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2026-2027学年八年级英语上册单元复习考点培优沪教版（五四学制）
（新教材）Unit 2 Digital life
专题19 书面表达
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
1．为了了解学生使用智能手机的习惯及对智能手机的看法，你校进行了问卷调查，下图是调查结果。请你根据以下图表信息提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍同学们的使用习惯，并阐述智能手机的优势和弊端。
Results 35% learn online
30% play games and watch videos
25% chat with friends
10% shop online
Opinions benefits 1. search for information
2. …
disadvantages (弊端) 1. waste time
2. …
注意：
1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
To know students’ habits of using smartphones, our school did a survey about what they mostly use smartphones to do and their opinions about smartphones. Here are the results.
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2．你校英文报下期征稿的主题为“做一个好网民 (Being a Good Netizen)”。请根据以下征稿启事写一篇短文投稿。
Articles Wanted: Being a Good Netizen
Your article should include: 1. What is your understanding of a good netizen 2. Why do you think it is important to be a good netizen 3. What would you advise students to do to be a good netizen
参考词汇： cyberbullying (网络欺凌); cause arguments (引起争论); spread untrue information (传播不实信息)
注意：
1.短文需包含征稿要求的三点内容，并可适当拓展信息；
2.写作词数100词左右；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Being a Good Netizen
In my opinion, a good netizen is someone who uses the Internet wisely and responsibly.
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3．假定你是李华，学校将举行主题为“The Internet is useful in our daily lives”的英语演讲比赛。请写一篇演讲稿参加比赛。内容包括：
1. 提出主题并说明原因；2. 详细阐述网络的用途；3. 发出好好利用网络的号召。
注意：
(1) 词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3) 文章中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Good afternoon, everyone,
I’m so glad to stand here and give my speech. My name is Li Hua. The topic of my speech is “The Internet is useful in our daily lives”.
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That’s all! Thanks for your attention.
4．近年来，电脑成了我们生活的一个重要部分，甚至和我们的学习生活息息相关，某校英文杂志社开辟中学生专栏，请你以“The greatest invention—the computer”为题写篇短文，为该杂志社投稿。
要点：
1.电脑的用途，包括：可以学习、上网查资料；可以听音乐、看电影使自己放松；可以发送邮件与别人保持联系
2.电脑的缺点：长时间使用伤害视力；浪费时间
3.你对使用电脑的看法……
要求：
1.词数不少于80 (文章开头已给出；不计入总词数)；
2.短文必须包括所给的内容，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.文中不许出现真实的班级和姓名。
参考词汇：keep in touch with保持联系；harm one’s eyesight伤害视力；waste time浪费时间
The greatest invention—the computer
In modern society, we can not imagine living in a world without computers.
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5．数字无处不在：每天我们花多少时间上网？班级里有多少同学喜欢阅读？一次考试的平均分是多少？这些数字背后往往隐藏着重要信息。请以“What Do the Numbers Tell Us ”为题，结合你熟悉的一组真实或假设的数据(如手机使用时间、睡眠时长、课外阅读量等)，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。内容需包括：
1. 描述一组具体数据；
2. 分析这些数据反映的问题或趋势；
3. 提出你的建议或思考。
要求：逻辑清晰，语言准确，避免简单罗列数字。
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6．假设你是李华，你的学校上周举办了一场以“保护地球，从我做起”为主题的环保活动。你的笔友Mike对此很感兴趣。请你结合以下提示，用英语给他写一封信，介绍这次活动的内容以及你的感受。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
提示：
1. 活动时间：上周六上午；
2. 活动地点：学校附近的公园；
3. 活动内容：清理垃圾、种植树木、制作环保海报；
4. 你的感受：……（至少两点）
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you are interested in the environmental activity in our school.
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What do you think of this activity I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．现在是高科技时代，智能手机的出现让我们的生活发生很大的改变，请根据下面的要点提示，以“The Smart Phones in My Eyes”为题，写一篇英语文章，谈谈智能手机对我们生活的影响，并表达自己的观点。
要点提示：
Advantages（优点）：查找信息；听音乐；看电影；与朋友交流……
Disadvantages（缺点）：对眼睛有害；沉迷于游戏(be crazy about...)；与家人产生矛盾(have a problem with...)……
Your ideas:……（至少两点）：如：手机很有用但应该正确使用；做有意义的(meaningful)事情；控制时间……
要求：
1．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2．文章内容需包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
3．80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Smart Phones in My Eyes
The smart phones are one of the most important inventions in the world. They change our lives greatly.
