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Key question
沪教牛津版七年级上册
Unit 5 Off to space
Writing
主题范畴：人与自然
What is it like to travel in space
China’s space dream
Thousands of years ago, there was a Chinese story about Chang’e flying to the Moon.
During the Ming Dynasty, the Chinese made the first rocket.
On 15 October 2003, Yang Liwei went into space in the Shenzhou V spaceship.
On 24 April 1970, China sent its first satellite into space.
If you have a chance to visit space, how will you plan your trip
Space Adventure
Have you ever dreamt of travelling to space Now comes your chance: write a post about your dream trip and send it to us. The writer of the best post will win a free trip to space!
Pre-writing
太空冒险
你曾梦想过去太空旅行吗 现在机会来了:写一篇关于梦想中的太空之旅的网帖并发给我们。最佳网帖的作者可以赢得一次免费的太空之旅!
Writing a post about a dream trip to space.
David drew a mind map before writing. Let’s match the topic with each paragraph.
d
c
b
a
Brainstorming
Introduction:
Background information
When
How long
Where
What
Why
How
with whom
Things We will have to do in space
tie my sleeping bag to the wall
wash in a different way
learn how to float safely
do exercise every day
communicate with the Earth
check and fix our spacecraft
avoid pollution
take oxygen tanks
eat space food
Things We can do in space
look at the Earth from space
do some experiments
go on a spacewalk
take photos of the Milky Way
encourage space travel
explore other planets
look for signs of life
build new stations
launch satellites
teach live lessons from space
look at stars
What the trip will be like
amazing
wonderful
fantastic
happy
special
interesting
great
exciting
enjoyable
Can you figure out more
dream
chance
send
introduction
view
n. 梦想；理想
v. 做梦；梦见
n.机会；机遇
v.邮寄；发送
n.序言；引言
n.景色；风景
New words
someday
experience
get into orbit
adv.总有一天；有朝一日
n.经历；阅历
进入轨道
New words
I hope I can travel into space with my family one day. This is what my dream trip looks like. First, my family and I will fly out into space on a spaceship. When we get into orbit, we will visit a space station. It will take us about six hours to get there.
Things are very different in space. There is much less gravity, so we will have to tie our sleeping bags to the wall when we sleep. We will also have to wash our hands and brush our teeth in a different way.
Read David’s post and find out how he organizes the writing.
阅读范文，找出重点词汇和核心句式。
When we arrive at the space station, I will first look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. After that, I would like to do some experiments. I really want to study how plants grow in space. Next, I’m going to put on a spacesuit and go on a spacewalk.
I really look forward to travelling into space someday—it will be an amazing experience!
Writing
假设你叫李华，请根据所学的知识，写一篇关于梦想中的月球之旅的网帖，根据以下思维导图的提示，拓展内容。要求：80词左右;文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
主题：人与自然——宇宙探索
文体：记叙文
人称： ________和第三人称
时态：以 _____________ 为主
第一
一般将来时
Step 1: 题干细审
开头
02
01
Visiting
the
Moon
03
结尾
正文
引入主题，介绍太空旅行的背景。
Step 2: 谋篇布局
总结太空旅行的感受和收获
对未来太空探索的展望
详细描述太空旅行的过程，包括进行的活动和必须做的事情。
1. 这是我梦想中的旅行。(look like)
________________________________________________
2. 在那里，我将需要做几件事。(need to do)
________________________________________________
3. 让他们知道我们的发现和我们面临的挑战是很重要的。(It’s句型)
________________________________________________
________________________________________________
4. 月球之旅一定会是一次难忘的经历! (be sure to...)
________________________________________________
This is what my dream trip looks like.
There are a few things I'll need to do there.
It's important to make them know our findings
and any challenges we face.
The trip to the Moon is sure to be an unforgettable experience!
Step 3: 句型点拨
Visiting the Moon
I hope I can visit the Moon with my family one day. This is what my dream trip looks like. First, my family and I will fly to the Moon on a spaceship. The Moon is around 380,000 kilometres from the Earth, so it’ll take us about three days to get there.
Things are different in space. There are a few things I'll need to do there.There is much less gravity, so everything floats, including us! We'll need to learn how to float safely. It's like being a superhero who can fly, but with practice to master the art of 'space walking'. Because there is no air on the Moon, we must take oxygen tanks with us. Even though we're far
Step 4: 扩充成文
away, we can still talk to our friends and scientists on Earth. We use radios and satellites to send messages back and forth. It's important to make them know our findings and any challenges we face. Sometimes, we share beautiful pictures of Earth from space!
When we arrive at the space station, I will take a walk on the Moon and take as many photos as I can. After that, We can help build new stations. Space stations are like homes for astronauts. It’s meaningful to do so. Next, I am going to teach live lessons from space, to share my experiences and knowledge with students around the world.
I really look forward to it now. The trip to the Moon is sure to be an unforgettable experience! I can't wait to embark on this incredible journey!
Post-writing
Check and revise 检查和修改
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。
I focused on a clear topic in each paragraph.
我专注于每个段落中明确的主题。
I described what I will have to do in space, such as ________________, and what I am going to do there, such as _______________________.
我描述了我将在太空中必须要做的事，比如______,以及我将在那里做什么,比如_______。
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
我使用了本单元已经学习的语言表达。
I used correct spelling, grammar and punctuation.
我使用了正确的拼 写、语法以及标点符号。
Grade and share
Elements要素 Level档次
Content内容(6分) 要点齐全，切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当，丰富
Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡
互评总分
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