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人教精通版五年级上 Unit 2 Jobs 写作训练
Name: ____________________ Class: ____________ Date: ____________
一、单元写作目标
本单元围绕“Jobs（职业）”展开。写作时，要能够介绍家人的职业，询问或回答某人的工作，还要表达自己将来想从事的职业，并说明原因、愿望或现在的努力。
写作重点：职业名称的准确表达；is a/an 结构；want to be ...；because 引导的原因；用 and、so 连接句子。
内容顺序：先写家人的职业，再写自己的理想职业，最后补充原因、行动或愿望。
表达目标：能写出 5—8 句意思连贯的短文，句子之间有自然衔接，内容具体而不重复。
二、写作思路讲解
1. 先确定写什么
可以选择“我的家人和他们的职业”“我的理想职业”或“家人的职业与我的梦想”作为主题。动笔前先列出人物、职业、原因和行动，避免写到一半没有内容。
2. 再按照顺序组织内容
开头：点明主题，例如 My family members have different jobs.
主体：介绍一两位家人的职业，可写他们喜欢做什么或怎样帮助别人。
重点：写自己的理想职业，用 I want to be ... in the future. 表达愿望。
拓展：用 because 说明原因，用 I must ... / I will ... 写现在的努力。
结尾：用 I think it is a great job. 或 I hope my dream will come true. 收束全文。
3. 注意职业名称前的 a / an
表示“是一名……”时，职业前通常要加 a 或 an：a farmer, a teacher, a doctor, a nurse, a writer；an actor。police officer 前用 a：a police officer。
4. 让句子不只是一串罗列
写完每个人的职业后，可以增加动作或原因。例如：My aunt is a reporter. She visits lots of places. 也可以用 and、because、so 把相关内容连接起来，使文章更连贯。
5. 写完后检查三件事
人物和职业是否搭配正确，he 和 she 是否使用正确。
第三人称作主语时，动词是否需要加 s，如 He writes stories. She helps people.
句号、大小写和 a/an 是否正确，句子之间是否有重复。
三、重点句型
1. 询问家人的职业
— What's your father's / mother's job
— He's / She's a driver / nurse.
2. 介绍家人的职业
My grandfather is a farmer. / My aunt is a reporter.
3. 询问理想职业
— What do you want to be in the future
— I want to be a doctor.
4. 表达理想职业和原因
I want to be a teacher because I want to help students.
5. 表达现在的努力
I must study hard and learn a lot now.
6. 介绍职业活动
He writes children's stories. / She visits lots of places.
7. 连接并列信息
My father is a worker and my mother is a teacher.
8. 表达愿望
I hope my dream will come true.
四、句型仿写
根据提示改写句子，注意职业名称前的 a / an 以及 he、she 的使用。
1. 原句：My father is a driver.
仿写提示：把 father 改为 uncle，driver 改为 farmer。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
2. 原句：What's your mother's job
仿写提示：把 mother 改为 aunt。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
3. 原句：She's a nurse.
仿写提示：把 she 改为 he，nurse 改为 doctor。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
4. 原句：What do you want to be
仿写提示：把 you 改为 your friend。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
5. 原句：I want to be a doctor in the future.
仿写提示：把 doctor 改为 reporter。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
6. 原句：I want to be a doctor because I want to help sick people.
仿写提示：改写为“我想当老师，因为我想帮助学生学习新知识”。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
五、连词成句
将下列单词重新排列成正确的句子，并注意大小写和标点。
1.job / What's / your / father's /
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2.a / She's / nurse / .
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3.want / What / you / do / be / to /
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4.future / to / I / a / be / want / in / teacher / the / .
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5.because / help / I / want / people / to / doctor / a / be / I / to / .
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6.hard / must / now / study / I / .
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六、写作练习
练习一：My Family Members' Jobs（基础）
请根据提示，写一段介绍家人职业的短文。至少写 4 句。
写作提示：可以写 father、mother、grandfather、aunt 等人物；至少介绍两位家人的职业。
可用句型：My ______ is a/an ______. He/She is a/an ______. They work hard.