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8．如今。几乎每家每户都有电脑、网络。越来越多的学生也喜欢上网。针对这一情况。你发表了一篇演讲。你认为上网既有优点又有缺点。同学们要想办法阻止自己花太多时间在上网这件事上。
主要内容：
1. 好处：帮助我们学生学习 (自行添加一个好处) ：
2. 弊端：长时间上网对学生健康有害 (自行添加一个弊端) ；
3. 建议：找到更多的兴趣爱好而不是沉迷于网游 (自行添加一到两个建议) 。
要求：用词恰当, 内容连贯, 层次清晰, 书写规范。内容不少于80字。开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总字数。文中不得出现姓名和学校等真实信息。
参考词汇：be addicted to (doing) sth. 沉迷于
Hello, my name is Li Hua. Thank you for listening to my speech. Nowadays, almost every family has computers and the Internet. And more and more middle school students are interested in surfing the Internet.
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9．假如你是李华，你的学校正在举办“Future Dream”主题征文比赛。请你写一篇英语短文参加比赛，介绍你未来想从事的职业，并说明理由。
内容包括：
1. 你想从事的职业是什么；
2. 你选择这个职业的三个理由（如：兴趣爱好、能力特长、社会价值等）；
3. 你打算如何为实现梦想做准备。
要求：
1. 词数130词左右；
2. 包含所有要点，语句通顺，语法正确；
3. 至少使用3个本单元词汇（如：achieve, challenge, patient, creative, responsible, effort等）；
4. 请勿透露真实姓名和学校信息。
参考结构：
- 开头：直接说出你的梦想职业
- 主体：分点说明理由（使用first, second, third等连接词）
- 结尾：说明你的计划并表达决心
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10．现在是高科技时代，智能手机的出现让我们的生活发生很大的变化，请根据下面的要点提示，以“Smartphones in My Eyes”为题，写一篇英语文章，谈谈智能手机对我们生活产生的利弊影响，并就如何正确使用手机表达自己的观点。
要点提示：
优点：look for information, watch short videos, order food, find places. . .
缺点：be bad for our eyes, get lost in games, . . .
要求：
1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2. 文章内容需包括以上要点，可适当发挥；
3. 90-100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Smartphones in My Eyes
The smartphone is one of the most important inventions in the world. It has changed people’s life greatly.
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11．随着互联网的发展，网络在我们的生活中变得越来越重要。但网络给我们的生活带来巨大便利的同时，也引发了一些问题，请你以“The Internet”为题,谈谈网络的利与弊。优点advantages：1.可以与远方的朋友通过网络联系；2.在家“逛商店”，买东西；3.方便看电影，听音乐，查找资料等
缺点disadvantages：1.网上交友不安全；2.网上购物不能亲眼看到商品，难以保证好坏；3.花费太多时间玩网络游戏等
总结：网络让我们的生活更有趣、更方便，但我们要正确使用网络。
要求：1. 覆盖所有要点提示，不用逐词翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，条理清楚，书写规范。70词左右。
The Internet
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12．校园英语报征集题为“我与互联网”主题征文活动，请根据以下提示写一篇短文表达你的观点。
要求：
1. 词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 包含提示中的要点，可适当发挥；
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。
Nowadays the Internet becomes an important part in our lives.
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13．我们的生活离不开科技，数字技术给我们的生活带来了巨大的影响。 你们班举行了辩论赛“Is digital life good or bad for us ”同学们唇枪舌剑，充分阐述了数字生活的利与弊，并讨论了如何合理使用手机等数字产品，约定了使用手机的规则。请围绕“Digital Technology Around Us”为题目写一篇80左右的短文，内容包含：
要求:
(1)要点齐全，注意不用逐句翻译，可适当发挥。
(2)表达清楚，语句通顺，书写规范，不能出现真实的人名和班级信息；
(3)不少于80词，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词汇：eyesight n.视力 focus on集中注意力 limit n.限制
Digital Technology Around Us
We can’t live without technology. Digital technology has a great effect on our daily lives.
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14．如今，数字技术无处不在，在我们的生活中发挥着重要的作用。智能手机 (mobile phones)， 互联网 (Internet)，移动支付 (mobile payment)，共享单车 (shared bikes) 等应用带给我们的生活带来了方便快捷，同时也带来了一些问题。
请以“How to live a wise digital life”为题，写一篇英语短文，内容包括：
1. 介绍数字技术给我们的生活带来的便捷与影响；
2. 指出不合理使用带来的问题 (如沉迷电子产品、影响学习或健康等)；
3. 使用时应注意遵守的规则。
要求：
1. 至少描述要点齐全，可适当增加内容；
2. 表达清晰，语句通顺，书写规范，不能出现真实的人名和学校信息。
3.80-100词，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays, digital life plays an important part in our life.
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15．假如你是李华，你们学校英语社团正在开展以“Use the Internet Properly”为题的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文，参加此次活动。
Advantages provide rich resources (资源); help us relax; make communication easier
Disadvantages bad for eyes; waste time; dangerous
Your idea …
要求：1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，可适当发挥；
2. 语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范；
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：70词左右。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Use the Internet Properly
Internet is playing an important role in our lives now.
