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Unit 5 A tidy house
人教精通版五年级上 Unit 5 A tidy house 写作训练
Name: ____________________ Class: ____________ Date: ____________
一、单元写作目标
本单元围绕“A tidy house（整洁的家）”展开。写作时，要能够介绍自己的家务清单，写清楚做什么家务、在哪里做、什么时候做，以及自己帮助家人后的感受。
写作重点：家务动作表达；房间和地点；once/twice a week、every day、on Sunday 等频率和时间表达；can、should 和 but 的使用。
内容顺序：先说明家务清单，再按时间或顺序介绍具体家务，最后写自己的感受或家庭变化。
表达目标：能写出 5—8 句意思连贯的短文，既写清楚家务内容，又写清楚完成家务的时间和频率。
二、写作思路讲解
1. 先列出家务内容
可以先从房间和动作入手：bedroom—keep my room in order；living room—clean the living room；kitchen—do the dishes；bathroom—clean the bathroom；table—clean the table；clothes—wash the clothes。
2. 再补充时间和频率
every day：每天，如 I keep my room in order every day.
once a week：每周一次，如 I clean the living room once a week.
twice a week：每周两次，如 I do the dishes twice a week.
on Sundays：在每个星期日，如 I am always busy on Sundays.
3. 按照顺序组织短文
开头：This is my home duties list.
主体：按星期、频率或清洁顺序介绍家务。
拓展：用 and 连接两个动作，用 but 连接转折感受。
结尾：I enjoy the work. / A tidy house makes a happy family.
4. 注意动词搭配
家务表达要整体记忆：clean the living room、clean the dining table、do the dishes、wash the clothes、keep my room in order、put things away。不要把 do the dishes 写成 do the dish，也不要遗漏 the。
5. 写出自己的感受
完成家务后可以写 I get a little tired, but I enjoy the work very much. 也可以写 I am good at doing the dishes. 这样文章就不只是家务清单，还体现了自己的感受。
6. 写完后检查三件事
家务动作和地点是否搭配准确。
once、twice、every day、on Sundays 是否用在合适的位置。
do the dishes、wash the clothes 等短语是否完整，句子之间是否有连接。
三、重点句型
1. 开头介绍家务清单
This is my home duties list.
2. 表达每周一次
I clean the living room once a week.
3. 表达每周两次
I clean the dining table and do the dishes twice a week.
4. 表达每天做的事情
I keep my room in order every day.
5. 询问能做什么
— What can I do to help
— You can clean the bathroom.
6. 请求帮助
— Can you help me tidy the bedroom, please
— Sure. / Sorry, I'm busy now.
7. 表达转折感受
I get a little tired, but I enjoy the work very much.
8. 总结整理后的变化
A tidy house makes a happy family.
四、句型仿写
根据提示改写句子，注意家务短语、时间表达和连词的使用。
1. 原句：I clean the living room once a week.
仿写提示：把 living room 改为 bedroom，once a week 改为 every day。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
2. 原句：I do the dishes twice a week.
仿写提示：把 do the dishes 改为 wash the clothes。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
3. 原句：I keep my room in order every day.
仿写提示：把 my room 改为 the study。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
4. 原句：What can I do to help
仿写提示：把 help 改为 tidy the kitchen，并组成问句。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
5. 原句：You can clean the bathroom.
仿写提示：把 clean the bathroom 改为 clean the table。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
6. 原句：I get a little tired, but I enjoy the work very much.
仿写提示：仿写“我有点累，但是我很喜欢帮助家人”。
仿写：________________________________________________________________________
五、连词成句
将下列单词重新排列成正确的句子，并注意频率表达、动词短语和标点。
1.is / This / home / my / duties / list / .
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2.the / I / clean / room / living / once / week / a / .
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3.dishes / do / I / twice / week / a / the / .
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4.room / keep / I / my / order / in / every / day / .
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5.can / What / I / do / to / help /
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6.tidy / A / house / makes / happy / a / family / .
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六、写作练习
练习一：My Home Duties List（基础）
请以“My Home Duties List”为题，介绍自己会做的家务。至少写 4 句。
写作提示：至少写两种家务，尝试加入 once a week、twice a week 或 every day 中的两个。
可用句型：This is my home duties list. I ______ once/twice a week. I ______ every day.
