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话题7 职业启蒙与职业精神
写作资源库
角度1　职业梦想的内容、原因
1.in the future 在未来
2.grow up 长大
3.dream of doing sth.梦想做某事
4.achieve/realize one’s dream 实现某人的梦想
5.(one’s dream) come true (某人的梦想) 实现
6.succeed in doing sth.成功做成某事
7.manage to do sth.设法做成某事
8.enrich one’s knowledge 充实某人的学识
9.be brave to face different challenges 勇于面对不同的挑战
10.learn some life skills 学习一些生活技能
11.a sense of responsibility 责任感
12.keep promises 信守承诺
13.have an effect on 对……有影响
14.make the world better 让世界变得更美好
15.give a helping hand to others 帮助他人
16.bring happiness to people 给人们带去快乐
角度2　实现职业梦想的方法
1.keep on doing sth.坚持做某事
2.have to do with 与……有关
3.be strict with sb.对某人严格
4.stick to 坚持
5.fight for 为……而奋斗
6.hold on to one’s dream 坚持某人的梦想
7.take part in 参与
8.be admitted into 被……录取
9.when it comes to sth.当谈到某事
10.go all out 全力以赴
11.spare no effort to do sth.尽最大的努力做某事
12.make up one’s mind to do sth./ be determined to do sth.下定决心做某事
13.improve myself 提升自我
14.work hard at all the subjects 努力学习各门功课
15.get much more practice 多练习
16.never give up 永不放弃
写作语料积累
写作语料积累
素材集锦
开头句——点明主题
1.It’s of great importance for us to make up our minds to achieve our dreams.下定决心去实现梦想对我们来说至关重要。
2.I’m writing to apply for the position of teenage guide with great interest.我怀着极大的兴趣写信申请青少年导游这一岗位。
写作语料积累
3.I’m eager to take this chance to learn more about nature and improve myself.我渴望抓住这次机会了解更多自然知识，提升自我。
4.Nowadays，career planning is becoming more and more important for us middle school students.如今，职业规划对我们中学生来说变得越来越重要。
中间句——选择职业的原因
1.I hope to share my love for nature with more visitors.我希望和更多游客分享我对大自然的热爱。
2.Being responsible is one of my most important qualities.有责任心是我最重要的品质之一。
3.I value teamwork and enjoy working with other volunteers.我重视团队合作，乐于和其他志愿者一起工作。
4.I have a gift for communicating with others and have rich experience in guiding people.我有与他人沟通的天赋，并且拥有丰富的导游
经验。
5.I dream of being a good teacher who teaches kids not only knowledge but also the truth about life.我梦想成为一名好老师，不仅传授知识，更传授人生的真理。
6.I want to be a scientist because I’m really interested in science and I hope to make great contributions to our country.我想成为一名科学家，因为我对科学真的很感兴趣，并且我希望为我们国家做出巨大贡献。
结尾句——表达态度、展望与倡议
1.I would be grateful if you could give me a chance.如果您能给我一次机会，我将不胜感激。
2.I hope I can make a difference to visitors’ trip in the park.我希望我能够为游客的公园之行产生影响。
3.Let’s start to think about our careers now and work hard to make our dreams come true.让我们现在就开始思考我们的职业，并努力让我们的梦想成真。
俗语谚语
1.Hard work pays off.天道酬勤。
2.Where there is a will，there is a way.有志者，事竟成。
佳句仿写
技巧1：伴随状语
1.【开头句】 I’m writing to apply for this position with great interest.我怀着极大的兴趣申请这个职位。
仿写：我怀着激动的心情报名了这个组织。
→________________________________________________________
　I signed up for this organization with great excitement.　
技巧2：时间状语从句
2.【中间句】 I have been fascinated by plants and animals since I was a child.我从小就对植物和动物着迷。
仿写：自从我得到第一本故事书，我就爱上了阅读。
→________________________________________________________　
I have fallen in love with reading since I got my first storybook.
技巧3：条件状语从句
3.【结尾句】 I will work hard if you give me the chance.如果您给我这次机会，我将会努力工作。
仿写：如果您选择我，我将全力以赴服务每一位游客。
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　 I will spare no effort to serve every visitor if you choose me.　
范文思路领航
/ 职业启蒙·争做小导游 / 为丰富青少年暑期生活，某自然公园现面向社会公开招募暑期青少年导游。假如你是李林，你对这一活动很感兴趣，请你根据写作提示，给公园负责人写一封邮件推荐自己，表达参加暑期导游活动的意愿。
写作提示：1.love nature； interested in plants and animals
2.patient and helpful； with good team spirit
3.good communication skills
写作要求：1.文中须包含以上写作提示中的所有信息，可适当
发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir，
I’ve learned that you are looking for summer teenage guides in your nature park.____________________________________________
Yours，
Li Lin
审题思路指导
审主题：_______________
审文体：_______________
审人称：_________
审要点&时态：①______________________________&一般现在时
②______________&一般现在时
③____________________________&一般现在时或一般将来时
青少年导游招募
应用文自荐邮件
第一人称
说明来意，申请青少年导游岗位
介绍个人优势
重申申请意愿，表达工作态度
写作框架搭建
I want to be a teenager guide
要点1：说明来意，申请青少年导游岗位
要点2：介绍个人优势
要点3：重申申请意愿，表达工作态度
抓分短语： look for summer teenage guides,want to be one of them, show
great interest in, write to apply for, learn from the notice
抓分短语: be interested in, be fascinated by wildlife, go hiking, have a great
passion for,patient and helpful,have good team spirit,be ready to help
others, be gifted in communication
抓分短语: work hard, give me the chance, try my best, be grateful for the
chance, take the job seriously, spare no effort to do the work well
抓分主旨句: Let me tell you more about my advantages./ First of all, I have
a deep love for.../ Besides, I am patient..., with strong team spirit./ Third, 1
have very good communication skills.