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16．近年来，电脑成了我们生活的一个重要部分，甚至和我们的学习生活息息相关，某校英文杂志社开辟中学生专栏，请你以“The greatest invention--the computer”为题写篇短文，为该杂志社投稿。
内容包括：
the usage（使用）of a computer study online search for information make friends with people all around the world …
your experience (经历) and feelings of using a computer …
proper (合理的) ways of using a computer plan time stay away from unhealthy websites …
要求：
1. 词数不少于80 (文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 短文必须包括所给的内容，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3. 文中不许出现真实的班级和姓名。
The greatest invention-the computer
In modern society, we cannot imagine living in a world without computers.
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17．假设你是李梅，你的英国笔友Tom来信询问你对线上学习的看法。请你根据以下提示给他写一封回信，谈谈你对线上学习的看法。
提示：
1. 线上学习的优点（如：方便、灵活、资源丰富等）；
2. 线上学习的缺点（如：缺乏互动、容易分心等）；
3. 你自己的观点。
要求：
4. 词数80-100左右；
5. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
6. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked about my views on online learning. Now I’d like to share my thoughts with you.
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18．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Emily来信询问你对线上学习的看法。请你根据以下提示给她写一封回信，分享你的观点。
提示：
1. 线上学习的优点 (如：时间灵活、资源丰富、可以反复观看课程等)；
2. 线上学习的缺点 (如：缺乏面对面交流、容易分心、伤眼睛等)；
3. 你的建议 (如：合理安排时间、做好笔记、适当休息等)；
4. 你的总体看法。
要求：
1. 词数：100-120词；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
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19．随着科技的发展，数字化技术已经成为我们日常生活的重要部分。然而，数字化技术也有利弊。
试以“Digital technology and our life”为题。根据以下要点和要求。 谈一谈 digital technology 对我们生活的影响要点：
(1)数字化科技对我们生活的影响。
(2)数字化科技的优缺点。
(3)你的观点或打算。
要求：
(1)不少于80词。
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
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20．人工智能正在悄然改变我们的学习方式。假定你是李华，你的学校计划做一期相关主题的演讲比赛，题为“How AI changes the way we study”。请你根据以下要点，并结合你的观点，完成一份演讲稿。
AI辅助学习带来的优点 ①免费家庭教师 ②……
过度依赖AI可能产生的问题 ①…… ②……
你的看法 ①……
参考词汇：家庭教师tutor 工具tool
要求：1. 词数为80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
How AI changes the way we study
AI has become one of the most important learning tools in our daily lives,
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参考答案及试题解析
1． 例文：
According to the survey, 35% of students use phones to learn online, while 30% play games and watch videos. Besides, 25% chat with friends and 10% shop online.
Regarding opinions, smartphones help us search for information quickly. We can also stay in touch with faraway friends anytime. However, they also bring problems. Spending too much time on phones wastes time and it is bad for our eyes.
In a word, it is important for us to use smartphones wisely.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：说明文
明确要点：学生使用智能手机的目的，学生使用智能手机的好处以及弊端
确定人称：第三人称为主（they）
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称，词数80词左右
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：学生使用智能手机的目的，给出比例
主体段：学生使用智能手机的好处和弊端
结尾段：总结，学生应当合理地使用智能手机
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：
学生使用智能手机的方式：learn online/play games and watch videos/chat with friends/shop online等
要点二：
学生使用智能手机的好处：search for information/make new friends online等
学生使用智能手机的弊端：waste time/is bad for our eyes/safety problems等
要点三：
学生正确使用智能手机的方式：use smartphones wisely/time limit等
2．例文：
Being a Good Netizen
In my opinion, a good netizen is someone who uses the Internet wisely and responsibly. Instead of spreading untrue information or causing arguments, they respect others and think twice before posting.
It is important to be a good netizen because the Internet connects us all. Cyberbullying and false news can hurt people deeply and even cause real harm. A positive online environment, however, helps everyone learn and grow safely.
Therefore, I advise students to follow three simple rules: never post personal information about others, always check facts before sharing, and be kind in every comment. If we all try our best, the Internet will become a much better place for everyone.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：投稿类议论文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：对好网民的理解、做好网民的重要性、给学生的具体建议
确定人称：第一人称（I/we）
注意事项：不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：开篇点明自己对好网民的核心理解
主体段：阐述成为好网民的重要性，说明不良网络行为的危害
结尾段：给出具体可行的建议，发出正向呼吁
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：对好网民的理解
核心定义：someone who uses the Internet wisely and responsibly/a person who respects online rules and treats others politely等
行为边界：Instead of spreading untrue information or causing arguments, they respect others and think twice before posting/stay away from bad information and never hurt others online等
要点二：做好网民的重要性
核心原因：It is important to be a good netizen because the Internet connects us all/the Internet has become an important part of our daily life等
危害说明：Cyberbullying and false news can hurt people deeply and even cause real harm/bad online behavior will break the friendly online community等
正向价值：A positive online environment, however, helps everyone learn and grow safely/let every one of us benefit a lot from the Internet world等
要点三：给学生的具体建议
基础规则：never post personal information about others, always check facts before sharing, and be kind in every comment/refuse cyberbullying, do not spread untrue information, be polite when talking online等
结尾呼吁：If we all try our best, the Internet will become a much better place for everyone/we will surely build a warm and safe online space together等
3．例文
Good afternoon, everyone,
I’m so glad to stand here and give my speech. My name is Li Hua. The topic of my speech is “The Internet is useful in our daily lives”.
