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9A Unit 6 The art of the brush 作文讲义
一、话题解读
1.核心话题：介绍自己最喜欢的画家，结合人物经历、绘画风格、常见题材与代表作品，说明喜欢的理由及艺术对自己的影响。
2.写作要求：① 写清画家的基本信息、经历、风格与喜爱的作品；
② 描述人物经历时用过去时，介绍作品特点时用现在时；
③ 恰当运用who、which或that引导的定语从句；
④ 词数90-120，以具体题目要求为准。
3.中考定位：本话题可迁移为“我喜爱的画家”“一幅打动我的画”“艺术与生活”等写作。重点是信息准确、特点具体、感受自然。
二、写作任务
本单元的主要写作任务是介绍自己最喜欢的画家。参考教材中Sandy介绍Xu Beihong的文章，按“人物简介—经历与风格—喜爱的作品及理由”组织内容，也可以迁移练习画展邀请信。
三、审题指导
先确定画家，再选取与其相关的真实信息。介绍作品时要写出所画内容、突出特点及自己的感受，可以按以下问题列出要点：
Who is your favourite painter （你最喜欢的画家是谁？）
When and where did he/she live and work （他/她何时、在哪里生活和工作？）
What is his/her painting style （他/她的绘画风格是什么？）
What did/does he/she often paint （他/她经常画哪些题材？）
What is your favourite work by this painter （你最喜欢他/她的哪幅作品？）
Why do you like the painter or the work （你为什么喜欢这位画家或这幅作品？）
四、写作步骤
◆ 步骤一：开头点明画家，交代国别、出生时间或突出成就。
◆ 步骤二：介绍重要经历、绘画风格与常见题材，再写喜爱的作品及特点。
◆ 步骤三：结尾说明喜欢的理由或受到的启发，表达自己的评价与愿望。
五、写作框架
写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语
开头（总起） 点明画家，简要介绍身份、国别或出生时间 一般现在时
一般过去时 My favourite painter is...,
He/She is a painter who...
He/She was born in...
中间（分述） 描述经历、风格与常见题材，介绍喜爱的作品 一般过去时
一般现在时 At a young age..., Later...,
He/She is best known for...,
My favourite work by him/her is...
结尾（总结） 说明喜爱理由、个人感受或启发，表达愿望 一般现在时
现在完成时
一般将来时 I love this painting because...,
His/Her works have taught me...,
I hope to...
六、素材宝库
1.词汇积累
画家与作品类 风格与特点类 经历与影响类 连接词类
painter 画家 traditional 传统的 be born 出生 because 因为
painting 绘画作品 modern 现代的 study art 学习艺术 besides 此外
landscape 风景 creative 有创造力的 be famous for 因……出名 for example 例如
portrait 人像 lively 生动的 at a young age 小时候 later 后来
brush 画笔 powerful 有力量的 mix 结合 therefore 因此
ink 墨 peaceful 平静的 express 表达 however 然而
paper 纸 unusual 不寻常的 influence 影响 for me 对我而言
artwork 艺术作品 beautiful 美丽的 inspire 鼓舞 in this way 这样
2. 句型积累
1. My favourite painter is ... . 我最喜欢的画家是……。
2. He/She is a painter who ... . 他/她是一位……的画家。
3. He/She was born in ... . 他/她出生于……。
4. He/She became interested in painting when ... . 他/她在……时开始对绘画感兴趣。
5. He/She is best known for ... . 他/她最以……闻名。
6. One of my favourite paintings by him/her is ... . 我最喜欢他/她的画作之一是……。
7. I love paintings that/which ... . 我喜欢……的画作。
8. His/Her works encourage me to ... . 他/她的作品鼓励我……。
表达要点：who指人，which指物，that可指人或物；关系代词在定语从句中作主语时不能省略。人物经历多用过去时，作品特点与个人感受多用现在时。
3. 写作模板
画家介绍模板
My favourite painter is [姓名]. He/She is a [国别] painter who [基本信息或突出成就]. He/She was born in [年份或地点].
He/She began painting when [早期经历]. Later, [学习或成长经历]. He/She painted in a [绘画风格] style and often painted [常见题材]. My favourite work by him/her is [作品名称]. I love it because [作品特点与感受].
His/Her works help me [收获或启发]. I admire the artist who [可以学习的品质或做法]. I hope to [今后的行动或愿望].
画展邀请信模板
Dear [收信人姓名],
Would you like to visit [画展名称] with me on [日期] The show will be held at [地点] from [开始时间] to [结束时间].
We will see paintings that [作品内容或特点]. I think you will enjoy the show because [对方兴趣与推荐理由]. It will be a good chance to [活动意义].
Shall we meet at [见面地点] at [见面时间] Please let me know if you can come. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
[你的姓名]
七、参考范文
1.画家介绍
My favourite painter
My favourite painter is Xu Beihong. He is a Chinese painter who was born in 1895. He is best known for his paintings of horses.
Xu began learning to paint at a young age. Later, he studied art in Japan and France. These experiences encouraged him to bring traditional Chinese and Western painting methods together. He often painted animals, especially horses and birds.
My favourite work by him is Ten Horses in Spring Mountains. The horses in this painting look free and full of energy. His art helps me see strength and beauty in ordinary life. I hope to learn from his creativity.
2.画家与作品欣赏
The painter I like best
The painter I like best is Vincent van Gogh. He was born in the Netherlands in 1853. He is an artist who expressed strong feelings through colour and brushwork.
My favourite work is The Starry Night. He created this painting in 1889. It shows a night sky with bright stars above a quiet village. The colours and lines make the sky seem full of life. When I look at it, I feel both calm and amazed.
I enjoy paintings that help me see familiar things in a new way. Van Gogh has taught me that art can express feelings beyond words. I hope to visit an art show of his works one day.
3.变式训练题目
假如你是李华，请给朋友Mike写一封邀请信，请他参加本周六的校园画展。要点：上午9点至11点在学校礼堂举办；展出学生画的自然风景、动植物；说明推荐理由；约定上午8点45分在校门口见面。
要求：要点齐全，语言连贯；词数100左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Would you like to visit our school art show with me this Saturday
答案范文：
Dear Mike,
Would you like to visit our school art show with me this Saturday
The show will be held in the school hall from 9 to 11 a.m. We will see paintings that show beautiful landscapes, animals and plants. They were created by students in our school. Since you enjoy drawing, I think you will find many interesting ideas there. We can also learn how different colours and lines express feelings.
Shall we meet at the school gate at 8:45 a.m. This will give us time to get to the hall. Please let me know if you can come. I am looking forward to enjoying the show with you.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文翻译：
亲爱的Mike：你愿意本周六和我一起参观学校画展吗？
画展上午9点至11点在学校礼堂举办。我们将看到学校学生创作的自然风景、动物和植物画作。你喜欢绘画，我想你会在那里发现许多有趣的想法。我们还可以学习不同的色彩和线条如何表达感受。
我们上午8点45分在校门口见面好吗？这样就有时间前往礼堂。请告诉我你是否能来。我期待与你一起欣赏画展。你的朋友，李华。
人物与作品资料：教材第89-90页；Van Gogh Museum（vangoghmuseum.nl）；MoMA（moma.org/collection/works/79802）。

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