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如何写与音乐相关的文章
本单元以“音乐”为话题，介绍了不同类型的音乐、乐
器、著名音乐家以及音乐对人们的影响。与此相关的写
作通常涉及以下三个方面：①介绍某位音乐家；②介绍
某首音乐作品；③介绍某种音乐风格。
在具体介绍某种音乐风格时，通常包含以下要点：
①该音乐风格的特点（如旋律、节奏、情感表达等）；
②常用的乐器；③代表音乐家或代表作品；④自己喜爱
该音乐风格的原因。#1.1.1
典例 假设你是阳光中学九年级学生李华，你校英文报正
在举办以“My Favourite Style of Music”为主题的征文活
动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文进行投稿，要
求词数不少于100。
提示：
·What style of music do you like best
·What features does it have
·What instruments are used in the music
·Who is your favourite musician of this style
·What are your feelings about this style of music
审主题：最喜欢的音乐风格
审体裁：说明文
审时态：以一般现在时为主
审人称：以第一人称和第三人称为主
审要点：音乐风格、特点、所用乐器、喜爱的音乐家及
感受
写作框架
词句积累
词 汇 音乐 风格 country music 乡村音乐
classical music古典音乐
jazz 爵士乐
traditional Chinese folk music 中国传统民间
音乐
rock 摇滚乐
词 汇 音乐 特点 beautiful 漂亮的 powerful 有力量的
relaxing 令人放松的 exciting 令人激动的moving 令人感动的 soft 轻柔的
gentle 柔和的 loud 响亮
unique 独一无二的 calming 令人平静的
词 汇 乐器 类型 piano 钢琴 violin 小提琴
guitar 吉他 erhu 二胡
guzheng 古筝 flute 长笛 drum 鼓
词 汇 感受 与评 价 make me feel relaxed/happy/excited 使我感
到放松/快乐/兴奋
fill my heart with joy 使我的心中充满喜悦
be moved by 被……感动
help me relax 帮助我放松
improve my sleep 改善我的睡眠
词 汇 感受 与评 价 be good for the brain 对大脑有益
remind me of ... 使我想起……
there is nothing more ... than ... 没有比……
更……的了
句 子 开头句
My favourite style of music is classical/rock/folk
music.我最喜欢的音乐风格是古典/摇滚/民间音乐。
There are many different styles of music around the
world, but my favourite is traditional Chinese folk
music.世界上有许多不同的音乐风格，但我最喜欢的
是中国传统民间音乐。
句 子 中间句
I love this style because it is beautiful and
powerful.我喜欢这种风格，因为它既优美又有力量。
Sometimes they are soft and gentle, but they can
also be loud and powerful.有时它们轻柔温和，但也
可以响亮有力。
句 子 Common instruments in this style include the piano,
violin and flute.这种风格常见的乐器包括钢琴、小提
琴和长笛。
My favourite musician is Beethoven/Mozart/Tan
Dun/...我最喜欢的音乐家是贝多芬/莫扎特/谭盾/……
句 子 结尾句
This type of music is relaxing and can make me
feel less stressed.这种音乐令人放松，能让我不那么
有压力。
句 子 For me, there is nothing more powerful and calming
than classical music.对我来说，没有什么比古典音乐
更有力量、更让人平静的了。
It fills my heart with joy and helps me forget my
worries.它让我的心中充满喜悦，帮助我忘记烦恼。
佳作展示
My Favourite Style of Music
My favourite style of music is classical music. ① I fell
in love with it when I first listened to Mozart’s The
Magic Flute at the age of eight.
Classical music is beautiful and mon
instruments in this style include the piano, violin and
flute. Their sound can be not only soft and gentle, but
also loud and powerful. My favourite musician is
Beethoven. ②Since his music is powerful, it moves me
every time I listen to it.
教材原句 Since he had no real musical instruments then, he made music with simple objects like stones and paper. （教材P66）
③ For me, there is nothing more relaxing than classical
music. It fills my heart with joy and helps me forget
my worries. I believe music is a treasure that everyone
should enjoy.
教材原句 For me, there is nothing more fantastic than classical music. （教材P76）
名师点评
本文从音乐风格及特点、乐器、代表音乐家等方面
介绍了古典音乐，结构清晰，语言流畅。
①用“fall in love with ... when ... ”句式点明自己爱上古
典音乐的契机。
②用since引导原因状语从句，说明喜欢贝多芬的原因，
对应的主句中含有every time引导的时间状语从句，强调
了该音乐的感染力。
③用“there is nothing more ... than ... ”句型，突出了古
典音乐在自己心中的地位。

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