抓分主旨句：I’m more than glad tolearn that.../ I really want to take this
chance./After learning about..., I am eager to be...
抓分主旨句： I will work hard if you give me the chance./I am ready to put
my passion and skills to good use as.../ If I am lucky enough to..., I will try
my best to do it well.
范文精华赏析
简约版
Dear Sir，
I’ve learned that you are looking for summer teenage guides in your nature park.I’m Li Lin and I want to be one of them.Here are my reasons for applying.
First，I love nature very much.I am interested in plants and animals.I often read books about them and know a lot.优势1 Second，I am a patient and helpful person.I have good team spirit and I can work well with others.优势2 Third，I have very good communication skills.I like talking to people and making new friends.优势3
I really want to get this job.I will work hard if you give me the chance.
Yours，
Li Lin
闪耀版
Dear Sir，
I’ve learned that you are looking for summer teenage guides in your nature park.I’m Li Lin，and I’m writing to apply for this position with great interest.
As a nature lover，I have been fascinated by plants and animals since I was a child.I often go hiking in the countryside and have learned a lot about wildlife.优势1 Besides，I am patient and helpful by nature，always ready to lend a hand to those in need.My classmates often praise me for my team spirit，as I believe cooperation makes everything easier.优势2
Most importantly，I am gifted in communication.I enjoy talking with people，which helps me express myself clearly and confidently.优势3
I am ready to put my passion and skills to good use as a guide.I would be grateful if you could give me this chance.
Yours，
Li Lin
学习亮点表达
简约版
1.______________对……感兴趣
2.__________团队精神
3.___________________和他人友好协作
4._________________给我这次机会
闪耀版
5._________申请
6.___________在……方面天赋异禀
7.___________伸出援手
be interested in
team spirit
work well with others
give me the chance
apply for
be gifted in
lend a hand
课后写作迁移
/ 个人发展·职业规划 / 假设你是李华，你校正在开展以“My Future Job”为题的征文活动，现向全体同学征集职业规划文稿。请你根据调查问卷的内容写一篇短文进行投稿，介绍自己未来想要从事的职业及理由，并阐述职业规划。
Your Future Job
1.What do you want to be in the future？
□ A doctor　 □ A teacher　　　□ A scientist
□ An artist　 □ An IT engineer □ Others 　　　
2.Why do you choose that？(至少2点)
　　____________________________________________________　　　　
3.What’s your plan for the future job？(至少2点)
　________________________________________________________　　　　　
写作要求：1.文中须包含以上调查问卷中的所有信息，可适当
发挥；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.词数100左右。
My Future Job
　　　　　　_______________________________________________
简约版
My Future Job
Para.1点明主题
Different students have different ideas about their future careers. Some students want to be singers.Some want to be scientists. ________
__________________________________________________________
me，I want to be a teacher in the future.
As for
Para.2选择该职业的理由
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I have been interested in teaching since I was a child.First，I enjoy staying with children and they always bring me happiness.理由1 Second，I hope to help students learn new knowledge and grow into better people.I think teaching is a meaningful and great job.理由2　
Para.3 未来的职业规划
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Nothing is difficult for a willing heart.I believe I can achieve my dream as long as I try my best.
　 To make my dream come true，I will study hard at all my subjects at school.规划1 I will also read more books on education.规划2　
闪耀版
My Future Job
Para.1点明主题
Different students have different ideas about their future careers.Some students want to be singers.Some want to be scientists.__________________________________________________
　 As for me，my dream job is to become an English teacher.　
Para.2选择该职业的理由
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　I have been fascinated by English since I first learned it in primary school.First of all，the beauty of the language always attracts me deeply，and I really enjoy learning it.理由1 What’s more，as an outgoing person，I have a gift for explaining things clearly.My classmates often come to me for help with their English problems，which makes me feel proud.理由2　
Para.3 未来的职业规划
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Nothing is difficult for a willing heart.I believe I can achieve my dream as long as I try my best.
　 To achieve my goal，I will work hard at school and learn more about teaching methods.规划1 What’s more，I will also take every chance to practice speaking in public.规划2　
/ 一文多用 /
　　你的外国笔友 Peter 来信，想要了解你的未来职业梦想。请你给他回一封英文邮件，介绍自己的职业规划。
写作提示：1.你理想的未来职业；
2.你选择这份职业的两个原因；
3.为实现职业理想的后续行动计划。
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