Today, the Internet plays an important role in our life. It makes our life easier and more colorful.
First, we can search for information quickly for our study. It helps us solve difficult problems. Second, it helps us keep in touch with friends and family through social apps anytime. Also, we can shop online and watch educational videos to relax ourselves.
However, we should use it properly. Don’t spend too much time playing games online. Let’s make good use of the Internet to improve ourselves and study hard.
That’s all! Thanks for your attention.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：演讲稿，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：1. 提出主题并说明原因；2. 详细阐述网络的用途；3. 发出好好利用网络的号召
确定人称：第一人称 (I/we/our)
注意事项：词数80 100，开头结尾不计入词数，不能出现真实姓名及学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：承接给定开头，引出主题，点明互联网在日常生活很重要，说明它让生活更便捷多彩
主体段：分点列举互联网的各类用途，结合学习、社交、生活举例
结尾段：提醒合理使用网络，发出号召，升华主题
[第三步：要点展开]
要点 1：提出主题并说明原因
Today, the Internet plays an important role in our life. It makes our life easier and more colorful./Nowadays, the Internet is very important in our daily life. It brings us much convenience./The Internet has become part of our everyday life. It changes our life a lot.
要点 2：详细阐述网络的用途
First, we can search for information quickly for our study. It helps us solve difficult problems. Second, it helps us keep in touch with friends and family through social apps anytime. Also, we can shop online and watch educational videos to relax ourselves./search for information quickly for our study→take online courses/read different kinds of books on the Internet solve difficult problems→finish our homework/learn more new knowledge/keep in touch with friends and family through social apps→chat with pen pals/join different online groups/shop online→listen to music/watch movies/take trips online
要点 3：发出好好利用网络的号召
However, we should use it properly. Don’t spend too much time playing games online. Let’s make good use of the Internet to improve ourselves and study hard./But we must stay away from bad information online. Let’s make full use of it./We are supposed to use the Internet in a right way. Try not to waste time on useless things online.
4．例文：
The greatest invention—the computer
In modern society, we can not imagine living in a world without computers.
Computers are very useful and helpful for us. We can learn knowledge and look up information online. We can listen to music or watch movies to relax ourselves after study. Besides, we can send emails to keep in touch with other people.
But computers also have problems. Spending too much time on them harms our eyesight and wastes our time. I think we should use computers wisely. We should use them for study and not spend too much time playing online.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：议论文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：电脑的用途；电脑的缺点；个人对使用电脑的看法
确定人称：第一人称
注意事项：不得透露真实班级和姓名
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，点明电脑是伟大发明，现代社会离不开电脑
主体段：介绍电脑的各类用途，说明它带来的便利
结尾段：阐述电脑弊端，表达自己合理使用电脑的观点
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：电脑用途
功能选择：study and search for information/listen to music and watch movies/send emails等
作用描述：We can learn and look up information online/We can get useful knowledge on the computer/We can collect learning materials easily等
作用效果：It brings us much convenience and makes our life easier/It helps us learn more quickly/It enriches our daily life等
要点二：电脑缺点
危害选择：harm one’s eyesight/waste time等
危害说明：Spending too much time on computers harms our eyesight/It makes us feel tired easily/It is bad for our health；We may waste lots of time/We may forget our homework等
要点三：个人看法
观点：We should use computers wisely等
具体说明：We should use computers mainly for study and avoid spending too much time playing online/We need to control our screen time/We should make computers serve us better等
5．范文：
What Do the Numbers Tell Us
A recent class survey shows that Grade 8 students spend an average of 2.5 hours per day on their phones—mostly on social media and games. Alarmingly, over 60% get less than 8 hours of sleep, and nearly half admit they feel tired in class.
These numbers reveal a serious issue: digital overuse is affecting our health and learning. While phones help us stay connected, excessive screen time harms concentration and sleep quality.
I suggest setting daily limits—no more than one hour for entertainment. Also, try the “20-20-20 rule”: every 20 minutes, look at something 20 feet away for 20 seconds. Let’s use technology wisely, not let it control us. After all, real life happens offline!
