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读后续写之
动作描写
英语读后续写主要涉及动作描写、情感描写、对话描写以及环境描写。
情感描写:
Disappointment Happiness Horror Anger Sadness & Sorrow &Tears & Cry
Surprise Anxiety & Nervousness Embarrassment & Regret
Thinking Satisfaction
动作描写
1.精选动词，精准描述
2.添加修饰成分。做到生动描述———添加介词短语或者副词
3.分解动作，形成动作链或者动作面
1.关于说的动作：
嘟囔： whisper / mumble / grunt / murmur
结结巴巴地说：stutter / stumble / stammer
宣布：announce/declare
保证：promise/assure
建议：offer/propose/suggest；
问与答：ask /answer /reply
喊叫：cry out 喊叫 / call喊叫 / shout大喊 / scream尖叫 /yell大喊exclaim 呼喊，惊叫
其他的说：add补充说道= continue继续说道 / retort反驳道 explain解释道 / state陈述道 / protest抗议道 / sob哭诉道 / agree同意地说/ comfort安慰道 / blurt out脱口而出 / insist 坚持道，强调
1.关于笑的动作：
beam beam with +情绪 joy/happiness/excitement.
Smile smile at sb.
smile with relief 宽慰地笑
give a faint smile 微微一笑
force a smile/ squeeze a smile 强颜欢笑
laugh laugh one’s head off 笑掉大牙
give a horse laugh 一阵狂笑
burst into laughter/ burst out laughing 突然大笑
grin咧嘴笑 grin from ear to ear 咧到嘴巴根
chuckle轻声笑/giggle咯咯笑/sneer讥讽地笑/beam笑容满面/grin露齿笑
2.关于eye的动作：
闪烁（某种感彩）：
shine / sparkle / glimmer / glitter / twinkle with+excitement / joy / pride 等表示感彩的名词
各种哭：cry / sob=whimper啜泣,抽噎 / weep（wept） / wail=squall 恸哭,号啕 / burst into tears / burst out crying / fight back tears抑制住泪水/snivel 哭诉
睁大眼睛：one's eyes widened / grew wide
2.关于eye的动作：
watch, observe, scan, find, notice, discover, spot, catch sight of, lose sight
Tears blurred my eyes.泪水模糊 =one’s eyes be misted with tears.
Be filled with tears/ be wet with tears 泪流满面
Be in floods of tears/ Tears well up in one’s eyes. 泪如泉涌
look at stare at gaze at glance at glare at
看 盯着 凝视 扫视 怒目而视
3.关于head的动作：
点头 They nodded their heads in agreement
摇头 She shook her head in doubt
挠头 He scratched his head, not understanding a word.
埋头 She buried her head on his shoulder.
抬头 She raised her head and saw the face of her mother.
低头 one’s head dropped \ drop/hang/lower one's head 低头
“Yes” she said, dropping her head.
把头靠在 He rested his head on the desk, staring at the mountain in the distance.
4.关于hand的动作：
各种打：pound / thump / punch 猛击 beat 连续击打 slap 打耳光 tap/pat轻拍
各种抓：seize；grasp；grab; take hold of; catch hold of
其他的动作：pull拉/掏； push推；reach 伸；drag拽；pinch捏 wipe擦；rub揉；；press按压；roll摇；pick up捡起；fetch取
搂肩膀 He put his arms around my shoulders.
hug/embrace/hold/ grab sb in one's arms 拥抱= round sb. with ...arms
5.关于body的动作：
sit 坐；lie 躺；bend/stoop down 弯腰；lean against..倚靠；
drop/hang/lower one's head 低头
6.关于heart的动作：
各种心跳：beat / thump / pound / pump ( with excitement/fear)
其他动作：miss/skip a beat 漏跳了一拍； break心碎；melt融化；ache疼
7.关于foot/knee的动作：
dash/rush冲 rise to one's feet 站起来 struggle\ stagger to one's feet 吃力地站起来
jump to one's feet 跳起来 kneel down跪下 get down on one knee单膝跪地 slip 滑到 sneak/creep偷偷走 crawl 爬 limp/stagger/stumble摇摇晃晃地走
7.关于foot/knee的动作：
跛脚 hobble/ limp 漫步 wander
踱步 pace up and down.
