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Key question
沪教牛津版八年级上册
Unit 5
Going on an exchange trip
Writing
主题范畴：人与社会
What are the benefits of an exchange trip
What kind of letters or cards have you received Do you know what a thank-you email is
Lead in
Importance and purpose of thank-you emails
Why do we write thank-you emails Why are they important
Thank-you emails are a great way to express gratitude.
They help us build strong relationships.
Eric has returned to London. He decides to write a thank-you email to his host family.
埃里克已经回到了伦敦。他决定给他的寄宿家庭写一封感谢信。
Writing a thank-you email
写一封感谢信
Eric’s teacher has suggested an outline and some useful expressions for a thank-you email. Add more useful expressions if you can.
Greeting and opening
Body of the email
Closing and signature
Structure of a thank-you email
Content Useful expressions
Greetings and beginning of the email I hope you are well. How are you
I’m writting to thank you for ...
.
问候语和开头
拉近与收信人的距离
直接表明写信目的
Content Useful expressions
Your appreciation and gratitude Things you are grateful for Things you enjoyed most about the trip Things you learnt during your stay in Beijing (e.g. Chinese history, Chinese culture) It was so kind of you to ...
I am grateful that ...
It has been a fantastic experience to learn ...
I felt like part of the family.
I still remember the day when ...
.
用不同的语言结构表达感谢
表达感激和谢意
Content Useful expressions
Your life and feelings after the trip Things you have done since you returned to London Things you miss about Beijing I have told my friends about ...
The thing I miss most is ...
I do hope that ...
.
Ending and signing off Best wishes to the host family Keep in touch!
Yours,
Best wishes,
.
分享经历和收获
结语和签名
More useful expressions
1. Thank you so much for your hospitality.
非常感谢您的热情款待。
2. I truly appreciate your kindness.
我真心感谢您的好意。
3. I will never forget the wonderful time we spent together.
我永远不会忘记我们共度的美好时光。
4. I leant so much from this experiences.
我从这次经历中学到了很多。
5. I look forward to our next meeting.
我期待我们下次的会面。
6. Sincerely 真诚地
Imagine you are Eric. You have just come back from Beijing. Now, you want to write a thank-you email to your host family. What should you include in the email Look at the texts on pages 69 and 73, and then discuss in groups.
Brainstorming
1. What are you most grateful for
(e.g. being wonderful hosts, showing you around)
2. What was the most enjoyable part of the trip
(e.g. food / places of interest)
3. What have you learnt about Chinese history and culture
4. What have you done since you returned to the UK
5. What do you miss most about Beijing
Step 1 Plan
Make an outline of the thank-you email.
Step 2 Write
文体：
人称：
时态：
写作要点：
应用文
第一人称
一般现在时/
一般过去时/现在完成时
表达感谢
Writing
假如你是Bob，来自法国，加入了学校的国际交流项目。你已经完成在北京的学习并返回巴黎了。请你根据以下内容提示，给北京的寄宿家庭王先生一家写一封邮件，感谢他们对你的帮助。要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。
要点提示：
1. 你的感激之情和谢意
2. 访问结束后你的生活和感受
主题：人与自我——生活与学习
文体：应用文
人称： _____________ 人称
时态：以 _____________ 为主
第一
一般过去时
Step 1: 题干细审
Beginning：
02
01
1
03
Your life and feelings after the trip:
Your appreciation and gratitude:
(1) _________________ (你们好吗) I’m writing to thank you for your kind help during my stay in Beijing.
Step 2: 谋篇布局
How are you
A thank-you email to Mr and Mrs Wang
04
Your wish:
02
· You always patiently (2) ______me____(帮助)my studies.
· I still remember the day when we (3)_______________
(做饺子) together.
· The visit to the Great Wall was (4)____________ (令人难
忘的).
· I also (5) __________________ (对……了解更多)
Chinese culture and history.
Your appreciation and gratitude:
Step 2: 谋篇布局
helped with
1
A thank-you email to Mr and Mrs Wang
made dumplings
unforgettable
·After (6) ___________ (返回) Paris, I (7) _______ my
experiences and photos _____(和……分享) my classmates.
·I really miss everything in Beijing.
03
Your life and feelings after the trip:
learned more about
returning to
shared
with
Beginning：
02
01
1
03
Your life and feelings after the trip:
Your appreciation and gratitude:
· I hope you can come to Paris and (8) ______________
(玩得开心) here.
Step 2: 谋篇布局
have a good time
A thank-you email to Mr and Mrs Wang
04
Your wish:
Step 3: 句子提升
★ 常用连词：
1. 无论何时 __________ 2. 此外 __________
★ 高分表达：
3. 很幸运做某事 _______________
4. 让某人感到宾至如归 _______________
5. 解决 _______________
6. 对……有更深入的了解_______________
7. 迫不及待做某事 _______________
8. 变得对……感兴趣 _______________
9. 保持联系 _______________
in addition
no matter when
make sb. feel at home
deal with
be lucky to do sth.
have a deeper understanding of ...
can’t wait to do sth.
become interested in ...
keep in touch
基础版范文
Dear Mr and Mrs Wang,
How are you I’m back in Paris now. I’m writing to thank you for your kind help during my stay in Beijing.
I am so lucky to have met you. When I was in Beijing, you always patiently helped me with my studies, especially when I struggled with Chinese. I still remember the day when we made dumplings together. My dumplings looked funny at first but still tasted great. The visit to the Great Wall was unforgettable.
Step 4: 扩充成文
When I was walking on those ancient stones, I deeply realized the grandness and wisdom of ancient Chinese people! During my stay, I also learned more about Chinese culture, from the stories behind traditional festivals to the beauty of famous places of interest.
After I returned to Paris, I shared my experiences and photos with my classmates. I even taught them to make dumplings. All of them wanted to visit Beijing in the future. I really miss everything in Beijing.
Let’s keep in touch! I hope you can come to Paris someday and have a good time here.
Best wishes,
Bob
进阶版范文
Dear Mr and Mrs Wang,
How are you I’m back in Paris now. I’m writing to thank you for your kind help during my stay in Beijing.
I am so lucky to have met you, for you made me feel at home in Beijing from the very beginning. You patiently helped me deal with problems with my studies. No matter when I met difficulties, you always explained them step by step, making me feel encouraged and supported. In addition, I still remember the day when we made dumplings together. My dumplings looked funny at first but still tasted great. These moments, filled with laughter and warmth, made me feel that I’m really part of your family. What I enjoyed most is the unforgettable visit to the Great Wall.
When I stepped onto it, I deeply felt the amazing grandness and wisdom of the ancient Chinese people. Through the experience, I had a deeper understanding of Chinese culture, from the stories behind traditional festivals to the beauty of famous places of interest.
After I returned to Paris, I couldn’t wait to share my wonderful journey with my classmates. They all became interested in China and wanted to visit Beijing in the future. I really miss everything in Beijing.
Let’s keep in touch! I’d love to host you in Paris someday and return the kindness that you showed me.
Best wishes,
Bob
Post-writing
Check and revise 检查和修改
Tick (√) the boxes to check your writing, and then revise it.
根据下面的清单检查和修改作文。
I used appropriate expressions, such as , for
greetings and signing off.
I used appropriate vocabulary, such as , to
describe Eric’s expressions and feelings about the trip.
I used the words and expressions I learnt in this unit.
I used correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
Check and revise
Elements要素 Level档次
Content内容 (6分) 要点齐全，切合题意
适当发挥
Accuracy准确性(6分) 语法，大小写，拼写等格式错误
语言使用恰当，丰富
Fluency流畅性(3分) 分段，书写，衔接，过渡
互评总分
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