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体 ：议论文
确定要点 ：1.描述一组具体数据；2.分析这些数据反映的问题或趋势；3.提出自己的建议或思考
确定人称 ：第一人称（I/we）
注意事项 ：逻辑清晰，语言准确，避免简单罗列数字，字数不少于80词
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构 ：
开头段 ：引出话题，引入要描述的数据
主体段 ：描述数据，分析数据背后反映的问题或趋势
结尾段 ：提出建议或思考，总结全文
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：描述一组具体数据a recent class survey shows/Grade 8 students spend an average of 2.5 hours per day/on social media and games/over 60% get less than 8 hours of sleep/nearly half admit they feel tired in class/spend nearly 3 hours on mobile phones every day/spend less than 30 minutes on extra reading after school等
要点二：分析数据反映的问题affecting our health and learning/help us stay connected/excessive screen time harms concentration and sleep quality/exposes a worrying problem/waste plenty of spare time on short videos and online games/takes up our reading time/weakens our eyesight/affects our study efficiency等
要点三：提出你的建议或思考set daily limits-no more than one hour for entertainment/20-20-20 rule/every 20 minutes/look at something 20 feet away for 20 seconds/set strict time limits for phones/replace useless screen time with book reading/ help us form healthier lifestyles等
6．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear that you are interested in the environmental activity in our school. Let me tell you something about it.
The activity was held last Saturday morning in the park near our school. First, we picked up plastic bags and bottles. Then we planted some young trees. Finally, we drew some beautiful pictures and wrote some slogans on the posters about environmental protection and put them up in the park.
I felt very proud because we did something good for the earth. I also realized that everyone can make a difference if we work together. It was a meaningful and unforgettable experience.
What do you think of this activity I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：应用文中的书信体裁，用一般过去时为主
明确要点：介绍学校 “保护地球，从我做起” 环保主题活动的内容和自己的感受
确定人称：第一人称 I /we为主
注意事项：词数80词左右，包含所有要点，不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，开篇承接笔友Mike的兴趣，引出本次环保活动，交代活动基础信息（时间 + 地点）
主体段：分层介绍三项活动：清理垃圾、植树、制作环保海报，简单补充每项活动的目的，充实内容。
结尾段：总结感受，写出至少两点活动感悟
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：活动的基础信息（时间和地点）
时间提示：last Saturday morning
地点提示：the park near our school
要点二：活动的具体内容
清理垃圾：picked up plastic bags/waste paper/water bottles/clean up rubbish
种植树木：planted some young trees/plant trees
制作环保海报：drew pictures/wrote slogans/put them up in the park/make environmental posters
要点三：个人感受
felt proud/a meaningful and unforgettable experience/everyone can make a difference
7．例文
The Smart Phones in My Eyes
The smart phones are one of the most important inventions in the world. They change our lives greatly.
The smart phones have many advantages. We can search for information, listen to music or watch movies. Also, it’s easy to chat with friends on the phone.
But smart phones have disadvantages too. They are bad for our eyes. Some students are crazy about playing games and even have problems with their families.
In my opinion, smart phones are very useful in our lives. But we must use smart phones properly. We should control the using time every day. And we should use them to do meaningful things.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：观点类议论文，以一般现在时为主
明确要点：智能手机的优点、智能手机的缺点、个人观点（至少两点）
确定人称：第一人称 (I/we) 注意事项：文中不得出现真实人名和校名，全文80词左右，题目给定开头不计入总词数
[第二步：构思布局]
四段式结构：
开头段：题目已给出固定开篇句，总起智能手机极大改变人们生活
主体段：分两层，第一层介绍智能手机各项优点，第二层阐述智能手机存在的弊端
结尾段：表达个人看法，提出两条及以上合理使用手机的建议，升华文章主旨
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：Advantages（优点）
search for/look up information（查找信息）、listen to music（听音乐）、watch movies（看电影）、communicate/chat with friends（与朋友交流）
作用效果：It brings us great convenience/We can relax ourselves easily
要点二：Disadvantages（缺点）
固定提示短语：be bad for our eyes（对眼睛有害）、be crazy about playing games（沉迷于游戏）、have a problem with their family（与家人产生矛盾）
不良后果：waste lots of time/hurt our eyesight/cause conflicts with family members
要点三：Your ideas（个人观点，至少两点）
观点 1：Smartphones are useful but we should use them properly/wisely/correctly（手机很有用但应该正确使用）
观点 2：We should control our daily screen time（控制使用时间）
观点 3：We should make use of phones to do meaningful things instead of only playing games（做有意义的事情）
8．例文
Hello, my name is Li Hua. Thank you for listening to my speech. Nowadays, almost every family has computers and the Internet. And more and more middle school students are interested in surfing the Internet.
For one thing, people can search for a lot of useful information with the help of the computer. For another, people can read electronic books from the Internet. However, as every coin has two sides, computers also have some disadvantages. For example, many people spend too much time in playing computer games which affects their study and work. What’s more, spending too much time on computers is bad for people’s eyes.
Weighing up pros and cons, I think that computers are very useful for people if they can be used properly.
