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人教精通版五年级上 Unit 1 Around the world 写作训练
Name: ____________________ Class: ____________ Date: ____________
一、单元写作目标
本单元围绕“Around the world”展开。写作时要能够介绍自己或他人来自哪个国家，介绍一个国家或著名地点在哪里、以什么闻名，以及在那里可以做什么。
会用 Where are you from 和 I'm from ... 介绍国家或来源。
会用 What is it famous for 和 It is famous for ... 介绍国家的著名景点。
会用 It is in ... 说明国家或地点的位置。
会用 It is a good place to ... 介绍可以进行的活动。
会用 and、also、because 连接信息，让介绍更加完整。
二、写作思路讲解
第一步，先确定写作对象。可以介绍一个国家，也可以介绍一个著名地点。如果介绍国家，可以写国家名称、所在位置和著名景点；如果介绍地点，可以写它在哪个国家、有什么特色、游客可以做什么。
第二步，先写基本信息。可以用 I'm from China.、This is France. 或 This is the Summer Palace. 开头，让读者知道文章介绍的国家或地点。
第三步，写地点和特色。用 It is in ... 说明位置，用 It is famous for ... 说明著名的景物、建筑或自然风光。例如：It is in Australia. It is famous for the Sydney Opera House.
第四步，补充可以做的事情。用 It is a good place to ... 写参观、划船、看演出、看野生动物等活动。注意 to 后面使用动词原形，如 to visit、to watch、to see。
第五步，结尾表达愿望或欢迎。可以写 I hope I can visit it one day.、Welcome to China! 或 I want to see it. 让短文有自然的结尾。
三、重点句型
1. Where are you from - I'm from ... .
Example: Where are you from - I'm from France.
用法：询问和回答来自哪个国家。
2. This is ... .
Example: This is the Great Wall.
用法：介绍国家、地点或景物。
3. It is in ... .
Example: It is in Beijing, China.
用法：说明地点所在的国家或城市。
4. What is it famous for - It is famous for ... .
Example: What is Australia famous for - It is famous for the Sydney Opera House.
用法：询问和回答著名事物。
5. It is a beautiful ... .
Example: It is a beautiful garden in Beijing.
用法：补充地点的性质和特点。
6. It looks like ... .
Example: It looks like a sailing boat on the sea.
用法：描述外形或样子。
7. It is a good place to ... .
Example: It is a good place to watch shows.
用法：说明在那里可以做什么。
8. I hope I can ... one day.
Example: I hope I can visit it one day.
用法：表达愿望。
四、句型仿写
请根据例句和提示，写出完整句子。
例：I'm from China.
1. I / from / Australia
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例：This is the Great Wall.
2. this / the Eiffel Tower
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例：It is in Beijing, China.
3. the Sydney Opera House / Australia
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例：It is famous for the Amazon Rain Forest.
4. Brazil / famous for / the Amazon Rain Forest
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例：It is a good place to watch shows.
5. the Summer Palace / good place / go boating
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例：I hope I can visit it one day.
6. I / hope / see / the Great Pyramid
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五、连词成句
请将下列词语连成正确的句子，注意大小写和标点。
1. are / Where / you / from
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2. from / I'm / the UK
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3. is / It / in / France
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4. famous for / It is / the Eiffel Tower
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5. good place / It is / to / watch shows / a
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6. hope / I / visit / can / it / one day
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六、写作练习
写国家或名胜介绍时，要先写名称和位置，再写著名特色及可以进行的活动，最后表达愿望或欢迎。
练习一：基础写作｜My country
提示：介绍一个你熟悉的国家，写出国家名称、所在位置或代表性景点。建议写 5—6 句。
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练习二：进阶写作｜A famous place
提示：选择一个著名地点，写出它在哪里、以什么闻名、外形或特点是什么，以及在那里可以做什么。建议写 7—8 句。
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练习三：综合写作｜Around the world
提示：写一段给外国朋友的世界名胜介绍，可以介绍中国的长城、颐和园，也可以介绍埃菲尔铁塔、悉尼歌剧院等。至少写出位置、特色、活动和个人愿望，并使用 because、and 或 also 中的两个。建议写 9—10 句。
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七、参考范文与讲解
范文一：My country
I'm from China. China is a big and beautiful country. You can visit the Great Wall in my country. The Great Wall is very long and famous. You can also visit the Summer Palace in Beijing. I love my country.
讲解：文章先用 I'm from China 点明国家，再用两处著名景点补充内容。You can ... 介绍游客可以参观的地方，also 表示继续补充，最后用 I love my country 表达感情。
范文二：A famous place
This is the Sydney Opera House. It is in Australia. It is famous for its beautiful design. It looks like a sailing boat on the sea. It is a good place to watch shows. I hope I can visit it one day.
讲解：这篇文章按照“名称—位置—特色—外形—活动—愿望”的顺序展开。It is famous for ... 介绍闻名之处，It looks like ... 描写外形，It is a good place to ... 介绍可以做的事情，句子之间衔接自然。
范文三：A wonderful place in China
Dear Jim,
讲解：写给外国朋友介绍中国名胜时，可以用 Dear ... 开头，再用简单、清楚的句子说明地点信息。
正文
I want to tell you about the Summer Palace. It is a beautiful garden in Beijing, China. It is famous for its lake and old buildings. It looks peaceful and lovely. It is a good place to go boating and see the buildings. You can also enjoy the beautiful hills and water there. China has many wonderful places, and the Summer Palace is one of them. I hope you can visit it one day. Welcome to China!
讲解：这篇文章以颐和园为例，先交代名称和位置，再写湖泊、古建筑、山水等特色。and 和 also 用来补充信息，one of them 对前文的 wonderful places 进行总结。结尾既表达希望朋友来参观，又发出欢迎，符合介绍类短文的结尾方式。
八、参考答案
句型仿写
1. I'm from Australia.
2. This is the Eiffel Tower.
3. The Sydney Opera House is in Australia.
4. Brazil is famous for the Amazon Rain Forest.
5. The Summer Palace is a good place to go boating.
6. I hope I can see the Great Pyramid.
连词成句
1. Where are you from
2. I'm from the UK.
3. It is in France.
4. It is famous for the Eiffel Tower.
5. It is a good place to watch shows.
6. I hope I can visit it one day.
写作练习参考要点
练习一：国家名称、位置或代表性景点、国家特点、个人感受。
练习二：地点名称、所在国家或城市、著名特色、外形或特点、可以进行的活动、个人愿望。
练习三：称呼、地点和位置、著名特色、可以做的事情、补充信息、个人愿望或欢迎。
九、写作小结
写国家或名胜介绍，可以记住这条路线：What is it -> Where is it -> What is it famous for -> What does it look like -> What can you do there -> What do I hope 先写清地点信息，再补充特色和活动，最后用愿望或欢迎收束全文。
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