参考词汇：farmer, teacher, reporter, worker, writer, doctor, driver, nurse, police officer
题目：My Family Members' Jobs
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练习二：My Dream Job（提高）
请以“My Dream Job”为题，写一段关于理想职业的短文。至少写 5 句。
写作提示：写清楚将来想做什么、为什么喜欢这份职业，以及现在应该怎样努力。
可用句型：I want to be a/an ______ in the future. I want to ______ because ______. I must ______ now.
题目：My Dream Job
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练习三：Jobs in My Family and My Dream（拓展）
请综合介绍家人的职业和自己的理想职业。至少写 7 句，尝试使用 and、because、so 或 but 中的两个。
写作提示：先介绍两位家人的职业，再写自己的理想职业、原因和现在的行动，最后写一句愿望或感受。
可用连接：My father is ... and my mother is ... I want to be ... because ... I must ... so ...
题目：Jobs in My Family and My Dream
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七、参考范文与讲解
范文一：My Family Members' Jobs
My father is a driver. My mother is a nurse. My uncle is a farmer. They all work hard. I love my family.
讲解：第一句和第二句分别介绍爸爸、妈妈的职业，结构清楚。第三句补充叔叔的职业，使内容更丰富。They all work hard. 用 they 指代前面几位家人，避免重复写 my father、my mother 和 my uncle。最后用 I love my family. 自然收尾。
可积累：介绍职业可以连续使用 My ... is a/an ...，但最好在后面增加工作特点或感受。
范文二：My Dream Job
I want to be a doctor in the future. I want to help sick people because I am kind and helpful. I like reading books about science. I must study hard and learn a lot now. I think being a doctor is a great job.
讲解：第一句直接点明理想职业。第二句用 because 说明原因，内容比只写 I like it. 更具体。第三句写兴趣，第四句用 must 写现在的努力。最后一句表达评价，使短文结构完整。
可积累：写“理想职业”时，可以按照“职业—原因—兴趣—现在的努力—感受”的顺序展开。
范文三：Jobs in My Family and My Dream
My father is a worker and my mother is a teacher. My aunt is a reporter. She visits lots of places and takes many photos. I want to be a writer in the future because I like reading children's books. I will read more and write every day, so I can learn to write well. I hope my dream will come true.
讲解：第一句用 and 连接爸爸和妈妈的职业。第二、三句介绍阿姨，并用 She 代替 my aunt，句子更自然。第四句用 because 说明自己想当作家的原因。第五句用 will 和 so 写出今后的行动及目的。结尾用 I hope my dream will come true. 表达愿望，层次最完整。
写作提醒：拓展作文不必堆砌职业名称，要围绕“职业、原因、行动、愿望”写出联系。
八、参考答案
句型仿写参考
1. My uncle is a farmer.
2. What's your aunt's job
3. He's a doctor.
4. What does your friend want to be
5. I want to be a reporter in the future.
6. I want to be a teacher because I want to help students learn new things.
连词成句参考
1. What's your father's job
2. She's a nurse.
3. What do you want to be
4. I want to be a teacher in the future.
5. I want to be a doctor because I want to help people.
6. I must study hard now.
写作练习参考
练习一示例：My father is a driver. My mother is a nurse. My grandfather is a farmer. They work hard every day. I love my family.
练习二示例：I want to be a teacher in the future. I want to help students learn new things because I like children. I enjoy reading books, too. I must study hard and learn a lot now. I think it is a great job.
练习三示例：My father is a worker and my mother is a nurse. My uncle is a farmer. He grows vegetables. I want to be a reporter in the future because I want to visit lots of places. I will read more and learn to write well, so I can do my job well. I hope my dream will come true.
说明：写作练习属于开放性表达，答案不唯一。只要内容符合题意、句子基本正确、层次清楚，均可得分。
九、写作小结
介绍职业：My ... is a/an ...
询问职业：What's your ...'s job
表达理想：I want to be a/an ... in the future.
说明原因：I want to ... because ...
写出行动：I must ... now. / I will ...
检查文章：职业前有 a/an，he/she 使用正确，句号和大小写准确。
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