【解析】[写作步骤]
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：演讲稿，用一般现在时为主
明确人称：第一人称(I/my)，第三人称(they)
注意事项：题干中没有给出明确的要点，考生要结合题干，分析电脑的利弊及谈论自己的看法；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：点明主题，介绍电脑使用的现状
主体段：谈谈电脑的优缺点
结尾段：谈谈自己对使用电脑的看法
[第三步：要点展开]
要点：电脑的使用情况
使用现状：almost every family has computers and the Internet/more and more middle school students are interested in surfing the Internet/has gained more and more popularity/nearly everyone can use computers等
优点好处：search for a lot of useful information/read electronic books from the Internet/connect with others more easily/broad horizons等
缺点弊端：spend too much time in playing computer games/affected their study and work/bad for people’s eyes/make our body weak等
个人看法：are very useful for people if they can be used properly/should use the computers wisely/make good use of the advantages of computers等
9．例文
My Dream to Become a Doctor
Everyone has a dream. My dream is to become a doctor in the future.
First, I have always been interested in biology and how the human body works. Learning about different diseases and treatments excites me. Second, I am a patient and caring person. I enjoy helping others when they feel sick or sad. Being a doctor allows me to use this quality to make a real difference. Third, doctors save lives and reduce people’s pain. This social value makes the job truly meaningful.
To achieve my dream, I will study hard, especially in science subjects. I also plan to volunteer at a local hospital to gain experience. I know becoming a doctor is a big challenge, but I am ready to put in the effort. One day, I hope to wear that white coat and help those in need.
【解析】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：“Future Dream”主题征文，介绍个人未来职业规划，以一般现在时为主，一般将来时表述计划
明确要点：说出梦想职业、阐述选择该职业的三个理由、说明实现梦想的准备
确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：词数控制100~120，至少使用3个要求单元词汇，不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：开门见山，直接点明自己的梦想职业
主体段：用连接词分点说明选择该职业的三个理由
结尾段：说明为实现梦想的准备，表达追梦决心
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：点明梦想职业
开篇引入：Everyone has a dream/Nearly everyone has a dream
梦想职业：become a doctor/work as a doctor
要点二：阐述选择医生职业的三个理由
兴趣方向：interested in biology/fond of biology
个人特质：patient and caring/calm and kind
核心行为：helping others/assisting others
工作价值：make a real difference/bring great changes
减轻痛苦：reduce people’s pain/ease people’s pain
工作意义：truly meaningful/really valuable
要点三：说明实现梦想的准备
核心目标：achieve my dream/realize my dream
日常准备：study hard/work hard
积累经验：gain experience/get experience
认清挑战：big challenge/great difficulty
付出行动：put in the effort/make efforts
10．Smartphones in My Eyes
The smartphone is one of the most important inventions in the world. It has changed people’s lives greatly.
Smartphones bring many benefits to our daily lives. For instance, we can use them to look for information, watch interesting short videos, order food online, and find places with maps. On the other hand, smartphones have some drawbacks. Using them for a long time is bad for our eyes. Also, some people get lost in games, which may lead to poor grades and health problems. Therefore, I think we should use smartphones properly. We can limit screen time and use them mainly for study. In this way, we can make the most of smartphones without being harmed.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体：议论文，主要使用一般现在时
明确要点：谈智能手机的利弊
确定人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主（I/they）
注意事项：90-100词且不能出现真实人名、校名
[第二步：构思布局]
二段式结构:
开头段：点明智能手机是重要发明，改变了人们的生活（已给出）
主体段：谈智能手机的利弊，并给出正确使用手机的观点
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一：手机的利弊
优点：look for information/watch short videos/order food/find places/shopping online/order tickets等
缺点：be bad for our eyes/get lost in games/ leak of personal information /poor grades and health problems/causing back pain and poor blood circulation等
要点二：发表观点use smartphones properly/ limit screen time/ use them mainly for study/finish homework first before playing/ stay away from phones when studying等
11．例文
The Internet
With the development of the Internet, it plays an increasingly important role in our lives and brings us much convenience.
We can communicate with distant friends, shop online at home and look up useful information easily. We can also enjoy music and movies online. However, it has disadvantages. Online friends may be unsafe, online goods are not always good, and many students waste much time on computer games.
The Internet brings us a lot of convenience, but we should use it properly.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：议论文（网络利弊分析），时态以一般现在时为主。
明确要点：介绍网络的重要性与优点、阐述网络的缺点、提出正确使用网络的建议。
确定人称：第一人称（we），客观叙述。
注意事项：词数约70词，标题已给出，不透露真实信息，覆盖所有要点。
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：点明网络的发展及其重要性。
主体段：先说明网络的便利，再列举网络的弊端。
结尾段：总结并呼吁合理使用网络。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：网络的重要性与优点：communicate with distant friends; shop online; look up information; enjoy music and movies/stay in touch with friends; buy things online; find useful information easily
要点二：网络的缺点：online friends may be unsafe; online goods are not always good; waste time on computer games/online safety risks; hard to tell good from bad online; students get addicted to games
要点三：结尾总结：bring us convenience; use it properly/make life easier; use the Internet wisely
12．例文
Nowadays the Internet becomes an important part in our lives.