参考词汇：clean the living room, clean the table, do the dishes, wash the clothes, keep my room in order
题目：My Home Duties List
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练习二：What I Do for My Family（提高）
请以“What I Do for My Family”为题，介绍自己为家人做的事情。至少写 5 句。
写作提示：写清楚在哪里做家务、什么时候做，以及你做完后的感受。
可用连接：On Sundays, I ... Then, I ... I am a little tired, but ...
题目：What I Do for My Family
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练习三：A Busy but Happy Sunday（拓展）
请以“A Busy but Happy Sunday”为题，介绍一个星期日你和家人一起做家务的过程。至少写 7 句，尝试使用 first、then、after that 或 but 中的两个。
写作提示：先写星期日的整体安排，再按顺序写你和家人做的家务，最后写房子变整洁后的感受。
可用连接：First, ... Then, ... After that, ... We are tired, but ... A tidy house ...
题目：A Busy but Happy Sunday
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七、参考范文与讲解
范文一：My Home Duties List
This is my home duties list. I clean the living room once a week. I clean the table and do the dishes twice a week. I keep my room in order every day. I enjoy helping my family.
讲解：第一句点明主题。第二、三、四句分别写清楚家务内容和频率，使用了 once a week、twice a week 和 every day。第三句用 and 连接两个动作，最后一句表达帮助家人的感受，内容完整。
可积累：介绍家务清单时，可以按照“家务内容＋时间或频率”的方式展开：I ... once a week. / I ... every day.
范文二：What I Do for My Family
This is my home duties list. On Saturdays, I clean the living room and the dining table. On Sundays, I do the dishes and wash the clothes. I also keep my room in order every day. I am a little tired, but I enjoy the work very much. My family is happy when our house is tidy.
讲解：短文按照星期组织内容，先写 Saturday，再写 Sunday，最后补充每天做的事情。On Saturdays 和 On Sundays 让时间更清楚。第四句用 also 增加信息，第五句用 but 表达“虽然累但喜欢”，最后写出整洁的家给家庭带来的变化。
可积累：按照时间写家务时，可以使用 On Saturdays ... On Sundays ... every day ...，文章会更有顺序。
范文三：A Busy but Happy Sunday
On Sunday, my family cleans our house together. First, Mum does the dishes and Dad washes the clothes. Then, I clean the living room and put my things in order. After that, we clean the bathroom and the table. We are a little tired, but we are happy. Our house looks tidy and beautiful. A tidy house makes a happy family.
讲解：第一句总写星期日的安排。第二至四句用 First、Then、After that 按顺序写家人做的家务，人物和动作都很清楚。第五句用 but 连接疲惫和快乐，第六句写整理后的房子，最后用单元主题句总结。
写作提醒：拓展作文要写出“谁做什么、先做什么、再做什么、结果怎样”，不要只写 I clean ... I clean ...。
八、参考答案
句型仿写参考
1. I clean the bedroom every day.
2. I wash the clothes twice a week.
3. I keep the study in order every day.
4. What can I do to tidy the kitchen
5. You can clean the table.
6. I get a little tired, but I enjoy helping my family.
连词成句参考
1. This is my home duties list.
2. I clean the living room once a week.
3. I do the dishes twice a week.
4. I keep my room in order every day.
5. What can I do to help
6. A tidy house makes a happy family.
写作练习参考
练习一示例：This is my home duties list. I clean the living room once a week. I do the dishes twice a week. I keep my room in order every day. I enjoy helping my family.
练习二示例：This is my home duties list. On Saturdays, I clean the living room and the table. On Sundays, I do the dishes and wash the clothes. I keep my room in order every day. I am a little tired, but I enjoy the work.
练习三示例：On Sunday, my family cleans our house together. First, Mum does the dishes and Dad washes the clothes. Then, I clean the living room. After that, we clean the bathroom and the table. We are tired, but we are happy. Our house looks tidy and beautiful. A tidy house makes a happy family.
说明：写作练习属于开放性表达，答案不唯一。只要内容符合题意、句子基本正确、层次清楚，均可得分。
九、写作小结
开头点题：This is my home duties list.
家务动作：clean the room/table, do the dishes, wash the clothes, keep my room in order
频率表达：once a week, twice a week, every day, on Sundays
顺序表达：First, Then, After that
表达感受：I am tired, but I enjoy the work.
总结变化：A tidy house makes a happy family.
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