踮脚 tiptoe
添加介词短语或者副词来修饰动词，从而完成动作描写
①with+情感名词的搭配：
with delight/excitement/ pleasure/ happiness /joy/satisfaction /anger/rage/patience/fear/terror/embarrassment/pride/caution/care/
patience/certainty
如：Her eyes shone with excitement.
她的眼睛中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
添加介词短语或者副词来修饰动词，从而完成动作描写
②with+身体部位
with its hungry red eyes/ its sharp teeth/her shaky hand/her pale lips
The ferocious wolf stared at Mac with its hungry red eyes.
那只凶猛的狼用它饥饿的红眼睛盯着麦克
She kissed Oliver with her pale lips.
她用苍白的嘴唇吻了吻奥利弗。
添加介词短语或者副词来修饰动词，从而完成动作描写
③in+名词
in surprise/amazement/shock/sorrow伤心
in a high /low / sweet/loud/soft /weak voice 用..的嗓音
in a tone of surprise /curiosity /impatience /regret /command命令/sarcasm讽刺 用...的语气
如：He gazed at me in surprise. 他惊讶地盯着我
添加介词短语或者副词来修饰动词，从而完成动作描写
④副词
suddenly /immediately /instantly /rapidly /firmly /slowly /angrily/happily/excitedly
He carefully jumped over the broken glasses.
他小心翼翼地跳过碎玻璃。
1.动作链的表达可用状语从句，如when，while，as，before，after引导的时间状语从句来体现。
① When I arrived there, I walked to the door and knocked.
② As I waited at the stop, I heard a big noise.
2.动作链的表达可用并列谓语动词来体现，即A and B或 A, B and C.
① She hailed a taxi, got into it and told the driver her destination.
② He reached deep into his pocket , pulled out a handful of change, and held it up to the farmer.
③ He put his hand on Diana's shoulder, leaned in again and gently said....
3.动作链的表达可用非谓语来体现。(抓准主句)
⑴ A-ing，B 或者A，B-ing
① Looking up at the farmer, the boy said, “Thank you.”
② The dog awkwardly wobbled towards the others, doing its best to catch up.
⑵ A and B, C-ing 或者A，B-ing and C-ing或者A-ing， B，C-ing
①The farmer picked up the dog and knelt down, saying, “It's yours now.”
② The students came in, talking and laughing.
③ Looking straight into my eyes, Mike stroked my hair, whispering“You are the most beautiful girl I‘ve ever seen.”
⑶ Having done.., 主句 这个句型可以和after引导的时间状语从句互换
①Having left something in the cloakroom, I went inside to get it and found....
= After I had left something in the cloakroom, I went inside to get it and...
② Having thought about the situation for a while, I decided to ask Roy about the theft.=？？
1.看到远处的直升机，Jane一把抓起地上的黄色夹克，朝着直升机挥舞起来。
Seeing the helicopter in the distance, Jane grabbed the yellow jacket on the ground, waving it to the helicopter.
2.Arthur冲到街上，拦下一辆出租车，跳了上去。
Rushing to the street, Arthur stopped a taxi and jumped into it.
Arthur rushed to the street, stopped a taxi and jumped into it.
3.她打开门，手里抱着一个盒子，说道：“这是给你的。”
She opened the door, holding a box in her hand and saying:” This is for you.”
客观事物相关动作
风: blow 刮 howl 怒号 roar 呼啸 whip 鞭打 kiss 亲吻
雨：beat against 拍打 pour down 倾盆 fall 落下
雪：dance 跳舞 float/ fall 飘落 melt away 融化 blanket 裹住 be covered with snow星星：shine 发光 twinkle 闪耀 decorate 装饰 hide 躲藏
太阳：come out 出来 rise 升起 set 落下 be bathed in 沐浴在 flood in 照射进来
常用的形容词:
风/雨: gentle/soft 轻柔的 warm 温暖的 pleasant 令人愉悦的 icy/ freezing 冰冷的 strong/ violent 猛烈的 howling 呼啸的 bone-chilling 刺骨的 dreadful可怕的
雪：feathery 鹅毛般的 tiny 极小的 pure 纯洁的 clean 干净的
星星：lovely 可爱的 little 小的 shining/glowing 亮闪闪的 pale/faint 暗淡的 starless 没有星星的
太阳：warm温暖的 burning 火辣辣的

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