For me, I use the Internet almost every day. I can easily find all kinds of useful information for my study here, and it helps me a lot. After finishing homework, I also listen to music or watch funny videos to relax. However, the Internet also has bad effects. Spending too much time online hurts our eyes, and many students even forget to study because they lose themselves in online games.
In my opinion, we should use the Internet properly. Let it be our helpful tool instead of the master of our life.
【解析】写作步骤
[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主
明确要点：网络的好处和坏处，以及自己的观点
确定人称：第一人称以及第三人称
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步：构思布局]
三段式结构：
开头段：总起句，概括网络的重要
主体段：分别介绍网络的好处和坏处
结尾段：总结自己的观点
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：网络的好处：find all kinds of useful information/listen to music/watch funny videos/chat with friends等
网络的坏处：hurts our eyes/forget to study/stay up late to play games等
要点二：自己的观点：use the Internet properly/make a plan等
13．例文
Digital Technology Around Us
We can’t live without technology. Digital technology has a great effect on our daily lives.
It helps us keep in touch with our family and friends, and we can also make new friends. For study, we can gain rich knowledge and use many useful learning apps. Shopping also becomes easier.
However, it hurts our eyesight, and we get less exercise. What’s more, many students can’t focus on studying, and spend too little time with their families.
We set a time limit—no mobile phones on weekdays, and less than one hour’s use on weekends. We also need more outdoor sports, read more books and develop hobbies.
【解析】[第一步：审题立意]
确定文体：本文是一篇材料作文，一般现在时为主；
明确要点：阐述数字生活的利与弊；
确定人称：第一人称和第三人称为主；
注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称。
[第二步：构思布局]
开头段，借用文章已给开头，引出主题；
主体段，根据题干的要点，介绍数字生活的利与弊；
结尾段，分享措施并收尾。
[第三步：要点展开]
要点一：数字生活的利与弊
利：keep in touch with/make new friends/gain rich knowledge and use many useful learning apps/
弊：hurts our eyesight/get less exercise/can’t focus on studying/spend too little time with their families
措施：no mobile phones/less than one hour’s use/need more outdoor sports/read more books and develop hobbies
14．例文
How to live a wise digital life
Nowadays, digital life plays an important part in our life. Mobile phones allow us to chat with friends easily. The Internet offers useful study materials. Mobile payment and shared bikes make our daily life faster and easier.
However, overusing them causes problems. Some students spend too much time on phones and waste study time. Too much screen time is bad for the eyes and health.
To live a wise digital life, we should follow some rules. Set a 30-minute limit for daily phone use after study, avoid using phones during meals or family talks, and use digital tools mainly for learning instead of playing games.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，是一篇材料作文；
②时态：主要为一般现在时；
③提示：围绕“如何过明智的数字生活”展开，介绍数字生活便利、指出过度使用问题，并提出合理建议，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题。说明数字生活在生活中很重要，列举手机、网络等带来的便利；
第二步，指出问题。说明过度使用电子产品影响学习、伤害健康；
第三步，提出建议。给出控制时长、合理使用、专注学习等具体做法。
[亮点词汇]
①digital life数字生活
②play an important part起重要作用
③mobile phone手机
④chat聊天
⑤study material学习资料
⑥mobile payment电子支付
⑦overuse过度使用
⑧screen time屏幕时间
⑨limit限制
[高分句型]
Some students spend too much time on phones and waste study time.（并列句）
15．例文
Use the Internet Properly
Internet is playing an important role in our lives now. The Internet provides rich resources for study and helps us relax. It also makes communication easier. It lets us talk to friends anytime, anywhere. However, spending too much time online is bad for our eyes and may waste our time. Sometimes it can even be dangerous. In my opinion, we should use the Internet properly. We can set a time limit and choose useful information. Let’s make the Internet a helpful tool for our growth.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：需涵盖网络优点、缺点及个人观点，词数70左右，开头已给出。
[写作步骤]
第一步：说明网络的优点；
第二步：说明网络的缺点；
第三步：提出个人建议，结尾呼吁合理使用。
[亮点词汇]
①talk to和……交谈
②be bad for对……有害
③set a time limit设定时间限制
[高分句型]
①However, spending too much time online is bad for our eyes and may waste our time. (动名词作主语)
②We can set a time limit and choose useful information. (and并列结构)
16．例文
The greatest invention-the computer
In modern society, we cannot imagine living in a world without computers.
They are very useful in our daily life. We can study online, search for information quickly, and even make friends with people all around the world. For me, I often use computers to do homework and learn English. It makes my study easier and more interesting. However, we should use computers properly. We need to plan our time well and stay away from unhealthy websites.
