四个生活板块，逐条说明做法
结尾段：简短总结健康生活的重要意义，衔接给定收尾句
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：衣着
we should wear comfortable clothes, and the clothes must be suitable for different occasions./We need to choose soft clothes and match clothes well for different cases.等
要点二：饮食
we should eat lots of vegetables and fruit./We should eat less sweet food because it’s bad for our teeth./We eat plenty of fresh fruit and vegetables and cut down sweet snacks.等
要点三：家务
we should learn to do housework and keep our rooms tidy./It helps us to keep a good mood./We can learn to finish housework and make our bedrooms clean every day./Tidy rooms bring us comfort and keep us happy all day.等
要点四：爱好
we should have a hobby to relax our bodies and minds./We can develop hobbies such as reading or running to relax ourselves./Hobbies reduce tiredness and make our life colorful.等
20．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to tell you that our school wants to create “Cooking Club” this term!
We will have club activities every Friday afternoon in the school cooking room. A professional cooking teacher will guide us patiently. We will learn to cook tasty Chinese dishes. Taking part in these lessons helps us develop useful life skills. I hope you can join us. You are able to taste delicious food and experience traditional Chinese cooking culture here.
Bye for now. Please write back to me early!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：电子邮件，以一般将来时、一般现在时为主
明确要点：①介绍厨艺俱乐部信息（When; where; what and how）；②发出入社邀请
确定人称：第一人称（I/we）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：引出学校新开设厨艺俱乐部
主体段：详细介绍俱乐部时间、地点、课程内容
结尾段：发出邀请，期待对方回复
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：介绍厨艺俱乐部
活动时间：every Friday afternoon/after school/half past four p.m. 等
活动地点：school cooking room/school dining hall/school practice kitchen等
授课老师：professional cooking teacher/Chinese cuisine teacher/experienced food instructor等
活动内容：learn to cook Chinese dishes/know food culture/practice cooking skills等
活动意义：develop life skills/know Chinese food culture/make new friends等
要点二：邀请Mike加入
邀约表达：hope you can join us/welcome you to take part/would like to invite you等
吸引理由：taste delicious food/learn simple Chinese recipes/share cooking experience等
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