江苏译林新教材9AUnit 1 Know yourself作文讲义

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9A Unit 1 Know yourself 作文讲义
一、话题解读
1.核心话题:围绕性格与能力,为某个职位推荐合适的人选,用具体事例说明人物品质与职位要求的联系,表达推荐态度与期望。
2.写作要求:① 交代推荐对象、目标职位、性格品质与具体事例;
② 介绍品质多用现在时,描述已发生的事例用过去时;
③ 运用both...and等连接表达及that引导的宾语从句;
④ 使用正式书信语言,词数90-120,以具体题目为准。
3.中考定位:本话题可迁移为“推荐班长”“推荐社团负责人”“自荐成为志愿者”等写作。重点是品质与事例相互支持,推荐理由与职位相符。
二、写作任务
教材以推荐学生会主席为示范,要求为班级中的某个职位推荐一位同学。应先了解职位需要的品质,再按“推荐目的—品质与事例—总结与期望”组织正式推荐信。
三、审题指导
先明确向谁写信、推荐谁以及推荐什么职位,再选取两到三个相关品质。每个重要品质应有行为或事例支持,可以按以下问题列要点:
Who would you like to recommend (你想推荐谁?)
What position are you recommending him/her for (你推荐他/她担任什么职位?)
What qualities does he/she have (他/她具备哪些品质?)
What examples show these qualities (哪些事例能说明这些品质?)
Why is he/she suitable for the position (他/她为什么适合这个职位?)
What result do you hope for (你希望得到怎样的结果?)
四、写作步骤
◆ 步骤一:开头说明写信目的,点明推荐对象及目标职位。
◆ 步骤二:按“品质—事例—与职位的联系”展开,不要只罗列形容词。
◆ 步骤三:结尾再次表明推荐态度,表达期望,写好结束语与姓名。
五、写作框架
写作部分 核心内容 推荐时态 连接词/过渡语
开头(总起) 说明写信目的、推荐对象与目标职位 一般现在时 I am writing to recommend...
for the position of...
I believe he/she has the qualities to...
中间(分述) 介绍相关品质,用具体行为或事例说明 一般现在时
一般过去时 He/She is both...and...
For example, ...
What is more, ...
结尾(总结) 总结职位适合度,表达推荐态度与期望 一般现在时
一般将来时 For these reasons, I believe...
He/She is suitable for...
I hope you will consider...
六、素材宝库
1.词汇积累
性格与品质类 能力与表现类 职位与推荐类 连接词类
organized 有条理的 plan 计划 position 职位 and 和
patient 有耐心的 listen 倾听 monitor 班长 but 但是
confident 自信的 communicate 交流 recommend 推荐 so 因此
creative 有创造力的 cooperate 合作 suitable 合适的 because 因为
helpful 乐于助人的 explain 解释 quality 品质 for example 例如
careful 细心的 organize 组织 leader 负责人 besides 此外
friendly 友好的 support 支持 member 成员 what is more 此外
responsible 负责的 solve 解决 consider 考虑 for these reasons 因此
2. 句型积累
1. I am writing to recommend ... for ... . 我写信推荐……担任……。
2. I believe that ... has the qualities for the position. 我相信……具备该职位所需的品质。
3. He/She is both ... and ... . 他/她既……又……。
4. He/She is not only ... but also ... . 他/她不仅……而且……。
5. For example, he/she ... . 例如,他/她……。
6. He/She is good at ... . 他/她擅长……。
7. His/Her personality is right for the position because ... . 他/她的性格适合该职位,因为……。
8. I hope you will consider him/her for the position. 我希望您能考虑让他/她担任该职位。
表达要点:正式推荐信不用I’m等缩写,品质须有事例支持。both...and连接主语时谓语用复数;not only...but also、either...or、neither...nor连接主语时,谓语通常与较近的主语一致。that宾语从句用陈述语序。
3. 写作模板
推荐信模板
Dear [称呼],
I am writing to recommend [姓名] for the position of [职位]. I believe that he/she has the qualities needed for the job.
He/She is [品质一]. For example, [具体事例]. He/She is also [品质二] and [品质三]. [相关行为或经历] shows that he/she can [职位所需能力].
For these reasons, I think he/she is suitable for the position. I hope you will consider him/her.
Yours sincerely,
[你的姓名]
自荐信主体模板
I would like to apply for [职位]. I am [品质与能力], and I enjoy [相关活动]. Last term, I [相关经历]. I can [可作出的贡献]. I believe I can do the job well. Thank you for considering my application.
七、参考范文
1.推荐信
A recommendation letter
Dear Mr Wu,
I am writing to recommend Daniel for the position of class monitor. I believe that he has the qualities needed for the job.
Daniel is organized. He makes clear plans before every class activity. He is both helpful and patient. When a classmate finds a task difficult, he explains it carefully. Last month, he helped our class prepare a charity sale. He listened to different ideas and made sure everyone had a part to play.
Daniel is a good team player, and his personality is right for the position. I hope that you will consider him for the job.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2.自荐信
Applying to be a reading club helper
Dear Mr Green,
I would like to apply for the position of reading club helper. I enjoy reading and would love to support other students.
I am not only careful but also patient. I always return books to the correct places and keep my reading notes tidy. When classmates need help choosing books, I listen to their interests before offering suggestions. Last term, I helped plan a reading activity and introduced my favourite book to the group.
I can work well with different people, and I am willing to learn. I believe that I can be a helpful member of the club. Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.变式训练题目
假如你是李华,学校英语社团正在选社长。请给Mr Zhang写信,推荐Sandy。要点:有条理,提前计划活动;有耐心,帮助同学练口语;有创造力,设计英语游戏;表明推荐态度。
要求:词数100左右,要点齐全,语言正式;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Zhang,
I am writing to recommend Sandy for president of our English Club.
答案范文:
Dear Mr Zhang,
I am writing to recommend Sandy for president of our English Club.
Sandy is organized. She makes clear plans before every activity, so everyone knows what to do. She is also patient and often helps classmates practise spoken English. When they make mistakes, she explains things kindly and encourages them to try again.
What is more, Sandy is creative. Last month, she designed some English games for our class. We not only learnt new words but also had a lot of fun. She listens to others and works well in a team. For these reasons, I believe she is suitable for the position. I hope you will consider her.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
范文翻译:
Zhang老师,您好:我写信推荐Sandy担任学校英语社团社长。
Sandy很有条理,每次活动前都做好明确的计划,让大家知道该做什么。她也很有耐心,经常帮助同学练习口语。同学出错时,她会友善地解释并鼓励他们再试一次。
此外,她很有创造力。上个月,她为我们班设计了英语游戏,让我们既学到新词,又收获快乐。她愿意倾听,善于合作。因此,我认为她适合这个职位,希望您能考虑她。此致,李华。
编写依据:教材第17-18页。人物与活动为写作示例,可根据实际情况替换。

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