In short, computers are great inventions that help us a lot, but we must use them wisely.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕计算机的用途、个人使用情况及使用建议展开，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头点明计算机在现代社会的重要性，引出下文；
第二步：具体说明计算机的用途、个人使用情况及使用建议；
第三步：总结全文，强调合理使用计算机的必要性。
[亮点词汇]
①search for information quickly快速搜索信息
②make friends with people all around the world与世界各地的人交朋友
③do homework做作业
④learn English学英语
⑤stay away from unhealthy websites远离不健康的网站
[高分句型]
①We can study online, search for information quickly, and even make friends with people all around the world. (并列结构列举功能)
②In short, computers are great inventions that help us a lot, but we must use them wisely. (that引导定语从句，but表转折)
17．例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked about my views on online learning. Now I’d like to share my thoughts with you.
In my opinion, online learning has both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it is very convenient and flexible. We can study anywhere and anytime. Besides, there are rich resources on the Internet for us to use. On the other hand, it also has some problems. For example, it lacks interaction between teachers and students. What’s worse, students may easily get distracted by computer games.
Generally speaking, online learning is a good way to study if we can use it properly.
Yours,
Li Mei
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点包括线上学习的优点、缺点以及个人观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接开头，引出话题，表明将分享对线上学习的看法；
第二步：从两方面论述线上学习：优点是方便灵活、资源丰富。缺点是缺乏师生互动、容易分心；
第三步：总结观点，认为如果正确使用，线上学习是一种很好的学习方式。
[亮点词汇]
①convenient方便的
②flexible灵活的
③rich resources丰富的资源
④computer games电脑游戏
⑤properly正确地
[高分句型]
①Besides, there are rich resources on the Internet for us to use. (there be句型)
②Generally speaking, online learning is a good way to study if we can use it properly. (if引导的条件状语从句)
18．参考范文
Dear Emily,
I’m glad to share my views on online learning with you.
Online learning has many advantages. It’s time-flexible, so we can study whenever and wherever we want. There are rich learning resources online, and we can watch courses repeatedly to understand better. However, it also has disadvantages. We lack face-to-face communication with teachers and classmates, and it’s easy to get distracted by phones or games. What’s more, long-time online study is bad for our eyes.
I suggest we should arrange time properly, take notes in class and have proper rest to protect our eyes.
In general, online learning is a useful way, but we need to use it wisely to make it more effective.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】总体分析
①题材：书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：围绕线上学习的优点(如时间灵活、资源丰富)、缺点(如缺乏面对面交流、分心、伤眼)、建议(如安排时间、做笔记、休息)和总体看法展开。
写作步骤
第一步：开头问候并引出话题。
第二步：具体分述优缺点。
第三步：提出建议并总结看法。
亮点词汇
①however然而
②What’s more而且
③In general总之
高分句型
①It’s time-flexible, so we can study whenever and wherever we want.(whenever和wherever引导状语从句)
②I suggest we should arrange time properly, take notes in class and have proper rest to protect our eyes. (含有宾语从句的复合句)
19．Digital Technology and Our Life
Digital technology is everywhere now. It makes our life easier and faster. For example, we can shop online and talk to friends. However, it also brings problems. Some people spend too much time on phones, which hurts their health and studies. Also, personal information may not be safe online.
In my opinion, digital technology is like a double-edged sword. We should use it wisely. I plan to limit my screen time to one hour a day and focus more on outdoor activities. This way, I can enjoy its benefits.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：围绕数字化技术对生活的便利性、负面影响及个人应对措施展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述数字化技术普及现象，用举例法说明其便利性；
第二步，引出负面影响（健康、学习、隐私），并列两个缺点；
第三步，表达观点，提出具体解决方案。
[亮点词汇]
① everywhere无处不在
② double-edged sword双刃剑
③ screen time屏幕使用时间
[高分句型]
① Some people spend too much time on phones, which hurts their health and studies. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，补充说明前句结果)
② We should use it wisely.（运用了情态动词should提出建议，简洁有力）
20．How AI changes the way we study
AI has become one of the most important learning tools in our daily lives, and it brings us many changes.
On the one hand, AI acts as a free tutor. It can help us solve problems anytime and find information quickly. It makes learning efficient. On the other hand, relying on AI too much may cause problems. We might become lazy and lose the ability to think independently.
In my opinion, AI is just a tool. We should use it wisely to help us improve ourselves, instead of letting it do our homework for us. Let’s be the master of learning.
【解析】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：承接开头，阐述AI带来的优点；
第二步：指出过度依赖AI的弊端；
第三步：表明个人观点。
[亮点词汇]
①efficient高效的
②rely on依赖
③independently独立地
④wisely明智地
⑤instead of代替，而不是
[高分句型]
①On the other hand, relying on AI too much may cause problems. (动名词作主语)
②It can help us solve problems anytime and find information quickly. (help sb. do sth结构)
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